内容正文:
你校英文报正在开展以Students'Time Spent on Physical Exercise Weekly题的讨论。
请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1描述调查结果,2.分析其原因并给出
建议。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Students'Time Spent on Physical
Percentage of
Exercise Weekly
Para.1:
students
现象;问题;讨论话题
Para.2:调查结果
40%
(描述+总结)
30%
(一般现在时)
12%
18%
Para.3:原因+建议
(一般现在时)
1-2h
2-3ht
3-4h
4-5h
Hours spent
第一段
时间,机构/组织has conducted a survey/questionnaire among..(学生等)
regarding/concerning+话题。
最近,学生会就博物馆免费开放政策在全校学生中开展了一项调查。
Recently,the Students Council has conducted a survey among the entire
student body regarding the free admission policy for museums.
Recently,our school English club has conducted a survey among senior
high school students regarding/concerning the duration of weekly physical
exercise.
第二段:描述调查结果(分组、归类、抓头尾)
As is shown in the chart(table/graph),/The survey results indicate/illustrate
that,the majority of....Only a small fraction of.../The remaining ...
调查结果显示,大多数学生(68%)表示如果能免费入场,会考虑参观博物馆。只
有一小部分(3.5%)的学生称,如果免费入场,他们肯定会去参观博物馆。其余
(28%)的学生对免费入场持无所谓的态度。
The survey results indicate that the majority of students (68%),would
consider visiting the museum when offered free admission.Only a small fraction
(3.5%)said they will definitely visit the museum if the admission is free.The
remaining 28%expressed an indifference attitude towards free admission.
A mass of....
reported..:which makes up+数据;t
the proportion of...ranks
second.
accounting for+数据;and the remaining+数据are those who..o
大量学生表示他们会接受这个想法,占比67%;对该政策持无所谓态度
的参与者比例位居第二,占28%;其余3.5%的人则表示,只有在免费的
情况下才会去参观、探索博物馆。
A mass of students reported they would buy the idea,which makes up 67%;
the proportion of participants holding an indifferent attitude towards the
policy ranks second,accounting for 28%and the remaining 3.5%are those
who would explore museums only if it's free.
Students'Time Spent on Physical
Percentage of
Exercise Weekly
It can be seen from the survey
students
that the percentage of students
who spend 2 to 3 hours a week,3
to 4 hours a week and 4 to 5 hours
40%
a week is respectively 30%,40%
30%
and 18%.However,there are still
12%of students who only spend 1
12%
18%
to 2 hours a week.
1-2h
2-3h
3-4h
45h
Hours spent
A survey shows that 18 of the students exercise 4 to 5 hours a week,while 30
and 40 spend respectively 2 to 3 hours and 3 to 4 hours exercising weekly
Another 12 do physical exercise less than two hours a week.
The findings suggest that the majority of students,approximately 82%,spend less than
4 hours per week engaging in physical exercise.
第三段:分析原因和建议
(原因单独列,不要和描述图混写!
建议要具体可行,不能空泛!)
Several factors may contribute to the varving opinions observed in this survev.
The underlving reasons are complicated but ..is the prime factor./The
increase/decrease in...is due to the fact that ...another contributing factor
of...is...
美待您案醔续婆貔复籽减少,是因为博物馆更有吸引力:他们态度改
The decrease in students'unwillingness to visit museums is due to the fact that
museums are more attractive;another contributing factor of their change is
the convenient transportation.
垃圾分类的增加是由于规定更加严格;这一进展的另一个促成因素是公众意
识的提高。
The increase in rubbish sorting is due to the fact that rules are stricter;another
contributing factor of the progress is better public awareness.
Several factors contribute to these statistics.Firstly,academic
pressures and extracurricular commitments often consume a
significant portion of students'time,leaving limited room for physical
activities.
Moreover,inadequate access to sports facilities or lack of interest
in traditional forms of exercise could also prevent students from
engaging in regular physical activities.
This might be because of the heavy study load/academic burden
or insufficient awareness of the benefits of exercise.
As far as I'm concerned,we can take some measures to...
From my perspective,it is recommended,suggested,advisable that...
就我而言,我们可以采取一些具体措施来倡导低碳生活方式,并提高公众
的坏保意识。
As far as I am concerned,we can take some concrete measures to promote a
low-carbon lifestyle and raise public awareness of environmental protection.
在我看来,闲暇时间参观博物馆是拓宽视野、丰富精神生活的好方式。
From my perspective,visiting museums in our spare time is a wonderful way to
broaden our horizons and enrich our spiritual life.
1.针对学生自身
建议:
Students should prioritize physical exercise.We can set aside a
specific time each day for exercise,like jogging in the morning or
playing badminton after school.
(学生们应该优先考虑体育锻炼。我们可以每天留出特定时间锻炼,比如早上
慢跑或放学后打羽毛球)
It's advisable for us to form exercise-related habits.For example,
taking the stairs instead of the elevator and walking to nearby places
instead of taking a bus.
(我们应该养成与锻炼相关的习惯例如,不坐电梯走楼梯,去附近的地方不坐
公交而是步行)
2.针对学校层面
Our school could organize more sports events,such as sports meets or
GSS
ball-game competitions,to arouse students'enthusiasm for exercise.
我们学校可以组织更多体育活动,比如运动会或球类比赛,来激发学生的锻炼热
情)
Schools should also ensure that there are sufficient sports facilities and
open the sports venues more frequently for students to use.
学校还应确保有充足的体育设施,并更频繁地开放体育场馆供学生使用)
Dear fellow students,
Recently,our school English club conducted a survey among senior high school students
about the duration of weekly physical exercise.
The bar chart shows the percentage of students who spend 2 to 3 hours a week,3 to 4 hours
a week and 4 to 5 hours a week is respectively 30%,40%and 18%.However,there are still
12%of students who only spend 1 to 2 hours a week.The findings suggest that the majority
of students,approximately 82%,spend less than 4 hours per week engaging in physical
exercise.
Several factors may contribute to this.Firstly,heavy academic workload often leaves
students with limited time for physical activities.Secondly,some students may lack interest in
traditional sports or have limited access to sports facilities.To address this,I suggest that
students should prioritize physical exercise.We can set aside a specific time each day for
exercise,like jogging in the morning or playing badminton after school.Besides,school should
organize more diverse and engaging sports activities,like dance or yoga classes,and ensure
sports facilities are accessible during breaks.Let's all take action to keep fit and lead a more
active life.