Unit 5 Films（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材沪教版五四学制七年级上册

本讲义聚焦初中英语Unit 5 Films单元英文影评写作核心知识点，系统构建“词汇积累-句式运用-仿写练习-典例分析-实战演练”的学习支架。词汇涵盖电影分类（如animation, sci-fi film）、构成要素（director, plot）、评价形容词（meaningful, touching）及主题短语，句式包含开头推荐、中间剧情亮点与不足、结尾总结等模块，通过佳句仿写和典例解析（如《The Lion King》推荐信）衔接知识与应用。 该资料以“人与文化”为主题，特色在于融合语言能力、文化意识与思维品质培养。语言能力方面，提供比较级、最高级及否定前缀等评价表达，如“special effects are far better than...”；文化意识上融入中华传统动画元素（水墨画、京剧脸谱），增强文化自信；思维品质通过客观评析影片优劣（如“节奏慢”“情节复杂”）培养思辨能力。课中辅助教师分层教学，课后实战演练（8个不同情境任务）助力学生巩固写作技能，查漏补缺。

Unit 5 Films单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于“人与文化”范畴，涉及“赏析影视、感受多元文化，学会审美表达”。 该单元旨在引导学生通过观看、赏析各类影片，学会辨别不同电影类型，读懂海报、观影指南、影评、影视专题文章，理解一部优秀影片的构成要素；在观影与评析中感受亲情、友情、坚持、勇敢等正向精神，领略中外影视特色与中华传统动画之美。单元核心写作任务为英文影评，写作围绕影片基础信息、亮点优势、客观不足、总结推荐展开，运用形容词比较级、最高级对比影片优劣，同时借助否定前缀丰富评价词汇。完成影评写作的过程，能锻炼学生客观思辨的审美能力，学会有条理表达个人观影感受，拓宽全球影视文化视野，增强对中国传统动画的文化自信。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.电影基础分类 musical 歌舞片；animation 动画电影；sci-fi film 科幻片；action film 动作片；drama 剧情片 cartoon 卡通片；romantic film 浪漫片；documentary 纪录片；comedy 喜剧；adventure film 冒险片 2.影片构成核心要素 director 导演；main character 主角；voice actor 配音演员；film-maker 电影制作人；actor/actress 男女演员 plot 剧情；setting 故事场景；legend 传说；screenplay 剧本；special effects 特效 ink wash painting 水墨画；Peking Opera face make-up 京剧脸谱；paper cutting 剪纸；lion dancing 舞狮；traditional art 传统艺术 3.评价形容词 meaningful 有意义的；imaginative 充满想象力的；classic 经典的；wonderful 精彩的 exciting 刺激的；touching 感人的；lively 鲜活的；amazing 震撼的；educational 有教育意义的 unforgettable 难忘的；slow-paced 节奏慢的；complicated 情节复杂的；boring 无聊的；short 时长过短 4.动词 & 主题短语 release 上映；return to screen 重返荧幕；fight bad guys 对抗坏人 learn from characters 向人物学习；recommend 推荐；come from old legends 源自古老传说 keep traditional art alive 传承传统艺术；taste Chinese culture 感受中华文化；full of fun 充满趣味 bring us joy 带给我们快乐；strongly recommend 强烈推荐；well worth watching 值得一看 句式积累 开头句： 1.It’s strongly suggested that every student spend some time watching this fantastic film. 我强烈建议每位同学都抽空观看这部精彩影片。 2.Recently, I watched a fantastic Chinese animation and I can’t wait to share my ideas with you. 最近我看了一部优秀国产动画，迫不及待想分享我的看法。 3.Among all films I have ever watched, the traditional Chinese animation touches my heart most. 在我看过所有影片中，这部国产传统动画最打动我。 中间句： ① 剧情 & 亮点描写 1.Filled with interesting plots and creative ideas, this movie passes the warm spirit of being ready to help others. 影片情节有趣、创意十足，传递出乐于助人的温暖精神。 2.Not only is the story full of imagination, but it also tells us the importance of kindness. 故事不仅充满想象力，还让我们懂得善良的重要性。 3.Its special effects are far better than those of many ordinary films. 它的特效远超很多普通影片。 4.No other movie I’ve watched has such amazing and real special effects. 我看过的所有影片里，没有一部拥有如此逼真震撼的特效。 5.Every character in the movie has a unique personality, so I can easily remember them. 影片每个角色性格独特，让人过目不忘。 6.The creators shape lively heroes that we can learn a lot from. 创作者塑造出鲜活的主角，我们能从他们身上学到很多。 ② 客观不足描写 1.Several chapters of the story develop slowly, which may make some audience feel bored. 故事有几个段落节奏缓慢，部分观众会觉得乏味。 2.Compared with its exciting ending, the beginning plot is a little slow. 对比精彩的结尾，影片开篇剧情节奏略显拖沓。 3.The plot is a little complex, so it’s not suitable for very young children. 情节略微复杂，不太适合低龄小朋友观看。 4.Little kids may fail to catch all the hidden meanings in this film. 低龄孩子很难读懂影片里全部深层内涵。 结尾句： 1.Taking its small shortcomings into consideration, it is still a fantastic movie worth watching. 即便存在少许不足，它依旧是一部值得观看的优秀影片。 2.To sum up, this film brings me lots of joy, so I highly suggest you watch it in your free time. 总而言之，这部影片带给我许多快乐，我十分推荐大家课余观看。 3.Full of valuable lessons, the movie deserves to be watched more than once. 影片蕴含诸多人生道理，值得反复回味。 4.I plan to watch this film once more with my parents this weekend. 这周末我打算和父母二刷这部影片。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：It is also meaningful because it teaches children to help others. 仿写：这部运动剧情片很有意义，告诉我们坚持梦想。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：It makes young people proud of Chinese animation. 仿写：看完《流浪地球》，我为中国科幻电影倍感骄傲。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：The only thing I don’t like is many characters are hard to remember. 仿写：唯一小小的遗憾是前半段剧情节奏有些缓慢。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. This sports drama is also meaningful because it tells us to stick to our dreams. 2. After watching The Wandering Earth, I feel proud of Chinese sci-fi films. 3. The only small pity is that the first half of the plot is a little slow. 典例 Topic: What film do you recommend? I need your help! Can you recommend a film to me? Here are my preferences (偏好): 1. I am interested in many things, like music, sports or animals. 2. I like films with good pictures or special effects. 3. I like films that can teach me about life. Lily 假如你是网友Tracy，请给Lily写一封回帖，推荐一部电影。 要求： 1.该电影须符合Lily的两条喜好。 2.回帖需包含电影的简介和推荐理由。 3.不少于60词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：回帖需包含电影的简介和推荐理由，且该电影须符合Lily的两条喜好。 谋篇布局 开头 说明推荐哪部电影以及推荐的理由 中间 简单介绍电影的内容和特色 结尾 总结电影的价值 佳作展示 Dear Lily, I suggest you watch “The Lion King” because it is full of beautiful scenes and fantastic music. It tells the story of Simba, a young lion who learns important lessons about courage, friendship, and responsibility. The special effects in this film are amazing, and the songs are wonderful. I believe it will not only satisfy your love for animals but also teach you some valuable lessons about life. Tracy 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ①fantastic极好的 ②courage勇气 ③amazing令人惊叹的 ④satisfy满足 高分句型： ①I suggest you watch “The Lion King” because it is full of beautiful scenes and fantastic music.（省略that的宾语从句，because引导的原因状语从句） ②I believe it will not only satisfy your love for animals but also teach you some valuable lessons about life.（省略that的宾语从句） （一） 请以“My favourite film”为主题写一篇电影的影评, 谈谈这部电影的内容, 以及你对这部电影的看法和感受。（字数不少于60） 提示问题： 1. Which film is your favourite film? 2. What is the film about? 3. What do you like most about the film? 4. What do you think of the film? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favourite film is The Shawshank Redemption. It is about a man named Andy who was wrongly put in prison. He never gives up hope and finally escapes successfully. I like the main character most because he is brave and smart. The film teaches me that hope is a good thing. I think it is meaningful and moving. Everyone should watch it. It makes me believe in freedom and friendship. I love this film very much. 【详解】【第一步：审题立意】   确定文体：英文影评，时态以一般现在时为主 明确要点：完整覆盖提示问题（最喜欢的电影、电影内容、最喜欢的部分、看法感受），词数不少于60词 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：语句通顺，条理清晰，不得出现真实个人信息 【第二步：构思布局】 开头段：点明最喜欢的电影 主体段：依次介绍①电影的内容；②最喜欢的部分；③对电影的看法和感受 结尾段：总结，表达对电影的喜爱 【第三步：要点展开】   要点一：最喜欢的电影 My favourite film/I like…best/My all-time favourite movie/The film I love most等 要点二：电影内容 It is about…/The story tells us…/The movie follows the story of/ It mainly talks about/ The plot centers on 要点三：最喜欢的部分 I like…most because…/My favourite part is…/What I love most is…/The best part for me is…/I admire…most as…等 要点四：看法和感受 I think the film is…/It teaches me that…/It makes me…/The movie is really…/It inspires me to…/It makes a deep impression on me…/I find the film…等 （二） Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.请根据以下情境写一篇不少于60字的短文。 学校论坛的娱乐版块邀请你推荐一部近期看过的电影，请以“我推荐的一部电影(The film I recommend)”为题写一篇不少于60字的短文。 Guiding questions: 1. Which film do you recommend? 2. What is the basic information about the film? 3. Why do you recommend this film? （注意：1.短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2.照搬阅读语篇内容不得分。） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 The film I recommend I recommend the film “The Brave Little Robot”. It is a cartoon about a small robot who helps people in a big city. The film has colorful pictures and lovely music. I like it because the story is exciting and full of kindness. It teaches us to be brave and helpful. The film is not too long, so it is good for students. I hope you will enjoy it too. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山介绍自己推荐的电影名字； 第二步，补充影片的视觉、听觉特点及情节亮点； 第三步，说明教育意义和适合学生观看的原因，结尾表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①recommend推荐 ②colorful pictures色彩丰富的画面 ③be good for对……有好处 [高分句型] ①I like it because the story is exciting and full of kindness. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②It is a cartoon about a small robot who helps people in a big city. (who引导的定语从句) （三） Write at least 50 words on the topic “My film review” according to the given situation（情境）。 你所在的社团组织了一次论坛活动，主题为“我的电影影评”。请写一篇不少于50词的论坛发言稿，标点符号不计入词数。 文章要求包含： 1. 电影的基本信息（如种类、背景等……） 2. 你喜欢或不喜欢它的原因 注意： 1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 My film review ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 范文 My film review My film review is about “The Lion King”, a cartoon movie set in Africa. It tells the story of a young lion prince named Simba. I like this film very much because it is full of exciting adventures. The music is wonderful and the story teaches us about courage and responsibility. The beautiful animation also makes the animals look very real and lovely. I think it’s a great film for everyone. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山介绍电影名称； 第二步，简述电影的内容和背景； 第三步，介绍喜欢的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①be full of充满 ②wonderful精彩的 ③responsibility责任 [高分句型] I like this film very much because it is full of exciting adventures. (because引导的原因状语从句) （四） 李华非常喜欢动画片和科幻类电影， 他的好朋友张明知道他的喜好， 为他挑选了一部电影并邀请李华一起去观看。 假如你是张明， 请你向李华简要介绍这部挑选的电影。写不少于50词的短文。 (注意：短文中不得出现个人校名及其他相关信息，不得照抄阅读原文，否则不予评分。) (以下海报供参考) ... ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I know you love animations and sci-fi movies, so I picked a great one for us to watch! It’s called “The Wandering Earth.” This movie is a Chinese science fiction film that tells the story of how humanity tries to move the Earth out of its orbit to avoid a collision with the expanding Sun. The main actors include Wu Jing, Qu Chuxiao, and Li Guangjie. They play a team of brave people who work together to save the Earth. I think you’ll really enjoy it because it has amazing special effects and an exciting story. It’s a must-watch for any sci-fi fan! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：为一般现在时； ③提示：本文主要是向李华简要介绍这部挑选的电影，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍这部电影的名字； 第二步，详细介绍这部电影； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①try to do sth.尽力做某事 ②work together团结合作 [高分句型] ①This movie is a Chinese science fiction film that tells the story of how humanity tries to move the Earth out of its orbit to avoid a collision with the expanding Sun. (定语从句) ②I think you’ll really enjoy it because it has amazing special effects and an exciting story. (宾语从句，原因状语从句) （五） Write at least 60 words about the topic “A film review of ________”. Use the following points as a reference. 1. What is the name of the film? 2. What type is the film? 3. What is the film about? 4. What do you think of it? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A film review of The Lion King My favourite film is The Lion King. It’s a cartoon movie. The film is about a little lion called Simba, whose father was a king. Unluckily, his father was killed one day. Simba thought it was his fault and left his family. He met two friends and they helped him to lead a new life. His mother and other family members thought he was died. One day, his friend Nala met him by accident. She asked him to get his kingdom back. He didn’t accept it at first, but then he agreed with the help of a magical monkey. He returned and knew it was his uncle who killed his father. He fought against him and won at last. He saved his mother and other lions and became the king. The movie tells us that we should be brave and that is why I like this movie best. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍我最喜欢的电影的名字； 第二步，具体阐述这部电影的主要内容； 第三步，对这部电影的评价。 [亮点词汇] ①help sb to do sth帮助某人做某事 ②by accident偶然 ③at first开始 [高分句型] ①The film is about a little lion called Simba, whose father was a king. (whose引导的定语从句) ②The movie tells us that we should be brave and that is why I like this movie best. (that引导的宾语从句，why引导的表语从句) （六） Write a passage of at least 60 words about a classic Chinese animation. (围绕你所了解的一部经典的中国动画片，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Use the following points as a reference. （以下内容仅供参考） 1. 动画片的名称及简介； 2. 动画片给你的启发。 （以下词汇可供参考） ● Calabash Brothers 葫芦兄弟 ● goblin 妖精 ● cooperate with 与……合作 ● relative 亲属 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Calabash Brothers Calabash Brothers is a classic Chinese animation from 1986. It’s about an old man who grows seven calabashes, and they change into seven boys. And they try their best to fight two goblins to save their relatives. This animation is a classic of Chinese paper-cutting art and it is loved by all children. I learn a lot from this meaningful animation. I should be brave and cooperate with others when I meet difficulties. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据所给内容要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明写作主题； 第二步，描述动画片细节； 第三步，介绍自己的启发。 [亮点词汇] ①change into变成 ②classic经典 ③meaningful有意义的 [高分句型] ①It’s about an old man who grows seven calabashes, and they change into seven boys.（who引导定语从句） ②I should be brave and cooperate with others when I meet difficulties.（when引导时间状语从句） （七） Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 假设张蕾、李华、刘明是你的好朋友，你们喜欢不同类型的电影。请根据下表提示，对你们所喜爱的电影类型进行简要介绍。要求语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。 Names Types Reasons Zhang Lei scary movies exciting Li Hua comedies happy Liu Ming documentaries learn a lot You ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： I have three good friends. They are Zhang Lei, Li Hua and Liu Ming. We have different preferences for movies. Zhang Lei loves scary movies because they are exciting and thrilling. Li Hua prefers comedies, as they make her laugh and feel happy. Liu Ming enjoys documentaries because they provide valuable knowledge and insights. He can learn a lot from them. For me, I am fond of action movies. They are exciting and filled with adventures, featuring brave heroes and thrilling plots. Watching action movies makes me feel invigorated and gives me a sense of excitement and fun. 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据表格的提示，介绍3个好朋友喜爱的电影类型和原因，补充说明自己喜欢的电影类型及其原因。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，简单介绍自己有3个朋友，并直接点明主题，引出下文。 第二步，详细介绍每个人喜欢什么样类型的电影及其原因。 第三步，总结看电影的感受。 ［亮点词汇］ ①be fond of喜爱 ②learn...from从……学习 ［高分句型］ ①Li Hua prefers comedies, as they make her laugh and feel happy.（as引导的原因状语从句） ②Watching action movies makes me feel invigorated and gives me a sense of excitement and fun.（动名词作主语) （八） 古代花木兰替父从军的故事感动了很多人。假如你是李华，最近观看了根据这个故事改编的动作片《花木兰》。请根据以下提示，用英语在网上发帖子，向国外网友推荐这部电影。 1.内容简介； 2.推荐的原因：1）演员们表演出色；2）花木兰爱国爱家、坚强勇敢的精神值得学习； 3.建议大家周末观看这部影片。 要求： 1.不少于80词；包含所有内容，可适当发挥。 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。 3.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇：brave勇敢 Hi, I’m Li Hua from China. I would like to recommend (推荐) the movie Mulan to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hi, I’m Li Hua from China. I would like to recommend (推荐) the movie Mulan to you. Mulan is an exciting action movie. It comes from an old Chinese story. The movie is about a village girl, Mulan. She dresses up like a boy and takes her father’s place to fight in the army. I think the actress plays Mulan’s role well. The other actors are also fantastic and do a good job in the movie. They bring the characters to life. I like Mulan very much. Her love for her family and country is moving. As a brave girl, she never gives up when she is faced with difficulty. If you plan to watch a movie this weekend and you want to see something enjoyable, choose Mulan. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：主体使用“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简单介绍剧情； 第二步，给出自己的推荐原因； 第三步，总结建议。 [亮点词汇] ① dress up as 装扮成 ② take one’s place 代替某人 ③ bring…to life 生动呈现 ④ be faced with 面对 [高分句型] If you plan to watch a movie this weekend and you want to see something enjoyable, choose Mulan.（条件状语从句） 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 5 Films单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于“人与文化”范畴，涉及“赏析影视、感受多元文化，学会审美表达”。 该单元旨在引导学生通过观看、赏析各类影片，学会辨别不同电影类型，读懂海报、观影指南、影评、影视专题文章，理解一部优秀影片的构成要素；在观影与评析中感受亲情、友情、坚持、勇敢等正向精神，领略中外影视特色与中华传统动画之美。单元核心写作任务为英文影评，写作围绕影片基础信息、亮点优势、客观不足、总结推荐展开，运用形容词比较级、最高级对比影片优劣，同时借助否定前缀丰富评价词汇。完成影评写作的过程，能锻炼学生客观思辨的审美能力，学会有条理表达个人观影感受，拓宽全球影视文化视野，增强对中国传统动画的文化自信。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.电影基础分类 musical 歌舞片；animation 动画电影；sci-fi film 科幻片；action film 动作片；drama 剧情片 cartoon 卡通片；romantic film 浪漫片；documentary 纪录片；comedy 喜剧；adventure film 冒险片 2.影片构成核心要素 director 导演；main character 主角；voice actor 配音演员；film-maker 电影制作人；actor/actress 男女演员 plot 剧情；setting 故事场景；legend 传说；screenplay 剧本；special effects 特效 ink wash painting 水墨画；Peking Opera face make-up 京剧脸谱；paper cutting 剪纸；lion dancing 舞狮；traditional art 传统艺术 3.评价形容词 meaningful 有意义的；imaginative 充满想象力的；classic 经典的；wonderful 精彩的 exciting 刺激的；touching 感人的；lively 鲜活的；amazing 震撼的；educational 有教育意义的 unforgettable 难忘的；slow-paced 节奏慢的；complicated 情节复杂的；boring 无聊的；short 时长过短 4.动词 & 主题短语 release 上映；return to screen 重返荧幕；fight bad guys 对抗坏人 learn from characters 向人物学习；recommend 推荐；come from old legends 源自古老传说 keep traditional art alive 传承传统艺术；taste Chinese culture 感受中华文化；full of fun 充满趣味 bring us joy 带给我们快乐；strongly recommend 强烈推荐；well worth watching 值得一看 句式积累 开头句： 1.It’s strongly suggested that every student spend some time watching this fantastic film. 我强烈建议每位同学都抽空观看这部精彩影片。 2.Recently, I watched a fantastic Chinese animation and I can’t wait to share my ideas with you. 最近我看了一部优秀国产动画，迫不及待想分享我的看法。 3.Among all films I have ever watched, the traditional Chinese animation touches my heart most. 在我看过所有影片中，这部国产传统动画最打动我。 中间句： ① 剧情 & 亮点描写 1.Filled with interesting plots and creative ideas, this movie passes the warm spirit of being ready to help others. 影片情节有趣、创意十足，传递出乐于助人的温暖精神。 2.Not only is the story full of imagination, but it also tells us the importance of kindness. 故事不仅充满想象力，还让我们懂得善良的重要性。 3.Its special effects are far better than those of many ordinary films. 它的特效远超很多普通影片。 4.No other movie I’ve watched has such amazing and real special effects. 我看过的所有影片里，没有一部拥有如此逼真震撼的特效。 5.Every character in the movie has a unique personality, so I can easily remember them. 影片每个角色性格独特，让人过目不忘。 6.The creators shape lively heroes that we can learn a lot from. 创作者塑造出鲜活的主角，我们能从他们身上学到很多。 ② 客观不足描写 1.Several chapters of the story develop slowly, which may make some audience feel bored. 故事有几个段落节奏缓慢，部分观众会觉得乏味。 2.Compared with its exciting ending, the beginning plot is a little slow. 对比精彩的结尾，影片开篇剧情节奏略显拖沓。 3.The plot is a little complex, so it’s not suitable for very young children. 情节略微复杂，不太适合低龄小朋友观看。 4.Little kids may fail to catch all the hidden meanings in this film. 低龄孩子很难读懂影片里全部深层内涵。 结尾句： 1.Taking its small shortcomings into consideration, it is still a fantastic movie worth watching. 即便存在少许不足，它依旧是一部值得观看的优秀影片。 2.To sum up, this film brings me lots of joy, so I highly suggest you watch it in your free time. 总而言之，这部影片带给我许多快乐，我十分推荐大家课余观看。 3.Full of valuable lessons, the movie deserves to be watched more than once. 影片蕴含诸多人生道理，值得反复回味。 4.I plan to watch this film once more with my parents this weekend. 这周末我打算和父母二刷这部影片。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：It is also meaningful because it teaches children to help others. 仿写：这部运动剧情片很有意义，告诉我们坚持梦想。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：It makes young people proud of Chinese animation. 仿写：看完《流浪地球》，我为中国科幻电影倍感骄傲。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：The only thing I don’t like is many characters are hard to remember. 仿写：唯一小小的遗憾是前半段剧情节奏有些缓慢。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 典例 Topic: What film do you recommend? I need your help! Can you recommend a film to me? Here are my preferences (偏好): 1. I am interested in many things, like music, sports or animals. 2. I like films with good pictures or special effects. 3. I like films that can teach me about life. Lily 假如你是网友Tracy，请给Lily写一封回帖，推荐一部电影。 要求： 1.该电影须符合Lily的两条喜好。 2.回帖需包含电影的简介和推荐理由。 3.不少于60词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：回帖需包含电影的简介和推荐理由，且该电影须符合Lily的两条喜好。 谋篇布局 开头 说明推荐哪部电影以及推荐的理由 中间 简单介绍电影的内容和特色 结尾 总结电影的价值 佳作展示 Dear Lily, I suggest you watch “The Lion King” because it is full of beautiful scenes and fantastic music. It tells the story of Simba, a young lion who learns important lessons about courage, friendship, and responsibility. The special effects in this film are amazing, and the songs are wonderful. I believe it will not only satisfy your love for animals but also teach you some valuable lessons about life. Tracy 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ①fantastic极好的 ②courage勇气 ③amazing令人惊叹的 ④satisfy满足 高分句型： ①I suggest you watch “The Lion King” because it is full of beautiful scenes and fantastic music.（省略that的宾语从句，because引导的原因状语从句） ②I believe it will not only satisfy your love for animals but also teach you some valuable lessons about life.（省略that的宾语从句） （一） 请以“My favourite film”为主题写一篇电影的影评, 谈谈这部电影的内容, 以及你对这部电影的看法和感受。（字数不少于60） 提示问题： 1. Which film is your favourite film? 2. What is the film about? 3. What do you like most about the film? 4. What do you think of the film? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.请根据以下情境写一篇不少于60字的短文。 学校论坛的娱乐版块邀请你推荐一部近期看过的电影，请以“我推荐的一部电影(The film I recommend)”为题写一篇不少于60字的短文。 Guiding questions: 1. Which film do you recommend? 2. What is the basic information about the film? 3. Why do you recommend this film? （注意：1.短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2.照搬阅读语篇内容不得分。） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） Write at least 50 words on the topic “My film review” according to the given situation（情境）。 你所在的社团组织了一次论坛活动，主题为“我的电影影评”。请写一篇不少于50词的论坛发言稿，标点符号不计入词数。 文章要求包含： 1. 电影的基本信息（如种类、背景等……） 2. 你喜欢或不喜欢它的原因 注意： 1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 My film review ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） 李华非常喜欢动画片和科幻类电影， 他的好朋友张明知道他的喜好， 为他挑选了一部电影并邀请李华一起去观看。 假如你是张明， 请你向李华简要介绍这部挑选的电影。写不少于50词的短文。 (注意：短文中不得出现个人校名及其他相关信息，不得照抄阅读原文，否则不予评分。) (以下海报供参考) ... ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） Write at least 60 words about the topic “A film review of ________”. Use the following points as a reference. 1. What is the name of the film? 2. What type is the film? 3. What is the film about? 4. What do you think of it? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） Write a passage of at least 60 words about a classic Chinese animation. (围绕你所了解的一部经典的中国动画片，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) Use the following points as a reference. （以下内容仅供参考） 1. 动画片的名称及简介； 2. 动画片给你的启发。 （以下词汇可供参考） ● Calabash Brothers 葫芦兄弟 ● goblin 妖精 ● cooperate with 与……合作 ● relative 亲属 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） Write a passage of at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) 假设张蕾、李华、刘明是你的好朋友，你们喜欢不同类型的电影。请根据下表提示，对你们所喜爱的电影类型进行简要介绍。要求语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。 Names Types Reasons Zhang Lei scary movies exciting Li Hua comedies happy Liu Ming documentaries learn a lot You ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） 古代花木兰替父从军的故事感动了很多人。假如你是李华，最近观看了根据这个故事改编的动作片《花木兰》。请根据以下提示，用英语在网上发帖子，向国外网友推荐这部电影。 1.内容简介； 2.推荐的原因：1）演员们表演出色；2）花木兰爱国爱家、坚强勇敢的精神值得学习； 3.建议大家周末观看这部影片。 要求： 1.不少于80词；包含所有内容，可适当发挥。 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。 3.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇：brave勇敢 Hi, I’m Li Hua from China. I would like to recommend (推荐) the movie Mulan to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $