预习31 Unit 8 Collecting as a hobby书面表达专练【暑假预习】2026-2027学年沪教版七年级英语上册（广州卷）

**基本信息** 聚焦“收藏爱好”书面表达，构建分层写作体系（基础/标准/提升），融合课标话题、语法要素与实用素材，实现语言能力与思维品质协同提升。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |核心主题定位|1单元主题|四要素写作框架（收藏物品/起源/数量途径/意义）|从课标话题到文体、时态、语法的应用逻辑链| |分层写作设计|3层级模板|基础层极简句/标准层完整结构/提升层细节升华|由易到难的写作能力进阶路径| |常考题型|4类（短文/邮件/征文/对比）|题型适配策略（课本原题夯实基础，应用文强化格式）|覆盖期中至中考高频写作场景| |写作素材|核心词汇20+短语10+句型8|万能句型套用（My hobby is.../It's fun to...）|主题词汇-短语-句型的语言构建逻辑| |书面表达专练|8道题+范文|写作步骤拆解（审题立意-构思布局-要点展开）|以题载法，典例覆盖核心考法与易错点|

【暑假预习】2026-2027学年沪教版七年级英语上册（广州卷） 预习31 Unit 8 Collecting as a hobby书面表达专练 一、核心主题定位 1. 课标话题归属 人与自我—兴趣爱好；单元总主题：收藏是一种爱好 Collecting as a hobby 写作核心：介绍收藏爱好、描述藏品、讲述收藏缘起、阐述收藏带来的收获与意义。 2. 写作育人立意 （1）学会介绍个人兴趣，培养健康、有意义的收藏爱好； （2）通过收藏拓宽眼界、学习课外知识、留存美好回忆； （3） 懂得分享藏品，尊重他人不同爱好，理性收藏、不盲目攀比。 3. 文体、时态、字数、绑定语法 （1）主流文体：说明文短文（课堂基础写作）、电子邮件（期中高频应用文）、校园征文投稿；不少于70词； （2）时态搭配 一般现在时：描述藏品、日常收藏习惯、收藏的好处（单元核心）； 一般过去时：回忆何时、如何开始收藏（叙事段落必备）； （3）必考语法（写作必用） ① 动词不定式 to do（It’s fun to collect… / want to collect） ② How many（可数藏品）/ How much（不可数藏品、价格） ③ 可数名词复数、some/any用法 ④ like/enjoy doing sth. 表达爱好 4. 标准写作四要素（课本固定思维导图框架） （1） What do you collect? 收藏什么物品 （2） When & How did you start collecting? 收藏起源 （3）How many collections do you have & how you get them? 藏品数量、获取途径 （4） Why do you love collecting them? 收藏的意义、收获、感受 二、分层写作设计思路（适配分层教学） 基础层（学困生）三段极简模板 第一段：开门见山，点明我的爱好是收藏某物； 第二段：简单写什么时候开始、大概有多少藏品； 第三段：说明喜欢收藏的简单理由（有趣、好看）。 要求：只用简单句，要点齐全，不使用复杂句型。 标准层（中等生）四段完整结构（课本范文原版框架） 1. 开头：介绍自己的收藏主题； 2. 起源：用一般过去时讲述第一次收藏的小故事； 3. 细节：藏品数量、获取方式（朋友赠送、旅行购买、交换）、最喜欢的一件藏品； 4. 结尾：写收藏带给我的收获（了解文化、收获快乐、交到同好）。 提升层（优等生）拓展升华 1. 增加细节描写藏品外形、特色； 2. 增加和同学交换藏品、收藏社团活动情节； 3. 结尾升华：收藏不仅是爱好，还能增长知识、珍藏美好回忆； 4. 使用衔接词 First, Then, Also, Finally、高级句型 It’s interesting to… 三、单元四大常考书面表达题型（课本作业+期中真题） 题型1 课本核心原题（短文写作）My Collection 题目：请以 My Collection 为题，介绍你的收藏，必须包含： 1. 你的收藏品；2. 何时开始收藏；3. 藏品数量、获取方式；4. 你从中收获了什么。 可选藏品：stamps邮票、postcards明信片、stickers贴纸、toy cars玩具车、leaf标本、coin硬币。 题型2 应用文高频：电子邮件（给笔友介绍爱好） 假定你是Li Hua，你的外国笔友Tom来信询问你的兴趣爱好，请写一封邮件介绍你的收藏。 要点同上，结尾反问对方的爱好，标准邮件格式。 题型3 校园征文投稿（拔高题型）Amazing Collections 学校英文校刊征集稿件，主题“奇妙的收藏”，可写自己、家人或朋友的收藏，适合优等生拓展写作。 题型4 对比拓展作文 Different Hobbies 对比你和家人/同学不同的收藏爱好，简单说说各自收藏的乐趣。 四、单元专属写作素材（单词、短语、万能句型） 1. 收藏类核心名词 stamp 邮票；postcard 明信片；sticker 贴纸；coin 硬币；leaf 树叶标本 album 收藏册；collection 收藏品；hobby 爱好；memory 回忆 2. 高频写作短语 collect stamps 集邮；start collecting 开始收藏 learn about different cultures 了解不同文化 exchange collections with friends 和朋友交换藏品 get…as gifts 收到……作为礼物；on my trips 在旅行途中 It’s fun to do sth. 做某事很有趣；lots of 许多 3. 万能高分句型  （1）My hobby is collecting stamps. （2） I started collecting them three years ago. （3）Now I have more than eighty stamps in my album. （4）I get most of my postcards from my travelling. （5） It is great fun to collect these beautiful things. （6）I can learn a lot about different countries from my collections. （7）Collecting things brings me lots of happy memories. （8） I hope I can collect more wonderful things in the future. 五、书面表达专练 1．题目：My collection 要求： 1. 介绍你的收藏品（贴合单元主题，如邮票、贴纸、笔、钥匙扣等）； 2. 说明你开始收藏的时间、收藏的数量和特点； 3. 说明你喜欢这个收藏的原因； 4. 不少于70词，语句通顺，语法正确，贴合教材范文结构。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假如你是李华，请你以My Favourite Hobby—Collecting为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍自己的收集爱好。 内容要点： 1. 介绍自己的收集爱好(收集什么、时长)； 2. 你如何收集、整理藏品； 3. 该爱好带给你的收获与感受。 写作要求： 1. 词数不少于70词； 2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确； 3. 不得出现真实校名、人名。 My Favourite Hobby—Collecting ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．学校正在举办“线上博物馆”活动，邀请同学们向校刊投稿，分享自己珍爱的收藏。假如你是李华，请根据以下要点提示，写一封信将自己的收藏品介绍给大家。 注意： 1. 请包含所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺； 2. 词数70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 参考词：明信片postcard，硬币coin, 飞机模型model plane Dear School Magazine, I’m Li Hua, and I’m writing to share one of my favourite items from my collection for our school’s “Online Museum” activity._______________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for reading my letter. Yours, Li Hua 4．假如你叫张华，你校最近成立了一个收藏俱乐部，请根据以下思维导图，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的收藏品，并表达你加入这个俱乐部的感受。 注意： 1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.词数70词左右； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 My collection ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．为了丰富自己的生活，每个人都可以收藏一些有意义的东西，你喜欢收藏什么呢？请你以 “I like collecting ________” 为题，写一篇70字左右的短文介绍你最喜欢的收藏品。 提示: 1. What do you like collecting? 2.  Why do you like collecting it? 3. When did you start collecting it? 4.What can you get from collecting it? I like collecting ________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．不同的人有不同的爱好，你的爱好是什么？请你以“My Hobby”为题，写一篇不少于70词的英语短文。内容可适当发挥。 要求：句子通顺，语言流畅，标点符号运用正确。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假设你是李华，你的爱好是收藏，你最近在网上结识了网友Tom，请你写一封信来介绍你的收藏情况，内容包括： 1.收藏介绍； 2.为什么收藏该物品； 3.表达希望。 要求： 1.词数70左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, I’m happy to say something about my collection. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 8．假设你是Peter，平时喜欢收集各种票。请根据下面的提示，以“My collection”为题写一篇英语短文。要求70词左右，可围绕提示内容适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 提示： 1. When did you start to collect tickets? 2. How many tickets do you have now? 3. How do you get them? 4. Why do you like collecting tickets? My collection I love collecting different kinds of tickets, such as train tickets and tickets to museums and other places.______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1．例文： My collection My hobby is collecting stickers. I started this hobby when I was 7. I have a collection of over 80 different stickers from all over the world. My collection includes stickers in different shapes, sizes and colours. I really like those with cute cartoon patterns. There are two reasons why I collect stickers. Firstly, they are very beautiful and cheap. I use my pocket money to buy them. Secondly, they make me think of happy moments with my friends. I love my collection of stickers. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，一般过去时与一般现在时结合 明确要点：围绕“我的贴纸收藏”展开，介绍收藏的爱好、开始时间、规模、贴纸特点，以及收藏的原因，最后表达对收藏的喜爱 确定人称：第一人称（I） 注意事项：内容具体，突出收藏的细节与情感价值，逻辑清晰 [第二步：构思布局] 四段式结构 开头段：介绍爱好、开始时间与收藏规模 主体段1：描述贴纸的特点 主体段2：阐述收藏的两个原因 结尾段：表达对贴纸收藏的喜爱 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：收藏基本信息 collect stickers/start the hobby at age 7/more than 80 stickers from different countries/stickers collecting is my hobby/take up this hobby when I was seven years old/own over eighty unique stickers worldwide等 要点二：贴纸特点 特点：different shapes, sizes and colours/cute cartoon patterns/various shapes, measurements and bright colours/lovely cartoon designs on stickers等 要点三：收藏原因 原因1：beautiful and cheap/spend pocket money buying stickers/attractive and affordable/save my pocket money to collect them等 原因2：think of happy moments with my friends/bring back warm sweet memories shared with my pals等 要点四：情感表达 love my sticker collection/treasure all my sticker collections deeply等 2．例文： My Favourite Hobby—Collecting My favourite hobby is collecting stamps. I have kept this hobby for two years. It brings me lots of joy and helps me learn new things. I get new stamps from my friends and letters. I keep all my stamps in a special album and organize them carefully in my free time. Every stamp has beautiful pictures and special stories. This hobby makes me patient and careful. It also teaches me much knowledge about different places and cultures. I really love this meaningful hobby and will keep it forever. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：个人爱好，如何收集、整理藏品，爱好带来的收获和感受 确定人称：第一人称 (I/my) 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段：总起句，点明爱好是什么、坚持时长 主体段：叙述收集、整理邮票的具体做法 结尾段：总结爱好带来的收获感悟 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：爱好基础信息 爱好选择：collecting stamps/collecting postcards/collecting cartoon cards/collecting different coins等 坚持时长：for two years/two years ago/at the age of nine /when I was nine years old/等 要点二：收集和整理邮票的做法 收集来源：from my friends and letters/buy some nice stamps in the post office/exchange stamps with my online pen pals等 整理方式：keep all stamps in a special album and organize them carefully in my free time/put stamps in a beautiful album and sort them by country/arrange them neatly in my special album/classify my collections and write simple notes next to special stamps等 要点三：爱好带来的收获感悟 具体表达：makes me patient and careful/teaches me much knowledge about different places and cultures/opens my mind/enriches my life/helps me stay calm and makes my after-school life wonderful and colourful等 3．例文： Dear School Magazine, I’m Li Hua, and I’m writing to share one of my favourite items from my collection for our school’s “Online Museum” activity. I collect postcards. I started it two years ago when my uncle sent me a postcard from Beijing as a birthday gift. I have over 50 postcards now. Each postcard has beautiful pictures of different cities, like the Great Wall or West Lake, with warm words on the back. I love collecting them because they let me learn about new places and cultures without leaving home. They are like little windows to the world, and every card holds a special, warm memory. Thank you for reading my letter. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：书信作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：根据所给要点提示介绍自己的收藏品，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简要介绍自己的收藏是什么，以及什么时候开始收藏的； 第二步，描述自己的收藏什么样、为什么喜欢这些收藏； 第三步，总结收藏对自己的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①a birthday gift一件生日礼物 ②learn about了解 ③thank you for...感谢…… [高分句型] ①I started it two years ago when my uncle sent me a postcard from Beijing as a birthday gift. (时间状语从句) ②They are like little windows to the world, and every card holds a special, warm memory. (and并列句) 4．例文： My collection My name is Zhang Hua. I am very excited because our school has just started a collection club, and I have joined it. I love collecting coins and stamps. Collecting them is really fun and interesting. It also helps me learn a lot about history. Many of my coins and stamps come from my friends and family. Sometimes, I also get them as gifts. Now, I am a member of the collection club. I plan to keep collecting more items. I also want to exchange some of my collections with other members. I feel very happy to be part of this club. It is a wonderful place to learn and have fun with other collectors. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的收藏，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的收藏品、喜欢收藏的原因以及这些收藏的来源； 第二步，介绍自己的计划； 第三步，介绍自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①come from来自 ②plan to do sth.计划做某事 ③exchange sth. with sb.和某人交换某物 [高分句型] I am very excited because our school has just started a collection club, and I have joined it. (原因状语从句) 5．例文： I like collecting tickets I love collecting different kinds of tickets, such as train tickets and tickets to museums and other places. I began to collect tickets ten years ago. When I got a ticket for the first time, I found that it was beautiful. Therefore, I began collecting tickets. Up to now I have got more than 500 different tickets. It is not hard to get them. I often go traveling with my parents during the holidays, so we have a lot of tickets. I ask my friends to give theirs to me as well. I enjoy collecting tickets. They not only help me remember different beautiful places clearly, but also make me think of my happy memories. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍你最喜欢的收藏品，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你喜欢收藏什么； 第二步，介绍什么时候开始收藏的； 第三步，介绍为什么喜欢收藏以及从收藏中得到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①begin to do sth.开始做某事 ②up to now到现在为止 ③as well也 [高分句型] ①When I got a ticket for the first time, I found that it was beautiful. (时间状语从句) ②They not only help me remember different beautiful places clearly, but also make me think of my happy memories. (not only...but also结构) 6．例文： My Hobby Different people have different hobbies. My hobby is reading. I love reading because it can take me to different worlds. Through books, I can learn about history, science, and many interesting stories. When I read, I feel like I’m having a great adventure. I usually read before going to bed. It helps me relax and have a good sleep. Also, I like to read on weekends. I can spend hours sitting in a quiet corner of the library, enjoying the books. Reading not only enriches my knowledge but also improves my writing skills. It makes me a more intelligent and imaginative person. I will keep this hobby and read more and more wonderful books. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：主要是一般现在时； ③提示：考生应注意围绕所给话题进行写作，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明你的爱好是阅读； 第二步，说明喜欢阅读的原因以及什么时候阅读； 第三步，谈谈阅读给你带来了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①adventure冒险 ②relax放松 ③not only...but also...不仅……而且…… ④enrich使丰富 ⑤intelligent聪明的 ⑥imaginative富有想象力的 [高分句型] ①I love reading because it can take me to different worlds.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②When I read, I feel like I’m having a great adventure.（when引导的时间状语从句） 7．例文： Dear Tom, I’m happy to say something about my collection. Collecting things is my hobby. My favorite collection is the sporting goods collection because I like sports. I have five baseballs, four soccer balls and three basketballs. I have eight tennis rackets. I also have two ping- pong bats. I think sports are interesting and relaxing. It is important for us to do sports. To keep healthy, I exercise for one hour every day. I hope we all like sports. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封信件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己很喜欢收藏； 第二步，具体介绍自己的收藏品及为什么收藏； 第三步，书写结语，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①be happy to do sth做某事很高兴 ②it is important for sb to do sth对某人来说做某事很重要 ③keep healthy保持健康 [高分句型] ①My favorite collection is the sporting goods collection because I like sports. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②It is important for us to do sports. (it作形式主语，不定式作真正的主语) 8．例文： My collection I love collecting different kinds of tickets, such as train tickets and tickets to museums and other places. I began to collect tickets ten years ago. When I got a ticket for the first time, I found that it was beautiful. Therefore, I began collecting tickets. Up to now I have got more than 500 different tickets. It is not hard to get them. I often go traveling with my parents during the holidays, so we have a lot of tickets. I ask my friends to give theirs to me as well. I enjoy collecting tickets. They not only help me remember different beautiful places clearly, but also make me think of my happy memories. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中我喜欢收集各种票的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“假设你是Peter，平时喜欢收集各种票。请根据下面的提示，以‘My collection’为题写一篇英语短文。”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“开始收集各种票的时间；获得它们的途径；喜欢它们的原因等”几个方面重点介绍我喜欢收集各种票的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，表达“它们不仅帮助我清楚地记住不同的美丽的地方，而且让我想起我的快乐回忆”的总结。 [亮点词汇] ①begin to do sth开始做某事 ②up to now到现在为止 ③ask sb to do sth要求某人做某事 ④think of想起 [高分句型] ①It is not hard to get them. (“It is+形容词+to do sth”句型) ②I often go traveling with my parents during the holidays, so we have a lot of tickets. (so引导结果状语从句) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $