Unit 6 See the world（写作突破专项训练）英语外研版三起六年级上册（新教材）

Unit 6 See the world 写作方法指引- 原文指路（个人旅行经历叙事） Hi there. I'm now in China. 开篇点题：明确旅行地点，开启个人旅行经历的叙事。 I didn't have enough water. I went to a house by the road for help. 事件叙述：描述旅行途中遇到的困难及解决行动，让故事有起伏。 To my surprise, they also asked me to stay for lunch. 细节补充：记录旅行中的意外暖心细节，丰富故事内容。 The food was so good! It had a special taste of China! 感官描写：分享旅行中的饮食体验，增强内容的真实感。 How lucky I am! 情感抒发：用感叹句强烈表达旅行中的幸运与感动，提升情感浓度。 一、核心词汇 1. 国家与地域类 国家：UK, France, Italy, Canada, Australia, China 地域/地点：Yunnan Province, Chang'an Xian, Taklimakan Desert, Tianshan Mountains, road, house 2. 旅行与行动类 旅行相关：travel, visit, get around, bike, taxi 行为动作：go, give, stay, celebrate, splash, learn, find, write 3. 节日与文化类 节日：Water-splashing Festival, Dai New Year 文化相关：Silk Road, cultural differences, traveller, story, book 4. 描述与感受类 形容词：beautiful, interesting, lucky, hot, wet, special, exciting, pretty 名词：food, water, lunch, place, people, luck 二、参考句型 1. 旅行经历描述句型 I'm now in China.I will bike around the country. It was very hot that day.I didn't have enough water. I went to a house by the road for help. They gave me some water and asked me to stay for lunch. I am in Yunnan Province now.It's the Water-splashing Festival! People get together to celebrate the Dai New Year. They splash water on each other because this will bring good luck to others. 2. 文化差异与应对句型 Differences make travelling interesting. We should learn about the places before we go to understand the differences. When we don't understand something during travel,it's OK to ask for help. 3. 家乡介绍句型 Welcome to my home town. You can visit the beautiful parks and enjoy delicious local food here. The old town is famous in my home town. The best way to get around my home town is by bike. Every year in my home town,there is a wonderful festival for celebrating the harvest. 4. 感叹句表达句型 How lucky I am! How beautiful and interesting the place is! What a special taste the Chinese food has! 易错点提示 1. 专有名词大写：国家、省份、节日、地名等专有名词首字母必须大写，例如Yunnan Province、Water-splashing Festival、UK，不能写成小写形式。 2. 感叹句结构混淆：How引导感叹句后接形容词/副词，如How lucky I am!；What引导感叹句后接名词短语，如What a beautiful place it is!，注意不要混用结构。 3. 固定搭配错误：ask sb to do sth是固定结构，要记得加to，例如asked me to stay for lunch，不能写成asked me stay for lunch；get around表示出行、四处走动，不要误用为get round。 4. 时态使用错误：描述过去的旅行经历要用一般过去时，例如I went to a house by the road，不要误用一般现在时I go。 写作一 请你写一篇短文，描述你一次特别的旅行经历，可以分享旅行中的有趣事情或者让你难忘的瞬间。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： Yunnan Province, Water-splashing Festival, celebrate, splash, luck, beautiful, people 写作二 请你向外国朋友介绍你的家乡，包括家乡的美景、美食或者特色节日等。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： home town, beautiful, visit, get around, bike, food, festival 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： Last summer, I went to Yunnan Province. It was the Water-splashing Festival there. （交代行程）People got together to celebrate Dai New Year. They splashed water on each other. They said it could bring good luck. How exciting it was! （节日活动） The place was beautiful and the people were very kind. I had a great time there. （抒发感受） 范文（提高版）： Last summer holiday, I travelled to Yunnan Province with my parents. When we arrived, we found it was the Water-splashing Festival! （交代行程）Local people got together to celebrate Dai New Year happily. They splashed clean water on every traveller and told us it would bring good luck to us. How lucky and happy I felt! （节日活动）The mountains were beautiful and the local food was delicious. I will never forget this special trip. （抒发感受） 写作二 范文（基础版）： Welcome to my home town. It’s a small and beautiful place. （概览家乡）The best way to get around here is by bike. You can visit beautiful parks and enjoy delicious local food here. Every year, we have a wonderful festival to celebrate the harvest. （特色游玩）I love my home town very much. （表达热爱） 范文（提高版）： Welcome to my lovely home town. It’s a quiet place with beautiful green parks and old streets. （概览家乡）The best way to get around here is by bike, because you can enjoy the nice views slowly. You can visit the famous old town and taste special local food. Every autumn, we have a harvest festival. People sing and dance together. （特色游玩） I hope you will like my home town! （表达热爱） 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $