Unit 1 Pocket money 写作（专项训练）-2026-2027学年冀教版（三起）英语六年级上册

**基本信息** 以“来源-使用-理财-建议”四步仿写为核心，构建词汇-句型-篇章三级训练体系，系统提升零花钱主题写作能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作思路|5步仿写框架|“来源-具体方式-使用-理财方法-结尾”分步构建|从零花钱来源到使用计划，再到“存、花、给”理财逻辑递进| |句型训练|5个重点句型+仿写练习|句型用法解析+易错提醒（如不可数名词money用法）|核心句型支撑写作内容，从单句到连贯表达| |分层写作|3个梯度练习（基础/提高/挑战）|三层进阶写作（40-60词），范文示范结构|从基础描述到逻辑分层，提升语言表达与思维品质|

冀教版六年级上英语 Unit 1 Pocket money 写作突破专项训练 主题：介绍零花钱来源、使用计划和聪明理财方法 【目标】一、写作目标 1. 能用 I do chores to earn pocket money. 介绍零花钱的来源。 2. 能用 I save some... / I spend money on... 写零花钱的使用计划。 3. 能用 SAVE cup, SPEND cup and GIVE cup 介绍“存、花、给”的理财方法。 4. 能用 Money does not grow on trees. / Spend it wisely. 表达聪明理财的建议。 【思路】二、课文仿写思路 本单元写作可以写“我的零花钱”“我的零花钱计划”或“怎样聪明使用零花钱”。写作时不要只写买了什么，还要写钱从哪里来、怎样储蓄、怎样合理消费，以及是否帮助别人。 Step 1 开头说明零花钱来源。可以写 I have some pocket money. / I do chores to earn pocket money. Step 2 写具体家务或收入方式。可以写 I clean the table. / I walk the dog. / I get lucky money during the Spring Festival. Step 3 写如何使用零花钱。可以写 I save some money. / I spend money on books. / I buy gifts for others. Step 4 加入理财方法。可以写 I use the SAVE cup, the SPEND cup and the GIVE cup. Step 5 结尾写感受或建议。可以写 Helping others makes me happy. / We should spend money wisely. 课文可仿写内容：Jenny does chores every week to earn pocket money. Li Ming saves some lucky money and keeps some as pocket money. Jack puts money in the SAVE cup, the SPEND cup and the GIVE cup. We should not waste money. 核心词汇 零花钱来源：pocket money, lucky money, earn money, get money from parents, do chores 家务劳动：clean the table, feed the dog, walk the dog, take out the trash 使用方式：buy things I need, buy gifts for others, spend money on books, buy a watch 储蓄理财：save some money, make a savings plan, piggy bank, bank, SAVE cup, SPEND cup, GIVE cup 感受建议：think carefully, spend it wisely, help people in need, proud, happy, useful 重点句型精讲 重点句型 1: How do you earn your pocket money? 原句：How do you earn your pocket money? 怎么用：询问零花钱来源时使用。 仿写例句：How do you get your pocket money? / I do chores to earn pocket money. 易错提醒：earn 表示“赚得”，不是“花钱”。 重点句型 2: I save some and keep some as my pocket money. 原句：I save some and keep some as my pocket money. 怎么用：写压岁钱或零花钱如何分配。 仿写例句：I save some money in my piggy bank. / I keep some money for books. 易错提醒：money 是不可数名词，可写 some money，不写 many money。 重点句型 3: I can buy things I want or gifts for others. 原句：I can buy things I want or gifts for others. 怎么用：写零花钱用途。 仿写例句：I can buy school things. / I can buy gifts for my sister. 易错提醒：buy gifts for others 中 for 不要漏写。 重点句型 4: Expensive things are not always better. 原句：Expensive things are not always better. 怎么用：写购物建议，说明不一定买最贵的。 仿写例句：A cheap gift can be good too. / I should think carefully before buying things. 易错提醒：expensive 前不用 very much。 重点句型 5: Money does not grow on trees. 原句：Money does not grow on trees. We should not waste it. 怎么用：写理财建议或文章结尾。 仿写例句：We should save money. / We should spend money wisely. 易错提醒：money 用 it 指代，不用 them。 【练句】三、句型仿写 1. I do chores to earn pocket money.（替换：walk the dog） ________________________________________________________________________ 2. I spend my money on books.（替换：school things） ________________________________________________________________________ 3. I / save / some / money / every week（根据提示词写句子） ________________________________________________________________________ 4. I can buy things I ______ or gifts for ______.（补全句子） ________________________________________________________________________ 5. I want to buy a new watch. The money is not enough.（用 but 连接） ________________________________________________________________________ 6. 主题迁移句：介绍“我的时间计划”，仿写 I use some time to... / I save some time for... ________________________________________________________________________ 【提醒】常见问题提醒 1. money 是不可数名词：some money / much money，不写 many money。 2. do chores to earn pocket money 中 to 表示目的，不要漏写。 3. spend money on sth. 表示“把钱花在某物上”。 4. too expensive for me 表示“对我来说太贵”。 5. SAVE / SPEND / GIVE cup 可以帮助文章内容更有层次。 【组句】四、连词成句 1. have / I / some / pocket money / . ________________________________________________________________________ 2. do / I / chores / earn / to / money / . ________________________________________________________________________ 3. some / save / I / my money / of / . ________________________________________________________________________ 4. money / spend / on / I / books / my / . ________________________________________________________________________ 5. gifts / buy / I / for / can / others / . ________________________________________________________________________ 6. not / grow / money / does / on trees / . ________________________________________________________________________ 【写作】五、三层写作练习 练习 1：My Pocket Money（基础） 题目：My Pocket Money。请写 4-5 句话，介绍你怎样得到零花钱和怎样使用。不少于 40 词。 写作提示：pocket money / do chores / save / buy books / happy ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 练习 2：My Pocket Money Plan（提高） 题目：My Pocket Money Plan。请写 6-7 句话，写清“存、花、给”三种使用方式，并加入原因。不少于 50 词。 写作提示：SAVE cup / SPEND cup / GIVE cup / help people in need / wisely ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 练习 3：Be Wise with Pocket Money（挑战） 题目：Be Wise with Pocket Money。请写 8 句话左右，介绍如何聪明使用零花钱。不少于 60 词。 写作提示：Money does not grow on trees. / We should not waste it. / First... Second... Third... ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】六、参考范文 范文 1：My Pocket Money I have some pocket money. I do chores to earn it. I clean the table and walk the dog every week. I save some money in my piggy bank. I also spend some money on books. I am happy because I can use my money well. 范文讲解 开头 I have some pocket money. 直接点题。 中间写 do chores, clean the table, walk the dog，说明钱从哪里来。 结尾写 save 和 spend，并表达感受。 范文 2：My Pocket Money Plan I get pocket money from my parents every month. I have a good plan for it. I save some money in my SAVE cup. I use the SPEND cup to buy things I need, such as books and school things. I use the GIVE cup to help people in need. I think this plan is useful. It helps me spend money wisely. 范文讲解 文章按 SAVE / SPEND / GIVE 三个方面展开，结构清楚。 such as books and school things 补充了具体例子。 It helps me spend money wisely. 能自然总结主题。 范文 3：Be Wise with Pocket Money Money does not grow on trees, so we should not waste it. First, we can do chores to earn pocket money. It teaches us to work hard. Second, we should make a savings plan and save some money every week. Third, we can spend money on things we need, not just things we want. We can also buy gifts for others or help people in need. If we use pocket money wisely, we can learn a lot and feel proud. 范文讲解 开头用 Money does not grow on trees. 提出观点。 中间用 First / Second / Third 写三条建议，层次清楚。 结尾写 learn a lot and feel proud，提升文章立意。 【小结】七、写作小结 零花钱主题作文常按“钱从哪里来 - 钱怎么用 - 是否储蓄 - 是否帮助别人 - 自己的感受或建议”展开。写作时要用好 earn, save, spend, give 四个动作词，并注意 money 是不可数名词。 【答案】八、参考答案 三、句型仿写参考答案 1. I walk the dog to earn pocket money. 2. I spend my money on school things. 3. I save some money every week. 4. I can buy things I want or gifts for others. 5. I want to buy a new watch, but the money is not enough. 6. I use some time to read. I save some time for sports.（答案合理即可） 四、连词成句参考答案 1. I have some pocket money. 2. I do chores to earn money. 3. I save some of my money. 4. I spend my money on books. 5. I can buy gifts for others. 6. Money does not grow on trees. 五、三层写作练习参考答案：见六、参考范文。 冀教版六年级上英语 Unit 1 Pocket money 写作训练 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $