内容正文:
What made the trip special?
B Read and write
Unit 1 Amazing places
人教PEP版三年级起点 六年级上册(2024)
六上RJ
Learning goals
识别文体:认识旅游平台评论,读懂网页界面信息;
读懂两篇游客评论,提取人物旅行地点、活动、感受;
理解核心词汇,梳理一般过去时语句。
学习理解
借助文本信息完成阅读任务,梳理两篇评价的关键细节;
模仿范文框架,口头简单介绍一次旅行经历;
掌握旅行评价表达:介绍地点 + 活动 + 个人感受。
应用实践
学以致用,独立撰写简短景点旅行评论;
能够介绍红色景点井冈山,讲述旅行收获,渗透红色文化意识;
在真实情境中运用一般过去时分享旅行体验。
迁移创新
文体:线上旅游评论(review)
语法:一般过去时,描述过去旅行活动
功能句型:介绍旅行,表达旅行感受
文化:了解井冈山红色文旅,树立文化自信
核心知识点
Content
01 Lead-in
02 Project initiation 项目启动
03 Key exploration 核心研究
04 Project practice 项目实践
05 Achievement display 成果展示
06 Homework
B Read and write
01
Lead-in
Look and say单元主题回顾
Where did you go over the holidays?
We went to a village nearby.
What did you do there?
We saw beautiful peach flowers.
Think and say单元主题回顾
Well,we walked around the old city and rode bikes on the old city wall.
Activities make a trip special.
We saw beautiful peach flowers.
Look and say单元主题回顾
Where did you go over the holidays?
I went to Wuhan.
What did you do there?
I ate hot dry noodles.
Think and say 单元主题回顾
We ate some famous Xi'an noodles.
Food makes a trip special.
I ate hot dry noodles.
I ate famous Goubuli baozi.
Look and say 单元主题回顾
Where did you go over the holidays?
I took a trip to Shanghai.
How did you feel?
The view from the tower was great.
Look and say 单元主题回顾
Where did you go over the holidays?
I took a trip to Singapore.
What did you do there?
I took nice photos there.
Think and say 单元主题回顾
The view from the tower was great.
View makes a trip special.
I took nice photos there.
Think and say 单元主题回顾
Then we went to see the Terracotta Warriors.
History/culture makes a trip special.
I saw lots of amazing ancient wall paintings.
02
Project initiation 项目启动
Think and say 链接单元主题
Project initiation 项目启动
▶ special activities
▶ delicious food
▶ beautiful views
▶ history and culture
Think and say 链接单元主题
Project initiation 项目启动
Many people share their trip stories online. These are reviews.
Think and say
Project initiation 项目启动
What is a travel review?什么是旅行评论?
📍地点
🎒活动
💭感受
✅推荐
Look and learn
🔑 拆分记忆法
📖 情景例句
n./v. 评论;点评
review /rɪˈvjuː/
re
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view
I write a review for my trip.
/rɪˈ/ - /vjuː/
Project initiation 项目启动
Look and say 创设真实问题情境
Where can we read people’s reviews on a scenic spot?
👉 On travel apps /travel websites.(旅游网站 / APP)
Project initiation 项目启动
Look and say 创设真实问题情境
If we want more people to know about Jinggang Mountains, how do we write a good travel review?
Project initiation 项目启动
Project task
✅ Task 1: Read the two reviews and find out what makes Jinggang Mountains amazing(活动、美食、风景、红色历史)
✅ Task 2: Work out the structure of a good travel review(标题 — 开篇 — 经历 — 结尾推荐)
✅ Task 3: Write your own travel review for the booklet
本课子任务
项目主题:Create a Travel Review(创作英文旅行推荐评论)
项目产出:一份标准英文旅游评论(参照课文范例)
驱动性总问题:How can we write an attractive travel review to introduce a great place to visitors?(我们如何写出吸引人的英文旅行评论向游客推荐一处胜地?)
单元总项目
03
Key exploration
核心研究
Key exploration 核心研究
Read and think 初读文本
What did you learn about the Jinggang Mountains?
place
an attraction
旅游景点
Key exploration 核心研究
Read and think 初读文本
Who wrote the reviews?
Review1:Sun Lin
Review2:Colin
Key exploration 核心研究
Read and think 初读文本
Where are they from?
Xining, China
London, UK
Key exploration 核心研究
Read and think 精读深挖:分层研读文本
Let’s Fill in the Chart!
📍 Place: ______________
🎡 Activities:____________
❤️ Feelings: ____________
Key exploration 核心研究
Read and think 精读深挖:分层研读文本
Let’s Fill in the Chart!
📍 Place: Jinggangshan
Revolution Museum
Key exploration 核心研究
Read and think 精读深挖:分层研读文本
Let’s Fill in the Chart!
🎡 Activities: walked around the museum for hours and saw many old books and photos.
Key exploration 核心研究
Read and think 语言挖掘:文章情感形容词
Let’s Fill in the Chart!
❤️ Feelings: amazing and inspiring
小结:Good travel reviews use strong words to show feelings.情感词汇表达真实感受
Key exploration 核心研究
Read and think 精读深挖:分层研读文本
What does “must-see” mean?
必看的
tips:先定位 1. 生活常识 2. 上下文语境 3. 构词法
1. 生活常识
2. 褒义表达
3. must-see(must+see)
Key exploration 核心研究
Read and think 精读深挖:分层研读文本
Let’s Fill in the Chart!
📍 Place: _____________
🎡 Activities: __________
❤️ Feelings: ____________
Key exploration 核心研究
Read and think 精读深挖:分层研读文本
Let’s Fill in the Chart!
📍 Place: Jinggang Mountains
Key exploration 核心研究
Read and think 精读深挖:分层研读文本
Let’s Fill in the Chart!
🎡 Activities: climbed mountain , took photos and
tried delicious foods
Key exploration 核心研究
Read and think 精读深挖:分层研读文本
Let’s Fill in the Chart!
❤️ Feelings: great
小结:Good travel reviews use strong words to show feelings.情感词汇表达真实感受
Key exploration 核心研究
Read and think 精读深挖:分层研读文本
How did they go there?
convenient 便利
Key exploration 核心研究
Read and think 解构文本:梳理评论写作框架
Find the structure of a travel review
📄 |TitleTitle(吸引眼球,使用情绪词汇)
🚪 |Opening
(总起,表达整体感受)
🍃 |Closing (发出推荐、邀请)
📷 💙 |Body(经历:what you see/do/eat/learn + your feelings)
Listen and imitate 听音模仿
Key exploration 核心研究
My trip to the Jinggangshan Revolution Museum was amazing! I walked around the museum for hours and saw many old books and photos. The volunteers told great stories about the Red Army. The stories were really inspiring. I learnt a lot. Do you want to learn more about the Red Army? You should go there!
This was a great place for a summer trip! We climbed the Jinggang Mountains and took many photos of the bamboo forest and beautiful waterfalls. We tried delicious pumpkin soup and red rice in a nice restaurant too. The Jinggang Mountains are only about 1.5 hours from the airport by bus. I want to go there again!
04
Project practice
项目实践
Project practice
项目实践
Read again and complete the blanks
My trip to the Jinggangshan Revolution Museum was amazing! I walked around the museum for hours and saw many old books and photos. The volunteers told great stories about the Red Army. The stories were really inspiring. I learnt a lot. Do you want to learn more about the Red Army? You should go there!
A must-see
My trip to the Jinggangshan Revolution Museum was amazing!
He walked around the museum and learnt stories about the Red Army.
You should go there!
👉 分层设计:基础任务,全员完成,内化评论结构。
Project practice
项目实践
Read again and complete the blanks
This was a great place for a summer trip! We climbed the Jinggang Mountains and took many photos of the bamboo forest and beautiful waterfalls. We tried delicious pumpkin soup and red rice in a nice restaurant too. The Jinggang Mountains are only about 1.5 hours from the airport by bus. I want to go there again!
Wonderful views and food
This was a great place for a summer trip!
He climbed the Jinggang Mountains, took photos and tried pumpkin soup and red rice.
I want to go there again!
👉 分层设计:基础任务,全员完成,内化评论结构。
Project practice
项目实践
Write your own travel review
自主创作,撰写旅行评论
(title) __________________
My trip to__________ was ___________!
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
You should visit there!
Where did you go? What did you do there? Write your own travel review about a place you went to.
Project practice
项目实践
Write your own travel review
自主创作,撰写旅行评论
(title) __________________
My trip to__________ was ___________!
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
You should visit there!
Where did you go? What did you do there? Write your own travel review about a place you went to.
写作提示(呼应单元主题 4 大维度):
You can write about: ✅activities ✅food ✅views ✅history & culture
分层要求:
基础层:完整套用框架,写 3–4 句话;
提高层:合理使用情感形容词,增加细节描写。
Project practice
项目实践
Write your own travel review
自主创作,撰写旅行评论
An amazing trip to …
A wonderful visit to …
Must-see place: …
📄 |TitleTitle(吸引眼球,使用情绪词汇)
🚪 |Opening
(总起,表达整体感受)
My trip to ______ was amazing!
I had a wonderful time in ______.
______ is a fantastic place to visit.
Project practice
项目实践
Write your own travel review
自主创作,撰写旅行评论
✅ 风景类 I saw beautiful.... ;
I took many photos of ....
✅ 活动类 I climbed .... ; I walked around ....
✅ 美食类 I tried delicious .... ;... tasted great.
✅ 历史文化类 I learned ...; I visited an old ...
💙Feeling 感受:amazing, great, wonderful, happy, fun, nice, inspiring, exciting, unforgettable, fantastic
📷 💙 |Body
(经历:what you see/do/eat/learn + your feelings)
Project practice
项目实践
Write your own travel review
自主创作,撰写旅行评论
You should visit there!
Don’t miss this wonderful place.
I want to go there again.
It is a must-see place for everyone.
🍃 |Closing (发出推荐、邀请)
Project practice
项目实践
Peer Evaluation 同伴互评表
评价标准 Checklist Yes ✅ Try harder ⭕
1. It has an attractive title.
2. It has an opening sentence and a closing sentence.
3. It talks about views, food, activities or culture.
4. It uses strong feeling words (amazing / wonderful…).
5. No big spelling mistakes.
💡 Suggestions for the writer(给作者的小建议):
🌟 One good thing I like(我最喜欢的一处):
05
Achievement display
成果展示
Achievement display 成果展示
Share your reviews
Retell Sun Lin’s or Colin’s review about Jinggang Mountains.
Tips: Use the structure: Title → Opening → Experiences → Feeling → Closing
🟡 Level 1 基础展示(全员达标,课内巩固)
任务:Retell & share — 复述、解读课文两篇旅行评论
Achievement display 成果展示
Share your reviews
🟢 Level 2 进阶展示(核心任务,项目产出)
任务:Travel reviews — 分享自己原创的旅行评论
Project practice
项目实践
Share your own travel review
优秀作品赏析与点评
Title: Beautiful West Lake
My trip to West Lake was great!
I enjoyed quiet lake views. I saw lovely trees and flowers. I tried tasty local food.
I felt relaxed and happy.
You should visit there!
Project practice
项目实践
Share your own travel review
优秀作品赏析与点评
Must-see — the Great Wall
I had an unforgettable trip to the Great Wall. I climbed the wall and enjoyed amazing mountain views around me. I learned lots of interesting history about this great building.
Everything here surprised me. It is fantastic and meaningful.Don’t miss it. I hope I can come again one day.
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volunteer
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理解课文,学生做课堂笔记
理解课文,学生做课堂笔记
Summary
Driving Question:How to write an attractive travel review?
Structure:
⭐ Title (strong words)
⭐ Opening: general feeling
⭐ Body: What you did/saw/learnt/ate & feelings
⭐ Closing: Recommend
Useful words: amazing, wonderful, inspiring, delicious, must-see
06
Homework
Homework
01 基础性作业
Read and finish.
优化课堂写好的旅行评论,工整誊写;拓展任务(PBL 延伸):上网查找一处红色景点英文介绍,收集关键词,为下一次写作积累素材;
02 拓展性作业
Look and Write.
选做:尝试为 Jinggang Mountains 再写一条简短五星评论。
Thank You!
See you next time!
Keep practicing and remember, every friend is unique and special!
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