Unit 6 Life in the future（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材沪教版五四学制八年级上册

本讲义聚焦“人与社会”范畴下“畅想未来生活、理性展望科技发展”主题，系统构建从话题解读到写作输出的学习支架。通过未来科技产品与生活场景词汇积累、条件状语从句等核心句式梳理，结合佳句仿写与典例分析，引导学生运用议论文结构完整呈现对未来生活的看法、理由及例证，形成“词汇-句式-篇章”的渐进式写作能力培养脉络。 该资料以核心素养为导向，特色鲜明。在语言能力培养上，提供“antigravity disk”“solar energy”等鲜活词汇及条件状语从句模板，助力精准表达；在思维品质提升上，通过“科技便利与隐患”辩证分析（如范例中飞行汽车与环保建议的结合），培养理性思辨能力；在学习能力发展上，设计8个不同情境的实战演练题（如“Plan for Myself”“Future Life”征文等），课中辅助教师分层教学，课后帮助学生巩固应用，有效查漏补缺。

Unit 6 Life in the future单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于“人与社会”范畴，涉及“畅想未来生活、理性展望科技发展”。 该单元旨在培养学生懂得畅想未来是激发创新思维的重要途径，它可以打开想象视野，让我们思考科技带来的便利与潜在隐患。通过阅读科幻故事、讨论未来出行、娱乐、居住方式，我们学会运用条件状语从句清晰表达对未来的预测与设想。未来观点议论文写作，完整呈现自己对未来生活的看法、支撑理由与真实例证，辩证分析科技的利弊。这有助于建立客观看待科技发展的认知基础，从而培养敢于想象、理性思辨、主动思考如何创造美好未来的宝贵品质。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.未来科技产品 & 交通 antigravity disk 反重力圆盘；AR contact lenses AR 隐形眼镜；jetpack 喷气背包 super-speed train 超高速列车；space elevator 太空电梯；underwater ship 水下潜艇 digital twin 数字虚拟分身；digital human 数字虚拟演员；time-travel watch 时光手表 2.未来生活场景词汇 towering buildings 摩天高楼；floating transport 浮空交通工具 health care 医疗保健；solar and wind energy 太阳能、风能 3.核心动词 & 短语 discover new chemicals 发现新化学物质；cure diseases 治愈疾病 put on AR headsets 戴上 AR 设备；put out fires 灭火；put off projects 推迟项目 explore space 探索太空；slow down global warming 减缓全球变暖 4.评价形容词 convenient 便捷；amazing 神奇；unbelievable 难以置信；disturbing 令人不安 harmful 有害；colourful 丰富多彩；advanced 先进 句式积累 开头句： 1.It is interesting to imagine how technology will change our daily life in fifty years. 畅想五十年后科技如何改变我们的日常生活十分有趣。 2.When we talk about future life, we can see both bright sides and hidden troubles. 谈及未来生活，我们既能看到美好，也暗藏不少难题。 中间句： ① 描写未来便利 1.If we make full use of solar energy, pollution will become much less serious. 如果充分利用太阳能，污染问题会大幅缓解。 2.Robots will finish all boring housework if we use AI technology properly. 如果合理运用人工智能，机器人会包揽所有枯燥家务。 ② 转折 & 隐患 1.The environment will get worse unless we stop cutting down too many trees. 除非我们停止过度砍伐树木，否则环境会持续恶化。 2.AI will bring troubles unless we learn to control it well. 除非我们学会管控人工智能，否则它会带来许多麻烦。 3.Future transport is fast, but it may bring new safety risks. 未来交通工具速度极快，但也会产生全新安全隐患。 结尾句： 1.To build a wonderful future, every one of us should protect the earth and develop tech wisely. 想要打造美好未来，我们每个人都要守护地球、理性发展科技。 2.The future depends on what we do right now, so we should take action from today. 未来由当下的行动决定，所以我们要从现在做起。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：In five seconds we were brought to her home about five miles above the city. 仿写：短短几分钟，我们抵达了坐落在群山之间的小村庄。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：Anyone travelling through time with too much information from another time blows up. 仿写：任何长时间不休息持续工作的人，身体都会出现问题。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：In short, future life will be convenient, healthy and full of fun. 仿写：科技有利有弊，我们要合理利用、守护环境。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. In a few minutes we were brought to a small village hidden among mountains. 2. Anyone working for a long time without rest will have health problems. 3. In short, tech has good and bad sides, so we should use it wisely and protect nature. 典例 Write at least 60 words according to the situation.（根据要求，写一篇至少60个单词的短文，内容要求适切，意思连贯，标点符号不占格） 学校的英文报社正在举办题为“Life in 2100”的征文活动，邀请同学们畅想未来。请你向报社投稿，写一篇短文，内容需包含： 1.表达你对2100年生活的看法（期待、担忧或其它）。 2.描述2100年在至少2个不同方面可能发生的变化。（如交通、家庭、学校或环境等） 3.给现在的我们提出建议或表达对未来的期待。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文； ②时态：一般将来时和一般现在时； ③提示：围绕“2100年的生活畅想”展开，先表达对2100年生活的期待，认为科技会让生活更美好并举例说明，再转折提出当下需重视环保，给出具体环保做法，最后呼吁携手共创美好未来，注意题干要求，不要遗漏任何信息。 谋篇布局 开头 直抒胸臆，表达对2100年生活的期待，提出核心观点——科技会让我们的生活变得更美好 中间 举例说明科技对未来生活的改善，转折强调当下的环保重要性，提出具体的环保行动建议 结尾 说明环保行动的意义 佳作展示 I am excited about life in 2100. I believe technology will make our lives better. For example, flying cars will help us avoid traffic jams. Also, robots will do most housework at home. However, we must protect the environment now. We should plant more trees and reduce waste. Then, the future can be greener and happier. Let’s work together for a bright tomorrow! 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ①avoid避免 ②traffic jams交通堵塞 ③housework家务 ④protect the environment保护环境 ⑤reduce waste减少垃圾 ⑥bright tomorrow光明的明天 高分句型： ①I believe technology will make our lives better.（省略that的宾语从句） ②For example, flying cars will help us avoid traffic jams.（for example举例说） ③However, we must protect the environment now.（however表转折） （一） 只有好好地规划人生，才能成就美好未来。请你根据下列提示以“Plan for Myself”为题写一篇短文，预测一下10年后的自己将是什么样的，然后谈谈你打算如何实现自己的梦想。 写作要点： 1. What is your dream job? 2. Where will you live or work? 3. How will you spend your free time? 4. What are you going to do to make your dream come true? 写作要求： 1.短文应包括所有写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息； 3.短文不少于70词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Plan for Myself As time goes by, all of us will change a lot. In ten years, I dream to be a… ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Plan for Myself As time goes by, all of us will change a lot. In ten years, I dream to be a doctor. I will live in a big city and work in a large hospital. In my free time, I will spend time with my family and read books to relax myself. To make my dream come true, I am going to study hard and enter a good medical university. I will also learn from experienced doctors and practice my skills every day. I believe that as long as I keep working hard, my dream will finally come true. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，以一般将来时为主 明确要点：梦想职业、未来居住或工作地、空闲时间安排、实现梦想的具体行动 确定人称：第一人称（I / my） 注意事项：词数不少于70，开头已给出不计入总词数，不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名，可适当发挥   [第二步：构思布局] 标准三段式结构： 开头段：承接已给出的开头句，点明十年后的梦想职业 主体段：依次描述未来的居住工作地、空闲时间的活动安排、为实现梦想将采取的行动 结尾段：总结表达对未来的信心和期待   [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：梦想职业 职业选择：a doctor, a teacher, a scientist, an engineer, a writer, a pilot, a basketball player, a musician 句型表达：I dream to be a..., My dream is to become a..., I will work as a...   要点二：未来居住或工作地 地点选择：in a big city, in a quiet town, in my hometown, abroad 句型表达：I will live in..., I plan to work in..., I hope to settle down in...   要点三：空闲时间安排 活动选择：spend time with my family, read books and listen to music, travel to different places, do sports and stay healthy, learn new skills, cook delicious food 意义描述：relax myself, enjoy life, broaden my horizons, keep a balance between work and rest 句型表达：In my free time, I will..., I plan to..., I am going to spend my weekends...   要点四：实现梦想的具体行动 行动选择：study hard and enter a good medical university, read more books about my dream job, enter a good university, learn from successful people, practice skills every day, never give up when facing difficulties, join clubs and activities, do volunteer work to gain experience 决心表达：I am going to..., I will try my best to..., I believe I can make it come true, hard work leads to success （二） 《英语周报》举办“Future Life”主题征文活动：请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，描绘你理想中的未来生活。 要点： 1. 你未来的职业    2. 你未来居住的地方 3. 未来你的业余活动      4. 如何实现你的梦想 要求： 1. 文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 In the future, I will be a doctor because I want to help sick people. I plan to live in a beautiful city with fresh air. In my spare time, I will enjoy reading books and traveling around the world to relax. To make my dream come true, I must study hard now and learn more knowledge. I believe hard work leads to success. I am ready for my bright future and will never give up. I hope everyone can have a happy life. 【详解】[写作步骤] [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：本文是一篇材料作文，以一般将来时为主； 明确要点：介绍未来职业、未来居住的地方、未来的业余活动、如何实现梦想； 确定人称：第一人称为主； 注意事项：注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点，词数80左右，不能出现真实的人名、校名。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段，开门见山引出主题，概括描绘自己理想中的未来生活； 主体段，按照提示要点逐一展开：未来职业、居住地点、业余活动、实现梦想的具体计划； 结尾段，表达对未来生活的美好期望，收束全文。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：未来职业 In the future, I will be a doctor/want to help sick people/dream to be a teacher/hope to become a scientist等 要点二：居住地点 plan to live in a beautiful city with fresh air/live near the sea/live in a peaceful town等 要点三：业余活动 enjoy reading books and traveling around the world/go swimming/take up painting/spend time with family等 要点四：实现梦想的方式 study medicine at a good university/work hard every day/learn from excellent doctors/do volunteer work in hospitals/never give up/read more books and practice more等 要点五：总结期望 hope everyone can have a happy life/look forward to my future life/believe my dream will come true等 （三） 未来是一场充满机遇与挑战的旅程，是无数个“未知”的积累，是珍惜当下的努力……我们心怀梦想，脚踏实地，付诸行动，把每一个今天过得充实而有意义，我们终将会在未来的某一天，遇见那个闪闪发光的自己。请以“My future in ten years”为题，介绍一下自己吧！ 内容包括： ●Predict your future life in ten years. ●Talk about your actions to achieve your dream. ●Share your feelings in the dream journey. 要求： 1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名； 3. 词数不少于80词。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My future in ten years The future is a journey full of chances and challenges. In ten years, I will finish my university studies and become a teacher in a primary school. I will live with my parents in Beijing. There will be different kinds of robots helping cleaning my house. I will use AI wisely to teach my students. After work, I will invite my friends or students to come over to my home or climb mountains together to stay close to nature. To make my dream come true, I need to study hard every day and keep confident and creative. I am going to listen to the teachers carefully in class, finish my homework on time, and read more classic literature to improve myself. I will also try my best to help my classmates, because a good teacher should be kind and helpful. I know the road to the future is not always easy, but I will keep my feet on the ground and take actions. I believe that if I make every day meaningful, I will surely meet a bright future and be a shining self. 【详解】写作步骤    [第一步：审题立意]   确定文体：畅想类记叙文，以一般将来时为主，穿插一般现在时（当下行动） 明确要点： ①畅想十年后的生活状态；②实现梦想的当下行动；③追梦途中内心感悟 确定人称：第一人称（I / my） 注意事项：文中禁止出现真实人名、学校名称；词数不少于80词，行文连贯通顺    [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段：开篇点题，引出对十年后未来的畅想，点明自己的理想职业/生活目标 主体段：分层阐述，第一层描绘十年后的日常与生活；第二层写当下为追梦付出的具体行动 结尾段：抒发追梦路上的感受，升华主题，表达珍惜当下、脚踏实地的信念    [第三步：要点分层展开]    要点一：描述十年后的生活    身份选择：teacher/doctor/writer/engineer等 生活场景描述：live in a bright apartment/work in a big office/take a walk after work/travel on vacation等 日常活动：help people/keep reading/do sports/spend time with family等 要点二：追梦行动 学习行动：listen carefully in class/read more books/practice every day/learn useful skills等 生活习惯：keep exercising/never give up when meeting difficulties/make daily plans等 要点三：追梦感悟 心路感受：Sometimes I feel tired，but full of power/Hard work brings hope等 （四） 假如你是李华，你的英国好友Jack想了解你对20年后的梦想及预测，请你给他写一封电子邮件。 内容包括： 1. 你将居住在哪里? 2. 你的工作和生活会怎样?为什么? 3. 你如何实现梦想? 写作要求： 1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Dear Jack, How is everything? I’m writing to tell you my life in 20 years. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Write to me, please. Let me know what you think. Yours Li Hua 【答案】 范文： Dear Jack,     How is everything? I’m writing to tell you my life in 20 years.     I think I will live in a coastal city like Qingdao, because I love the sea and fresh air. By then, I will be a doctor. I want to help sick people get better. In my free time, I will travel all over the world. I believe my life will be busy but happy. To make my dream come true, I will study hard at school and get into a medical university to learn medicine. I am sure my future will be bright and colorful.     Write to me, please. Let me know what you think. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确认文体：这是一封展望类邮件 (应用文)，时态以一般将来时为主 明确要点：需包含20年后将居住在哪里，工作和生活会怎样及原因，如何实现梦想 确定人称：第一人称 (I/my) 注意事项：词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；不得出现真实人名和校名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 第一段：承接已给出开头，引出20年后的梦想话题 第二段：分别描述居住地、工作与生活、实现梦想的途径 第三段：表达与对方交流的期待 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：居住地 居住表达：live in a coastal city like Qingdao/live in a big city like Shanghai/settle down in a small town/move to a warm place/near the sea等 原因：because I love the sea and fresh air/because I want a quiet life/because there are more job opportunities等 具体说明：I think I will live in a coastal city like Qingdao, because I love the sea and fresh air. 要点二：工作与生活 工作：be a doctor/work as a teacher/become a scientist/run my own company/be a writer等 原因：I want to help sick people get better/I enjoy working with children/I’m interested in technology等 生活：travel all over the world/spend time with family/read and write every day/help people in need等 总体评价：busy but happy/meaningful and colourful/exciting and full of challenges等 具体说明：By then, I will be a doctor. I want to help sick people get better. In my free time, I will travel all over the world. I believe my life will be busy but happy. 要点三：如何实现梦想 途径：study hard at school/get into a medical university/learn medicine/practice every day/work hard and never give up等 决心表达：I am sure my future will be bright and colorful/I will do my best/I won’t stop until I succeed/Every day I will take a small step等 具体说明：To make my dream come true, I will study hard at school and get into a medical university to learn medicine. I am sure my future will be bright and colorful. （五） 假设你是Song Meimei，本周你校要举行一场有关“畅想未来”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图，以“My Dream Life in 20 Years”为话题，写一篇英语演讲稿。 要求： 1. 内容须包含以上思维导图提示信息，可适当发挥；每块内容可根据行文需求进行增减； 2. 词数80左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名等信息。 Hello, everyone! My speech topic is “My Dream Life in 20 Years”. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Hello, everyone! My speech topic is “My Dream Life in 20 Years”. I think I will be an engineer in the future, and I will study hard to achieve my dream. I will live in the countryside with my family. We will plant different kinds of fruits and vegetables because they are fresh and healthy. In my free time, I will travel to other planets with my family or friends and look for renewable resources there. I think my life in 20 years will be more comfortable than it is now. Thank you! 【详解】写作步骤           [第一步：审题立意]           确定文体：应用文，以一般将来时为主           明确要点：根据思维导图，围绕20年后的梦想生活展开，分别介绍未来的工作、居住地、想做的事情以及想去的地方 确定人称：第一人称(I/My/We) 注意事项：词数80左右，不得出现个人真实姓名和校名等信息 [第二步：构思布局]           三段式结构：           开头段：开门见山，点明讲稿主题 主体段：介绍未来的工作以及如何实现、未来的居住地和同住的人、未来想做的事情以及原因，未来想去的地方以及会做的事情 结尾段：表达对梦想成真的期待 [第三步：要点展开]        要点一：未来想做的事情以及原因 想做的事情：plant different kinds of fruits and vegetables/plant lots of tress/grow crops/exercise every day/develop robot等 原因: fresh and healthy/protect environment/keep healthy/enjoy the quiet life等 要点二：未来想去的地方以及会做的事情 想去的地方：travel to other planets/go to mountain areas/go to ancient towns/visit foreign countries等 会做的事情：look for renewable resources/experience local cultures/explore new places/enjoy amazing views等 （六） 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom来信询问你对未来城市生活的看法。请根据以下要点提示，给他写一封回信，谈谈你的想法。 【写作要点】 - 对未来交通方式的设想（如无人驾驶、飞行汽车等） - 对未来居住环境的设想（如绿色建筑、智能家居等） - 你自己的态度或担忧（至少一条） 【写作要求】 - 词数：不少于80词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） - 条理清晰，内容完整 - 可适当发挥 Dear Tom, I’m glad to receive your letter. You asked about my thoughts on future city life. Here is what I imagine. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about your ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】参考范文 Dear Tom, I’m glad to receive your letter. You asked about my thoughts on future city life. Here is what I imagine. In the future, I believe all cars will be self-driving and run on clean energy. There will be no traffic jams, and the air will be much fresher. People can also use flying taxis to travel faster. Our homes will become smarter, too. Robots will help us with housework. The lights and temperature can be controlled by voice. The walls can even change colors according to our mood. Life will be more convenient. However, I also have some worries. If we depend too much on technology, we might lose basic life skills. We should always remember that technology should serve us, not control us. What about your ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：这是一篇书信作文，以一般将来时为主； 明确要点：围绕未来城市生活展开，分别阐述未来交通方式、未来居住环境，再说明个人对此的态度与担忧； 确定人称：第一人称（I）； 注意事项：语言亲切自然，符合笔友之间日常沟通的口吻，遵守书信格式规范。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接 Tom 的来信，引出自己对于未来城市生活的畅想； 主体段：依次介绍未来的交通、居住环境，再转折写出自己的顾虑； 结尾段：询问对方看法，期待对方回信。 [第三步：要点展示] 要点一：设想未来交通方式 具体内容：self-driving/traffic jams/clean energy/flying taxis/aerial mobility/solar-powered car... 要点二：设想未来居住环境 具体内容：green buildings/smart home/do housework/voice control/voice-activated household/green intelligent community/waste automatic sorting system... 要点三：自身态度以及担忧 具体内容：depend too much on technology/lose basic life skills/hidden technological risks/threat to human survival/unpredictable future crises... （七） 假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike所在的学校要举办主题为“未来校园生活”的海报设计活动，他来信希望你设计一张关于中国未来校园生活的海报并附邮件说明。请你用英语给他写一封邮件，邮件内容包括：描述海报上的未来校园生活场景；说明设计该内容的原因。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, Glad to hear from you. Here is the introduction of the poster I’ve designed for your poster design activity. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 【参考范文】 Dear Mike,       Glad to hear from you. Here is the introduction of the poster I’ve designed for your poster design activity. In the center, there is a smart classroom. Students wear VR glasses to learn Chinese history and visit ancient palaces online. Robot teachers help clean the school and answer questions. Around the classroom stand small Chinese-style pavilions, and flying buses fly in the blue sky outside.       I design this because high-tech makes learning fun. Besides, I add traditional Chinese garden scenes to show our culture. A green campus with Chinese style is great for us students.       Do you like my idea? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：邮件应用文，全文以一般现在时为主 明确要点：1.描述海报上未来校园生活场景（融入中国特色细节）2.说明对应场景的设计原因 确定人称：第一人称(I/my)、第二人称(you) 注意事项：词数80词左右，开头已给出不计入词数，不出现真实姓名、校名    [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段（题干已给出）：收到来信，引出自己设计的海报介绍 主体段：分层描写海报内校园场景，加入国风特色画面，分别说明每个场景的设计理由 结尾段：询问对方看法，期待回信    [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：海报里的校园学习场景 智能教室画面：smart classroom/wear VR glasses to learn Chinese history/experience virtual ancient Chinese culture lessons等 机器人辅助画面：robot teachers clean school/robots answer students’ questions/help check Chinese homework等    要点二：海报里的校园出行场景 空中交通画面：blue sky with flying buses outside/take flying buses to school/no traffic jams等 国风校园布景画面：ancient-style Chinese pavilions beside classrooms/traditional Chinese garden green belts等    要点三：各场景对应的设计原因 科技学习设计缘由：make learning easier and more interesting/bring fun to Chinese culture classes等 绿色国风校园设计缘由：green Chinese-style environment is important for students/keep campus fresh and carry forward traditional culture等 （八） 智慧科技赋能学习创新。随着科技的发展，人工智能(AI)将越来越多地被应用于课堂。你觉得未来的课堂会变成什么样子呢？你将如何利用AI来辅助学习？新的学习方式会给你带来什么好处？请根据所给提示，写一篇80词以上的短文。 提示词语： robot, make a difference, improve, creative ideas (想法) 提示问题： What will the future classroom be like? How will you learn with the help of AI? What benefits can you get from the new ways of study? In the future, ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 In the future, AI will certainly bring about a change in the classroom. Every teacher and student will have their own robot. These robots will help teachers with their lesson preparations and will patiently explain problems to students when they have difficulty in learning. AI will help me in different ways as well. Firstly, it will make a plan for my schoolwork, enabling me to learn at my own pace. Moreover, it will act like a foreign friend and practice English with me at any time and in any place. Undoubtedly, these new learning methods will make my study easy and convenient. It will not only improve my learning efficiency but also make learning more enjoyable. I’m expecting the future life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述未来课堂场景； 第二步，说明AI辅助学习的具体方式； 第三步，总结新学习方式的优势。 [亮点词汇] ①bring about a change带来改变 ②at one’s own pace按自己的节奏 [高分句型] ①These robots will help teachers with their lesson preparations and will patiently explain problems to students when they have difficulty in learning.（时间状语从句） ②It will not only improve my learning efficiency but also make learning more enjoyable.（使用了not only…but also结构） 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 6 Life in the future单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于“人与社会”范畴，涉及“畅想未来生活、理性展望科技发展”。 该单元旨在培养学生懂得畅想未来是激发创新思维的重要途径，它可以打开想象视野，让我们思考科技带来的便利与潜在隐患。通过阅读科幻故事、讨论未来出行、娱乐、居住方式，我们学会运用条件状语从句清晰表达对未来的预测与设想。未来观点议论文写作，完整呈现自己对未来生活的看法、支撑理由与真实例证，辩证分析科技的利弊。这有助于建立客观看待科技发展的认知基础，从而培养敢于想象、理性思辨、主动思考如何创造美好未来的宝贵品质。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.未来科技产品 & 交通 antigravity disk 反重力圆盘；AR contact lenses AR 隐形眼镜；jetpack 喷气背包 super-speed train 超高速列车；space elevator 太空电梯；underwater ship 水下潜艇 digital twin 数字虚拟分身；digital human 数字虚拟演员；time-travel watch 时光手表 2.未来生活场景词汇 towering buildings 摩天高楼；floating transport 浮空交通工具 health care 医疗保健；solar and wind energy 太阳能、风能 3.核心动词 & 短语 discover new chemicals 发现新化学物质；cure diseases 治愈疾病 put on AR headsets 戴上 AR 设备；put out fires 灭火；put off projects 推迟项目 explore space 探索太空；slow down global warming 减缓全球变暖 4.评价形容词 convenient 便捷；amazing 神奇；unbelievable 难以置信；disturbing 令人不安 harmful 有害；colourful 丰富多彩；advanced 先进 句式积累 开头句： 1.It is interesting to imagine how technology will change our daily life in fifty years. 畅想五十年后科技如何改变我们的日常生活十分有趣。 2.When we talk about future life, we can see both bright sides and hidden troubles. 谈及未来生活，我们既能看到美好，也暗藏不少难题。 中间句： ① 描写未来便利 1.If we make full use of solar energy, pollution will become much less serious. 如果充分利用太阳能，污染问题会大幅缓解。 2.Robots will finish all boring housework if we use AI technology properly. 如果合理运用人工智能，机器人会包揽所有枯燥家务。 ② 转折 & 隐患 1.The environment will get worse unless we stop cutting down too many trees. 除非我们停止过度砍伐树木，否则环境会持续恶化。 2.AI will bring troubles unless we learn to control it well. 除非我们学会管控人工智能，否则它会带来许多麻烦。 3.Future transport is fast, but it may bring new safety risks. 未来交通工具速度极快，但也会产生全新安全隐患。 结尾句： 1.To build a wonderful future, every one of us should protect the earth and develop tech wisely. 想要打造美好未来，我们每个人都要守护地球、理性发展科技。 2.The future depends on what we do right now, so we should take action from today. 未来由当下的行动决定，所以我们要从现在做起。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：In five seconds we were brought to her home about five miles above the city. 仿写：短短几分钟，我们抵达了坐落在群山之间的小村庄。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：Anyone travelling through time with too much information from another time blows up. 仿写：任何长时间不休息持续工作的人，身体都会出现问题。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：In short, future life will be convenient, healthy and full of fun. 仿写：科技有利有弊，我们要合理利用、守护环境。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 典例 Write at least 60 words according to the situation.（根据要求，写一篇至少60个单词的短文，内容要求适切，意思连贯，标点符号不占格） 学校的英文报社正在举办题为“Life in 2100”的征文活动，邀请同学们畅想未来。请你向报社投稿，写一篇短文，内容需包含： 1.表达你对2100年生活的看法（期待、担忧或其它）。 2.描述2100年在至少2个不同方面可能发生的变化。（如交通、家庭、学校或环境等） 3.给现在的我们提出建议或表达对未来的期待。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文； ②时态：一般将来时和一般现在时； ③提示：围绕“2100年的生活畅想”展开，先表达对2100年生活的期待，认为科技会让生活更美好并举例说明，再转折提出当下需重视环保，给出具体环保做法，最后呼吁携手共创美好未来，注意题干要求，不要遗漏任何信息。 谋篇布局 开头 直抒胸臆，表达对2100年生活的期待，提出核心观点——科技会让我们的生活变得更美好 中间 举例说明科技对未来生活的改善，转折强调当下的环保重要性，提出具体的环保行动建议 结尾 说明环保行动的意义 佳作展示 I am excited about life in 2100. I believe technology will make our lives better. For example, flying cars will help us avoid traffic jams. Also, robots will do most housework at home. However, we must protect the environment now. We should plant more trees and reduce waste. Then, the future can be greener and happier. Let’s work together for a bright tomorrow! 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ①avoid避免 ②traffic jams交通堵塞 ③housework家务 ④protect the environment保护环境 ⑤reduce waste减少垃圾 ⑥bright tomorrow光明的明天 高分句型： ①I believe technology will make our lives better.（省略that的宾语从句） ②For example, flying cars will help us avoid traffic jams.（for example举例说） ③However, we must protect the environment now.（however表转折） （一） 只有好好地规划人生，才能成就美好未来。请你根据下列提示以“Plan for Myself”为题写一篇短文，预测一下10年后的自己将是什么样的，然后谈谈你打算如何实现自己的梦想。 写作要点： 1. What is your dream job? 2. Where will you live or work? 3. How will you spend your free time? 4. What are you going to do to make your dream come true? 写作要求： 1.短文应包括所有写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息； 3.短文不少于70词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Plan for Myself As time goes by, all of us will change a lot. In ten years, I dream to be a… ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） 《英语周报》举办“Future Life”主题征文活动：请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，描绘你理想中的未来生活。 要点： 1. 你未来的职业    2. 你未来居住的地方 3. 未来你的业余活动      4. 如何实现你的梦想 要求： 1. 文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） 未来是一场充满机遇与挑战的旅程，是无数个“未知”的积累，是珍惜当下的努力……我们心怀梦想，脚踏实地，付诸行动，把每一个今天过得充实而有意义，我们终将会在未来的某一天，遇见那个闪闪发光的自己。请以“My future in ten years”为题，介绍一下自己吧！ 内容包括： ●Predict your future life in ten years. ●Talk about your actions to achieve your dream. ●Share your feelings in the dream journey. 要求： 1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名； 3. 词数不少于80词。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） 假如你是李华，你的英国好友Jack想了解你对20年后的梦想及预测，请你给他写一封电子邮件。 内容包括： 1. 你将居住在哪里? 2. 你的工作和生活会怎样?为什么? 3. 你如何实现梦想? 写作要求： 1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Dear Jack, How is everything? I’m writing to tell you my life in 20 years. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Write to me, please. Let me know what you think. Yours Li Hua （五） 假设你是Song Meimei，本周你校要举行一场有关“畅想未来”的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图，以“My Dream Life in 20 Years”为话题，写一篇英语演讲稿。 要求： 1. 内容须包含以上思维导图提示信息，可适当发挥；每块内容可根据行文需求进行增减； 2. 词数80左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名等信息。 Hello, everyone! My speech topic is “My Dream Life in 20 Years”. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom来信询问你对未来城市生活的看法。请根据以下要点提示，给他写一封回信，谈谈你的想法。 【写作要点】 - 对未来交通方式的设想（如无人驾驶、飞行汽车等） - 对未来居住环境的设想（如绿色建筑、智能家居等） - 你自己的态度或担忧（至少一条） 【写作要求】 - 词数：不少于80词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） - 条理清晰，内容完整 - 可适当发挥 Dear Tom, I’m glad to receive your letter. You asked about my thoughts on future city life. Here is what I imagine. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about your ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua （七） 假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike所在的学校要举办主题为“未来校园生活”的海报设计活动，他来信希望你设计一张关于中国未来校园生活的海报并附邮件说明。请你用英语给他写一封邮件，邮件内容包括：描述海报上的未来校园生活场景；说明设计该内容的原因。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike, Glad to hear from you. Here is the introduction of the poster I’ve designed for your poster design activity. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （八） 智慧科技赋能学习创新。随着科技的发展，人工智能(AI)将越来越多地被应用于课堂。你觉得未来的课堂会变成什么样子呢？你将如何利用AI来辅助学习？新的学习方式会给你带来什么好处？请根据所给提示，写一篇80词以上的短文。 提示词语： robot, make a difference, improve, creative ideas (想法) 提示问题： What will the future classroom be like? How will you learn with the help of AI? What benefits can you get from the new ways of study? In the future, ____________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $