Unit 1 Trying new things(单元同步写作讲义)英语新教材沪教版五四学制七年级上册

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学段 初中
学科 英语
教材版本 初中英语沪教版(五四学制)七年级上册
年级 七年级
章节 Unit 1 Trying new things
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使用场景 同步教学-新授课
学年 2026-2027
地区(省份) 上海市
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本初中英语讲义聚焦“尝试新事物”经历类写作,构建“词汇-句式-仿写-范例”学习支架。分类积累新事物活动、情绪品质等词汇,提供开头点明背景、中间描述过程、结尾总结收获的功能句式,结合佳句仿写及范例谋篇布局,系统支撑写作表达。 该资料以语言能力培养为核心,通过精准词汇与结构化句式搭建表达框架,范例赏析渗透思维品质(如逻辑梳理、细节描写),实战任务(如节日经历、假期规划)贴近生活,助力学生迁移应用。课中辅助教师高效教学,课后帮助学生巩固练习,查漏补缺,提升写作综合能力。

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Unit 1 Trying new things单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于“人与自我”范畴,涉及“勇于探索、不断尝试自我突破”。 该单元旨在培养学生懂得尝试新事物是成长里十分重要的体验,它可以帮助我们突破局限、发掘自身潜能。通过记叙尝试新鲜事物、克服困难、收获成长的亲身经历,我们可以更好地直面挫折,并建立起不惧挑战的勇气。尝试经历类写作是为了让他人了解我们遇到的难题、思考的过程、实践的方法、内心收获等方面的信息。这有助于构建不怕失败、坚持探索的认知基础,从而培养出敢于创新、永不言弃的宝贵品质。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 1. 各类新事物 / 活动 windsurfing 帆板运动;rock climbing 攀岩;roof gardening 屋顶园艺;paper cutting 剪纸;3D printing 3D 打印;act in a play 参演戏剧;make fruit animals 制作水果造型;test a talk light 体验感应灯 2. 情绪与品质词汇 curious 好奇的;brave 勇敢的;challenges 挑战;excited 兴奋的;proud 自豪的;hopeful 充满希望的;never give up 永不放弃;keep on trying 坚持尝试 3. 发明、尝试动作短语 come up with an idea 想出一个点子;fail many times 多次失败;do countless tries 无数次尝试;separate…from… 把…… 和…… 分开;make…light 减轻…… 重量;collect solar energy 收集太阳能;stick…to… 把…… 粘贴在…… 上 4. 叙事要素配套词 problem 难题;difficulty 困难;solution 解决办法;feeling 感受;progress 进步;skill 技能 5. 复合名词 windsurfing 帆板;rock climbing 攀岩;roof gardening 屋顶园艺;traffic light 交通灯 句式积累 开头句: 1.I met a small problem in my daily life these days. 最近我在日常生活中遇到了一个小难题。 2.I wanted to try a new thing, but I found it difficult at first. 我想要尝试一件新事物,但一开始我觉得很难。 3.My grandma had trouble using her walking stick on rainy days. 我的奶奶下雨天用拐杖很不方便。 中间句: ① 表达思考、产生灵感 1.One day, I thought, why not put the two things together? 有一天我心想,为什么不把两样东西结合在一起呢? 2.Pizza boxes gave the solar scientists a great new idea. 披萨盒给了太阳能科学家一个绝佳的新灵感。 3.I found similarities between two things and got a clever idea. 我发现两样东西的共同点,想到了一个巧妙的点子。 ② 描写反复尝试、克服失败 4.We failed many times, but we didn’t stop trying. 我们失败了很多次,但我们没有停止尝试。 2.After countless tries, we finally made it work. 经过无数次尝试,我们终于成功了。 ③ 介绍具体解决办法 1.I put an umbrella on the handle of the stick to help her. 我在拐杖手柄上加装了一把雨伞来帮助她。 2.We added a layer to separate solar cells from the heavy holder. 我们增加一层材料,把太阳能电池和沉重支架分离开。 结尾句: 1.She is proud of me and I feel very happy. 她为我感到骄傲,我也十分开心。 2.I learn that new ideas always come from trying new things. 我明白了新想法永远来源于不断尝试新事物。 3.Never give up when you meet difficulties, and you will succeed. 遇到困难不要放弃,你终会成功。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句:After countless tries, we succeeded! 仿写:经过多次练习,我终于学会了攀岩。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句:We failed many times to make it light, until pizza gave us an idea. 仿写:我多次尝试做手工都失败了,直到树叶给了我灵感。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句:One day, I thought, why not put the stick and the umbrella together? 仿写:有一天我心想,为什么不把花盆和架子结合在一起呢? __________________________________________________________________________________________ 典例 Write at least 60 words on the topic “The new thing I tried” (以“我尝试的新事物”为题,写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格。) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ①题材:本文是一篇经历分享类记叙文; ②时态:时态为“一般过去时”; ③提示:本文主要是分享你曾尝试的新事物,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。 ④ rewarding有意义的,值得的 谋篇布局 开头 点明尝试的新事物是什么及时间背景 中间 描述尝试的过程及感受 结尾 总结收获 佳作展示 The new thing I tried I tried cooking a new dish last weekend. I chose to make spaghetti because I had never cooked it before. At first, I was worried that I might make a mistake, but I followed the recipe carefully. When it was done, I felt proud and happy because it tasted good. From this experience, I learned that trying new things could be fun and rewarding. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇: ① had never cooked 从未做过 ② make a mistake 犯错 ③ follow the recipe 按照食谱操作 高分句型: ① When it was done, I felt proud and happy because it tasted good.(because引导的原因状语从句) ② From this experience, I learned that trying new things could be fun and rewarding.(that引导的宾语从句) (一) 生活中总有一些特别的日子让我们成长。或许是一次有意义的志愿服务,或许是一次突破自我的尝试,又或许是一次感动人心的相遇。请以“My special day”为题,根据所给提示,写一篇英语短文,向校刊“Teenage Growth”栏目投稿。 要求:1. 80—120词; 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (二) 人人都钟爱的假期除了能使我们彻底放松身心外,还有什么有意义的事情值得尝试?除了玩乐,我们还能从假期中获益什么呢?请根据以下图片提示,写一篇题为“How to spend our vacation?”的作文。下列词汇可供参考:              Sports            Museum          City Clean-up Day    Animal Protection 1. do some sports 2. take a trip; visit the…museum 3. be a volunteer 4. protect the animals 5. it helps to…; not only...but also... 要求: 1.表达清楚,语句通顺,语法正确,上下文连贯,书写工整; 2.必须包括要点提示所有的相关信息,并适当发挥; 3.词数:80词左右; 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 How to Spend Our Vacation? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (三) 书面小练笔(不少于 5 句,必须使用:cycling/camping/skating/skiing, balance, on one’s own, would like to) 介绍你最想尝试的户外活动,说明理由 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (四) 在我们的生活中,总有一次难忘的运动经历。它可能是一场激烈的比赛,一次艰苦的训练,或是一次克服困难的尝试。请以 “An Unforgettable Sports Experience” 为题,写一篇英语短文。 要求: 1. 内容完整,包括:运动的名称、时间、过程 (遇到的困难及如何克服)、收获和感悟; 2. 语言流畅,字数 80-100 词; 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (五) 假如你是李华,上周末你参加了学校的手工艺品社团活动,第一次尝试自己动手制作了剪纸作品。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,描述一下这次有趣的经历。 1. 为什么参加手工艺品社团活动; 2. 制作剪纸前做了哪些准备工作(准备材料、工具等); 3. 描述制作剪纸的具体过程以及这次经历的感受。 要求:60词左右;语句通顺,条理清晰,语法正确,可以适当发挥。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (六) 寒假里我们迎来了春节。今年,你决定尝试使用家里的智能音箱(Smart Speaker)或手机上的AI助手(如ChatGPT、文心一言等)来帮忙准备春节。请你用英文记录下你和AI助手之间的一次“互动”。 要求: 1.  你向AI助手询问了什么问题?(例如:如何用英语写一副春联?帮我找一首关于春节的英文歌曲?帮我设计一份年夜饭菜单?帮我查询春节期间去某地旅游的天气?) 2.  AI助手是如何回答或帮助你的?(简单描述AI给出的答案或建议)。 3.  你对AI助手的回答满意吗?你觉得它有用吗? AI Helper and My Spring Festival ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (七) Write at least 60 words on the following situation.(根据情景,写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格) 假设你是Joe,上个周末,你第一次尝试做小老师,帮助了你的同学Molly,教会了她不会读的英文单词,请你在朋友圈以文字的形式把你这次小老师的经历记录下来,说说具体的经过以及你的感想。 Moments Joe ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (八) Write at least 60 words according to the given topic “A New Experience”. (请以“一次新体验”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)。 有人说,生命的意义在于体验不同。每一次新的经历,如学习一项新技能、尝试一种新运动、感受一种新文化……,都是给生命增添的一抹独特色彩。请具体分享你曾有过的一次新体验 (经历),简单谈谈你的感悟或收获。 注意:1.短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其他相关信息。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $Unit 1 Trying new things单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于“人与自我”范畴,涉及“勇于探索、不断尝试自我突破”。 该单元旨在培养学生懂得尝试新事物是成长里十分重要的体验,它可以帮助我们突破局限、发掘自身潜能。通过记叙尝试新鲜事物、克服困难、收获成长的亲身经历,我们可以更好地直面挫折,并建立起不惧挑战的勇气。尝试经历类写作是为了让他人了解我们遇到的难题、思考的过程、实践的方法、内心收获等方面的信息。这有助于构建不怕失败、坚持探索的认知基础,从而培养出敢于创新、永不言弃的宝贵品质。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 1. 各类新事物 / 活动 windsurfing 帆板运动;rock climbing 攀岩;roof gardening 屋顶园艺;paper cutting 剪纸;3D printing 3D 打印;act in a play 参演戏剧;make fruit animals 制作水果造型;test a talk light 体验感应灯 2. 情绪与品质词汇 curious 好奇的;brave 勇敢的;challenges 挑战;excited 兴奋的;proud 自豪的;hopeful 充满希望的;never give up 永不放弃;keep on trying 坚持尝试 3. 发明、尝试动作短语 come up with an idea 想出一个点子;fail many times 多次失败;do countless tries 无数次尝试;separate…from… 把…… 和…… 分开;make…light 减轻…… 重量;collect solar energy 收集太阳能;stick…to… 把…… 粘贴在…… 上 4. 叙事要素配套词 problem 难题;difficulty 困难;solution 解决办法;feeling 感受;progress 进步;skill 技能 5. 复合名词 windsurfing 帆板;rock climbing 攀岩;roof gardening 屋顶园艺;traffic light 交通灯 句式积累 开头句: 1.I met a small problem in my daily life these days. 最近我在日常生活中遇到了一个小难题。 2.I wanted to try a new thing, but I found it difficult at first. 我想要尝试一件新事物,但一开始我觉得很难。 3.My grandma had trouble using her walking stick on rainy days. 我的奶奶下雨天用拐杖很不方便。 中间句: ① 表达思考、产生灵感 1.One day, I thought, why not put the two things together? 有一天我心想,为什么不把两样东西结合在一起呢? 2.Pizza boxes gave the solar scientists a great new idea. 披萨盒给了太阳能科学家一个绝佳的新灵感。 3.I found similarities between two things and got a clever idea. 我发现两样东西的共同点,想到了一个巧妙的点子。 ② 描写反复尝试、克服失败 4.We failed many times, but we didn’t stop trying. 我们失败了很多次,但我们没有停止尝试。 2.After countless tries, we finally made it work. 经过无数次尝试,我们终于成功了。 ③ 介绍具体解决办法 1.I put an umbrella on the handle of the stick to help her. 我在拐杖手柄上加装了一把雨伞来帮助她。 2.We added a layer to separate solar cells from the heavy holder. 我们增加一层材料,把太阳能电池和沉重支架分离开。 结尾句: 1.She is proud of me and I feel very happy. 她为我感到骄傲,我也十分开心。 2.I learn that new ideas always come from trying new things. 我明白了新想法永远来源于不断尝试新事物。 3.Never give up when you meet difficulties, and you will succeed. 遇到困难不要放弃,你终会成功。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句:After countless tries, we succeeded! 仿写:经过多次练习,我终于学会了攀岩。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句:We failed many times to make it light, until pizza gave us an idea. 仿写:我多次尝试做手工都失败了,直到树叶给了我灵感。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句:One day, I thought, why not put the stick and the umbrella together? 仿写:有一天我心想,为什么不把花盆和架子结合在一起呢? __________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. After countless tries, I learned to go rock climbing at last. 2. I failed many times to make handcrafts, until leaves gave me an idea. 3. One day, I thought, why not put the flower pot and the shelf together? 典例 Write at least 60 words on the topic “The new thing I tried” (以“我尝试的新事物”为题,写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格。) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ①题材:本文是一篇经历分享类记叙文; ②时态:时态为“一般过去时”; ③提示:本文主要是分享你曾尝试的新事物,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。 谋篇布局 开头 点明尝试的新事物是什么及时间背景 中间 描述尝试的过程及感受 结尾 总结收获 佳作展示 The new thing I tried I tried cooking a new dish last weekend. I chose to make spaghetti because I had never cooked it before. At first, I was worried that I might make a mistake, but I followed the recipe carefully. When it was done, I felt proud and happy because it tasted good. From this experience, I learned that trying new things could be fun and rewarding. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇: ① had never cooked 从未做过 ② make a mistake 犯错 ③ follow the recipe 按照食谱操作 ④ rewarding有意义的,值得的 高分句型: ① When it was done, I felt proud and happy because it tasted good.(because引导的原因状语从句) ② From this experience, I learned that trying new things could be fun and rewarding.(that引导的宾语从句) (一) 生活中总有一些特别的日子让我们成长。或许是一次有意义的志愿服务,或许是一次突破自我的尝试,又或许是一次感动人心的相遇。请以“My special day”为题,根据所给提示,写一篇英语短文,向校刊“Teenage Growth”栏目投稿。 要求:1. 80—120词; 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: My Special Day Last Sunday was a truly special day for me. My classmates and I visited the old people’s home in our city. The weather was sunny, and we spent the whole day with the elderly there. In the morning, we sang and played traditional games with them. Their laughter filled the room, making everyone feel happy. After lunch, I talked with an old lady who loved English. I taught her simple phrases, and she shared stories about her youth. We both felt happy. That day was colourful and meaningful. I learned the importance of caring for others and working together as a team. It was a lesson I will always treasure. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:本文以“一般过去时”为主; ③提示:题目要求根据提示描述自己特别的一天,这一天让自己收获很多,包括这天从事活动的基本信息、所做的具体事情、自己的感受,并谈谈自己的收获。写作时注意适当增加细节,不要遗漏要点。 [写作步聚] 第一步,总体介绍去老人之家的基本情况; 第二步,根据所给要点,具体介绍在老人之家从事的活动; 第三步,最后谈自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①the whole day 一整天 ②the importance of ……的重要性 ③care for关心 [高分句型] ①Their laughter filled the room, making everyone feel happy.(现在分词作伴随状语) ②After lunch, I sat with an old lady who loved English.(who引导的定语从句) (二) 人人都钟爱的假期除了能使我们彻底放松身心外,还有什么有意义的事情值得尝试?除了玩乐,我们还能从假期中获益什么呢?请根据以下图片提示,写一篇题为“How to spend our vacation?”的作文。下列词汇可供参考:              Sports            Museum          City Clean-up Day    Animal Protection 1. do some sports 2. take a trip; visit the…museum 3. be a volunteer 4. protect the animals 5. it helps to…; not only...but also... 要求: 1.表达清楚,语句通顺,语法正确,上下文连贯,书写工整; 2.必须包括要点提示所有的相关信息,并适当发挥; 3.词数:80词左右; 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 How to Spend Our Vacation? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to Spend Our Vacation? It’s time for us to experience more, think more and learn more during our vacation. To make us know more about the world, we can travel away from home to outdoors. We can visit farms, factories and museums. In the holiday, we can do more sports. It helps us not only practice exercising but also keep healthy. We can also be the volunteers on the City Clean-up Day. Animals are our best friends, and we can give out some posters in the street to show how to protect the animals. The amazing activities there will let us get what we can’t learn from school. These can help us grow into a more useful person. In short, holidays can be impressive and fruitful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,要求以“How to Spend Our Vacation?”为题,结合提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图,在假期中多体验、多思考、多学习; 第二步,具体阐述写作内容,在不同的地方可以做什么从假期中获益; 第三步,书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①know more about了解更多关于 ②keep healthy保持健康 ③grow into成长为 [高分句型] ①It’s time for us to experience more, think more and learn more during our vacation.(It固定句型) ②The amazing activities there will let us get what we can’t learn from school.(what引导的的宾语从句) (三) 书面小练笔(不少于 5 句,必须使用:cycling/camping/skating/skiing, balance, on one’s own, would like to) 介绍你最想尝试的户外活动,说明理由 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 I would like to try cycling most. I can ride my bike to travel around the town on my own. I also want to try skating to improve my balance. Sometimes I take a break from study and go camping close to nature. Skiing in snowy mountains would also be fantastic fun for me. All these outdoor activities make my free time colourful. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步:审题立意] 确定文体:说明文,一般现在时与将来意愿结合 明确要点:围绕“想尝试的户外活动”展开,点明最想尝试的是骑行,还想尝试滑冰,偶尔会从学习中抽时间去亲近自然的地方露营,认为在雪山滑雪也会很有趣,最后总结这些户外活动让业余时间更丰富 确定人称:第一人称(I) 注意事项:不少于 5 句,必须使用cycling/camping/skating/skiing, balance, on one’s own, would like to [第二步:构思布局] 段落式结构 开头:点明最想尝试的户外活动(骑行)及理由 主体:依次介绍其他想尝试的活动(滑冰、露营、滑雪)及各自的目的/感受 结尾:总结户外活动对业余时间的积极影响 [第三步:要点展开] 要点一:最想尝试的活动 骑行:would like to try cycling most/ride bike to travel around the town on my own/cycling is my top choice of outdoor activities/tour the whole town alone by bicycle等 要点二:其他想尝试的活动 滑冰:try skating/improve my balance/practice skating to get better at keeping balance等 露营:take a break from study/go camping close to nature/put aside schoolwork for a rest/camp outdoors and get close to nature等 滑雪:ski in snowy mountains/be fantastic fun/ski on snow-covered mountains/bring me huge joy等 要点三:总结户外活动的意义 意义:all these outdoor activities/make free time colourful/all kinds of outdoor sports/add colours to my spare time等 (四) 在我们的生活中,总有一次难忘的运动经历。它可能是一场激烈的比赛,一次艰苦的训练,或是一次克服困难的尝试。请以 “An Unforgettable Sports Experience” 为题,写一篇英语短文。 要求: 1. 内容完整,包括:运动的名称、时间、过程 (遇到的困难及如何克服)、收获和感悟; 2. 语言流畅,字数 80-100 词; 3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 An Unforgettable Sports Experience Last term, our school held a running competition. I joined it because running is my favorite sport. I had trained for two weeks and felt confident. However, during the race, I felt tired and my legs hurt. I fell behind and wanted to give up. Just then, my classmates cheered me on and gave me courage. I kept running and didn’t lose heart. Finally, I crossed the line. I didn’t win first prize, but I finished. This experience taught me: sports are not just about winning, but about challenging myself and enjoying the process. I will never forget this experience. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材: 本文是一篇话题作文; ②时态:时态为“一般过去时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“记叙文”中难忘经历的细节描述,适当增加心理活动和场景描写,使文章重点突出。 [写作步骤] 第一步:开头点明主题,引出下文对跑步比赛的描述; 第二步:具体描述比赛过程,包括训练准备、比赛中的困难、同学鼓励和最终完成比赛等内容; 第三步:总结全文,表达感悟和致谢。 [亮点词汇] ①felt confident感到自信 ②fell behind落后 ③wanted to give up想放弃 ④cheered me on为我加油 ⑤didn’t lose heart没有灰心 [高分句型] ①Just then, my classmates cheered me on and gave me courage. (and连接两个并列谓语) ②This experience taught me: sports are not just about winning, but about challenging myself and enjoying the process. (not…but…引导并列结构) (五) 假如你是李华,上周末你参加了学校的手工艺品社团活动,第一次尝试自己动手制作了剪纸作品。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,描述一下这次有趣的经历。 1. 为什么参加手工艺品社团活动; 2. 制作剪纸前做了哪些准备工作(准备材料、工具等); 3. 描述制作剪纸的具体过程以及这次经历的感受。 要求:60词左右;语句通顺,条理清晰,语法正确,可以适当发挥。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I’m Li Hua. Last weekend, I joined the handicraft club because I love DIY. I prepared red paper and a pair of scissors first. I folded the paper, then carefully cut out shapes like flowers. Finally, a beautiful paper-cut appeared. I felt so happy and proud, and I will try more DIY in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”; ③提示:以李华的身份,描述上周末参加学校手工艺品社团活动、第一次制作剪纸的经历,包括参加活动的原因、制作前的准备、制作过程及个人感受,词数60词左右。 [写作步骤] 第一步,开头:介绍自己的身份,说明参加手工艺品社团活动的时间和原因。 第二步,中间详细介绍:制作剪纸前准备的材料和工具,以及折叠、裁剪等具体制作过程。 第三步,结尾:表达完成作品后的感受,并对未来的DIY活动做出展望。 [亮点词汇] ① handicraft club手工艺品社团 ② folded折叠 ③ cut out剪出 ④ in the future在将来 [高分句型] ① Last weekend, I joined the handicraft club because I love DIY.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句) ② I felt so happy and proud, and I will try more DIY in the future.(运用了and连接的并列句) (六) 寒假里我们迎来了春节。今年,你决定尝试使用家里的智能音箱(Smart Speaker)或手机上的AI助手(如ChatGPT、文心一言等)来帮忙准备春节。请你用英文记录下你和AI助手之间的一次“互动”。 要求: 1.  你向AI助手询问了什么问题?(例如:如何用英语写一副春联?帮我找一首关于春节的英文歌曲?帮我设计一份年夜饭菜单?帮我查询春节期间去某地旅游的天气?) 2.  AI助手是如何回答或帮助你的?(简单描述AI给出的答案或建议)。 3.  你对AI助手的回答满意吗?你觉得它有用吗? AI Helper and My Spring Festival ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文: AI Helper and My Spring Festival The Spring Festival is coming. This year, I decided to ask my AI helper for help. I wanted to write a Spring Festival couplet in English, so I asked, “Can you help me write a couplet in English?” The AI helper answered quickly. It gave me a great one: “Good luck in the Year of the Dragon; Happiness for your whole family.” I was very satisfied with its answer. It was not only fast but also very creative. I think AI helpers are very useful in our daily life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般过去时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不得遗漏,可适当添加细节,以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步:交代背景,引出使用AI助手准备春节的话题; 第二步:详细描述互动的过程; 第三步:表达对AI回答的满意程度及对AI有用性的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①decide to do sth.决定做某事 ②be satisfied with对……满意 ③not only…but also…不仅……而且…… ④useful有用的 ⑤quickly快速地 [高分句型] I think AI helpers are very useful in our daily life. (省略that的宾语从句) (七) Write at least 60 words on the following situation.(根据情景,写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格) 假设你是Joe,上个周末,你第一次尝试做小老师,帮助了你的同学Molly,教会了她不会读的英文单词,请你在朋友圈以文字的形式把你这次小老师的经历记录下来,说说具体的经过以及你的感想。 Moments Joe ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Moments      Last weekend was unforgettable for me. I tried being a little teacher for the first time to help Molly, my classmate. She couldn’t read some English words, so I taught her patiently. I explained the pronunciation and practiced with her repeatedly. Finally, she managed to read them. I was so happy and learned that helping others is rewarding. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇朋友圈记录文,属于小作文类型,记录自己首次当小老师帮助同学的经历; ②时态:以“一般过去时”为主,描述上个周末发生的具体事件; ③提示:写作要点涵盖经历的时间、事件、具体过程及个人感想,叙事完整且情感真实。 [写作步骤] 第一步,开篇点明经历的时间和核心事件; 第二步,具体阐述帮助的过程,包括同学的问题、自己的教学行动、及最终结果; 第三步,表达个人感想,说明从经历中领悟到帮助他人的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①unforgettable难忘的 ②patiently耐心地 ③pronunciation发音 ④repeatedly反复地 ⑤rewarding有意义的,值得的 [高分句型] ①I tried being a little teacher for the first time to help Molly, my classmate.(同位语my classmate补充说明Molly身份,使表达更清晰) ②I was so happy and learned that helping others is rewarding.(that引导宾语从句,点明经历的感悟) (八) Write at least 60 words according to the given topic “A New Experience”. (请以“一次新体验”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格)。 有人说,生命的意义在于体验不同。每一次新的经历,如学习一项新技能、尝试一种新运动、感受一种新文化……,都是给生命增添的一抹独特色彩。请具体分享你曾有过的一次新体验 (经历),简单谈谈你的感悟或收获。 注意:1.短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其他相关信息。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 A New Experience Last summer, I had a new experience. I learned to ride a horse. At first, I was a little scared. But with the help of the coach, I slowly got on the horse. It felt so exciting to sit on the horse and move forward. I also learned how to control the horse. This experience made me brave and confident. I realized that trying new things can bring us a lot of fun and growth. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇话题作文; ②时态:时态为“一般过去时”; ③提示:本文主要是分享你曾有过的一次新体验,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,引出话题; 第二步,介绍这次新体验的过程; 第三步,总结收获。 [亮点词汇] ①at first起初 ②with the help of在……的帮助下 ③a lot of很多 [高分句型] I realized that trying new things can bring us a lot of fun and growth. (that引导的宾语从句) $

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