应用文话题之保护环境（26年宁波二模） 讲义-2027届高三英语一轮复习专项

该高中英语讲义聚焦高考应用文写作核心考点，围绕邮件体裁的观点表达与理由阐述，按题目分析、写作思路、语言表达、范文解析的逻辑架构组织知识点。通过考点梳理明确体裁主题与内容要点，方法指导强化理由阐述角度（视觉效果、信息传递等），真题训练结合参考范文及模板应用，帮助学生构建写作框架，突破表达难点，体现复习的系统性和针对性。 资料特色在于采用分层论证教学法，如范文详解中从视觉细节（地球形象、污染源）、问题细节（环境危机）到口号解析（双关手法、深层含义）的递进分析，培养学生思维品质与语言能力。结合环保主题渗透文化意识，通过可迁移模板提升学习效率，确保学生在有限时间内掌握高分策略，为教师把控复习节奏、提升学生应考能力提供实用指导。

应用文话题之保护环境 高三一轮复习应用文写作 【题目分析】 体裁：邮件，回复朋友征求意见的请求 主题：世界地球日海报设计大赛，二选一并说明理由 内容要点： 明确选择：海报1（“There is no Planet B”）或海报2（“OUR ACTIONS, OUR FUTURE”） 说明理由：至少2个有说服力的原因（如视觉效果、信息传递、情感冲击、与主题契合度等） 【写作思路】 第一段：开篇回应—表示高兴听到他参赛，并愿意提供意见 第二段：做出选择并说明理由—直接点明选择（如：I personally prefer Version 1/2）给出2-3条理由 理由1：从海报设计本身（简洁性、冲击力、色彩等） 理由2：从信息传递效果（警示性、号召力等）可适当比较两个版本（但不贬低未选版本） 第三段：结尾祝福—预祝他取得好成绩，表达鼓励注意：保持朋友间的亲切语气 【遣词造句】 have a strong visual impact有强烈的视觉冲击力 get the message across effectively有效地传递信息 leave a long-lasting impression留下持久的印象 thought-provoking引人深思的 urgent and powerful紧迫而有力的 a sense of responsibility责任感 catch one’s attention at first glance一眼就吸引注意力 carry deeper significance承载更深层的含义 straightforward and direct简单直接 Inspire/motivate people to take action激励人们采取行动 raise awareness of...提高对……的意识 compared to/with the other version与另一个版本相比 表达选择 After careful consideration, I would go with/prefer/give my ticket to/offer my preference for Version 1, as it delivers a more urgent and powerful message. Personally, I find Version 2 more appealing because of its optimistic and action-oriented(adj. 行动导向的；注重行动的；务实的；以行动为核心的) tone. 说明理由（针对海报1 “There is no Planet B”） The slogan “There is no Planet B” is short, sharp, and thought-provoking — it immediately reminds people that we have only one Earth to protect.Compared to Version 2, Version 1 creates a stronger sense of urgency, which is exactly what World Earth Day is eager to convey to wake people up. 说明理由（针对海报2 “OUR ACTIONS, OUR FUTURE”） Version 2 focuses on human agency(人的能动性)—“OUR ACTIONS, OUR FUTURE” encourages everyone to take responsibility, which is more positive and motivating.The use of “OUR” creates a sense of collective(adj 集体的，共同的) belonging, making people feel that their individual actions truly matter. 结尾祝福 Whichever you choose, I’m sure your creativity will shine. Good luck with the contest! Hope my suggestions help. Can’t wait to see your final design! 【参考范文】 Possible Version 1 Dear Chris, Glad to hear you’re participating in the World Earth Day poster contest! Between the two versions, I highly recommend the first one, “There is no Planet B.” I prefer this design for two main reasons. Visually, the poster features a crying and sweating Earth, with factory chimneys[|ˈtʃɪmni|] emitting toxic smoke on its top. It vividly highlights the severe environmental crises we are facing, such as global warming and air pollution. More importantly, the slogan itself is brilliant. By cleverly playing on the phrase “Plan B”, it sends a powerful warning to the public: our planet is irreplaceable, and we have no backup home(alternative home) to escape to. Therefore, we must stop the destruction before it’s too late. I believe this thought-provoking poster will surely leave a lasting impression on the judges.Best of luck! Yours, Li Hua 范文1详解★ 细节类别 文中示例 数量 / 类型 视觉细节 a crying and sweating Earth, factory chimneys emitting toxic smoke 2 个具体画面元素 问题细节 severe environmental crises, global warming, air pollution 3 个具体环境问题 口号解析细节 playing on the phrase "Plan B", irreplaceable, no backup home 3 个解析角度 情感效果细节 thought-provoking, leave a lasting impression on the judges 2 个效果预测 逻辑连接词 Visually, More importantly, Therefore 3 处逻辑分层 细节技巧逐层分析 1. 视觉细节：让海报“可见” Visually, the poster features a crying and sweating Earth, with factory chimneys emitting toxic smoke on its top. 作用： · 拟人化细节：“crying and sweating”（哭泣且流汗）赋予地球人类情感，让读者产生共情 · 污染源具体化：“factory chimneys emitting toxic smoke”（工厂烟囱排放有毒烟雾）点明破坏者 · 空间关系：“on its top”（在地球顶部）明确位置，画面感强 技巧要点：描述图像时，给出“主体+状态+周围环境”，读者就能在脑海中重构画面。 2. 问题细节：让危机“可感” It vividly highlights the severe environmental crises we are facing, such as global warming and air pollution. 作用： · 概括+举例：先点出“严重环境危机”，再列出“全球变暖、空气污染”两个具体问题 · 与画面呼应：烟囱冒烟对应空气污染，地球出汗流泪暗示全球变暖 技巧要点：不要只说“environmental problems”，要给出1-2个具体问题名称，让抽象概念落地。 3. 口号解析细节：让创意“可解” More importantly, the slogan itself is brilliant. By cleverly playing on the phrase “Plan B”, it sends a powerful warning to the public: our planet is irreplaceable, and we have no backup home to escape to. 作用： · 手法点明：“playing on the phrase”（巧妙运用双关）指出设计手法 · 深层含义：不仅解释字面意思，更指出隐含警告——地球不可替代，没有备选家园 · 逻辑递进：“irreplaceable” → “no backup home” → “must stop destruction” 技巧要点：解读口号时，要说出“用了什么手法”+“传达了什么深层信息”，而非简单重复口号内容。 4. 效果预测细节：让推荐“有底气” I believe this thought-provoking poster will surely leave a lasting impression on the judges. 作用： ·定性精准：“thought-provoking”（引人深思）点出海报的核心价值 · 效果具体：“leave a lasting impression on the judges”（给评委留下持久印象）明确目标受众和预期效果 技巧要点：结尾不要只说“it’s good”，要预测作品对特定受众（如评委）的具体影响。 5. 逻辑连接词：让论证“有层次” Visually, ... More importantly, ... Therefore, ... 作用： ·Visually：从视觉层面分析（第一层） · More importantly：过渡到口号层面（更重要的第二层） ·Therefore：引出结论（行动呼吁） 技巧要点：使用递进式逻辑词（Visually → More importantly → Therefore）让论证层次分明，说服力递增。 段落 细节类型 功能 第 1 段 回应 + 选择 快速表态，点明推荐对象 第 2 段第 1 句 总起 说明有两个理由 第 2 段第 2 句 视觉细节（地球状态 + 污染源）+ 问题细节 描述画面，说明反映的问题 第 2 段第 3 句 口号解析（双关手法 + 深层含义） 解读创意，传递核心信息 第 2 段第 4 句 结论呼吁 基于以上分析提出行动建议 第 3 段 效果预测 表达对评委影响的信心 Possible Version 2 Dear Chris, Glad to hear you’re participating in the World Earth Day poster contest! Both versions are fantastic, but I favor the second one, “OUR ACTIONS, OUR FUTURE.” What makes this poster stand out is the perfect combination of its image and slogan. In terms of the image, it presents a hopeful scene where a pair of hands gently holds the Earth. On top of the globe, leafy trees and a bright sun vividly symbolize a green, sustainable future. Moreover, the slogan perfectly matches the drawing. Written entirely in bold capitals(大写), the words create a strong impact, conveying a highly positive message that the destiny of our planet literally lies in our own hands. I’m sure this inspiring design will shine in the contest and motivate more people to take concrete(=specific/detailed) eco-friendly actions. Good luck! Yours, Li Hua 【可迁移的“海报/设计推荐类”邮件细节模板】 根据这篇范文，可以提炼出以下模板： 第一段：回应+选择 Glad to hear you’re participating in [活动]. Between the two versions, I highly recommend [选项名称]. 第二段：分层论证 I prefer this design for two main reasons. Visually, [画面描述：主体+状态+环境]. It vividly highlights [反映的问题]. More importantly, the [核心元素] itself is brilliant. By [设计手法], it sends a powerful message: [深层含义]. Therefore, [行动呼吁]. 第三段：效果预测 I believe this [形容词] design will surely leave a lasting impression on [目标受众]. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $