Unit 4 We can do it（写作突破专项训练）英语外研版三起六年级上册（新教材）

**基本信息** 该专项以“发明制作”为主题，构建“方法指引-词汇句型-写作实践”的系统性训练体系，通过顺序词逻辑链与功能描述框架提升语言表达与逻辑思维能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作方法指引|1篇原文解析|步骤顺序词（first/next/then/finally）使用，篇章结构（对象-步骤-效果）|以浇水瓶制作为例，示范流程描述逻辑| |核心词汇|4类（32词）|按发明主题分类（发明/工具/步骤/功能）|形成“制作要素-操作动作-功能价值”的词汇网络| |参考句型|3类（含3个示例）|制作步骤描述、发明故事介绍、重要性说明句型模板|从具体操作到抽象意义，构建表达梯度| |写作任务|2个任务（含基础/提高版范文）|分层示范（基础版：流程清晰；提高版：细节拓展）|覆盖制作流程与发明介绍两类写作需求，衔接词汇句型应用|

Unit 4 We can do it 写作方法指引- 原文指路 I'm making a watering bottle for the plants. 点明发明对象与制作目的，引出后续制作流程介绍。 First, make a small hole in the middle of the bottle top. 用顺序词"first"开启制作步骤，清晰说明第一步操作。 Next, cut off the bottom. 用顺序词"next"衔接第二步，使制作流程逻辑连贯。 Then, we can put water in the bottle! 用顺序词"then"过渡到第三步，展现制作的中间环节。 Finally, put it in the pot. 用顺序词"finally"收尾制作流程，明确最后一步操作。 My bottle worked! 总结发明的实际效果，体现发明的实用性与解决问题的价值。 一、核心词汇 1. 发明类 watering bottle（浇水瓶）umbrella（雨伞）wheel（轮子）bird feeder（喂鸟器）scooter（滑板车） phone arm（手机支架）leaf-catcher（落叶收集器）tooth cleaner（牙齿清洁器）invention（发明） 2. 工具材料类 bottle（瓶子）cap（瓶盖）milk carton（牛奶盒）ice cream sticks（雪糕棍）paper（纸）hole（洞） string（绳子）glue（胶水） 3. 步骤类 first（首先）next（接下来）then（然后）finally（最后）make（制作）cut（切割）put（放置） connect（连接）draw（画）fold（折叠）hang（悬挂） 4. 功能描述类 keep clean（保持干净）water plants（给植物浇水）feed birds（喂鸟）protect from rain（挡雨） make life easier（让生活更轻松） 二、参考句型 1. 描述制作步骤 First, make a small hole in the middle of the bottle cap. Next, cut off the bottom of the bottle. Then, put water in the bottle. Finally, put it in the pot to water the plants. We are making a bird feeder. First, prepare a milk carton. Next, cut out windows on all sides of it. Then, put bird food in it. Finally, hang it up in the garden. It's so hot! Let's make a fan. First, collect and connect ice cream sticks. Next, draw and cut the paper. Then, glue and fold the paper. Finally, make holes and put a string through it. 2. 介绍发明故事 Lu Ban had bright ideas and clever hands. He got the idea of making an umbrella from the leaves on his way home. Chinese people believe Huangdi invented the wheel. It has a history of over 5,000 years. Daming made a special watering bottle for his plants when he and his mum were going on holiday. His invention worked well and kept the plants alive. 3. 说明发明重要性 The wheel is one of the most important inventions. Today's world can't go without it and it helps to make life easier for us. Great inventions can solve many problems for people and make our life better. Inventions like the umbrella can protect us from rain and keep us dry on rainy days. 易错点提示 1. 步骤副词顺序：使用first, next, then, finally描述制作流程时，要按照逻辑顺序排列，不能随意调换顺序。 2. 词汇拼写：注意易拼错单词的书写，比如umbrella（不要漏写中间的字母）、invention（注意-tion后缀）、wheel（不要写成weel）。 3. 时态运用：描述过去的发明故事要用一般过去时（如Lu Ban got the idea...）；描述制作步骤用一般现在时（如First, make...）。 4. 固定搭配：牢记固定介词搭配，如in the middle of（在……中间）、cut off（切掉）、put...in...（把……放进……），不要混淆介词。 写作一 请你写一篇短文，介绍如何用牛奶盒制作一个喂鸟器，清晰写出制作步骤和它的功能。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： bird feeder, milk carton, cut, put, hang, feed birds, string, glue 写作二 请你写一篇短文，介绍轮子这个伟大的发明，包括它的发明者（传说）、历史和重要性。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。。 参考单词： wheel, invention, Huangdi, over 5,000 years, make life easier, important 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： We can make a bird feeder with a milk carton.（点明制作）First, prepare a clean milk carton. Next, cut out small windows on two sides of it. Then, put some bird food in the carton. Finally, use string to hang it in the garden.（循序讲解）This bird feeder can help us feed birds easily. Birds will love this warm little home!（说明作用） 范文（提高版）： Do you want to feed cute little birds? Let's make a bird feeder with a milk carton!（点明制作）First, wash and dry a milk carton carefully. Next, cut out big windows on three sides so birds can get food easily. Then, put some seeds and small fruits in it, and we can draw colorful flowers on the carton to make it nice. Finally, tie a long string to the top and hang it in the tree.（循序讲解） This bird feeder helps us feed birds every day. I enjoy watching birds come to eat happily!（说明作用） 写作二 范文（基础版）： The wheel is a great invention. Chinese people believe Huangdi invented it. It has a history of over 5,000 years.（总述发明）The wheel is one of the most important inventions. It helps us move things easily and makes life easier for us. Today we can see wheels on cars, bikes and many other things.（阐述价值）We can't live without it.（点明意义） 范文（提高版）： The wheel is one of the greatest inventions in the world. Chinese people say Huangdi invented it more than 5,000 years ago. （总述发明）Long ago, people had to carry heavy things by hand or use animals. It was very tiring. But after the wheel was invented, everything changed. We can use wheels on cars, trains and bikes to go far places quickly. We can also move heavy boxes or furniture easily. （阐述价值）The wheel makes our life much better and easier. We really need it every day! （说明作用） 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $