Unit 1 The Changing World 写作专练 2026-2027学年人教版九年级英语上册

九上 Unit 1 The Changing World 写作专练 一、话题任务 书面表达常考真题题型：向外国笔友介绍家乡巨变，题目：Changes in My Hometown 写作硬性要求： 清晰对比家乡过去、现在两方面生活变化，交通、环境、民生各补充细节； 写出变化背后的原因（政府扶持、植树治沙、返乡创业、道路修建等）； 阐述这些变化带给村民的好处与自身真实感受； 结尾升华，表达对家乡未来的美好期盼； 词数控制 80–110 词，主要时态：一般过去时、现在完成时；重点句型 used to、have/has taken place。 二、审题定向梳理 主题定位：描写家乡新旧对比，感悟时代发展带来的美好生活。 文章类型：书信类说明文（写给外国朋友，客观描述 + 个人情感）。 主要人称：第一人称 I 抒发感受，第三人称描述村民、家乡环境。 核心时态区分 一般过去时：描述过去落后的生活、恶劣环境； 现在完成时：概括已经发生的巨大改变、多年持续的变化； 一般现在时：描写当下便利生活、抒发内心感受。 内容写作逻辑：过去落后面貌→如今各项变化→变化产生的原因→生活改善与个人感悟→对家乡未来展望。 高分亮点表达储备：used to, take place, be covered with, thousands of, convenient, bring about, never give up, with the government’s support 三、写作思路梳理 动笔前按照下面四点梳理写作素材，梳理完成后再动笔写作 家乡过去情况：道路、就医、购物、环境、住房存在哪些困难； 家乡如今变化：宽阔公路、新医院超市、绿植覆盖山坡、新式住房、电商旅游发展； 变化产生原因：政府修路治沙、村民共同植树、年轻人返乡创业； 个人真实感受：生活便利、环境优美、为生在家乡感到自豪。 四、段落分层写作框架 第一段（开头引入） 写作任务：开门见山，点明家乡发生了翻天覆地的变化，引出下文。 可用表达：Great changes have taken place in my hometown; I’m glad to introduce it to you; It is totally different from years ago. 第二段（过去对比） 写作任务：详细描写十几年前家乡落后的生活环境，使用 used to 句型突出反差。 可用表达：In the past, there used to be narrow dirt tracks; People used to walk far to see doctors; Sandstorms used to cover the sky every spring. 第三段（当下现状） 写作任务：分交通、环境、民生三方面介绍现在的便利生活，使用现在完成时。 可用表达：The government has built wide highways; Hills are covered with green bushes; New hospitals and supermarkets have appeared; Young people have come back to run greenhouses. 第四段（原因 + 个人感悟） 写作任务：简单说明变化由来，写出自己内心的喜悦与自豪。 可用表达：With the government’s support; Villagers worked together to plant trees; Our lives have improved greatly; I feel so proud of my hometown. 第五段（结尾升华） 写作任务：展望家乡未来，表达美好期待。 可用表达：I believe my hometown will become better and better; I’m looking forward to its brighter future. 五、写作表达素材库 A 基础话题短语积累 我的家乡发生巨变 ________________________ 过去常常；曾经 ________________________ 崎岖泥土小路 ________________________ 沙尘暴 ________________________ 被绿植覆盖 ________________________ 宽阔公路与铁路 ________________________ 高科技温室大棚 ________________________ 旅游景点 ________________________ 当地农产品 ________________________ 政府扶持 ________________________ 返乡创业 ________________________ 电子支付 ________________________ 便利的生活 ________________________ 改善生活 ________________________ 对…… 感到满意 ________________________ B 核心时态句型（一般过去时 / 现在完成时） 过去这里没有大型医院，村民看病很不方便。 多年来，政府修建了数千公里公路。 过去翻山需要一整天，现在只需要两小时。 无数年轻人已经回到家乡发展产业。 植树治沙行动让环境变得越来越好。 C 环境、民生升华高级表达 环境得到极大改善 ________________________ 出行变得十分便捷 ________________________ 足不出户线上售卖农产品 ________________________ 齐心协力改善家乡环境 ________________________ 为生在家乡感到自豪 ________________________ 时代发展带来美好生活 ________________________ 期待家乡更加繁荣美丽 ________________________ 所有村民都受益于这些改变 ________________________ 六、分层句子输出专项训练 第一组：开头引入句 我很高兴向你介绍我家乡的巨大变化。 过去十几年，我的家乡发生了翻天覆地的改变。 如果你来到这里，根本认不出从前的村庄。 第二组：过去对比句（used to） 过去道路狭窄崎岖，春天沙尘暴肆虐。 村民过去要走很远的路才能看病、购物。 山上从前满是沙土，几乎没有绿植。 第三组：现在变化句（现在完成时） 政府修建了宽阔公路、新医院和大型超市。 村民们种了成千上万棵灌木，山坡一片翠绿。 许多外出务工的年轻人已经返乡开办温室大棚。 第四组：原因与感悟句 在政府的扶持下，全体村民共同努力改善环境。 交通便利后，我们能轻松把农产品销往各大城市。 生活越来越好，每一位村民都对当下生活十分满意。 第五组：结尾升华展望句 看到家乡日新月异的变化，我内心充满自豪。 我坚信，我的家乡未来会变得更加繁荣、美丽。 时代发展带来幸福生活，我会永远热爱这片土地。 七、单元核心句型专项突破 句型一：used to 描述过去落后面貌 句型公式：主语 + used to do /used to be 适用场景：对比过去交通、环境、生活条件 例句：People used to walk for hours to reach the town. 仿写练习：过去这里常常出现严重的沙尘暴。 句型二：现在完成时 have/has taken place 描述巨变 句型公式：Great changes have taken place + 地点 例句：Great changes have taken place in our village over the past ten years. 仿写练习：近二十年，我们镇上发生了很多积极的改变。 句型三：被动短语 be covered with 环境描写 句型公式：地点 + be covered with + 景物 例句：The hills are now covered with green bushes and trees. 仿写练习：从前这片山坡全是沙土，如今长满绿植。 句型四：with 伴随结构说明变化原因 句型公式：With one’s support, 主语 + 动作 例句：With the government’s support, villagers built new wide roads. 仿写练习：在政策扶持下，年轻人纷纷回乡创业。 句型五：It is + 形容词 + to do sth. 描写生活便利 句型公式：It’s + convenient/easy + to do 例句：It’s very convenient to sell fruit online now. 仿写练习：如今走高速去市区只需要很短时间。 八、完整写作区 题目：Changes in My Hometown （写给外国笔友，80–110 词） 参考答案汇总 五、写作表达素材库 A 基础话题短语积累 Great changes have taken place in my hometown used to do / used to be rough dirt tracks sandstorm be covered with green plants wide highways and railways high-tech greenhouses tourist attraction local products government support come back to start business e-payment convenient life improve people’s lives be happy with B 核心时态句型 There used to be no big hospitals here, so it was inconvenient for villagers to see doctors. Over the years, the government has built thousands of kilometres of highways. It used to take a whole day to cross the mountains, but now it only takes two hours. Thousands of young people have come back to their hometown to develop industries. The tree-planting activity has greatly improved the environment. C 环境、民生升华高级表达 The environment has been greatly improved Travelling becomes really convenient Sell farm products online without going out Work together to improve the hometown environment Feel proud of living in my hometown The development of times brings a happy life Look forward to a more beautiful and prosperous hometown All villagers benefit from these changes 六、分层句子输出专项训练 第一组：开头引入句 I’m glad to introduce the great changes in my hometown to you. Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the past ten years. If you come here, you won’t recognize the old village at all. 第二组：过去对比句（used to） The roads used to be narrow and rough, and terrible sandstorms used to come every spring. Villagers used to walk a long way to see doctors and do shopping. The hills used to be covered with sand without any green plants. 第三组：现在变化句（现在完成时） The government has built wide highways, a new hospital and a big supermarket. Villagers have planted thousands of bushes, and the hills are full of green now. Lots of young people who worked in big cities have come back to build greenhouses. 第四组：原因与感悟句 With the government’s support, all villagers worked together to improve the environment. After the transport became convenient, we can send local products to big cities with ease. Life is getting better and better, and every villager is happy with our present life. 第五组：结尾升华展望句 Seeing the great changes of my hometown, I am full of pride. I believe my hometown will become more beautiful and prosperous in the future. The development of times brings us a happy life, and I will love this land forever. 七、单元核心句型专项突破 Terrible sandstorms used to happen here very often. Many positive changes have taken place in our town in the past twenty years. The hills used to be covered with sand, but now they are full of green plants. With the help of government policies, young people come back to start their own business. It only takes a short time to get to the city on the highway now. 八、完整写作参考范文（96 词） Changes in My Hometown Dear friend, I’m glad to tell you great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the past, roads were narrow dirt tracks. People used to walk far to see doctors. Sandstorms covered the sky every spring, and hills were full of sand. Now everything is different. The government has built wide highways, a new hospital and supermarkets. Villagers have planted thousands of bushes, so the environment is much better. Many young people have come back to run greenhouses and sell local products online. With government support, our lives have improved greatly. I feel so proud of my hometown. I believe it will become more beautiful in the future. Yours, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $