摘要:
该初中英语八年级上册课件聚焦大单元话题写作,以“刷写作”为核心,从话题词汇积累(如“successful”“be good at”)和佳句仿写(结合教材原句如“I suppose…”进行仿写)切入,搭建基础学习支架,再通过范文进阶攻略(含审题、列提纲、初级到高阶表达升级)构建写作逻辑,最终以实战强化训练(如“The Change Made Me…”征文)实现从词句到篇章的能力提升。
其亮点在于采用分层进阶式训练,融合语言能力(词句储备与仿写应用)、思维品质(审题分析与提纲构建)和学习能力(方法指导)。例如佳句仿写紧扣教材原句,写作进阶对比初级与高阶表达差异,实战训练结合真实情境任务。这种支架式教学帮助学生提升写作逻辑与表达准确性,教师可借助可编辑课件及超链接跳转功能优化教学流程。
内容正文:
英 语
八年级上册 WY
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Unit 1 This is me
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第一阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.成功的 ____________
2.卓越的;极好的 ___________
3.满意的;满足的 ___________
4.代替 ____________
5.擅长 _______________________
6.坚持 __________
successful
excellent
satisfied
instead of
be good at/do well in
stick to
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】I suppose everyone has something they don’t like about
themselves.(I suppose…)
→仿写:我认为我会变得越来越好。
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8.【教材原句】I have already learnt that I am what I am.(现在完成时)
→仿写:这段经历把他变成了一个勇敢的男孩。
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I suppose I will get/become better and better.
The experience has turned him into a brave boy.
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9.【教材原句】Su trained hard and quickly became one of the fastest runners in
Asia.(one of the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数)
→仿写:他努力学习,成了我们班最好的学生之一。
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10.【教材原句】Nothing is impossible as long as you try and stick to it.
(as long as)
→仿写:只要坚持练习,每个人都能成功。
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He studied hard and became one of the best students in our class.
Everyone can be successful as long as they keep practising.
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第二阶 范文进阶攻略
[2026北京大兴区调研]生活和学习充满了很多挑战,这些挑战是每个人成
长过程中必不可少的经历。假定你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你在生活
中是怎样应对挑战的以及有哪些收获。内容包括:
1.What kind of challenge did you ever face in your life?
2.How did you face the challenge in your life?
3.What have you achieved?
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注意:
1.词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
It is important for us to face challenges in our lives.___
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第1步 审题目
体 裁:记叙文
时 态:以一般现在时、一般过去时为主
人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:生活中遇到的挑战、如何面对挑战、收获了什么
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第2步 列提纲
本文适宜采用的作文结构为总—分—总。
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第3步 写作进阶
It is important for us to face
challenges in our lives. I once
faced a big challenge in learning
English.My difficulties were
remembering new words and
understanding grammar.① It is important for us to face challenges in
our lives. I once faced a big challenge in
learning English. I had great difficulty
in. .remembering new words and
understanding grammar.①(用I had great
difficultyin代替My difficulties were,升级短
语)
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To solve the problem, I made
a plan. I decided to practise
English every day.I read English
articles aloud and wrote diaries in
English.② When I made mistakes,
I wrote them down and analysed
them carefully. To solve the problem, I made a plan. I
decided to practise English every day. I
read English articles aloud. .in the
morning. .and wrote diaries in English. .in
the evening.②(添加in the morning和in the
evening,丰富语境) When I made mistakes,
I wrote them down and analysed them
carefully.
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With hard work, I have made
great progress.Now, I can
remember words more easily and
use grammar correctly.③ I also
become more confident in speaking
English. Facing challenges makes
me stronger and better. It helps
me grow both in study and in life. With hard work, I have made great
progress. Now, I can. .not only. .remember
words more easily. .but. .also. .use grammar
correctly.③(使用“not only… but also…”代
替and,升级词汇) I also become more
confident in speaking English. Facing
challenges makes me stronger and better. It
helps me grow both in study and in life.
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第三阶 实战强化训练
成长的道路上,我们努力改变以提升自我。假如你是李华,你校英语广播站
正在开展主题为“The Change Made Me… (改变让我……)”的征文活动。请参
考图文信息,积极投稿。#1
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要求:1.补全标题;
2.内容积极向上,不少于80词;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
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【参考范文】
The Change Made Me Stronger
Life is full of challenges, but how we handle them shows who we are.
Last semester, I had trouble with public speaking, often feeling
nervous and unprepared.However, I decided to face this fear.
I joined the school’s debating club, making myself speak in front
of others often.At first, it was scary.My voice shook, and I forgot my
points.But with each practice, I became more confident. I learnt to
organise my thoughts better and speak clearly.
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This change turned me from a shy student into a confident speaker.
Now, I take part in class discussions and even enjoy giving
presentations.The experience taught me that growth comes from facing
fear and working through challenges.
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