Unit 3 Wonderful nature（写作突破专项训练）英语外研版三起六年级上册（新教材）

**基本信息** 聚焦自然美景与旅行人物写作，构建“方法指引-词汇句型-实战应用”三维训练体系，系统提升语言表达与跨文化沟通能力，涵养家国情怀。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作方法指引|1篇原文解析|拆解“开篇引景-景观描述-活动推荐-人文拓展”四步结构|从语篇组织到细节表达，构建写作逻辑链| |核心词汇|4类50+词|按“自然地貌-景观物种-旅行人物-形容词最高级”分类拓展|基础词汇到拓展词汇，形成主题词汇网络| |参考句型|3类10+句|提炼“描述奇观-介绍人物-美景推荐”功能句型|从基础句型到复杂表达，实现语言梯度提升| |写作任务|2篇范文（基础/提高版）|提供“开篇点题-主体描述-情感升华”分层示范|结合易错点提示，强化知识应用与思维品质|

Unit 3 Wonderful nature 写作方法指引- 原文指路 （介绍中国特色美景） I'm from Dali. It is one of Yunnan's most popular places to visit. 开篇引入：点明地点及其在当地的热门旅游地位，快速抓住读者注意力。 Erhai Lake is one of the biggest lakes in Yunnan. 景观描述：运用“one of + 形容词最高级 + 复数名词”句型，突出核心自然景观的规模优势与独特性。 You can ride a bike around Erhai Lake. 活动推荐：介绍适合的户外游玩活动，展现地点的休闲游玩价值。 You can walk in the streets to experience the ancient culture. 人文拓展：补充人文体验类活动，丰富地点的文化内涵，让介绍更全面立体。 一、核心词汇 1. 自然地貌类 基础词汇：river, mountain, desert, sea, hill, grassland, forest, lake, beach 拓展词汇：wetland（湿地）, canyon（峡谷）, hot spring（温泉） 2. 自然景观与物种类 知名景观：Mount Qomolangma, the Nile, Erhai Lake, Huangshan Mountain, Jinsha River, red beach, rainbow mountain 动植物：snow leopard（雪豹）, grey bear（灰熊）, animal, special plant（特殊植物） 3. 旅行与人物类 旅行相关：traveller, travel, trip, note, ship 知名人物：Xu Xiake, Zheng He 4. 形容词及最高级类 基础形容词：high, long, big, famous, wonderful, colourful, amazing, ancient, beautiful 最高级形式：highest, longest, biggest, most famous, most wonderful, most amazing 二、参考句型 描述自然奇观 Mount Qomolangma is the world's highest mountain. The Nile is the longest river in the world. Sanjiangyuan National Park is the largest national park in China. Yellowstone National Park has beautiful mountains, forests, lakes, colourful hot springs and canyons. Each year, a lot of animals move across Serengeti National Park. It is amazing! 2. 介绍著名旅行者 Xu Xiake was one of the most famous travellers in China. He loved nature and travel. He visited many wonderful places in China and wrote notes about mountains and rivers. He travelled for about 30 years and was happy with his life of travel. Zheng He was a famous Chinese traveller in the Ming Dynasty. He went to many countries by ship. 3. 描述中国美景 Dali is one of Yunnan's most popular places to visit. Erhai Lake is one of the biggest lakes in Yunnan. You can ride a bike around Erhai Lake and walk in the streets to experience the ancient culture. Panjin, Liaoning Province has the most famous red beach in China. The red colour comes from a special plant. Yangshuo, Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region is a famous place in China. Mount Yuanbao is about... metres high and the Li River is about 214 kilometres long. 易错点提示 1. 形容词最高级用法：单音节形容词直接加-est变最高级（如high→highest），多音节形容词需在前面加most（如famous→most famous），不要混淆两种变化方式。使用“one of + 形容词最高级 + 可数名词复数”结构时，名词必须用复数形式，比如“one of the most famous travellers”。 2. 专有名词大写：山脉、河流、国家公园、历史人物等专有名词的首字母必须大写，比如Mount Qomolangma, the Nile, Xu Xiake, Sanjiangyuan National Park。 3. 词汇拼写区分：容易混淆的词汇：desert（沙漠）和dessert（甜点），beach（海滩）和peach（桃子），写作时注意拼写差异。 4. 固定搭配记忆：牢记“be happy with”“write notes about”“move across”等固定搭配，避免搭配错误。 写作一 向你的外国笔友Tom介绍一处你最喜欢的中国自然美景，说说它在哪里、有什么特点，以及可以在那里做什么。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： Erhai Lake, Dali, Yunnan, beautiful, bike, ancient, biggest, wonderful 写作二 介绍中国著名旅行家徐霞客，说说他的身份、爱好以及他为旅行做的事情。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。。 参考单词： Xu Xiake, traveller, famous, nature, travel, notes, mountains, rivers, 30 years 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： Dear Tom, I want to tell you about my favorite natural place in China—Erhai Lake. It’s in Dali, Yunnan. （开篇引景）Erhai Lake is one of the biggest lakes in Yunnan. It’s very beautiful. You can ride a bike around it. You can also walk in the ancient streets near it. I think it’s a wonderful place. （简述风光）And do you want to visit it? （盛情相邀） Yours, Li Ming 范文（提高版）： Dear Tom, Let me introduce my favorite natural spot in China to you—Erhai Lake. It lies in Dali, a lovely city in Yunnan Province. （开篇引景） Erhai Lake is one of the biggest and most wonderful lakes in Yunnan. The clear blue water looks like a big mirror. You can ride a bike along the lake to enjoy fresh air, or walk in the ancient streets to feel the warm local culture. （简述风光）I’m sure you will fall in love with this amazing place! （盛情相邀） Yours, Li Ming 写作二 范文（基础版）： Xu Xiake was one of the most famous travellers in China. He loved nature and travel very much. （开篇点人）He visited many wonderful places all over China. He wrote notes about mountains and rivers he saw. He travelled for about 30 years. （简述经历）He was happy with his travel life. （抒发志趣） 范文（提高版）： Xu Xiake was one of the most famous travellers in ancient China. He had a deep love for nature and travel. （开篇点人） During his life, he visited almost all famous mountains and rivers across China. He wrote detailed notes about every place he went to, which help us learn more about China’s nature now. He travelled for about 30 years （简述经历）and never felt tired of his interesting travel life. （抒发志趣） 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $