Unit 4 Smart home（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材沪教版五四学制七年级上册

本讲义聚焦初中英语“人与社会”范畴下“探索科技、创新生活”主题，系统梳理智能家居相关词汇（智能设备名词、功能短语、主题形容词）、句式（开头/中间/结尾句）及写作结构（设备介绍、场景描述、利弊分析），为学生提供从素材积累到篇章构建的完整学习支架。 资料以“储素材-品范例-重实战”为主线，通过鲜活词汇句式积累提升语言能力，辩证分析科技利弊培养思维品质，多样化实战任务（如设计2050年智能设备、AI宠物介绍）强化学习能力。课中助力教师引导学生搭建写作框架，课后学生可通过仿写与实战任务巩固知识，弥补表达短板。

Unit 4 Smart home单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于“人与社会”范畴，涉及“探索科技、创新生活”。 该单元旨在引导学生懂得智能科技是探索美好生活的重要载体，它能够突破传统居家生活的局限，用创新设计优化日常起居。通过认识各类智能设备、了解物联网运作模式、畅想未来智慧家居，我们可以完整梳理科技给生活带来的便利、节能与安全改变，同时辩证思考过度依赖科技带来的问题。智能家居主题写作围绕现有智能生活体验、创意设计理想全屋智能系统展开，完整呈现设备功能、使用场景、科技利弊与个人思考。这有助于我们建立理性看待科技的认知基础，学会合理、低碳、安全使用智能产品，培养乐于探索、敢于创新、思辨求真的宝贵品质。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.智能设备名词 smart speaker 智能音箱；smart light 智能灯光；smart curtain 智能窗帘；smart TV 智能电视； robot cleaner 扫地机器人；smart fridge 智能冰箱；smart oven 智能烤箱；smart tap 智能水龙头； indoor smart garden 室内智能种植箱；smart bed 智能床；smart mirror 智能化妆镜； smart air conditioner 智能空调；smart shower 智能淋浴；smart toilet 智能马桶；water sensor 漏水感应装置 smart door lock 智能门锁；smart camera 智能监控；smart window 智能窗户；smart thermostat 智能温控器 voice control 语音操控；Wi-Fi 无线网络；cloud storage 云端存储；sensor 感应器 2.核心动词与功能短语 control by voice 语音操控；sense people’s needs 感知人的需求；adjust temperature 调节温度； turn on/off automatically 自动开关；remind people of daily plans 提醒日程； suggest healthy meals 推荐健康食谱；rock people to sleep 轻晃助眠；read messages 朗读消息 alarm for strangers 陌生人警报；check home safety 检查居家隐患；watch every room 监控全屋； lock the door remotely 远程锁门；save electricity 节约用电；cut down waste 减少损耗； turn off idle devices 关闭闲置设备；collect solar energy 收集太阳能 3.主题形容词 convenient 便捷的；comfortable 舒适的；safe 安全的；energy-saving 节能的；automatic 全自动的； amazing 神奇的；smart 智能的；helpful 有帮助的；quiet 静音的；time-saving 省时的 expensive 昂贵的；easy to break 易损坏；easy to leak privacy 易泄露隐私； over-dependent 过度依赖的；complicated 操作复杂的；power-wasting 耗电的 句式积累 开头句： 1.Smart technology has already changed our home life greatly.智能科技已经极大改变了我们的居家生活。 2.My dream smart home can bring us a safe, easy and low-carbon life.我梦想中的智能家居能带给我们安全、便捷又低碳的生活。 3.It’s wonderful to live in a house full of smart devices.住在满是智能设备的房子里是一件很棒的事。 中间句： ① 设备功能描写句 1.Smart devices can sense what we need before we speak.智能设备能在我们开口前感知我们的需求。 2.The smart fridge can check food and suggest proper dishes for us.智能冰箱可以查看食材，并为我们推荐合适的菜品。 3.We can control all home things just by speaking to the smart speaker.我们只需要对智能音箱说话，就能操控家里所有设备。 4.Smart beds can adjust softness and rock us to sleep at night.智能床可以调节软硬度，夜晚轻晃助眠。 ② 优势描写句 1.Smart homes turn off lights when no one is in the room to save power.家里没人时智能家居自动关灯，节约电力。 2.Smart cameras watch every corner and keep our house safe all day.智能摄像头监控每个角落，全天守护房屋安全。 3.IoT makes all devices talk and work together smoothly.物联网让所有设备互通，顺畅协同工作。 ③ 客观弊端 & 观点句 1.We shouldn’t depend too much on smart home technology.我们不应该过度依赖智能家居技术。 2.If we use smart devices all day, we may lose basic life skills.如果整日使用智能设备，我们可能会丧失基础生活能力。 3.We must set strong passwords to protect our private information.我们必须设置复杂密码，保护个人隐私。 结尾句： 1.We should use smart devices wisely to live a better life.我们应当合理使用智能设备，过上更美好的生活。 2.I can’t wait to design my own creative smart home in the future.我十分期待在未来设计属于自己的创意智能家居。 3.Technology serves people, but we are still the master of our life.科技服务于人，但我们才是生活的主人。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：Smart homes have already changed our way of living greatly. 仿写：各类智能家电早已让居家日常变得轻松简单。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：Smart kitchens make our life easier. 仿写：全套智能安防系统让居家生活安心又舒服。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：My life depends on my smart home in many ways. 仿写：我们不能事事依靠智能设备，要保留动手能力。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 典例 Write at least 60 words on the topic “My home in 2035”.  (根据提示，以“2035年我的家”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 科技的发展日新月异，各种各样的智能设备构成了智能家居系统。2035年你的家可能是怎么样的？请设计并介绍一下你智能家中的设备 (不少于2个)，以及你这样设计的原因。 Guiding questions: 1. What will your home be like in 2035? 2. What kind of smart devices would you like to have in your home in 2035? 3. Why would you like to have these devices? (注意：勿出现任何与你的学校、姓名等相关的信息。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包含所有提示要点，可适当补充细节，使文章内容充实；行文时多使用第一、三人称，适当运用短语和多样句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 谋篇布局 开头 总述2035年的家是全智能空间，能贴合需求、让生活更省心 中间 分述两种智能设备——智能厨房系统与智能床垫 结尾 总结智能设备的价值，表达对2035年家的期待。 佳作展示 My Home in 2035 In 2035, my home will be a fully smart space focused on daily convenience and health. It can “understand” my needs and make life easier.​ I want a smart kitchen system most. It can learn my eating habits and prepare ingredient lists automatically. When I’m back, it will automatically start preheating the oven for my favorite cake. I also need a smart mattress. It can monitor my sleep quality and heart rate every night. If there’s something wrong, it will send alerts to my phone at once.​ These devices will save me time and keep me healthy. I’m really looking forward to my 2035 home. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ①look forward to 期待 ②monitor my sleep quality 监测我的睡眠质量 高分句型： ①When I’m back, it will automatically start preheating the oven for my favorite cake. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②If there’s something wrong, it will send alerts to my phone at once. (if引导的条件状语从句) （一） What Is a Smart Classroom? Write an online post about “A Smart Classroom”. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） 假如你是李华，你所在学校的英语俱乐部正在举办“AI Pet”设计大赛。请根据以下内容提示写一篇短文，介绍自己设计的一款人工智能宠物。 注意： （1）要求包括所有要点，可适当拓展信息； （2）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； （3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 A real pet gives people love, but my AI pet can give people something different. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） 最近你为自己创建了一个专属AI智能体，名字叫Pebble。它外形可爱，功能强大，能够帮助你养成良好的健康与学习习惯。请你写一篇英语短文，在班级交流中向同学们介绍它。 写作要点： 1．描述它的外形（What does it look like?） 2．介绍它的主要功能（What can it do?） 例如：在饮食、运动、生活习惯或学习等方面，它如何为你提供帮助？ 3．谈谈你使用AI助手之后的感受（How do you feel about it?） 写作要求： 1．包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使行文连贯； 2．语句通顺，书写规范，卷面整洁； 3．词数：不少于80词； 4．开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Useful AI Agent—Pebble Hi, my dear friend! I’d like to tell you about my new AI agent. ____________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） Imagine you are a future home designer. Your task is to invent ONE new smart device for a home in the year 2050. It can be anything—maybe a smart mirror, a robot pet, or something totally new! 假设你是一位未来家居设计师，请为2050年设计一款全新的智能家居设备。 内容包括： (1) What is its name? (2) What does it look like? (3) How does it help people in their daily life? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） Write at least 60 words according to the given topic “________ has influenced me most”. 智能科技改变生活，让我们的生活更加美好。请你以“________ has influenced me most”为题，根据以下要点和要求写一篇英语短文，介绍一件对你影响最大的智能科技产品。 Using the following points as a guide. (短文须包含下列要点) ● Which smart device has influenced you most? ● What do you usually use it to do? (Give at least two examples) ● How does it influence you? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） 如今，越来越多的家庭拥有了智能设备，如智能音箱、智能手表等。请你根据自己的生活体验，以“My Smart Device”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你家中的一款智能设备。内容包括： 1. 设备的名称和外观； 2. 它的主要功能； 3. 你对它的评价。 要求： 1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 词数150左右； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） 假如你是李华，你去参观了有关智能厨房的科技展。请根据以下内容写一封e-mail告诉你的英国朋友Tom你的见闻及想法。 Smart Kitchen What does it have? (至少写出4点， 可选择以下内容或自由发挥) ·powered by clean energy ·smart fridge (be connected to, shop) ·smart screen (by voice, play music, show menus…) ·smart cooker (a balanced diet) ·safety system (keep...safe) ·smart housekeeper (control) Your opinions: ...(请至少写2 点). 注意事项： 1.词数：80—100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 3.表格中的英文提示可作参考。 Tom, I learned a lot about smart kitchens at a tech exhibition. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What do you think? Would you like to have a smart kitchen, or do you prefer the traditional way of cooking? Yours, Li Hua （八） Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情境，写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 学校论坛的“Be for or be against?（支持还是反对？）”栏目正在征集大家对“智能家居”看法的意见, 请发布一个帖子（3条理由）。 注意：抄袭试卷上任何语篇或句子不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 4 Smart home单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于“人与社会”范畴，涉及“探索科技、创新生活”。 该单元旨在引导学生懂得智能科技是探索美好生活的重要载体，它能够突破传统居家生活的局限，用创新设计优化日常起居。通过认识各类智能设备、了解物联网运作模式、畅想未来智慧家居，我们可以完整梳理科技给生活带来的便利、节能与安全改变，同时辩证思考过度依赖科技带来的问题。智能家居主题写作围绕现有智能生活体验、创意设计理想全屋智能系统展开，完整呈现设备功能、使用场景、科技利弊与个人思考。这有助于我们建立理性看待科技的认知基础，学会合理、低碳、安全使用智能产品，培养乐于探索、敢于创新、思辨求真的宝贵品质。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.智能设备名词 smart speaker 智能音箱；smart light 智能灯光；smart curtain 智能窗帘；smart TV 智能电视； robot cleaner 扫地机器人；smart fridge 智能冰箱；smart oven 智能烤箱；smart tap 智能水龙头； indoor smart garden 室内智能种植箱；smart bed 智能床；smart mirror 智能化妆镜； smart air conditioner 智能空调；smart shower 智能淋浴；smart toilet 智能马桶；water sensor 漏水感应装置 smart door lock 智能门锁；smart camera 智能监控；smart window 智能窗户；smart thermostat 智能温控器 voice control 语音操控；Wi-Fi 无线网络；cloud storage 云端存储；sensor 感应器 2.核心动词与功能短语 control by voice 语音操控；sense people’s needs 感知人的需求；adjust temperature 调节温度； turn on/off automatically 自动开关；remind people of daily plans 提醒日程； suggest healthy meals 推荐健康食谱；rock people to sleep 轻晃助眠；read messages 朗读消息 alarm for strangers 陌生人警报；check home safety 检查居家隐患；watch every room 监控全屋； lock the door remotely 远程锁门；save electricity 节约用电；cut down waste 减少损耗； turn off idle devices 关闭闲置设备；collect solar energy 收集太阳能 3.主题形容词 convenient 便捷的；comfortable 舒适的；safe 安全的；energy-saving 节能的；automatic 全自动的； amazing 神奇的；smart 智能的；helpful 有帮助的；quiet 静音的；time-saving 省时的 expensive 昂贵的；easy to break 易损坏；easy to leak privacy 易泄露隐私； over-dependent 过度依赖的；complicated 操作复杂的；power-wasting 耗电的 句式积累 开头句： 1.Smart technology has already changed our home life greatly.智能科技已经极大改变了我们的居家生活。 2.My dream smart home can bring us a safe, easy and low-carbon life.我梦想中的智能家居能带给我们安全、便捷又低碳的生活。 3.It’s wonderful to live in a house full of smart devices.住在满是智能设备的房子里是一件很棒的事。 中间句： ① 设备功能描写句 1.Smart devices can sense what we need before we speak.智能设备能在我们开口前感知我们的需求。 2.The smart fridge can check food and suggest proper dishes for us.智能冰箱可以查看食材，并为我们推荐合适的菜品。 3.We can control all home things just by speaking to the smart speaker.我们只需要对智能音箱说话，就能操控家里所有设备。 4.Smart beds can adjust softness and rock us to sleep at night.智能床可以调节软硬度，夜晚轻晃助眠。 ② 优势描写句 1.Smart homes turn off lights when no one is in the room to save power.家里没人时智能家居自动关灯，节约电力。 2.Smart cameras watch every corner and keep our house safe all day.智能摄像头监控每个角落，全天守护房屋安全。 3.IoT makes all devices talk and work together smoothly.物联网让所有设备互通，顺畅协同工作。 ③ 客观弊端 & 观点句 1.We shouldn’t depend too much on smart home technology.我们不应该过度依赖智能家居技术。 2.If we use smart devices all day, we may lose basic life skills.如果整日使用智能设备，我们可能会丧失基础生活能力。 3.We must set strong passwords to protect our private information.我们必须设置复杂密码，保护个人隐私。 结尾句： 1.We should use smart devices wisely to live a better life.我们应当合理使用智能设备，过上更美好的生活。 2.I can’t wait to design my own creative smart home in the future.我十分期待在未来设计属于自己的创意智能家居。 3.Technology serves people, but we are still the master of our life.科技服务于人，但我们才是生活的主人。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：Smart homes have already changed our way of living greatly. 仿写：各类智能家电早已让居家日常变得轻松简单。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：Smart kitchens make our life easier. 仿写：全套智能安防系统让居家生活安心又舒服。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：My life depends on my smart home in many ways. 仿写：我们不能事事依靠智能设备，要保留动手能力。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. All kinds of smart home appliances have already made daily life easy. 2. Complete smart safety systems make home life safe and comfortable. 3. We can’t depend on smart devices for everything and keep practical skills. 典例 Write at least 60 words on the topic “My home in 2035”.  (根据提示，以“2035年我的家”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 科技的发展日新月异，各种各样的智能设备构成了智能家居系统。2035年你的家可能是怎么样的？请设计并介绍一下你智能家中的设备 (不少于2个)，以及你这样设计的原因。 Guiding questions: 1. What will your home be like in 2035? 2. What kind of smart devices would you like to have in your home in 2035? 3. Why would you like to have these devices? (注意：勿出现任何与你的学校、姓名等相关的信息。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包含所有提示要点，可适当补充细节，使文章内容充实；行文时多使用第一、三人称，适当运用短语和多样句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 谋篇布局 开头 总述2035年的家是全智能空间，能贴合需求、让生活更省心 中间 分述两种智能设备——智能厨房系统与智能床垫 结尾 总结智能设备的价值，表达对2035年家的期待。 佳作展示 My Home in 2035 In 2035, my home will be a fully smart space focused on daily convenience and health. It can “understand” my needs and make life easier.​ I want a smart kitchen system most. It can learn my eating habits and prepare ingredient lists automatically. When I’m back, it will automatically start preheating the oven for my favorite cake. I also need a smart mattress. It can monitor my sleep quality and heart rate every night. If there’s something wrong, it will send alerts to my phone at once.​ These devices will save me time and keep me healthy. I’m really looking forward to my 2035 home. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： ①look forward to 期待 ②monitor my sleep quality 监测我的睡眠质量 高分句型： ①When I’m back, it will automatically start preheating the oven for my favorite cake. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②If there’s something wrong, it will send alerts to my phone at once. (if引导的条件状语从句) （一） What Is a Smart Classroom? Write an online post about “A Smart Classroom”. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： A Smart Classroom Smart classrooms revolutionize the traditional learning experience with advanced technology and interactive tools. In a smart classroom, an interactive board is a central feature, allowing teachers to display multimedia content such as videos, images and animations, which makes lessons more engaging and easier to understand. Additionally, an audio-visual system ensures that both teachers and students can hear and see clearly, enhancing communication and comprehension during lessons. Furthermore, each student has access to a computer, providing opportunities for personalized learning, research and collaboration, making education more interactive and effective. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要根据图片内容及文字提示写一篇名为“A Smart Classroom”的在线帖子，可适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍智能教室带来的变化； 第二步，具体介绍智能教室是什么样的及智能教室起到的积极作用。 [亮点词汇] ①advanced technology 先进技术 ②such as 例如 ③provide ... for ... 为……提供…… [高分句型] ①In a smart classroom, an interactive board is a central feature, allowing teachers to display multimedia content such as videos, images and animations, which makes lessons more engaging and easier to understand.（定语从句） ② Additionally, an audio-visual system ensures that both teachers and students can hear and see clearly, enhancing communication and comprehension during lessons.（宾语从句） （二） 假如你是李华，你所在学校的英语俱乐部正在举办“AI Pet”设计大赛。请根据以下内容提示写一篇短文，介绍自己设计的一款人工智能宠物。 注意： （1）要求包括所有要点，可适当拓展信息； （2）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； （3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 A real pet gives people love, but my AI pet can give people something different. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 A real pet gives people love, but my AI pet can give people something different. I design it specially for elderly people who live alone, as many of them have no constant company around. It is a cat-shaped robot and very special: unlike real pets, it needs no walking or daily cleaning, and never gets sick. It can chat with people to drive away loneliness, remind the elderly to take medicine on time and tell funny stories. I think it is a warm companion for people in need of company. 【详解】写作解析 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：事物介绍类说明文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：为谁设计AI宠物；它的特别之处；它能为人们做什么（三点全部必须包含） 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：词数80左右，给定开头不计入词数；文中不得透露真实姓名与学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：题目给出固定开头，对比真实宠物，引出自己设计的AI宠物 主体段：依次对应三个提示问题，先说明设计对象，再介绍独特特点，最后阐述具备的功能 结尾段：抒发看法，总结这款AI宠物的陪伴意义 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：Who do you make it for?（为谁设计） 服务人群：elderly people who live alone/teenagers staying at home alone等 设计缘由：many of them have no constant company around/they often stay alone and have no one to talk with after school等 要点二：What is special about it?（它的特别之处） 外形特征：cat-shaped robot/it is a small and light robot with a lovely appearance等 独有优势：unlike real pets, it needs no walking or daily cleaning, and never gets sick/it is easy to carry and will not bring any trouble to its owners等 要点三：What can it do for people?（它能为人们做什么） 功能 1：chat with people to drive away loneliness/talk with users and share interesting daily news/listen to people’s feelings patiently等 功能 2：remind the elderly to take medicine on time/remind users of their daily study and rest plans, keep accurate time and give warm voice reminders to help people develop good daily habits等 功能 3：tell funny stories/share popular small stories and interesting facts/bring people happiness/relax their mind/make people’s spare time more colorful等 （三） 最近你为自己创建了一个专属AI智能体，名字叫Pebble。它外形可爱，功能强大，能够帮助你养成良好的健康与学习习惯。请你写一篇英语短文，在班级交流中向同学们介绍它。 写作要点： 1．描述它的外形（What does it look like?） 2．介绍它的主要功能（What can it do?） 例如：在饮食、运动、生活习惯或学习等方面，它如何为你提供帮助？ 3．谈谈你使用AI助手之后的感受（How do you feel about it?） 写作要求： 1．包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使行文连贯； 2．语句通顺，书写规范，卷面整洁； 3．词数：不少于80词； 4．开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Useful AI Agent—Pebble Hi, my dear friend! I’d like to tell you about my new AI agent. ____________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Useful AI Agent—Pebble Hi, my dear friend! I’d like to tell you about my new AI agent. Pebble is a cute, round robot with big LED eyes and a smooth, white body that wobbles when it moves. It helps me stay healthy by reminding me to drink water, exercise, and eat balanced meals. For studying, it creates schedules, blocks distractions, and quizzes me on lessons. Since using Pebble, I’ve become more organized and energetic. It’s like a helpful friend who makes self-improvement fun and easy! Try it—you’ll love it! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：外形（样子）、主要功能（在饮食、运动、生活习惯或学习等方面提供帮助）、使用感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：包含所有要点，可适当发挥，词数不少于80词，开头已给出不计入总词数 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出要介绍的AI智能体Pebble 主体段：分别介绍Pebble的外形和主要功能 结尾段：谈谈使用Pebble之后的感受 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：外形 样子描述：a cute, round robot with big LED eyes and a smooth, white body that wobbles when it moves/a small, square robot with colorful lights and a flexible arm等 要点二：主要功能 饮食方面：reminding me to drink water, exercise, and eat balanced meals/suggesting healthy food/reminding me of meal time等 学习方面：creates schedules, blocks distractions, and quizzes me on lessons/helps me take notes/provides learning resources等 要点三：使用感受 感受描述：I’ve become more organized and energetic. It’s like a helpful friend who makes self-improvement fun and easy!/I feel more confident and efficient. It brings me convenience and joy等 （四） Imagine you are a future home designer. Your task is to invent ONE new smart device for a home in the year 2050. It can be anything—maybe a smart mirror, a robot pet, or something totally new! 假设你是一位未来家居设计师，请为2050年设计一款全新的智能家居设备。 内容包括： (1) What is its name? (2) What does it look like? (3) How does it help people in their daily life? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My invention is called “Mood Wall”. It looks like a common white wall, but it is made of tiny smart parts. When you touch it, the surface feels warm and soft. This wall can understand your feelings and change everything around you. When you feel tired after school, it turns into a quiet forest with bird sounds and wood smell. If you are excited about a football match, the whole wall becomes a big screen showing the game—you can even feel the crowd cheering! When your grandma visits, it shows old photos from her young days and plays the songs she loved. The Mood Wall does not just show pictures. It creates a whole new world that fits your heart. I believe every home needs such a magic wall in 2050. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：围绕智能家居设备展开，需描述其名称、外观和功能。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山介绍设备名称； 第二步，描述外观； 第三步，说明功能和益处。 [亮点词汇] ①look like像 ②be made of由……制成 ③turn into变成 [高分句型] ①When you feel tired after school, it turns into a quiet forest with bird sounds and wood smell. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②If you are excited about a football match, the whole wall becomes a big screen showing the game—you can even feel the crowd cheering! (if引导的条件状语从句) （五） Write at least 60 words according to the given topic “________ has influenced me most”. 智能科技改变生活，让我们的生活更加美好。请你以“________ has influenced me most”为题，根据以下要点和要求写一篇英语短文，介绍一件对你影响最大的智能科技产品。 Using the following points as a guide. (短文须包含下列要点) ● Which smart device has influenced you most? ● What do you usually use it to do? (Give at least two examples) ● How does it influence you? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 My smartphone has influenced me most My smartphone has influenced me most. I use it in many helpful ways. Firstly, I use it to look up new words quickly, which helps me improve my English. Secondly, I listen to music to relax after studying. It not only makes my life more convenient but also helps me learn new knowledge. This smart device changes how I study and live. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：需包含具体设备、两个使用例子及其影响。 [写作步骤] 第一步，补全标题并点题，直接说明影响最大的设备； 第二步，列举两个使用场景； 第三步，说明影响，结尾强调改变学习与生活。 [亮点词汇] ①improve提高 ②convenient方便的 ③knowledge知识 [高分句型] ①Firstly, I use it to look up new words quickly, which helps me improve my English. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②It not only makes my life more convenient but also helps me learn new knowledge. (not only...but also...的并列结构) （六） 如今，越来越多的家庭拥有了智能设备，如智能音箱、智能手表等。请你根据自己的生活体验，以“My Smart Device”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你家中的一款智能设备。内容包括： 1. 设备的名称和外观； 2. 它的主要功能； 3. 你对它的评价。 要求： 1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 词数150左右； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Smart Device Nowadays, there are more and more smart devices in our daily lives. In my family, we have a smart speaker named Xiaodu. It is really cool and useful. Xiaodu is small and round like a cute drum. It is mainly white, with a touch-sensitive panel on the top and a speaker at the bottom. Its simple design makes it easy to fit in any corner of our living room. Xiaodu has many amazing functions. First, it can play various kinds of music. Whenever I feel tired or want to relax, I just say “Xiaodu, play my favorite music”, and then beautiful melodies will fill the room. Besides, it is a great helper for my study. I can ask it questions about my homework, like grammar points or math problems. It can give clear explanations right away. Also, it can tell interesting stories. At bedtime, I often let it tell me some fairy tales to help me fall asleep. In my opinion, Xiaodu is more than just a device. It brings much convenience and joy to our family. It makes our lives more colorful and easier. I really love my smart speaker! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”； ③提示：从三个方面进行写作，每方面需要具体展开。注意条理清晰、语法正确。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍家中智能设备的名称和外观； 第二步，介绍此智能设备的主要功能； 第三步，对此智能设备进行评价。 [亮点词汇] ①amazing functions令人惊叹的功能 ②various kinds of各种各样的 ③more than just不只是 ④much convenience and joy许多便利和欢乐 [高分句型] Its simple design makes it easy to fit in any corner of our living room. (it作形式宾语) （七） 假如你是李华，你去参观了有关智能厨房的科技展。请根据以下内容写一封e-mail告诉你的英国朋友Tom你的见闻及想法。 Smart Kitchen What does it have? (至少写出4点， 可选择以下内容或自由发挥) ·powered by clean energy ·smart fridge (be connected to, shop) ·smart screen (by voice, play music, show menus…) ·smart cooker (a balanced diet) ·safety system (keep...safe) ·smart housekeeper (control) Your opinions: ...(请至少写2 点). 注意事项： 1.词数：80—100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 3.表格中的英文提示可作参考。 Tom, I learned a lot about smart kitchens at a tech exhibition. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What do you think? Would you like to have a smart kitchen, or do you prefer the traditional way of cooking? Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Tom, I learned a lot about smart kitchens at a tech exhibition. The entire kitchen is powered by clean energy. There are many smart appliances in the kitchen. The smart fridge can be connected to wireless networks and used for shopping. In addition, the smart screen in the refrigerator has many functions, such as playing music and displaying menus by voice. There are also lots of cookers in the kitchen to make sure we have a balanced diet. The whole kitchen security system is very good, and it can keep us safe. It’s controlled by an intelligent butler. I really hope that I can have such a smart kitchen in the future, and I think it is very convenient and cool. What do you think? Would you like to have a smart kitchen, or do you prefer the traditional way of cooking? Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括文章给出的内容要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头文章已给，介绍自己获得关于智能厨房的知识； 第二步，具体阐述智能厨房里面有哪些东西并说出自己的看法； 第三步，结尾文章已给出，询问对方的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①be connected to与……有关联 ②In addition此外 ③have a balanced diet均衡饮食 [高分句型] ①The entire kitchen is powered by clean energy.（被动语态） ②I really hope that I can have such a smart kitchen in the future, and I think it is very convenient and cool.（宾语从句） （八） Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情境，写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 学校论坛的“Be for or be against?（支持还是反对？）”栏目正在征集大家对“智能家居”看法的意见, 请发布一个帖子（3条理由）。 注意：抄袭试卷上任何语篇或句子不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The biggest advantage of smart home is its comfort and convenience. Intelligent home equipment has the characteristics of automation and remote control, which can allow us to enjoy a more comfortable and convenient lifestyle in different scenarios. For example, we can control home air conditioning, heating, water heaters and other equipment through intelligent equipment, so that we can enjoy different comfort at different times. In addition, when going out, we can use mobile phones or tablets to control the door, windows and other home security equipment to ensure the safety of the family. Finally, it can help us to be more energy efficient. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求发表对“智能家居”看法，支持还是反对？发布一个帖子并包含3条理由。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明主题，说明智能家居的最大优势是其舒适性和便利性； 第二步，从三个方面介绍智能家居的舒适性和便利性； [亮点词汇] ①for example例如 ②at different times在不同时间 ③in addition另外 [高分句型] ①Intelligent home equipment has the characteristics of automation and remote control, which can allow us to enjoy a more comfortable and convenient lifestyle in different scenarios.（which引导非限定性定语从句） ②In addition, when going out, we can use mobile phones or tablets to control the door, windows and other home security equipment to ensure the safety of the family.（when引导的时间状语从句） 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $