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该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦概要写作专题，依据高考评价体系梳理了信息提取、逻辑组织、语言表达三大核心考查要求，通过分析说明文“总—分—总”结构、提取关键信息等方式，归纳了高频考点及常考题型，体现高考备考的针对性和实用性。 课件亮点在于“四步进阶”备考策略，以“绿色空间益处”文本为例，通过谋篇布局、提取信息、遣词造句、连句成篇步骤，解析同义替换、句式优化等应试技巧，培养学生语言能力和思维品质，帮助学生掌握概要写作得分要点，教师可据此系统指导，提升高考冲刺阶段复习效率。

概要写作——焕新思变·赋能备考 返回导航 内 容 索 引 循法立篇 淬炼素能 1 1 循法立篇 淬炼素能 第一部分 4 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Benefits of Green Spaces We all know the value of taking a walk in the fresh spring weather. It allows your mind to relax and forget about the problems in everyday life. Studies have commonly shown the benefits of being around green spaces, including gardens, urban parks and forests. 返回导航 But did you know that being in contact with these natural surroundings during childhood could positively impact your mental health as an adult? A study by the Institute for Global Health surveyed 3，600 people from all over Europe. 返回导航 The all-adult study gave participants a questionnaire (问卷) on how frequently they used natural spaces during childhood—for example, playing in a garden or riding a bike in the park. They were also asked about the importance they put on using such places. Volunteers were then given a psychological test, which included a variety of questionnaires and problem-solving activities, to analyze their nervousness and feelings of depression within a four-week period. The results consistently showed that the people who were more exposed 返回导航 to natural spaces had higher mental health scores compared to those with lower childhood exposure—as did those who attached higher importance to using green spaces. The study's assistant, Wilma Smith, wrote that the results “show the importance of childhood exposure to natural spaces for the development of a nature-appreciating attitude and a healthy psychological state in adulthood”. She also stressed the importance of “recognizing the implications of growing up in environments with limited opportunities for exposure to nature”. 返回导航 According to the study, 73 percent of Europe's population only has limited access to natural spaces.So we call on policymakers to improve the availability of natural spaces for children. While this study was based in Europe, a lack of green space can affect anyone, anywhere.So remember to make time to expose yourself to nature, as your mental health is just as important as the physical one. 返回导航 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 返回导航 本文体裁是说明文，围绕“绿色空间”的好处展开，文章结构为“总—分—总”式，共分五段，先引出话题，再通过一项研究强调童年时期接触大自然的重要性，最后呼吁政策制定者改善自然空间的可用性，并强调亲近自然。 Step 1 谋篇布局，分析框架 返回导航 第一段 引出话题——在自然环境中散步对心理健康的好处 第二段 介绍一项研究发现，童年时期接触自然环境对成年心理健康有积极影响 第三段 描述研究过程，包括问卷调查和心理测试 第四段 总结研究结果，强调童年时期接触自然的重要性，呼吁政策制定者增加儿童接触自然环境的机会 第五段 呼吁人们亲近自然，重视心理健康 返回导航 【第一段】 allows your mind to relax；Studies have commonly shown the benefits of being around green spaces [关键词] __________________________________________ Step 2 提取信息，要点摘录 relax mind, benefits, green spaces 返回导航 【第二段】 being in contact with these natural surroundings during childhood could positively impact your mental health as an adult; A study by the Institute for Global Health surveyed 3，600 people from all over Europe [关键词] ____________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ childhood exposure to natural spaces, positive impact on adult mental health, European study 返回导航 【第三段】 people who were more exposed to natural spaces had higher mental health scores; development of a nature -appreciating attitude [关键词] ___________________________________________________ 【第四段】 call on policymakers to improve the availability of natural spaces for children [关键词] ____________________________________________________ 【第五段】 make time to expose yourself to nature; mental health is just as important as the physical one [关键词] __________________________________________ higher mental health scores, nature-appreciating attitude call on policymakers, improve natural space availability personal exposure to nature, mental health 返回导航 根据文章体裁、主旨大意及各段要点，高度概括关键信息，剔除细节，用简练语言重组内容，通过同义词替换、句式优化等方式升级表达。 1.绿色空间给人们带来益处，有助于他们放松心情。 Green spaces bring people benefits and __________________________. 2.一项欧洲研究表明，童年时期接触自然有利于成年后的心理健康。 A European study shows that ____________________________can benefit adult mental health. Step 3 遣词造句，句式升级 help them relax their minds childhood exposure to nature 返回导航 3.该研究呼吁政策制定者增加儿童接触自然空间的机会。 The study calls on policymakers to increase ___________________________________________. 4.所有人都应该接触自然，并关注心理健康。 Everyone should ____________________________ and pay attention to their mental health. 5.用“not only...but also...”句式提升表达的逻辑性，优化句1。 _______________________________________________________________________________ children's access to natural spaces expose themselves to nature Green spaces not only bring people benefits but also help them relax their minds. 返回导航 6.用confirm替换 show，boost替换 benefit，增强表达的正式性，优化句 2 __________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7.用urge替换 call on，enhance替换increase，更贴合说明文的表达风格，优化句 3 __________________________________________________________________________________ A European study confirms that childhood exposure to nature can boost adult mental health. The study urges policymakers to enhance children's access to natural spaces. 返回导航 8.用people all over the world替换 everyone，扩大覆盖面，优化句 4 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ People all over the world should expose themselves to nature and pay attention to their mental health. 返回导航 选用适配的连接词串联逻辑，确保要点无遗漏，最后检查字数是否在 60 词左右、有无语法错误、表达是否简洁准确。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Step 4 连句成篇，检查要点 返回导航 One possible version： Green spaces not only bring people benefits but also help them relax their minds. (要点1)A European study confirms that childhood exposure to nature can boost adult mental health. (要点2)It also urges policymakers to enhance children's access to natural spaces. (要点3)Therefore, people all over the world should expose themselves to nature and pay attention to their mental health. (要点4) 返回导航 $