Unit 6 Space Travel 写作（专项训练）-2026-2027学年教科版英语五年级上册

**基本信息** 以“六步写作法”为核心，构建“词汇-句型-篇章”三级训练体系，系统培养太空旅行主题写作的逻辑组织与语言表达能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作方法指引|6步结构化指引|“开头邀请-精彩活动-太空生活-对比-结尾邀请”六步框架，will/can/However等功能词精准运用|按“吸引读者-内容展开-对比深化-行动号召”逻辑链构建写作框架| |核心词汇与句型|5类功能词汇+5级句型|功能词汇分类记忆（地点/活动/生活等），句型梯度训练（基础-进阶-提升）|从词到句的语言要素积累，为篇章写作奠定基础| |分层写作练习|3层次写作任务（基础/提高/挑战）|基础计划（40词）→提高细节（50词）→挑战广告（60词）的能力递进训练|遵循“简单描述-细节补充-语篇创作”的认知发展规律|

Unit 6 Space Travel 写作突破专项训练 | 广州教科版五年级上英语 主题：介绍太空旅行计划或广告，写清可看、可做、特别体验与邀请语 写作目标 能围绕“太空旅行”进行介绍，按照“开头邀请 - 精彩活动 - 太空生活 - 特别感受 - 行动号召”的顺序写短文或旅行广告。能够使用 will, can, You’ll see..., You’ll get to... 介绍未来活动，并能用 However / both...and... 简单对比地球生活和太空生活。 写作方法指引 - 原文指路 1. 开头邀请读者 Ready for your first space trip? 写法提示：广告或旅行介绍可以用问句开头，吸引读者。 2. 写会看到什么 You can watch 16 sunrises every day. 写法提示：先写太空中能看到的特别景象，如日出、月亮和星星。 3. 写会做什么 You will work with our space robots and go on spacewalks. 写法提示：用 will / can 写具体活动，活动要有顺序。 4. 写太空生活 You will eat dried food and sleep in sleeping bags. 写法提示：补充饮食、睡眠等生活细节，让作文更完整。 5. 做简单对比 In space, we can float. However, we can sleep on beds on Earth. 写法提示：用 However 写不同点，用 both...and... 写相同点。 6. 结尾发出邀请 Come join us in space! 写法提示：广告结尾要有一句邀请或号召。 一、核心词汇 功能 可直接使用的表达 太空地点 space, Earth, the moon, the stars, Space Hotel, space farm 太空活动 go on a spacewalk, watch the sunrise, take photos of Earth, take a ride on a spaceship 太空生活 eat dried food, drink from bags, sleep in sleeping bags, do exercise in space 互动体验 talk to astronauts, work with a space robot, meet friends, live like an astronaut 感受与邀请 cool, exciting, special, amazing, fun, Come join us!, Book now! 二、参考句型 功能 可直接使用的表达 基础句 I will travel to space. / You can see the moon and the stars. 进阶句 During the trip, you will go on a spacewalk and visit the space farm. 提升句 In space, we can sleep in sleeping bags. However, we sleep on beds on Earth. 广告句 Are you excited about space? So, what are you waiting for? Come join us! 主题专用句 You'll see... / You'll get to... / You can... / We can... both on Earth and in space. 三、易错点提示 • will 后面用动词原形：You will go on a spacewalk. 不写 You will goes。 • space 前常用 in：in space 表示“在太空”。不要写 on space。 • However 前后表达转折：We can float in space. However, we cannot do that on Earth. • both...and... 表示“两者都”：We can do exercise both on Earth and in space. • 广告句可以用问号和感叹号，但不要忘记句末标点。 四、连词成句 请注意句首大小写和句末标点。 1. will / I / travel / space / to / . ______________________________________________________________________________ 2. you / see / will / the moon / and / the stars / . ______________________________________________________________________________ 3. go / on / can / a spacewalk / we / . ______________________________________________________________________________ 4. sleep / will / in / sleeping bags / you / . ______________________________________________________________________________ 5. Earth / photos / take / of / we / can / . ______________________________________________________________________________ 6. join / come / us / in space / ! ______________________________________________________________________________ 五、写作句型仿写 1. 替换关键词仿写：You will go on a spacewalk.（watch the sunrise） ______________________________________________________________________________ 2. 替换关键词仿写：You can visit the space farm.（take photos of Earth） ______________________________________________________________________________ 3. 根据提示词写句子：I / would like to / try space food ______________________________________________________________________________ 4. 补全句子：In space, we will eat ______ and drink from ______. ______________________________________________________________________________ 5. 连接句子：We can sleep in sleeping bags in space. We sleep on beds on Earth.（用 However 连接） ______________________________________________________________________________ 6. 主题迁移句：介绍一次未来海底旅行，仿写 You’ll see... / You’ll get to... ______________________________________________________________________________ 六、三层写作练习 写作一：My Space Trip Plan（基础） 要求：不少于 40 词。写 4-5 句话，介绍你想在太空做什么。 参考词：travel to space, watch the sunrise, try space food, go on a spacewalk, exciting ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 写作二：A Fun Trip to Space（提高） 要求：不少于 50 词。加入太空生活细节，如吃什么、睡在哪里、能看到什么。 参考词：sleeping bags, dried food, space robot, take photos of Earth, however ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 写作三：Come and Join Our Space Trip（挑战） 要求：不少于 60 词。写一则太空旅行广告，包含开头问句、精彩活动、特别体验和邀请语。 参考句：Are you excited about space? You'll see... You'll get to... So, what are you waiting for? ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 七、参考范文与讲解：写作一 My Space Trip Plan I want to travel to space one day. I will watch the sunrise and see the moon and the stars. I would like to try space food and drinks. I can also go on a spacewalk. It will be exciting. 范文讲解 结构：愿望 - 可看景象 - 可做活动 - 感受。 亮点句：I would like to... / It will be exciting. 适合基础作文直接迁移。 八、参考范文与讲解：写作二 A Fun Trip to Space Space travel is very special. During the trip, I will eat dried food and drink from bags. I will sleep in a sleeping bag. Then I will work with a space robot and take photos of Earth. In space, I can watch many sunrises. However, I cannot sleep on a bed there. 范文讲解 结构：总体感受 - 太空生活 - 太空活动 - 对比句。 亮点句：During the trip... / However... 让作文有顺序和层次。 九、参考范文与讲解：写作三 Come and Join Our Space Trip Are you excited about space? Come and join our space trip! During the visit, you will see the moon, the stars and 16 sunrises every day. You will get to go on a spacewalk, visit the space farm and work with a space robot. You can also talk to astronauts and live like an astronaut. It will be a cool and amazing trip. So, what are you waiting for? Book now and get ready for space! 范文讲解 结构：开头问句 - 活动介绍 - 特别体验 - 行动号召。 亮点句：You'll see... / You'll get to... / So, what are you waiting for? 符合广告类写作。 写作小结 太空旅行类作文可以按“吸引读者 - 写可看景象 - 写可做活动 - 写生活细节 - 写感受或邀请”的顺序展开。若题目要求对比地球和太空生活，可以加入 However 或 both...and... 句型，让文章更完整。 十、参考答案 四、连词成句参考答案 1. I will travel to space. 2. You will see the moon and the stars. 3. We can go on a spacewalk. 4. You will sleep in sleeping bags. 5. We can take photos of Earth. 6. Come join us in space! 五、写作句型仿写参考答案 1. You will watch the sunrise. 2. You can take photos of Earth. 3. I would like to try space food. 4. In space, we will eat dried food and drink from bags. 5. We can sleep in sleeping bags in space. However, we sleep on beds on Earth. 6. You'll see colourful fish. You'll get to ride in an underwater bus.（答案合理即可） 六、三层写作练习参考答案：见七、八、九参考范文。 广州教科版五年级上英语 Unit 6 Space Travel 写作训练 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $