摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦八年级上册Unit 3“Our digital lives”主题写作,通过话题词汇积累(如convenient、be addicted to)和教材原句仿写(如bring big changes to句型)搭建基础支架,再以范文结构分析和真题实战训练构建进阶脉络,帮助学生从词句储备过渡到篇章写作。
其亮点在于以语言能力培养为核心,通过分层训练(高分词句-范文攻略-实战强化)提升写作表达,结合思维品质(如观点对比分析、三段式结构搭建)和学习能力(仿写练习、提纲列写)。实例包括广东期中真题“电脑使用调查”“智能手机正确使用”写作指导,助力学生系统掌握写作方法,为教师提供可直接应用的分层教学资源。
内容正文:
英 语
八年级上册 HN
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Unit 3 Our digital lives
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课时同步训练
Section 3 Speaking &Writing
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写作
第一阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.便利的 ____________
2.除此之外 _________
3.积极的 __________
convenient
besides
positive
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4.消极的 __________
5.影响 ________
6.评论 _________
7.沉迷于 ________________
8.设置时间限制 _________________
negative
effect
comment
be addicted to
set time limits
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】The internet has brought big changes to everyday life.(bring big
changes to)
→仿写:这项发明将给盲人的生活带来巨大的变化。
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10.【教材原句】In the future, even more things will be connected to the
internet…(be connected to)
→仿写:这个应用程序可以连接到你的手机来跟踪健康情况。
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This invention will bring big changes to the lives of blind people.
This app can be connected to your phone to track fitness.
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11.【教材原句】It is easier to find information online than in print books.
(it’s+形容词比较级+to do sth)
→仿写:学习如何对待彼此的差异对我们来说更重要。
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It is more important for us to learn how to treat each other’s
differences.
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第二阶 范文进阶攻略
[2026广东广州期中]随着科技的进步,电脑越来越普遍,几乎每家每户都
有电脑。我们对第一中学初二年级的1,000名学生就使用电脑的观点进行了采访。
请根据下面表格中的内容,以“A survey on computer use”为主题,用英语写一篇
作文。
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支持 1.60%的学生认为使用电脑是好的。
2.我们可以使用电脑上网查资料,学习英语。
3.请自行补充。
反对 1.40%的学生认为使用电脑是不好的。
2.沉迷玩电脑游戏浪费时间。
3.请自行补充。
你的观点 ……
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注意:
1.词数要求:100词左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Recently, we interviewed 1,000 students in Grade 8 in No.1 Middle School on
computer use. Here is the result.
第1步 审题目
体 裁:说明文
时 态:以一般现在时为主
人 称:以第三人称为主
内容要点:学生使用电脑的观点采访及个人看法
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第2步 列提纲
本文适宜采用的作文结构为
三段式分步介绍。
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第3步 写作进阶#6
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Recently, we interviewed 1,000
students in Grade 8 in No.1 Middle
School on computer use. Here is the
result.
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Recently, we interviewed 1,000
students in Grade 8 in No.1 Middle
School on computer use. Here is the
result.
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The survey shows that 60% of
the students support using
computers.They believe computers can
help us look for information and
learning English.① The survey shows that 60% of the
students support using computers.They
believe computers. .are helpful
for. .looking. .for information and learning
English.(使用be helpful for doing sth代
替help sb do sth,升级表达)①
续表
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Besides, computers can also be a
useful tool for us in daily lives.②
However, 40% of the students are
against it. They argue that some
students easily get addicted to playing
computer games and waste time. Also,
staring at the screen for too long may
harm their eyesight.
Besides,computers can also be a
useful tool for us in daily lives
like. .providing a good way to relax. .and
broadening our horizons through various
online resources.(使用provide a good
way to do sth丰富语境)② However,
40% of the
students are against it. They argue
that some students easily get addicted to
playing computer games and waste time.
Also, staring at the screen for too long
may harm their eyesight.
续表
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In my opinion, computers are
useful tools if we use them
properly.We should avoid playing
games too much and use computers to
study instead.③ In my opinion, computers are useful
tools if we use them properly.It
is. .very. .necessary for us to avoid. .playing
games too much and use computers to
study instead.(使用句型“it’s+adj.+for sb
to do sth”升级句子)③
续表
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第三阶 实战强化训练
【2026广东深圳期中】现在,几乎人人都拥有智能手机(smartphone)。智能
手机在带给我们便利的同时,也造成了一些问题。请根据表格的内容,以“How to
use smartphones properly?”为题写一篇短文。
优点 1.就像一台电脑,可以做很多事情,例如学习英语等。
2.与家人、朋友保持联系。
缺点 1.玩手机游戏过多,花费太多时间。
2.长期使用手机导致健康问题。
建议 ……(请你补充至少1个建议)
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要求:1.词数:100左右;
2.可以适当发挥,使短文连贯,通顺;
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分;
4.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to use smartphones properly?
Nowadays, nearly everyone has a smartphone.____
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【参考范文】
How to use smartphones properly?
Nowadays, nearly everyone has a smartphone.It makes our life more
convenient,but it also causes some problems.
On the one hand, there are some advantages.A smartphone is like a
computer.We can do many things on it, such as searching for information,
learning English, and so on.Besides, it is convenient for us to keep in
touch with family members and friends.
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On the other hand, there are some disadvantages.Some students spend
too much time playing phone games instead of studying.It is bad for
their health and study.In addition, people talk less to others when
they use their phones for too long.
How to use the smartphone properly? In my opinion, we should
control the time of using it.So for students, we should try to reduce
the time of using smartphones to protect our health.
【解析】链接狂K
There be句型的一般将来时的详细讲解见狂K重点P18。
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