Unit 3 Family ties 家庭相册介绍（单元写作精练）英语新教材外研版版七年级上册

**基本信息** 以家庭主题为载体，构建“词汇-句型-篇章”递进训练体系，融合结构规划与逻辑表达，提升语言运用与亲情价值观培养。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作精练|1主题+1范文|结构规划（开篇-故事-品质-感悟）、提示词运用、时态选择|主题词汇→名词所有格→篇章逻辑| |基础必做|10汉译英+5句型仿写|固定句型应用（It’s one’s duty to...等）|词汇积累→语法结构→基础表达| |提升必做|6主题写作|逻辑链条（问题-解决-感悟）、观点阐述|话题拓展→方法迁移→综合语言能力|

Unit 3 Family ties 家庭相册介绍 单元写作精练 【写作主题】 ✍家庭相册介绍 介绍家庭相册。挑选几张家庭照片，描述照片里的人物、拍摄场景，回忆照片背后温暖小故事。可以描写家人性格，讲讲家人如何互相支持。练习名词所有格。行文抒发亲情，表达家人之间彼此陪伴、互相扶持的珍贵。你可以写写爸爸妈妈、兄弟姐妹日常相处细节，说说家人对你的鼓励。结构：相册开篇介绍、照片故事、家人品质、感悟亲情，表达珍惜与家人相伴的时光。 📚【词汇积累】 1. family ties 亲情纽带 2. photo album 相册 3. family member 家庭成员 4. support each other 互相支持 5. warm memory 温暖回忆 6. take photos 拍照 7. share happiness and sadness 同甘共苦 8. love and care 爱与关怀 9. family dinner 家庭聚餐 10. be proud of 为……感到骄傲 11. daily communication 日常沟通 12. cherish time 珍惜时光 13. a story behind the photo 照片背后的故事 14. understand each other 互相理解 15. family love 亲情 💡【句式积累】 1. This photo album keeps all my warm family memories.这本相册保存着我所有温暖的家庭回忆。 2. Family ties connect every member in my family.亲情纽带联结家里每一位成员。 3. In this picture, my parents and I are having a family dinner.这张照片里，我和父母正在家庭聚餐。 4. My family always support each other when we meet trouble.遇到困难时，家人总会彼此扶持。 5. We share our happiness and sadness together.我们一同分享喜悦，分担难过。 6. My parents’ love gives me lots of power.父母的爱给予我很多力量。 7. I learn to understand every member of my family.我学着理解家里的每一个人。 8. I am really proud of my warm family.我为我温暖的家庭感到十分骄傲。 9. Every photo has a sweet story behind it.每张照片背后都藏着甜蜜的故事。 10. I will cherish every minute with my family. 我会珍惜和家人相伴的每一分钟。 【原题呈现】 如何做好有效沟通一直是家长头疼的问题。如今，越来越多的家长更加倾向于做“朋友型”的家长，与孩子互相学习，共同成长。与父母沟通也是孩子们需要认真思考的问题。请写出你与父母相处中遇到的问题，你是怎么解决的？ 提示词: communicate with; have different ideas 要求： 1．条理清楚，行文连贯；2．不能出现真实的人名和地名；3．词数 70。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 1. 写作两大核心内容，缺一不可 ①问题：和父母看法不同（have different ideas），难以沟通 ②解决方式：主动冷静交流、换位思考、耐心表达想法 2. 必须用上提示词 communicate with 和 have different ideas 3. 时态：描述过往矛盾多用一般过去时；总结经验用一般现在时 4. 词数：70词左右，不宜过长；禁止真实人名、校名、地名 行文结构规划 第一段：总起，青少年常会和父母沟通存在障碍 第二段：举例，我经常和父母拥有不同想法，容易争执 第三段：写明自己的解决办法 + 感悟（有效沟通促进互相理解） 【范文欣赏】 As teenagers, we may often have difficulties communicating with our parents. In the past, I always had different ideas from my parents and argued with them easily. Later, I realized shouting couldn’t solve problems. I began to calm down and communicate with them patiently. I shared my true feelings and tried to understand their worries. Gradually, we respect each other more. I learn that good communication is the key to getting along well. 【亮点解析】 1. 结构亮点 逻辑链条完整：存在沟通难题→曾经的矛盾→改进方法→收获感悟，完美匹配题目要求“写出问题+如何解决”。 2. 得分关键点 ✅ 精准使用两个规定提示词：communicate with、have different ideas 3. 加分词汇与短语 1. have difficulties doing sth. 做某事有困难 2. argue with sb. 和某人争吵 3. calm down 冷静下来 4. patiently adv. 耐心地 5. the key to ……的关键 6. get along well 和睦相处 4. 优质句型 Later, I realized shouting couldn’t solve problems.宾语从句，提升作文档次，避免简单句堆砌。 【基础必做】 一、汉译英（主题要点翻译） 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. 亲情；家庭纽带 2. 无言的爱 3. 评价故事中的人物 4. 名词所有格 5. 家庭内部交流 6. 倾听事例 7. 委婉表达语言 8. 一场赛跑 9. 找到作者的观点 10. 写一段关于家人支持的短文 【答案】 1. family ties解析：单元标题；tie本义纽带，引申亲情 2. silent love解析：silent 沉默的，无声的；单元阅读标题 3. make comments about a character 解析：make comments about 对……作出评价；character人物 4. possessive nouns解析：语法术语：名词所有格 5. communication within a family解析：communication 名词 交流；within 在……之内 6. listen for examples解析：example 例子，事例 7. softening language解析：soften 使委婉，动名词作短语 8. racing together解析：单元读写标题 9. find the writer’s idea解析：idea 观点、想法 10. write a short paragraph about your family members’ support 解析：paragraph 段落；support名词，支持 二、句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型1：It’s one’s duty to do sth. 例句：It’s my duty to look after my family members. (1) 体谅父母是我们的责任。 (2) 关心家中长辈是每个人的责任。 【参考答案】 (1) It’s our duty to understand our parents. (2) It’s everyone’s duty to care for the elders in the family. 句型2：What makes sb. …is… 例句：What makes our family warm is silent love. (1) 让家庭紧密相连的是彼此的理解。 (2) 让父母感到欣慰的是我们不断成长。 【参考答案】 (1) What makes a family close is mutual understanding. (2) What makes parents pleased is our continuous growth. 句型3：share sth. with sb. 例句：I often share my feelings with my parents. (1) 我愿意和家人分享生活中的喜怒哀乐。 (2) 弟弟常常和我分享他学校的趣事。 【参考答案】 (1) I’m ready to share joys and sorrows in life with my family. (2) My little brother often shares interesting school stories with me. 句型4：sb.’s + 名词所有格 例句：My mother’s love stays with me all the time. (1) 爸爸的默默支持陪伴我一路前行。 (2) 爷爷奶奶的叮嘱温暖着我的每一天。 【参考答案】 (1) My father’s silent support stays with me all the way. (2) My grandparents’ words warm every day of mine. 句型5：be thankful to sb. for sth. 例句：I am thankful to my family for their love. (1) 我十分感激父母给予我的陪伴。 (2) 他感激家人永远愿意倾听自己。 【参考答案】 (1) I am very thankful to my parents for their company. (2) He is thankful to his family for always listening to him. 【提升必做】 （一） 请以“The importance of family education”为题写一篇短文。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 The importance of family education Family education plays a very important role in the society. It not only shows the family members how to communicate with each other well, but also helps them know more things,such as gratitude,housework sharing. Family education equips us with good qualities such as honesty, loyalty and integrity, which you can't just learn from the school. From my point of view, family education is a good method of cultivating talents, and can help a person form good behavior. For example, a little kid is not able to tell the difference between right and wrong, but family education can help him determine what should be done and what should not be done. In summary, family education is very important to everyone. （二） 请以“My attitude towards pocket money”为题写一篇短文。 Use the following points as a guide. a. Is it a good idea for parents to give children pocket money? Why or why not? b.How do you manage your pocket money? c. How can you spend your pocket money wisely? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 My attitude towards pocket money At our age,we start to learn to be independent. One of the lessons is to learn how to spend pocket money properly.Therefore,I do suggest that parents should give their children some pocket money. In order to spend it properly, I have my ways. First of all, I always make a detailed plan on how to spend the money wisely when I get it from my parents. Secondly, I find it important to save some money every month.By doing this,I am able to donate some money to the poor people who needs money to live. What's more, I can have enough money to buy birthday presents for my parents and friends. In a word, pocket money should be given to us students and at the same time we should learn to make good use of it. （三） 请以“My trouble”为题写一篇短文。 Use the following points as a guide. a. What is/was your trouble in your life/study? b. How do/will/did you face the trouble? (Give at least two ideas.) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 My trouble We'll meet with many kinds of difficulties in our life. We should try our best to face them, then we will make progress. When I was a little girl, I was very shy. I was afraid to say something in front of strangers. I felt nervous and frightened. One day, my mother told me a story. It was about a man who was famous for his speech. I was surprised to know that when he was a little boy, he couldn't say a word in public. My mother told me:"Believe yourself, and everything will succeed." I remember what my mum said to me and will never forget it. Now,I am good at making a speech. I want to tell all the shy girls: Just be confident. （四） 请以“My view on pet-keeping”为题写一篇短文。 Questions for reference: a. What are the advantages or disadvantages of keeping a pet? b. What's your opinion on pet-keeping? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 My view on pet-keeping Nowadays, life is becoming better and better. Many people choose to keep a pet. In my opinion, there are both advantages and disadvantages of pet-keeping. First, animals are our friends. If you have a pet, you won't feel lonely any longer. You will always have a faithful animal friend to play with. You will also have a merry heart. A report says that people who keep pets usually live longer than those who do not. Besides, a pet like a dog can also be very helpful. A guide dog can guide the way for the blind. What's more, some dogs can even look after babies! Now you see, I'm in favor of keeping a pet. However, you have to spend a lot of money on your pet's food monthly. And when they fall ill, you have to take them to the vet. So the owner must have enough patience and a high sense of responsibility. （五） 请以“When I met a difficulty”为题写一篇短文。 Use the following points as a guide. a. What difficulty did you meet? b. Describe how you faced and overcame it. c. How did you feel after you overcame it? 提示： overcome (overcame,overcome)v.克服 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 When I met a difficulty There's no shortage of difficulties in our life. Once I attended an English contest, I was asked to memorize one hundred passages. Most words in the passages were the ones I had never seen before and the passages were very long. Because I spent all my spare time on the English contest, my grades for other subjects on the school report were not as good as before. Sometimes I even lost the interest to go on. However, I chose not to give up and I won a prize for it at last. Difficulties are like the thorns of the rose, which make the rose more glamorous. We shouldn't be afraid of them. All we should do is to face them bravely and try our best to overcome them. In fact, they're not so hard as we think. （六） 在生活中，鼓励性的言语，会对他人起到激励作用。请以此话题写一篇演讲稿，分享自己的一段经历。 Ladies and gentlemen, How do words influence others? Let me tell you one of my experiences. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 When I was in Junior One, I felt it hard to learn math and even wanted to give it up.But one day,my math teacher, Mrs Liu came up to me and had a conversation with me.She said,“As long as you show interest in it and work hard, I am sure you can do a good job.”From then on,I began to have confidence in myself and finally I made great progress and kept up with my classmates. From the experience, I really felt the great power of words. I think we should make good use of words to encourage others rather than hurt them, because words can influence people a lot. $ Unit 3 Family ties 家庭相册介绍 单元写作精练 【写作主题】 ✍家庭相册介绍 介绍家庭相册。挑选几张家庭照片，描述照片里的人物、拍摄场景，回忆照片背后温暖小故事。可以描写家人性格，讲讲家人如何互相支持。练习名词所有格。行文抒发亲情，表达家人之间彼此陪伴、互相扶持的珍贵。你可以写写爸爸妈妈、兄弟姐妹日常相处细节，说说家人对你的鼓励。结构：相册开篇介绍、照片故事、家人品质、感悟亲情，表达珍惜与家人相伴的时光。 📚【词汇积累】 1. family ties 亲情纽带 2. photo album 相册 3. family member 家庭成员 4. support each other 互相支持 5. warm memory 温暖回忆 6. take photos 拍照 7. share happiness and sadness 同甘共苦 8. love and care 爱与关怀 9. family dinner 家庭聚餐 10. be proud of 为……感到骄傲 11. daily communication 日常沟通 12. cherish time 珍惜时光 13. a story behind the photo 照片背后的故事 14. understand each other 互相理解 15. family love 亲情 💡【句式积累】 1. This photo album keeps all my warm family memories.这本相册保存着我所有温暖的家庭回忆。 2. Family ties connect every member in my family.亲情纽带联结家里每一位成员。 3. In this picture, my parents and I are having a family dinner.这张照片里，我和父母正在家庭聚餐。 4. My family always support each other when we meet trouble.遇到困难时，家人总会彼此扶持。 5. We share our happiness and sadness together.我们一同分享喜悦，分担难过。 6. My parents’ love gives me lots of power.父母的爱给予我很多力量。 7. I learn to understand every member of my family.我学着理解家里的每一个人。 8. I am really proud of my warm family.我为我温暖的家庭感到十分骄傲。 9. Every photo has a sweet story behind it.每张照片背后都藏着甜蜜的故事。 10. I will cherish every minute with my family. 我会珍惜和家人相伴的每一分钟。 如何做好有效沟通一直是家长头疼的问题。如今，越来越多的家长更加倾向于做“朋友型”的家长，与孩子互相学习，共同成长。与父母沟通也是孩子们需要认真思考的问题。请写出你与父母相处中遇到的问题，你是怎么解决的？ 提示词: communicate with; have different ideas 要求： 1．条理清楚，行文连贯；2．不能出现真实的人名和地名；3．词数 70。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1. 写作两大核心内容，缺一不可 ①问题：和父母看法不同（have different ideas），难以沟通 ②解决方式：主动冷静交流、换位思考、耐心表达想法 2. 必须用上提示词 communicate with 和 have different ideas 3. 时态：描述过往矛盾多用一般过去时；总结经验用一般现在时 4. 词数：70词左右，不宜过长；禁止真实人名、校名、地名 行文结构规划 第一段：总起，青少年常会和父母沟通存在障碍 第二段：举例，我经常和父母拥有不同想法，容易争执 第三段：写明自己的解决办法 + 感悟（有效沟通促进互相理解） As teenagers, we may often have difficulties communicating with our parents. In the past, I always had different ideas from my parents and argued with them easily. Later, I realized shouting couldn’t solve problems. I began to calm down and communicate with them patiently. I shared my true feelings and tried to understand their worries. Gradually, we respect each other more. I learn that good communication is the key to getting along well. 1. 结构亮点 逻辑链条完整：存在沟通难题→曾经的矛盾→改进方法→收获感悟，完美匹配题目要求“写出问题+如何解决”。 2. 得分关键点 ✅ 精准使用两个规定提示词：communicate with、have different ideas 3. 加分词汇与短语 1. have difficulties doing sth. 做某事有困难 2. argue with sb. 和某人争吵 3. calm down 冷静下来 4. patiently adv. 耐心地 5. the key to ……的关键 6. get along well 和睦相处 4. 优质句型 Later, I realized shouting couldn’t solve problems.宾语从句，提升作文档次，避免简单句堆砌。 【基础必做】 一、汉译英（主题要点翻译） 1. 亲情；家庭纽带 2. 无言的爱 3. 评价故事中的人物 4. 名词所有格 5. 家庭内部交流 6. 倾听事例 7. 委婉表达语言 8. 一场赛跑 9. 找到作者的观点 10. 写一段关于家人支持的短文 二、句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型1：It’s one’s duty to do sth. 例句：It’s my duty to look after my family members. (1) 体谅父母是我们的责任。 (2) 关心家中长辈是每个人的责任。 句型2：What makes sb. …is… 例句：What makes our family warm is silent love. (1) 让家庭紧密相连的是彼此的理解。 (2) 让父母感到欣慰的是我们不断成长。 句型3：share sth. with sb. 例句：I often share my feelings with my parents. (1) 我愿意和家人分享生活中的喜怒哀乐。 (2) 弟弟常常和我分享他学校的趣事。 句型4：sb.’s + 名词所有格 例句：My mother’s love stays with me all the time. (1) 爸爸的默默支持陪伴我一路前行。 (2) 爷爷奶奶的叮嘱温暖着我的每一天。 句型5：be thankful to sb. for sth. 例句：I am thankful to my family for their love. (1) 我十分感激父母给予我的陪伴。 (2) 他感激家人永远愿意倾听自己。 【提升必做】 （一） 请以“The importance of family education”为题写一篇短文。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 （二） 请以“My attitude towards pocket money”为题写一篇短文。 Use the following points as a guide. a. Is it a good idea for parents to give children pocket money? Why or why not? b.How do you manage your pocket money? c. How can you spend your pocket money wisely? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 （三） 请以“My trouble”为题写一篇短文。 Use the following points as a guide. a. What is/was your trouble in your life/study? b. How do/will/did you face the trouble? (Give at least two ideas.) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 （四） 请以“My view on pet-keeping”为题写一篇短文。 Questions for reference: a. What are the advantages or disadvantages of keeping a pet? b. What's your opinion on pet-keeping? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 （五） 请以“When I met a difficulty”为题写一篇短文。 Use the following points as a guide. a. What difficulty did you meet? b. Describe how you faced and overcame it. c. How did you feel after you overcame it? 提示： overcome (overcame,overcome)v.克服 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 （六） 在生活中，鼓励性的言语，会对他人起到激励作用。请以此话题写一篇演讲稿，分享自己的一段经历。 Ladies and gentlemen, How do words influence others? Let me tell you one of my experiences. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $