预习31 Unit 8 Pets and us书面表达专练【暑假预习】2026-2027学年沪教版八年级英语上册（广州卷）

**基本信息** 聚焦“Pets and us”主题，构建“三维九步”写作体系，融合课标语法与分层教学，实现从基础表达到思辨写作的能力进阶，培养语言运用与责任意识。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |四大常考题型|4类题型+8篇练习|题型适配策略（观点/利弊/书信/记叙）|主题词汇-句型-篇章结构递进| |写作结构模板|统一三段式框架|逻辑连接词+举例支撑法|语法（should等）与文体深度融合| |分层教学训练|3层难度对应3类题型|梯度训练路径（基础描述→观点论述→思辨升华）|能力目标与学生水平精准匹配|

【暑假预习】2026-2027学年沪教版八年级英语上册（广州卷） 预习31 Unit 8 Pets and us书面表达专练 一、单元核心主题 1.单元大主题：Pets and us（宠物与人类） 2.教材写作原版任务：Write an opinion article — The perfect pet（观点类短文：理想/完美宠物） 3.核心育人主题：学会关爱动物、文明饲养宠物，懂得饲养宠物意味着责任。 二、课标与教材定位 1. 文体：观点议论文（八上重点训练文体，区别于记叙文） 2. 目标时态：一般现在时；灵活使用形容词、副词比较级 3. 必考语法融合：情态动词should / shouldn’t、不定式to do、祈使句（单元核心语法） 4. 词数要求：80–100词（校内统考标准） 5. 写作能力目标 ① 清晰亮出个人观点； ② 使用Firstly/Secondly等连接词分层列举理由； ③ 每条观点搭配简单例子支撑； ④ 结尾总结重申看法。 三、四大常考命题题型（校内同步+期中期末高频） 题型1【教材原题｜基础必考】完美宠物推荐（课内写作原题） 题目：What is the perfect pet for you? 请以 ____: The perfect pet 为题写短文。 写作要点： ① 表明你心中理想宠物是什么； ② 至少3条理由（性格、饲养难度、陪伴作用等）； ③ 简单对比其他宠物更佳。 题型2【拓展考题｜利弊议论文】养宠物的利与弊 话题：For and against keeping pets 要点： 优点：陪伴、缓解孤单、培养责任感、收获快乐 缺点：耗费时间金钱、制造噪音、清理麻烦、容易过敏 最后写出你个人观点。 题型3【情景应用文｜书信高频】 朋友想饲养宠物，征求你的建议；或写信劝说父母同意饲养宠物。 考察：提建议句型 You should… You shouldn’t… 题型4【记叙文｜基础薄弱学生备选】My pet 描述自家宠物：外形、日常习惯、你和宠物之间的日常故事（单元词汇直接套用） 四、写作结构模板（三段式，统一模板方便背诵） 标准框架（观点类作文通用） Paragraph 1 开头：亮明观点 In my opinion, … are the perfect pets. Many people like keeping pets, and I think… Paragraph 2 主体：分层列举理由（重点得分段） Firstly, … Secondly, … What’s more, … For example, …（举例加分） Paragraph 3 结尾：总结+升华 For these reasons, I believe… Keeping pets teaches us to be responsible and kind to animals. 五、单元写作必备语料（贴合本单元单词、短语） 核心短语 look after / take care of 照顾 be friendly to… 对……友好 make noise 制造噪音 run after 追赶 hide away 躲藏 learn to be responsible 学会有责任心 all day / all night 整日/整夜 高分句型（融合单元语法 should） 1. We should be gentle to all pets. 我们应该温柔对待所有宠物。 2. We shouldn’t shout at or hurt animals. 我们不应该呵斥或者伤害动物。 3. It is important to learn how to look after pets. 学会如何照顾宠物十分重要。 4. Keeping pets brings us lots of happiness. 饲养宠物带给我们许多快乐。 六、分层教学思路 基础层（及格要求） 选用题型4《My pet》，简单描述宠物外形、日常，使用简单句，保证单词、语法不出错。 中层（良好） 掌握教材原版题型：The perfect pet，严格使用三段式，会用Firstly/Secondly连接词。 提高层（优秀/冲刺高分） 训练【养宠物利弊】议论文，学会正反双向论述，适当使用比较级，加入文明养宠观点升华主题。 七、书面表达专练 1．假如你是李华，你们班近期开展了一次以“Can We Keep Animals as Our Pets?”为主题的讨论会，你认为我们可以养宠物。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文，说明自己的理由，并呼吁大家爱护宠物。 要求： 1．短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，可适当发挥； 2．语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范； 3．短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4．词数：不少于80。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） I think we can keep animals as pets.__________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．现在越来越多同学喜欢养宠物，学校英语报社征集题为 Should We Keep Pets? 的英语短文，请你根据以下提示写一篇 80 词左右短文： 提示： 1.养宠物的优点：陪伴、学会负责、带来快乐; 2.养宠物的缺点：花费时间金钱、制造噪音、影响邻居; 3.你的观点：理性养宠物，做负责任的主人。 要求：语句通顺，语法正确，包含所有提示，可适当拓展。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．小博非常希望养一只宠物狗，但他的妈妈不同意。请你从以下两个立场中选择一个，写一段文字尝试说服对方。 提示：(1)表明立场：希望养狗/反对养狗。 (2)说明养狗可能带来的好处/问题。 要求： (1)短文须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 (2)词数80左右。 参考词汇： responsible adj.有责任心的; disturb v.打扰 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．班里最近开展“最佳宠物”的话题讨论，你认为养兔子最好。请根据提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文来阐述你的意见和观点。标题和开头已给出，不计入词数。 养兔子的好处 1. 兔子很可爱，抱在怀里很舒服。 2. 兔子很爱干净，个性温和，不会吠叫和伤人。 3. 兔子聪明，会用肢体语言表达喜怒哀乐等情感。 4. 兔子体型小，不占空间，基本需求花费也不高。 可用素材： (1) 词汇 lovely, pleasant, clean, gentle, bark loudly, hurt, quiet, clever, show one’s feelings, body language, take up, space, expensive (2) 句型 Firstly, ...    Secondly, ...   Thirdly, ... Finally, ...              For these reasons, I believe that ... Rabbits make the best pets In my opinion, rabbits make the best pets. ______________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．近年，城市的流浪狗越来越多。政府设置了流浪狗收容所，但还是不能解决根本问题。现在请你以一名中学生的身份，写一份英文倡议书，倡导人们不要遗弃宠物狗。倡议书的要点包括： （1）狗会忠诚于主人，给人们带来乐趣； （2）饲养狗可以培养人的责任感； （3）狗是人类的朋友，应该和人类和谐相处； （4）我们应该爱护狗，不应该遗弃它们。 提示词：被遗弃的 abandoned   陪伴 accompany   和谐 harmony 要求： （1）80词左右； （2）必须包括以上全部要点，可以适当发挥； （3）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； （4）条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．现在越来越多的人热衷于养宠物，然而每个人对养宠物的看法不一。假设你是李梅，最近你们班里展开了一次以“Should people keep pets?”为主题的班会，请根据下列提示，写一篇80词左右的短文发表你自己的看法。 提示： 1. 宠物可以带给孩子们快乐；他们可以饲养一些小巧可爱的宠物； 2. 宠物可以使独居的老年人感到忙碌和充实； 3. 养宠物可以使人们展示自己的爱心。 Should people keep pets? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假如你是李林，你校开办了宠物俱乐部(Pet Club)并正在招募会员，你想加入该俱乐部。请你用英文写一封申请信给俱乐部的外籍负责人Miss White。申请信需包括以下要点： 1. 原因：想问其他会员分享养宠物的经验；想为自己的宠物找朋友；喜欢俱乐部的活动。 2. 贡献：(请补充) 注意：  (1)参考词汇：活动 activity (2)词数：80词左右(信的开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数)； (3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Dear Miss White， I’m Li Lin. I would like to join the Pet Club in our school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Lin 8．什么宠物是你心中最好的宠物？请你根据下面的要点提示，以“________ make the best pets”为题写一篇英语短文。 要点提示： 1. 要有三点以上的理由来支撑 2. 要言之有理 要求： 1. 须包含提示中的所有要点，可以适当发挥； 2. 词数： 80左右（短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：accompany 陪伴，regular checkup 定期检查 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1．例文：      There are several reasons. First, pets can be our good friends who make us happy when we are lonely. Second, we can learn responsibility from keeping pets because we need to take care of them every day. Besides, playing with them is a good way to relax.      Then, how should we treat them? We should treat pets kindly and patiently. It is necessary for us to love and care for them. What's more, we must feed them well and give them a warm home. In a word, animals are our friends, so let's protect them together! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：议论文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：饲养宠物的原因，对待宠物的正确方式 确定人称：第一人称(we/us/our) 注意事项：语句通顺，逻辑清晰，紧扣宠物主题，无冗余内容 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起引出主题，列举饲养宠物的多重原因 主体段：阐述善待、照料宠物的具体做法 结尾段：总结主旨，呼吁共同保护动物、善待宠物 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：饲养宠物的原因 陪伴治愈：lonely/happy/relax/sad/cheerful/comfortable等 培养品质：responsibility/patience/independence/love等 日常益处：keep happy/relax oneself/reduce pressure/enrich life等 要点二：对待宠物的正确方式 态度要求：kindly/patiently/carefully/warmly/sincerely等 行为做法：love/care for/feed/give a warm home/protect/play with/look after等 主旨升华：protect animals/be friendly to animals/respect life/cherish pets等 2．例文： Should We Keep Pets? Nowadays, more and more students like keeping pets. Keeping pets has many advantages. Pets can be our good friends and make us happy. Also, it teaches us to be responsible and care for others. However, it also brings some problems. It costs us lots of time and money. Some pets may make noise and disturb our neighbors. In my opinion, we can keep pets if we are ready. We should be responsible owners and take good care of our pets. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：观点议论类短文，用一般现在时； 明确要点：养宠物的优点、养宠物的弊端、个人理性饲养的观点； 确定人称：以第一人称we/students为主； 注意事项：80 词左右，逻辑清晰。 [第二步：构思布局] 开头段：引出学生养宠物的普遍现象，集中阐述饲养宠物的各项好处。 主体段：用转折过渡，罗列养宠物带来的时间、金钱、邻里矛盾三类问题。 结尾段：亮出自身观点，呼吁大家做有责任心、理性的宠物主人。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：养宠物的优点 Keeping pets has many advantages. /Pets can be our good friends and make us happy. /it teaches us to be responsible and care for others. /When we feel upset, pets stay with us to cheer us up. /Taking care of small animals helps us learn to look after living things等 要点二：养宠物的缺点 However, it also brings some problems. /It costs us lots of time and money. /Some pets may make noise and disturb our neighbors. /We need to buy pet food and take them for walks every day. /Loud barks will trouble people living nearby等 要点三：个人观点 In my opinion, we can keep pets if we are ready. /We should be responsible owners and take good care of our pets. /Before keeping pets, we need to think over whether we have enough time and energy to look after them well等 3．例文： Possible version 1 I really want to keep a pet dog. If we keep a dog, I will look after it well. And if I have a dog, I will feel happier and less lonely. It can also help me learn to be responsible. I promise to feed it every day, walk it after school, and clean its bed on weekends. I will also save my pocket money to buy dog food. Please trust me, Mum. Possible version 2 I don’t agree to keep a pet dog. If there is a dog at home, the house will get messy. And if you are busy with homework, you may forget to take care of it. Dogs also need time and money. I’m worried that you won’t have enough time to walk and feed it. Besides, it might bark at night and disturb our sleep. Let’s think about it again. 【详解】希望养狗： 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 文体：说服性文字（Persuasive Writing），使用一般现在时和一般将来时 立场：选择希望养狗的立场 要点：表明希望养狗；说明养狗可能带来的好处 人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名 [第二步：构思布局] 开头段：表明立场：希望养狗 主体段：说明养狗的好处：感到更快乐、减少孤独感、学习负责任；具体行动承诺：每天喂食、放学后遛狗、周末清理狗窝、用零花钱买狗粮 结尾段：请求妈妈信任 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：表明立场 开头直接表明：I really want to keep a pet dog.（我真的很想养一只宠物狗。） 要点二：说明养狗可能带来的好处 好处一：体现责任与照顾 概括说明：I will look after it well.（我会好好照顾它。） 具体行动支撑：I promise to feed it every day, walk it after school, and clean its bed on weekends.（我保证每天喂它，放学后遛它，周末清理它的床。） 好处二：带来快乐 概括说明：I will feel happier and less lonely.（我会感到更快乐，更不孤单。） 好处三：培养品质 概括说明：It can also help me learn to be responsible.（它还能帮助我学会有责任心。） 附加诚意展示：I will also save my pocket money to buy dog food.（我也会省下零花钱买狗粮。） 反对养狗： 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：议论文体（说服性文字），以一般现在时和一般将来时为主 明确要点：表明立场：反对养狗；说明问题：弄脏房子、没时间照顾、花费时间和金钱、打扰休息 确定人称：第一人称（I）和第二人称（you） 注意事项：语气委婉但立场明确，使用“建议”式结尾 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：直接表明立场（“I don’t agree to keep a pet dog”） 主体段：列举养狗可能带来的具体问题（卫生、时间、金钱、打扰） 结尾段：提出建议，呼吁重新考虑（“Let’s think about it again”） [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：表明立场 开头直接表明反对立场：I don’t agree to keep a pet dog.（我不同意养宠物狗） 要点二：说明养狗可能带来的问题 问题一：卫生问题 具体描述：the house will get messy（房子会变脏乱） 问题二：照顾问题 概括说明：you may forget to take care of it（你可能会忘记照顾它） 原因补充：if you are busy with homework（如果你忙于作业） 问题三：时间与金钱成本 概括说明：Dogs also need time and money（狗也需要时间和金钱） 具体担忧：won’t have enough time to walk and feed it（没有足够时间遛它和喂它） 问题四：打扰休息 具体描述：it might bark at night and disturb our sleep（它可能晚上叫，打扰我们睡觉） 结尾建议：Let’s think about it again.（我们再考虑一下吧） 4．例文： Rabbits make the best pets In my opinion, rabbits make the best pets. Firstly, rabbits are extremely lovely with soft fur. Holding them in your arms feels warm and pleasant. Secondly, they are very clean and gentle. They never bark loudly or hurt people, making them friendly to everyone around. Thirdly, rabbits are clever. They use body language to show happiness, sadness or other feelings. Finally, rabbits are small, so they don’t take up much space at home. Their basic needs like food and a cage aren’t expensive either. For these reasons, I believe that rabbits are the best choice for a pet. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：需明确表达观点，围绕观点从多个角度阐述理由，注意逻辑清晰，适当添加细节增强说服力。 [写作步骤] 第一步，阐述写作意图，明确提出观点“兔子是最好的宠物”； 第二步，从多个维度详细阐述推荐兔子作为宠物的理由，包括外形可爱、性格干净温顺、聪明且体型小巧不占空间、饲养成本低等，并添加了拥抱兔子的感受、兔子用肢体语言表达情绪等细节； 第三步，通过总结再次强调观点，呼应开头，认为基于上述理由，兔子是养宠物的最佳选择。   [亮点词汇] ①extremely极其、非常 ②soft fur柔软的毛发 ③take up占据 ④basic needs基本需求 [高分句型] ①Finally, rabbits are small, so they don’t take up much space at home. (so引导结果状语从句) 5．例文： Recently, there are more and more abandoned dogs. Dogs are our good friends. They are faithful to their owners. They accompany us and bring us a lot of love and happiness. In addition, we can become responsible by taking care of dogs. They should live in harmony with us and we must love them. If we decide to keep a dog as a pet, it’s necessary for us to take good care of it and never get rid of it, for we are friends forever. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为倡议书； ②时态：为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中倡导人们不要遗弃宠物狗的要点，可以适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用“城市中流浪狗增多”的话题，来引出重点倡导的内容； 第二步，呼吁人们如果养狗就要好好照顾，不要遗弃。 [亮点词汇] ①more and more 越来越多 ②in addition 此外 ③live in harmony with 与……和谐相处 ④get rid of 摆脱，丢弃 [高分句型] ①If we decide to keep a dog as a pet, it’s necessary for us to take good care of it and never get rid of it, for we are friends forever. (if引导条件状语从句，for引导原因状语从句) 6．例文： Should people keep pets? Many people have different opinions on keeping pets. I think it’s good to keep pets. First, pets can bring children joy and happiness. Some animals are small and cute. Children can keep them easily. So for children, it’s good to keep such animals as pets. Second, more and more old people live by themselves. They often feel lonely and can talk with nobody. Keeping pets can make them busy and feel less lonely. When they take their pets for a walk, they can also exercise themselves. Third, keeping pets can make people show their love. In a word, keeping pets is helpful to us. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，关于养宠物提出自己的看法； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：提示给出了三点关于养宠物的优点，注意要加上自己的观点；同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作背景，陈述自己的观点； 第二步，分三点详细阐述养宠物的优点； 第三步，做出总结归纳，复述观点。 [亮点词汇] ① have different opinions on sth.在某事上持有不同的看法 ② be good to对……好 ③ more and more越来越多 ④ be helpful to对……有帮助 ⑤ in a word总之 [高分句型] ① I think it’s good to keep pets.（省略that的宾语从句；it作形式主语） ② Keeping pets can make them busy and feel less lonely. （动名词作主语；make+宾语+宾补） 7．例文： Dear Miss White, I’m Li Lin. I would like to join the Pet Club in our school. I want to be a part of the club because I want to share some experience of keeping pets with other pet owners. I keep a pet dog at home now, so I have a lot to share. What’s more, I also want to find some friends for my pet dog in the club. Last but not least, I think the activities in the club are interesting and I like them very much. If I join the Pet Club, I will do something for the club, such as playing games with the pets, keeping them clean and taking good care of them. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Lin 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点包括想要加入宠物俱乐部的原因，以及加入该俱乐部后所能做的贡献。想要加入宠物俱乐部的具体原因题目已给出提示，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，另外需补充加入俱乐部后能为俱乐部带来哪些贡献的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先自我介绍，表明写作意图：想要加入宠物俱乐部； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍自己想要加入俱乐部的原因，及贡献； 第三步，书写结语。表达希望收到对方的回信。 [亮点词汇] ①share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某物 ②experience 经验 ③what’s more 而且 ④last but not least 最后 ⑤take good care of 好好照顾 ⑥look forward to 期待 [高分句型] I want to be a part of the club because I want to share some experience of keeping pets with other pet owners.（because引导的原因状语从句） If I join the Pet Club, I will do something for the club, such as playing games with the pets, keeping them clean and taking good care of them.（if引导的条件状语从句） 8．例文： Dogs make the best pets I think that dogs make the best pets. The reasons are as follows. To begin with, it is convenient and easy for us to feed dogs and take care of them. Second, dogs can bring their masters happiness and joy. Third, dogs are so loyal that they are always patient to wait for their masters to come home at door. Dogs always accompany us faithfully. Last but not least, dogs can help masters take something they want with their mouths. In conclusion, I choose dogs as the best pets in the world. Our life becomes interesting because of them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体说明(狗)是自己心中最好的宠物； 第二步，具体阐述三点原因来说明(狗)是自己心中最好的宠物； 第三步，最后作出总结。 [亮点词汇] ①as follows如下 ②take care of照顾 ③help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 [高分句型] ①To begin with, it is convenient and easy for us to feed dogs and take care of them.(it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语) ②Third, dogs are so loyal that they are always patient to wait for their masters to come home at door.(so...that...引导结果状语从句) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $