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Unit 2 What's your opinion
写作方法指引- 原文指路
There are three horses in this painting.
陈述客观事实:用于写作中提供真实论据支撑观点。
This Chinese ink painting is beautiful.
表达主观观点:用于绘画评价、事物感受等观点类写作。
Apples without peel taste sweeter.
运用比较级:对比事物特征差异,丰富描述细节。
Remember, health is more important than a nice taste!
强化观点优先级:用比较级突出核心立场,明确取舍态度。
I don't think so. Apples are not healthier than other fruits.
反驳他人观点:结合比较级给出反驳理由,增强辩论说服力。
Dear Duncan, It's White and I'm sad. You always use white paper and no one can see me. Please can you use black paper?
角色书信诉求:清晰表达情绪、原因与请求,为回应类书信提供参照。
Thanks for your letter. I think...
书信回应开篇:礼貌回复对方,自然引出自身观点与计划。
We think that life is better with technology.
辩论立场开篇:明确核心观点,为辩论稿奠定论述方向。
Technology makes our life easier.
提供支撑理由:简洁直接阐述观点依据,用于议论文或辩论稿的论据部分。
一、核心词汇
1. 事实与观点类
fact, opinion, true, false, believe, think, agree, disagree
2. 形容词原级&比较级类
sweet→sweeter, healthy→healthier, careful→more careful, good→better, important→more important, happy→happier, beautiful→more beautiful, short→shorter
3. 主题场景类
水果相关:apple, banana, orange, peel
蜡笔相关:crayon, grey, pink, black, white, yellow, orange
辩论&活动相关:debate, topic, reason, example, Model UN
童话相关:fairy tale, Cinderella
4. tr/dr发音类(含拓展)
truth, trust, drop, draw, dream(课外拓展), tree(课外拓展)
二、参考句型
1. 陈述事实句型
There are three horses in this painting.
The magic goes away at midnight in Cinderella.
Apples have peel that is good for health.
2. 表达观点句型
I think that eating apple peel is better for our health.
I don't think that apples are healthier than other fruits.
We think that life is better with technology.
My opinion is that yellow is better for drawing the sun than orange.
3. 比较级运用句型
Apples without peel taste sweeter than those with peel.
Health is more important than a nice taste.
Grey crayon is shorter than the other crayons.
It is better to eat the apple peel than to throw it away.
4. 辩论&阐述理由句型
The first reason is that technology makes our life easier.
Another reason is that technology helps us keep in touch with friends far away.
For example, we can use mobile phones to call our grandparents anytime.
5. 书信回复句型(给蜡笔)
Dear White crayon,
Thanks for your letter. I think you are right that no one can see you on white paper.
I will use black paper to draw with you next time.
Yours, Duncan
易错点提示
1. 比较级变化规则易错:单音节词直接加-er:如sweet→sweeter,不要漏写-er;以辅音+y结尾的单词,变y为i再加-er:如healthy→healthier,不要直接加-er;多音节词要加more构成比较级:如careful→more careful,不要直接加-er;不规则变化要牢记:good→better,不要写成gooder。
2. 事实与观点混淆: 事实是可验证的客观内容(如"There are three horses in the painting"),观点是主观判断(如"This painting is beautiful"),写作时要注意区分,阐述观点时要搭配理由,陈述事实时保证内容准确。
3. 否定转移易错: 表达否定观点时,要使用I don't think that...的结构,不要写成I think that...not,比如正确表达是"I don't think apples are the healthiest fruits",而非"I think apples are not the healthiest fruits"。
4. tr/dr发音区分: tr发清辅音/tr/,dr发浊辅音/dr/,在拼写和发音时不要混淆,比如truth(tr开头)和drop(dr开头)。
写作一
生活中很多人吃苹果时会选择削皮,有人觉得削皮后的苹果更甜,有人认为带皮吃更健康。请你谈谈自己的观点,并说明理由。
要求:
1.书写规范,正确使用标点符号。
2.语言表达流畅。
3.不少于 50 词。
参考单词:
apple, peel, sweet, healthier, more important, good
写作二
你有一盒彩色蜡笔,其中有一支是你最喜欢的。请给这支蜡笔写一封信,说说你为什么喜欢它,还可以分享一件和它有关的小事。
要求:
1.书写规范,正确使用标点符号。
2.语言表达流畅。
3.不少于 50 词。。
参考单词:
crayon, yellow, draw, sun, shorter, happy, beautiful
参考范文
写作一
范文(基础版):
I think we should eat apples with peel. It's a fact that apple peel is good for our health. Apples with peel are healthier than those without. (亮出观点)Some people say apples without peel taste sweeter, but I think health is more important than sweet taste. (对比说理)I always eat apples with peel and feel great. (亲身佐证)
范文(提高版):
My opinion is that eating apples with peel is better for us. (亮出观点)The first reason is that apple peel has healthy things, so apples with peel are healthier than those without. Another reason is that peeling apples takes time, and we can save time by eating them directly. Some people think apples without peel taste sweeter, but health is more important than a nice taste. (对比说理) I believe this is a good habit. (总结升华)
写作二
范文(基础版):
Dear Yellow crayon, (书信称呼)
You are my favorite crayon. I love using you to draw the sun. The sun you help me draw looks very beautiful. Now you are shorter than the pink crayon, because I use you every day. You make me happy when I draw. (倾诉喜爱) I will take good care of you. (承诺爱护)
Yours, Amy
范文(提高版):
Dear Yellow crayon, (书信称呼)
Thanks for staying with me for a long time. You are my favorite crayon. I use you to draw sunny days, yellow flowers and little chicks. The pictures we make together are more beautiful than others. Now you are shorter than the white crayon, because I love using you so much. You bring me lots of happy moments. (倾诉喜爱) I will keep using you carefully. (承诺爱护)
Yours, Amy
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