Unit 7 Feel the rhythm 单元话题书面表达10篇-2026-2027学年人教版九年级英语上册

**基本信息** Unit 7音乐主题单元书面表达练习，含10篇分层训练（基础5篇/重难5篇），适配初中英语单元复习，强化语言运用与文化意识。 **题型特征** |题型|题量/分值|知识覆盖|命题特色| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |书面表达|10篇|单元核心句型（定语从句、现在完成时）、音乐主题词汇（rhythm, emotion等）|基础练聚焦个人体验（如“音乐与我”描述影响），巩固语言能力；重难练融入调查分析（如问卷调查结果阐述）与文化对比（如流行与古典音乐选择），提升思维品质与文化意识，贴合中考书面表达情境化、层次化命题趋势|

Unit 7 Feel the rhythm 单元话题书面表达练习 单元话题：音乐 本资料共10篇专题训练，从上到下依次按照难度分为基础语篇巩固练和重难语篇提升练 基础语篇巩固练 聚焦基础，巩固自我 重难语篇提升练 专注提升，挑战自我 ◇考点 01 基础语篇巩固练 1．在英语课上，你们班开展了一次以 “The Power of Music” 为主题的讨论。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文，向校英语报投稿，分享你对音乐力量的看法。要点提示： 1.音乐对你生活的影响（如：帮助放松、表达情感、激励人心等）； 2.一位你敬佩的音乐家（如：肖邦、贝多芬等）及其贡献； 3.你对音乐价值的理解（至少两点）。 要求： 1.包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 2.注意使用本单元核心句型（定语从句、现在完成时等）； 3.词数100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇： rhythm 节奏；relax 放松；express 表达；emotion 情感；inspire 激励；genius 天才；contribution 贡献 开头： Music is a universal language that speaks to everyone. I believe music has great power in our lives. Here are my thoughts on this topic. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假设你是李华，你校英语报正在举办“音乐与我”征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈音乐对你生活的影响。 提示要点： 1. 你平时喜欢什么类型的音乐； 2. 音乐给你的生活带来了什么 (如放松、鼓励、陪伴等)； 3. 你对音乐的感受或感悟。 要求： 1. 80词左右； 2. 可适当发挥，使内容充实、行文连贯； 3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇： rhythm (节奏)，melody (旋律)，relax (放松)，encourage (鼓励)，companion (陪伴) Music and Me Music is an important part of my life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．学校英语广播站开展主题征文“Feel the Rhythm of Chinese Folk Music”，请你投稿。 要点： 1. 你最喜欢的传统乐器/乐曲（如二泉映月、古筝）； 2. 这首音乐带给你的感受； 3. 号召同学们多了解传统民乐，传承文化。 要求：80词左右，语法正确，语句通顺。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．音乐将世间万事万物带进了美好的时空。每每听着音乐, 我们就会忘记所有的烦恼和不快。音乐有着无穷魅力! 音乐是世界上最美的语言! 请你以“Music Makes Me ________” 为题写一篇英语短文。 要求: 1. 请补全标题; 2. 短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息; 3. 词数80—100。 Music Makes Me ________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．作家雨果说过：“开启人类智慧的钥匙有三把，一是字母，二是数字，三是音符。”这足以体现音乐对人类发展的影响。请你根据以下要点和要求，以“Music”为题，写一篇短文。 要点： 1.音乐使人充满活力，让人快乐； 2.没有音乐，生活就没有乐趣； 3.你最喜欢的音乐及原因； 4.你不能忍受的音乐及原因。 要求： 1.短文必须包括所有要点内容，可适当增加细节； 2.词数100左右。 Music _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．作家雨果说过：“开启人类智慧的钥匙有三把, 一是字母, 二是数字, 三是音符。”从这句话中, 可得知音乐对人的影响。请你根据以下思维导图的提示, 以“Music”为题, 写一篇短文, 参加学校的英语作文竞赛。 要求： 1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息; 2. 不能照抄原文; 不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名; 3. 语句连贯, 词数90左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出, 不计入总词数。 Music Music is very important in our lives. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．音乐在生活中无处不在。音乐可以调剂紧张单调的生活，可以净化人的灵魂，可以给人精神鼓舞……你喜欢什么样的音乐呢？音乐给你带来什么样的体验呢？你跟音乐之间一定有记忆深刻的故事吧？请你以A story between music and me为题，把你和音乐之间的故事分享给大家吧！ 要求：（1）描述发生在你和音乐之间的一个故事。 （2）你喜欢什么类型的音乐，音乐对你有什么影响。 （3）字数在100词左右，不能出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 A story between music and me ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．音乐将世间万物带进了美好的时空，它在我们的日常生活中扮演着重要的角色，每听到音乐，我们就会忘记所有的烦恼和不快。你校英语俱乐部在下周的主题例会上会对喜欢的音乐进行讨论，作为俱乐部成员，请你根据下面的提示写一篇文章和大家分享。 1. 要点提示： (1) What kinds of music do you like? And why? (描述三种不同类型的音乐及原因) (2 )Which do you like best and what have you got from it? (3) As a middle school student, are you supposed to listen to music in your spare time? What are your opinions and the reasons? 2. 写作要求： (1) 短文要包含所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； (2) 文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校； (3) 字数80-120。 My Favourite Music _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ◇考点 02 重难语篇提升练 9．课间播放音乐不仅能为学生们带来愉悦的听觉享受，更能对学生的学习和生活产生积极的影响。假设你是某国际中学负责播放课间音乐的学生李辉，为了解你校学生喜欢的音乐类型，上周你对本校500名学生进行了问卷调查。请你以“What kind of music do you like best?”为题，根据统计结果写一篇英语短文并阐述你的喜好及原因。 提示： What kind of music do you like best? 40% Country Music 15% Rock Music 10% Electronic Music 35% Folk Music 要求： 1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 100词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：relieve减轻 What kind of music do you like best? Last week, I did a survey among 500 students in my school on the topic" What kind of music do you like best?" Here are the results. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．音乐能够帮助丰富学生的生活，也能够帮助学生调节情绪，减轻学习压力。在下周的英语社团课上，老师计划请同学们谈谈自己最喜欢的音乐。请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下两种音乐中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文，陈述你的理由，准备在英语社团活动中发言。 Pop music Classical music Reasons help me relax help me study better cheer me up teach me about history and different cultures ... ... How you feel about the music ... ... 写作要求： 1.文中需包含所选音乐的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 There are many different kinds of music in the world. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 7 Feel the rhythm 单元话题书面表达练习 单元话题：音乐 本资料共10篇专题训练，从上到下依次按照难度分为基础语篇巩固练和重难语篇提升练 基础语篇巩固练 聚焦基础，巩固自我 重难语篇提升练 专注提升，挑战自我 ◇考点 01 基础语篇巩固练 1．在英语课上，你们班开展了一次以 “The Power of Music” 为主题的讨论。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文，向校英语报投稿，分享你对音乐力量的看法。要点提示： 1.音乐对你生活的影响（如：帮助放松、表达情感、激励人心等）； 2.一位你敬佩的音乐家（如：肖邦、贝多芬等）及其贡献； 3.你对音乐价值的理解（至少两点）。 要求： 1.包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 2.注意使用本单元核心句型（定语从句、现在完成时等）； 3.词数100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇： rhythm 节奏；relax 放松；express 表达；emotion 情感；inspire 激励；genius 天才；contribution 贡献 开头： Music is a universal language that speaks to everyone. I believe music has great power in our lives. Here are my thoughts on this topic. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Music is a universal language that speaks to everyone. I believe music has great power in our lives. Here are my thoughts on this topic. First, music influences my life in many ways. When I feel stressed, I listen to some soft music to relax. When I feel sad, cheerful songs can lift my spirits. Music helps me express emotions. Second, I admire Chopin, the great Polish composer and pianist. His music helped build national pride and inspired people during difficult times. He has made remarkable contributions to music. In my opinion, the value of music lies in two aspects. First, it connects people from different cultures and backgrounds. Second, it gives us hope and strength. In short, music is not just entertainment—it’s a powerful force that shapes our lives and our hearts. 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，时态以一般现在时为主，介绍音乐家贡献时可用一般过去时。 明确要点：音乐对个人生活的影响（放松、表达情感、激励等）；敬佩的音乐家及其贡献；对音乐价值的理解（至少两点）。 确定人称：第一人称（I/my）为主，谈及音乐家时使用第三人称（he/his）。 注意事项：需包含本单元核心句型（定语从句、现在完成时等），词数控制在100词左右，不得透露真实个人信息。 [第二步：构思布局] 开篇点题：利用已给出的开头，直接引出对音乐力量的看法。 主体展开：第一段写音乐对个人生活的具体影响；第二段写敬佩的音乐家及其贡献。 结尾升华：总结对音乐价值的理解（两点），并呼应开头，强调音乐是塑造生活的强大力量。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：音乐对生活的影响 影响方面：lift my spirits/ express my emotions/reduce my stress/inspire me to face difficulties 具体场景：When I feel stressed/When I am in a bad mood/During my study breaks 作用效果：Soft music makes me relaxed/Cheerful songs bring me joy/Music gives me courage and strength 要点二：敬佩的音乐家及其贡献 人物选择：Chopin (肖邦)/Beethoven (贝多芬)/Mozart (莫扎特) 身份描述：the great Polish composer and pianist/a famous German musician/a musical genius 主要贡献：His music inspired people during difficult times/He created many world-famous masterpieces/He has made remarkable contributions to music 要点三：对音乐价值的理解 价值体现一：It connects people from different cultures and backgrounds/It serves as a universal language/It helps people understand each other better 价值体现二：It gives us hope and strength/It brings peace to our minds/It is a powerful force that shapes our hearts 2．假设你是李华，你校英语报正在举办“音乐与我”征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈音乐对你生活的影响。 提示要点： 1. 你平时喜欢什么类型的音乐； 2. 音乐给你的生活带来了什么 (如放松、鼓励、陪伴等)； 3. 你对音乐的感受或感悟。 要求： 1. 80词左右； 2. 可适当发挥，使内容充实、行文连贯； 3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇： rhythm (节奏)，melody (旋律)，relax (放松)，encourage (鼓励)，companion (陪伴) Music and Me Music is an important part of my life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Music and Me Music is an important part of my life. I prefer soft pop music to other kinds of music. Its gentle rhythm and sweet melody always catch my heart. Music is my best companion. When I feel tired after study, it helps me relax completely. Whenever I meet difficulties and want to give up, powerful songs encourage me to keep moving forward. In my opinion, music carries my feelings. It warms my heart and makes my daily life full of joy. I will stay with music forever. 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：喜爱的音乐类型；音乐带来的作用 (放松、鼓励、陪伴)；个人感悟 确定人称：第一人称 (I/my) 注意事项：80词左右；开头已给出不计入总词数 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 第一段：点明音乐的重要性，说明喜爱轻柔流行乐及其旋律节奏特点，对应要点一 第二段：表明音乐的陪伴作用，分别体现放松、鼓励，对应要点二 第三段：抒发对音乐的感悟，总结全文升华主题，对应要点三 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：喜欢的音乐类型 核心表达：I prefer soft pop music to other kinds of music./Its gentle rhythm and sweet melody always catch my heart./I like folk music better than other music./It has warm rhythm and simple beautiful melody full of local stories./Rock music is my favorite./Its strong rhythm and excitement cheer me up easily.等 要点二：音乐给生活带来的影响 核心表达：Music is my best companion./When I feel tired after study, it helps me relax completely./Whenever I meet difficulties and want to give up, powerful songs encourage me to keep moving forward./It becomes my helpful companion./While I do homework, light music helps me stay focused.等 要点三：个人感受与感悟 核心表达：In my opinion, music carries my feelings./It warms my heart and makes my daily life full of joy./I will stay with music forever./I believe music will go with me all the time./It is a treasure I will never lose in my life.等 3．学校英语广播站开展主题征文“Feel the Rhythm of Chinese Folk Music”，请你投稿。 要点： 1. 你最喜欢的传统乐器/乐曲（如二泉映月、古筝）； 2. 这首音乐带给你的感受； 3. 号召同学们多了解传统民乐，传承文化。 要求：80词左右，语法正确，语句通顺。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 Feel the Rhythm of Chinese Folk Music My favorite folk music is Erquan Yingyue played on erhu, a famous piece created by the musician Abing. Its soft and slow rhythm touches my heart deeply every time I listen to it. While enjoying the gentle erhu sound, I can feel Abing’s hard life as well as his lasting strong love for life. This beautiful tune always calms me down and makes me fully relaxed. Traditional folk music is our precious cultural treasure. I sincerely hope more students will love, enjoy and spread these wonderful Chinese traditional rhythms. 写作步骤   [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体和时态：记叙文，以一般现在时为主。 明确要点：1.最喜欢的传统乐器/乐曲；2.音乐带来的感受；3.号召同学们多了解传统民乐，传承文化。 确定人称：第一人称（I, my, we, our）。 注意事项：词数80左右，语句通顺，语法正确。 [第二步：构思布局] 两段式结构： 第一段：点明最喜欢的乐曲及演奏乐器，介绍乐曲背景，描述听音乐时的感受（触动心灵、感到放松等）。 第二段：总结传统民乐的文化价值，呼吁同学们了解传统民乐，传承文化。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：乐曲与乐器 Erquan Yingyue/played on erhu/a famous piece created by musician Abing/my favorite folk music/played on the guzheng/Guangling San/a traditional Chinese instrument/with a long history等 要点二：音乐感受 soft and slow rhythm/touches my heart deeply/makes me fully relaxed/calms me down/feel Abing‘s hard life/strong love for life/brings peace to my mind/takes me into a beautiful world/helps me forget my worries/fills me with hope and strength等 要点三：号召与传承 precious cultural treasure/hope more students will love, enjoy and spread these wonderful traditions/discover the beauty of Chinese folk music/learn more about traditional music/pass it on to the next generation/take pride in our culture等 4．音乐将世间万事万物带进了美好的时空。每每听着音乐, 我们就会忘记所有的烦恼和不快。音乐有着无穷魅力! 音乐是世界上最美的语言! 请你以“Music Makes Me ________” 为题写一篇英语短文。 要求: 1. 请补全标题; 2. 短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息; 3. 词数80—100。 Music Makes Me ________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Music Makes Me Happy I like music very much. It gives me energy when I’m tired and it makes me happy when I’m sad. Every time I listen to music, I forget all my worries and unhappiness. It has endless charm and is the most beautiful language in the world. When I feel sad or stressed, music always helps me feel better. It makes me happy and brings joy to my life. I love music because it has the power to change my mood and make everything seem brighter. Music is the most beautiful language. Enjoy the music you like, and enjoy yourself! [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：英语记叙文（Music Makes Me Happy） 明确要点：补全标题+音乐治愈烦恼、舒缓心情、自带无穷魅力、是世界最美语言；词数80—100词，不出现真实人名校名 确定人称：第一人称I，一般现在时为主 注意事项：紧扣主题情感真挚，语句优美流畅，贴合初中难度，贴合题干优美抒情句式 [第二步：构思布局] 总分总结构 开头：补全标题，点明自己十分喜爱音乐，音乐治愈情绪 主体：描写聆听音乐时忘记烦恼压力，阐述音乐独特魅力与意义 结尾：升华主旨，赞美音乐是世间最美语言 [第三步：要点展开] 开篇点题：I love music deeply in my life./It warms my heart and changes my bad moods quickly.等 音乐作用：Whenever I listen to music, I leave all troubles behind./It drives away sadness and makes me relaxed all the time.等 音乐魅力：Music has amazing and endless beauty./It is the most wonderful language around the world.等 结尾感悟：It makes my life colourful and full of warmth./I will keep enjoying beautiful music forever.等 5．作家雨果说过：“开启人类智慧的钥匙有三把，一是字母，二是数字，三是音符。”这足以体现音乐对人类发展的影响。请你根据以下要点和要求，以“Music”为题，写一篇短文。 要点： 1.音乐使人充满活力，让人快乐； 2.没有音乐，生活就没有乐趣； 3.你最喜欢的音乐及原因； 4.你不能忍受的音乐及原因。 要求： 1.短文必须包括所有要点内容，可适当增加细节； 2.词数100左右。 Music _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文一 Music Music is like a good friend that makes us happy and full of energy. Just think, without music, life would be so boring! My favorite music is pop music because it’s usually catchy and easy to understand. It also reminds me of my friends and the good times we have. However, I don’t like music that is too loud or has a lot of noise. It can hurt my ears and make it hard to concentrate. Music is important to me. It’s a beautiful way to express feelings and it makes the world a more interesting place. 例文二 Music Music is a wonderful gift that brings happiness and energy to our lives. Without music, the world would be a very dull place. My personal favorite is pop music. I love how it’s easy to listen to and often has fun, memorable lyrics.  On the other hand, I find it hard to enjoy music that is too harsh or filled with noise. I prefer music that has a clear rhythm and a tune that I can hum along to. In conclusion, music is a universal language that speaks to people of all ages and cultures. It has the power to bring people together and create shared experiences. 写作步骤   [第一步：审题立意]   确定文体：议论文，时态以一般现在时为主 明确要点：音乐的重要性、最喜欢和不能忍受的音乐及原因   确定人称：第一人称和第三人称 [第二步：构思布局]   三段式结构：   开头段：介绍音乐的重要性 主体段：介绍你最喜欢和不能忍受的音乐及原因 结尾段：总结，再次强调音乐的重要性 [第三步：要点展开]   要点一：音乐的重要性 重要性：make us happy and full of energy/make any moment more fun/make us feel alive and excited/without music, life would be so boring等 要点二：最喜欢的音乐及原因 音乐：pop music/classical music等   原因：catchy and easy to understand/remind me of my friends and the good times we have/relaxing等   要点三：不能忍受的音乐及原因 音乐：music that is too loud or has a lot of noise/music with a lot of heavy metal or aggressive sounds等   原因：hurt my ears and make it hard to concentrate/overwhelming and not pleasing to the ears等 6．作家雨果说过：“开启人类智慧的钥匙有三把, 一是字母, 二是数字, 三是音符。”从这句话中, 可得知音乐对人的影响。请你根据以下思维导图的提示, 以“Music”为题, 写一篇短文, 参加学校的英语作文竞赛。 要求： 1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息; 2. 不能照抄原文; 不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名; 3. 语句连贯, 词数90左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出, 不计入总词数。 Music Music is very important in our lives. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： Music Music is very important in our lives. It gives me energy and makes me happy. If there were no music, our lives wouldn’t be so interesting. Different people like different kinds of music. I like electronic music. It makes me excited. I also like music that I can dance to. I can’t stand music that is quiet and slow. It makes me sleepy. I always listen to music when I feel tired. It makes me feel relaxed. In a word, music is one of the most beautiful languages in the world. I hope everyone can enjoy music. [写作步骤] [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：议论文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：围绕音乐这一话题，介绍音乐在生活中的重要作用，列举音乐的种类，说明自己最喜欢的音乐类型及原因，最后总结音乐对个人生活的影响 确定人称：第一人称(I/my)，第三人称(It) 注意事项：在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息，不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名，语句连贯，词数90左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接开头，说明音乐的作用 主体段：列举音乐的种类，并详细介绍自己最喜欢的音乐类型及原因 结尾段：总结音乐对自己生活的重要意义 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：音乐的重要性 重要意义：Music is very important in our lives/gives me energy and makes me happy/If there were no music, our lives wouldn’t be so interesting/one of the most beautiful languages in the world/brings us happiness and beauty等 要点二：喜欢和不喜欢的音乐类型 喜欢类型：I like electronic music/I also like music that I can dance to/I prefer soft music/My favourite music is classic music等 讨厌类型：I can’t stand music that is quiet and slow/I refuse music that is quick and noisy等 解释原因：It makes me excited/It makes me sleepy/It makes me feel relaxed/It gives me a sense of belonging等 7．音乐在生活中无处不在。音乐可以调剂紧张单调的生活，可以净化人的灵魂，可以给人精神鼓舞……你喜欢什么样的音乐呢？音乐给你带来什么样的体验呢？你跟音乐之间一定有记忆深刻的故事吧？请你以A story between music and me为题，把你和音乐之间的故事分享给大家吧！ 要求：（1）描述发生在你和音乐之间的一个故事。 （2）你喜欢什么类型的音乐，音乐对你有什么影响。 （3）字数在100词左右，不能出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 A story between music and me ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： A story between music and me Music plays an important role in my daily life. I love pop music most, for its light beats always make me relaxed after long hours of study. Last year, I failed my math exam. I was so upset that I nearly gave up learning it. I put on my favourite song, whose inspiring lyrics told me not to lose heart. Encouraged, I kept practising math problems every day. Before long, I made great progress and got a nice score. Music brings me joy and gives me strength when I feel down. It’s like a faithful friend accompanying me all the way. I will love music forever. 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：叙事记叙文，以一般过去时、一般现在时为主 明确要点：讲述一段自己与音乐相关的往事；说明喜爱的音乐类型；阐述音乐带来的影响，词数100词左右 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起，点明音乐在自己生活中的重要地位，点明喜爱的音乐类型 主体段：完整叙述一件和音乐有关的难忘往事，补充细节让故事生动 结尾段：总结音乐对自己的积极影响，升华情感 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：喜爱的音乐类型 音乐分类词汇：pop music/soft music/classical music等 拓展词汇：inspiring songs等 特点描述词汇：light beats/warm lyrics/soft rhythm等 作用短语：make me relaxed/cheer me up等 要点二：我和音乐的故事 情绪词汇：upset/lose heart/encouraged/proud等 事件动作词汇：fail exams/give up/listen to songs/practise daily等 拓展词汇：gain confidence/make steady progress等 叙事句型：Last year.../When I felt bad, I...等 要点三：音乐带来的影响 积极作用词汇：bring joy/give strength/comfort me等 拓展词汇：lift my spirits/clear my mind等 比喻句型：It’s like a faithful friend/It stays with me through hard times等 8．音乐将世间万物带进了美好的时空，它在我们的日常生活中扮演着重要的角色，每听到音乐，我们就会忘记所有的烦恼和不快。你校英语俱乐部在下周的主题例会上会对喜欢的音乐进行讨论，作为俱乐部成员，请你根据下面的提示写一篇文章和大家分享。 1. 要点提示： (1) What kinds of music do you like? And why? (描述三种不同类型的音乐及原因) (2 )Which do you like best and what have you got from it? (3) As a middle school student, are you supposed to listen to music in your spare time? What are your opinions and the reasons? 2. 写作要求： (1) 短文要包含所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； (2) 文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校； (3) 字数80-120。 My Favourite Music _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 参考范文    My Favourite Music       Music plays an important role in my life. I like pop music because it is lively. I also enjoy classical music which makes me calm. Besides, folk music tells beautiful stories. Among them, I like pop music best. It encourages me when I am down. As a middle school student, I think we should listen to music in spare time. It helps us relax after studying hard. However, we shouldn’t listen too loudly or too long. Music makes life colorful. Let’s enjoy music properly. 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意]    确定文体：介绍性记叙文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：描述三种音乐及原因、说明最喜爱的音乐及收获并阐述中学生课余听音乐的观点与理由 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校        [第二步：构思布局]    三段式结构：    开头段：总起句点明音乐在生活中的重要性，引出下文 主体段：依次介绍三种音乐及原因、最喜欢的音乐及收获、对中学生在课余听音乐的看法与理由 结尾段：总结音乐的作用，发出合理享受音乐的倡议，升华主题        [第三步：要点展开]   要点一：三种不同类型的音乐及原因 音乐选择：pop music/classical music/folk music/country music等 具体原因：lively/makes me calm/tells beautiful stories/happy等 要点二：最喜欢的音乐及收获 选择：pop music/country music等 收获：encourages me when I am down/makes me confident等 要点三：中学生课余听音乐的观点与理由 观点：listen to music in spare time/listen properly等 理由：helps relax after studying/shouldn’t listen too loudly or too long/balance listening to music and study properly等    ◇考点 02 重难语篇提升练 9．课间播放音乐不仅能为学生们带来愉悦的听觉享受，更能对学生的学习和生活产生积极的影响。假设你是某国际中学负责播放课间音乐的学生李辉，为了解你校学生喜欢的音乐类型，上周你对本校500名学生进行了问卷调查。请你以“What kind of music do you like best?”为题，根据统计结果写一篇英语短文并阐述你的喜好及原因。 提示： What kind of music do you like best? 40% Country Music 15% Rock Music 10% Electronic Music 35% Folk Music 要求： 1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 100词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：relieve减轻 What kind of music do you like best? Last week, I did a survey among 500 students in my school on the topic" What kind of music do you like best?" Here are the results. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 What kind of music do you like best?    Last week, I did a survey among 500 students in my school on the topic“What kind of music do you like best?” Here are the results.        40% of the students like country music best, and 35% of them enjoy folk music. 15% choose rock music as their favorite because it can cheer them up and make them excited. How about the remaining 10% of the students? Their favorite is electronic music.        Among the four music styles, I love country music most. I often listen to it in my free time. It always helps me feel totally relaxed. I am deeply attracted by its warm and meaningful lyrics. It calms my mind quickly and helps me get rid of daily stress. It has become my best companion in daily life. 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文，一般现在时为主。 明确要点：从调查问卷喜好结果和自己喜好两个要点展开。 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数，文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等真实信息。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，直接说明上周做个问卷调查，为下文问卷调查结果做铺垫。 主体段：详细介绍了问卷调查结果。 结尾段：总结自己的喜欢和原因。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：问卷调查喜欢结果 多数人的选择： 40% of the students like country music best, and 35% of them enjoy folk music./40% of the students like country music best, and 35% of them enjoy folk music. Many students say these gentle tunes bring them a sense of comfort and joy./40% of the students like country music best, and 35% of them enjoy folk music. They think these music styles sound soft and full of local cultural features.等 少数人的选择：15% choose rock music as their favorite because it can cheer them up and make them excited./15% choose rock music as their favorite because of its powerful rhythm. It can cheer them up and make them excited when they feel tired./15% choose rock music as their favorite. They love its energetic style, for it can always cheer them up and make them excited.等 剩余的人选择：the remaining 10% of the students choose electronic music./The remaining 10% of the students choose electronic music. They are fond of its lively and fashionable sound./The remaining 10% of the students choose electronic music, which is full of energy and special musical styles.等 要点二：自己喜好 喜好的音乐：Among the four music styles, I love country music most./When it comes to the four music styles, country music is my top choice./Among the four music styles, country music appeals to me the most.等 原因：It always helps me feel totally relaxed. I am deeply attracted by its warm and meaningful lyrics. It calms my mind quickly and helps me get rid of daily stress./feel totally relaxed → feel peaceful and comfortable get rid of stress → relieve pressure/ease stress be deeply attracted by → fall in love with / be fascinated by等 10．音乐能够帮助丰富学生的生活，也能够帮助学生调节情绪，减轻学习压力。在下周的英语社团课上，老师计划请同学们谈谈自己最喜欢的音乐。请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下两种音乐中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文，陈述你的理由，准备在英语社团活动中发言。 Pop music Classical music Reasons help me relax help me study better cheer me up teach me about history and different cultures ... ... How you feel about the music ... ... 写作要求： 1.文中需包含所选音乐的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 There are many different kinds of music in the world. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 There are many different kinds of music in the world. My favorite is pop music. First, after a whole day of busy study, listening to my favorite pop song always helps me relax quickly and wash away all my learning stress. Second, when I feel upset about setbacks like failing a test, upbeat and warm pop songs can cheer me up right away and get me back on track. Also, I can easily sing along with the simple lyrics, which makes me feel happy. Pop music is far more than just entertainment to me. It has become an important part of my daily life, and it always fills my days with energy and warmth. 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：喜欢所选音乐的原因、对所选音乐的感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/me/my）和第三人称 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出话题，并从所给两种音乐中选择一种（如流行音乐）直接表明观点 主体段：结合表格中的提示理由（如help me relax, cheer me up等），用1-2句话展开说明 结尾段：总结对所选音乐的感受，强调音乐对生活的积极影响 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：喜欢所选音乐的原因 原因/优点：helps me relax quickly/wash away all my learning stress/cheer me up right away/get me back on track/makes me feel happy等 要点二：对所选音乐的感受 地位：far more than just entertainment to me/become an important part of my daily life 积极影响：fills my days with energy and warmth 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $