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Unit 2 I asked a lot of questions
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主题:Learning tips 与学科学习经验分享
写作目标
能围绕一门学科的学习方法或一次学习调查,按照“学习对象 - 具体方法 - 努力过程 - 效果评价”的顺序,使用一般过去时写短文。练习从介绍个人学习方法,到分享学好一门学科的经历,再到完成调查报告,难度逐步提升。
写作方法指引 - 原文指路
1. 引出学习问题
Do you know how to improve your study habits? 先提出学习主题,作文可以从“怎样学好一门学科”切入。
2. 交代起步阶段
When I started to learn Chinese, I asked a lot of questions. 用 When I started to learn... 写出学习初期的做法。
3. 列举课堂方法
I answered my teacher's questions actively in class. 写清楚课堂上怎样学习,方法更具体。
4. 补充课后努力
Later, I read Chinese books almost every day and wrote book reports. 用 Later 衔接课后学习,让文章有时间顺序。
5. 写同伴学习
I studied in groups and shared my ideas with my friends. 可以写和同学一起学习,体现合作学习。
6. 总结学习效果
It was a good way to improve my Chinese. 结尾点出方法有效,文章有完整收束。
一、核心词汇
学习方法类:ask questions, answer questions, look up new words, read a book, write a book report, study in groups
课堂习惯类:listen to the teacher carefully, answer actively, take notes, review them after class, make plans for study
学科活动类:learn about colours, take drawing lessons, watch insects, write a report, solve number puzzles, play number games
评价表达类:work hard, keep it up, improve, a good way, learn well, make good use of time
二、参考句型
基础句:介绍学习方法
• I asked a lot of questions.
• I listened to the teacher carefully.
• I looked up new words after class.
进阶句:写学习过程
• When I started to learn Chinese, I asked a lot of questions.
• Later, I read Chinese books almost every day.
• I studied in groups and shared my ideas with my friends.
提升句:写调查报告
• All the students thought making plans was the key to learning better.
• Most students asked questions during or after class.
• It was a good way to improve our study.
变化句:写不同学科
• I learned about colours and took some drawing lessons.
• I watched insects and wrote a report about insects.
• I practised with example problems and solved number puzzles.
三、易错点提示
• 一般过去时动词形式:ask - asked;answer - answered;study - studied;write - wrote;read 的过去式仍写作 read,但读音变化。
• 方法表达要有动词:asked questions, looked up new words, wrote book reports,不要只写 questions 或 new words。
• 注意时间顺序:可以用 When I started..., Later..., After class..., Finally... 让文章更清楚。
• 调查报告不要只写 I,可以用 All the students..., Most students..., Some students... 来变化主语。
四、写作练习
写作一:My Learning Tips
难度:基础
请介绍你学习英语或中文的好方法。你在课堂上做什么?课后又做什么?
要求:用一般过去时写2-3种学习方法,不少于40词。
参考词:asked questions, listened carefully, looked up new words, read books, reviewed notes
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写作二:How I Learned a Subject Well
难度:提高
请选择一门你学得比较好的学科,介绍你是怎样学好的。可以写英语、中文、数学、美术或科学。
要求:写出“学科 - 方法 - 努力过程 - 学习效果”,不少于50词。
参考词:maths, art, science, took lessons, watched insects, solved puzzles, practised, learned well
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写作三:A Survey Report on Learning Tips
难度:挑战
请根据同学们的学习方法,写一份简短调查报告。可以介绍大家常用的方法,并说说哪些方法最有帮助。
要求:注意使用 All/Most/Some students 等主语,句式要有变化,不少于60词。
参考词:made plans, listened carefully, took notes, studied in groups, asked questions, taught others
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五、参考范文一:My Learning Tips
参考范文
I learned English in many ways. In class, I listened to the teacher carefully and answered questions actively. After class, I looked up new words and read English stories. I also asked my friends questions when I needed help. These ways helped me learn English better.
范文讲解
• 这篇是基础版,重点写清楚几种学习方法,句子比较短。
• 文章用了 In class 和 After class,把课堂学习和课后学习分开,顺序清楚。
• 结尾用 These ways helped me... 总结效果,和本单元“学习方法”主题一致。
六、参考范文二:How I Learned a Subject Well
参考范文
I like science, but it was not easy for me at first. Later, I tried some useful ways to learn it well. I watched insects carefully and wrote reports about them. I also read stories about scientists. Sometimes I shared my ideas with my friends. These activities were interesting, and they helped me understand science better. Now science is one of my favourite subjects.
范文讲解
• 这篇难度比第一篇高,因为它先写了 at first 的困难,再写 later 的方法,最后写 now 的变化。
• 句式有变化,不只用 I did...,还用了 it was not easy, these activities were interesting, Now... 等表达。
• 内容迁移了课文 Think and share 中的 science 学习方法,如 watched insects 和 wrote reports。
七、参考范文三:A Survey Report on Learning Tips
参考范文
Our class did a survey on learning tips. All the students thought making plans was important. Most students listened to the teacher carefully and took notes in class. Some students looked up new words after class. Amy and Jim liked to study in groups and practise with friends. Many students asked questions during or after class. Some students also taught others. I think these are good ways to improve our study.
范文讲解
• 这篇是挑战版,形式接近调查报告,不是写一个人的经历,而是写一组同学的学习方法。
• 主语有变化:All the students, Most students, Some students, Amy and Jim, Many students,避免每句都用 I。
• 句式从个人表达升级到报告表达,适合训练学生把表格或调查信息整理成短文。
• 结尾用 I think these are good ways... 表达自己的总结,使报告有收束。
写作小结
三篇练习的难度逐步增加:第一篇写个人学习方法;第二篇写学好一门学科的经历;第三篇写调查报告。写作时要注意主语变化和时间顺序,可以用 In class, After class, Later, Most students 等表达让文章更清楚。
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