摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦七年级上册Unit 2 "We’re Family!"家庭话题写作,通过话题词汇(如member, handsome)和教材原句仿写(如Here’s a photo of us)导入,搭建从词句储备到范文结构再到实战训练的学习支架,帮助学生衔接基础与写作应用。
其亮点在于分阶进阶设计,“高分词句储备-范文进阶攻略-实战强化训练”提升语言能力,范文对比(如用“with+名词短语”作后置定语升级句子)培养思维品质,实战征稿任务增强学习能力。教师可依托同步资源高效教学,学生能系统提升写作表达与逻辑组织能力。
内容正文:
英 语
七年级上册 RJ
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Unit 2 We’re Family!
A 课时同步训练
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Section B
What do you like about
your family?
Period 5 2a—3c(大单元话题与写作)
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写作
第一阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.成员 ________
2.英俊的 __________
3.在左/右边 ___________________
4.在中间 _______________
5.在……近旁 _________
6.玩得高兴 __________
member
handsome
on the left/right
in the middle
next to
have fun
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】Here’s a photo of us.(倒装句)
→仿写:这是史密斯先生的全家福。
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8.【教材原句】He’s handsome and funny.(be+adj.)
→仿写:我的妈妈美丽又聪明。
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Here is Mr Smith’s family photo.
My mother is beautiful and smart.
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9.【教材原句】… he likes reading a lot.(like doing sth)
→仿写:汤姆真的喜欢打网球。
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10.【教材原句】She always reads me a story at night.(一般现在时)
→仿写:我姐姐每天都会花很多时间拉小提琴。
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【解析】知识拓展
spend既可以表示花费时间,也可以表示花费金钱,主语通常是表示人的名词或代词。
spend… (in) doing sth 在做某事上花……
spend… on sth 在某物上花……
Tom really likes playing tennis.
My sister spends a lot of time playing the violin every day.
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第二阶 范文进阶攻略
[2026重庆沙坪坝区期中]家人是
生命中最温暖的存在,家庭是永远的心
灵港湾。英语周报将举办以“My Happy
Family”为主题的征文比赛。假设你是李
辉,请你根据图片提示,用英语写一篇短文,向英语周报投稿,介绍你的家庭成
员,并表达对家人的爱。
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参考信息:
要求:1.根据图片提示,至少介绍2—3个家人的详细信息,要有适当的结尾;
2.卷面整洁,书写工整,标点符号使用正确;
3.文章中不能出现真实姓名、学校等个人信息;
4.60词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! My name’s Li Hui. I live in a happy family. Here is a
photo of my family.
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第1步 审题目
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:以第一、三人称为主
内容要点:家庭信息、至少2—3位家人的详细信息
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第2步 列提纲
本文适宜采用的作文结构为“总——分—
—总”。
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第3步 写作进阶#5
Hello, everyone! My name’s Li
Hui. I live in a happy family. Here
is a photo of my family.
I have short hair①, and I like
reading books. My grandma is on
the left. She is 60 years old and
has short hair. Hello, everyone! My name’s Li Hui. I
live in a happy family. Here is a photo of
my family.
I’m the little boy. .with short hair
(用“with+名词短语”作后置定语,升级句
子)①, and I like reading books. My
grandma is on the left. She is 60 years old
and has short hair.She is. .good at. .playing. .
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She can play the erhu well.②
My grandpa is next to me. He is
62 years old.He likes playing weiqi
and he has short hair too.③ In the
middle of the photo, you can see
my parents.My father is 38 years
old and my mother is 38 too.④
My dad is tall, the. .erhu.(用be good at替换“can... well”,
升级短语)② My grandpa is next to me.
He is 62 years old. He. .isinterested
in. .playing weiqi and he has short hair too.
(用be interested in替换like,升级短语)③
In the middle of the photo, you can see
my parents.Both of. .them are 38 years old.
(用Both of结构合并两个句子,升级句子)
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and he likes fishing. My mum is
slim, and she loves planting
flowers.We have a cute cat too. Its
name is Mimi.⑤
My family are very kind and
friendly. I love my family. ④ My dad is tall, and he likes fishing.
My mum is slim, and she loves planting
flowers.We have a cat. .named Mimi. It’s
so cute. (用named Mimi作后置定语,升级
句子)⑤
My family are very kind and friendly.
I love my family.
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第三阶 实战强化训练
为宣传国际家庭日,你校英语报刊正在
开展以“My Family”为题的征稿活动。假如你
是张亮,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英文稿
参赛。
要求: 1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息;
4.词数不少于60(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
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My Family
I am Zhang Liang._____________________
I have a happy family and we love each other very much!
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【参考范文】
My Family
I am Zhang Liang.There are three people in my family—my parents
and me.My father is tall and handsome.He is a maths teacher.My mother
has long hair.She is a nurse.She works in a hospital.I am a
student.I’m in Grade 7 and I am 13 years old.Our favourite foods are
chicken and vegetables.On Sundays, we often play sport together because
it is good for us.
I have a happy family and we love each other very much!
Value statement: Family is where life begins and love never ends.
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