Unit 6 Travelling around Asia 单元写作专项训练 2026-2027学年沪教版英语七年级上册

**基本信息** 聚焦旅行指南写作，构建“词汇-句型-篇章”三级训练体系，提炼五步高分方法，系统提升语言表达与逻辑构建能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作素材库|6类主题词汇、12个高频搭配、4类功能表达|分类整合旅游场景核心语言要素|从基础词汇到功能表达，搭建写作语言基础| |黄金句型库|4类基础句型+6组句型升级示例|提供开头-主体-结尾完整句型框架，通过对比实现表达升级|从简单句到复杂句，体现语言能力进阶| |高分写作方法|5步写作流程（审题-结构-内容-语言-检查）|明确旅行指南写作的结构化步骤，强调信息完整性与表达吸引力|按写作逻辑链拆解任务，培养思维品质| |阶梯训练|句子3级（汉译英/仿写/升级）+篇章3篇|通过分层训练实现从句子到篇章的能力迁移|由基础技能到综合应用，符合学习能力发展规律|

Unit 6 Travelling around Asia 单元写作专项训练 一、单元核心信息 二、写作素材库 1. 主题词汇 城市与地点 city 城市 town 镇；市镇 tourist spot 旅游景点 historic site 历史遗迹 museum 博物馆 garden 花园 temple 寺庙 square 广场 tower 塔 lake 湖 river 河流 bridge 桥 building 建筑 旅游相关 travel guide 旅行指南 tourist 游客 visitor 参观者；游客 trip 旅行 route 路线 map 地图 compass 指南针 direction 方向 描述用语 famous 著名的 popular 受欢迎的；大众喜爱的 traditional 传统的 modern 现代的 historic 历史上著名的 amazing 令人惊奇的 wonderful 极好的 unusual 不寻常的 central 中心的 local 地方的；当地的 建筑与风格 shikumen 石库门（建筑） skyscraper 摩天大楼 style 风格 landmark 地标 statue 雕像 temple 寺庙 palace 宫殿 garden 花园 食物与购物 local food 当地食物 snack 点心；小吃 souvenir 纪念品 gift 礼物 restaurant 餐厅 shop 商店 2. 高频搭配 a guide to ... ……的指南 be famous for ... 以……而闻名 a mix of ... ……的混合 in the centre of ... 在……的中心 light up 点亮；照亮 on the UNESCO World Heritage List 在联合国教科文组织世界遗产名录上 in memory of ... 作为对……的纪念 at first sight 初次见面；乍一看 must-see spot 必看景点 local food 当地食物 tourist spots 旅游景点 travel guide 旅行指南 3. 写作功能表达 介绍地点 ... is a city with ... ……是一个拥有……的城市。 ... is famous for ... ……以……闻名。 There are many ... in ... ……有很多…… 描述位置 ... is in the centre of ... ……在……的中心。 ... is to the ... of ... ……在……的……面。 ... is near ... ……在……附近。 推荐活动 If you visit ...，you will see ... 如果你参观……，你会看到…… You can ... there. 你可以在那里…… You should try ... 你应该试试…… 提供实用信息 ... is open from ... to ... ……从……到……开放。 It is free / ... yuan for ... ……免费/……元。 You can get there by ... 你可以乘……到达那里。 三、黄金句型库 1. 开头句型 Welcome to my hometown！ 欢迎来到我的家乡！ ... is a city with a long history，amazing views and delicious food. ……是一座拥有悠久历史、迷人风景和美味食物的城市。 There are a lot of things to see and do here. 这里有很多可看可做的事情。 Let me introduce ... to you. 让我向你介绍…… 2. 主体句型 ... is famous for its ... buildings. ……以它的……建筑而闻名。 When you visit the city，you can explore famous places. 当你参观这座城市时，你可以探索著名的地方。 If you go there，you will see ... 如果你去那里，你会看到…… You can also buy local food and gifts there. 你也可以在那里买到当地食物和礼物。 There are many beautiful traditional buildings inside. 里面有许多美丽的传统建筑。 It is a mix of traditional Chinese and Western styles. 它是中西风格的融合。 3. 结尾句型 I am sure you will love this beautiful city at first sight. 我相信你会一见钟情地爱上这座美丽的城市。 If you come to ...，I am sure you will have a wonderful time. 如果你来……，我相信你会玩得很开心。 I hope you can visit ... one day. 我希望有一天你能来……参观。 ... is a city that you should not miss. ……是一座你不该错过的城市。 4. 句型升级 基础句 升级句 Shanghai is a big city. 上海是一座大城市。 Shanghai is a city where East meets West，and tradition meets modernity. 上海是一座东西方交汇、传统与现代融合的城市。 Xintiandi is famous. 新天地很有名。 Xintiandi is famous for its shikumen buildings from the 19th century. 新天地以19世纪的石库门建筑闻名。 The Bund has old buildings. 外滩有老建筑。 Look west，and you will see many old Western-style buildings. Look east，and you will see skyscrapers. 向西看，你会看到许多西式老建筑。向东看，你会看到摩天大楼。 Yu Garden is old. 豫园很古老。 Yu Garden is over 400 years old and is in the centre of the old city. 豫园有400多年的历史，位于老城的中心。 You can visit the museum. 你可以参观博物馆。 If you go inside the museum，you will learn a lot about the history. 如果你进入博物馆，你会学到很多关于历史的知识。 Hangzhou has West Lake. 杭州有西湖。 West Lake is a must-see spot in Hangzhou. It is on the UNESCO World Heritage List. 西湖是杭州的必看景点。它被列入联合国教科文组织世界遗产名录。 四、高分写作方法 Step 1 审题定位 明确写作主题为“为游客写一篇城市/乡镇旅行指南”，写作内容应包括该城市的著名景点、特色美食、文化历史，并为游客提供参观建议和实用信息。 写作形式： 旅行指南（Travel Guide） 写作对象： 计划前往该城市旅游的游客 Step 2 搭建结构 第一段：引出主题 热情欢迎游客，简要介绍该城市的总体印象（历史、风景、美食等）。 第二段：介绍景点 选择2-3个最有代表性的景点，依次介绍其位置、特色、历史背景和可进行的活动。使用if条件句为游客提供建议。 第三段：补充信息与总结 补充关于当地美食、购物、开放时间、票价等实用信息，最后再次欢迎游客到来。 Step 3 丰富内容 不要只列出景点名称，要加入景点的历史背景、建筑特色、可以做什么、为什么值得去。例如不只写“You can go to the Bund.”，还要写“Look west，and you will see many old Western-style buildings. Look east across the Huangpu River，and you will see skyscrapers.” Step 4 提升语言 使用条件状语从句（if...will...）、祈使句（Look west...）、连接词（and，so，because，when）、形容词和方位表达，使指南既有信息性又有吸引力。使用“you”拉近与读者的距离。 Step 5 检查修改 检查内容是否完整、结构是否清晰、条件句是否正确、拼写和标点是否有误。 五、阶梯训练 （一）句子训练 Level 1 汉译英 1. 欢迎来到我的家乡——一座拥有悠久历史和美丽风景的城市。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 外滩是上海最著名的旅游景点之一。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 如果你去豫园，你会看到许多美丽的传统建筑。 ____________________________________________________________ 4. 新天地以19世纪的石库门建筑而闻名。 ____________________________________________________________ 5. 我相信你会一见钟情地爱上这座城市。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 2 句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型 1：... is a city with...（描述城市特征） 例句： Shanghai is a city with a long history and beautiful views. （1）杭州是一座拥有悠久历史和美味食物的城市。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）北京是一座拥有许多名胜古迹的城市。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 2：... is famous for...（描述闻名之处） 例句： Xintiandi is famous for its shikumen buildings. （1）杭州以西湖闻名。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）广州以当地美食闻名。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 3：... is in the centre of...（描述位置） 例句： Yu Garden is in the centre of the old city. （1）博物馆位于城市的中心。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）这家酒店位于镇的中心。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 4：If you go / visit...，you will see...（条件句建议） 例句： If you visit Yu Garden，you will see many beautiful traditional buildings. （1）如果你去西湖，你会看到美丽的山和公园。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）如果你参观故宫，你会了解很多中国历史。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 5：You can also...（补充信息） 例句： You can also buy local food and gifts there. （1）你也可以在那里尝到当地美食。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）你也可以在博物馆里买到纪念品。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 6：I am sure you will...（表达确信） 例句： I am sure you will love this city. （1）我相信你会在这里玩得很开心。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我相信你会被这个花园的美景所惊叹。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 3 句子升级 要求：参照下方示例，将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。 示例： 基础句：Shanghai is a big city. 升级句：Shanghai is a city where East meets West，and tradition meets modernity. 1. 基础句：Xintiandi is famous. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 2. 基础句：The Bund has old and new buildings. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 3. 基础句：Yu Garden is old. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 4. 基础句：You can visit the museum. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 5. 基础句：Hangzhou has West Lake. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 6. 基础句：There are many things to do in my city. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ （二）篇章训练 1．假如你是Li Ming，你的北京笔友Jerry想了解你的家乡，并为此写了一封信给你。请你根据所给提示信息用英语写一封回信，向他介绍你的家乡并欢迎他前来旅游。 提示信息：1. Location (位置) 2. Climate 3. Plants and animals 4. Activities 写作要求：1.短文须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2.文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 3.词数70左右。 Dear Jerry, Let me tell you something about my hometown. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 2．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tim来信说他打算在春节期间来福州游玩。请根据下面图表的提示用英语给他回信，介绍你的家乡——福州。 参考词汇：southeast东南部：taste品尝；fishball鱼丸；fotiaoqiang佛跳墙 注意事项： 1）必须包含所有提示信息，可适当拓展； 2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名。 Dear Tim, I’m very glad to hear that you’re coming to my hometown Fuzhou during the Spring Festival. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3．假设你是一名导游，请以 A Travel Guide to My Hometown—Hangzhou 为题，写一份英语旅行指南，介绍杭州的特色。要求： 1.内容包含：城市特色、著名景点、当地美食、旅行建议； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.不少于 80 词； 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 Level 1 汉译英 1. Welcome to my hometown — a city with a long history and beautiful views. 2. The Bund is one of the most famous tourist spots in Shanghai. 3. If you go to Yu Garden，you will see many beautiful traditional buildings. 4. Xintiandi is famous for its shikumen buildings from the 19th century. 5. I am sure you will love this city at first sight. Level 2 句型仿写 句型 1 （1）Hangzhou is a city with a long history and delicious food. （2）Beijing is a city with many places of historic interest. 句型 2 （1）Hangzhou is famous for West Lake. （2）Guangzhou is famous for its local food. 句型 3 （1）The museum is in the centre of the city. （2）The hotel is in the centre of the town. 句型 4 （1）If you go to West Lake，you will see beautiful mountains and parks. （2）If you visit the Palace Museum，you will learn a lot about Chinese history. 句型 5 （1）You can also taste local food there. （2）You can also buy souvenirs in the museum. 句型 6 （1）I am sure you will have a great time here. （2）I am sure you will be amazed by the beauty of this garden. Level 3 句子升级 （以下为参考升级答案，其他合理升级也可接受） 1. 升级句：Xintiandi is famous for its shikumen buildings from the 19th century，which are a mix of traditional Chinese and Western styles. 2. 升级句：The Bund is where old meets new. Look west，and you will see old Western-style buildings. Look east，and you will see skyscrapers. 3. 升级句：Yu Garden is over 400 years old and is in the centre of the old city. Inside，there are many beautiful traditional buildings. 4. 升级句：If you go inside the museum，you will learn a lot about the history and culture of the city. 5. 升级句：West Lake is a must-see spot in Hangzhou. It is on the UNESCO World Heritage List because of its long history and beautiful landscape. 6. 升级句：There are a lot of things to see and do here，from visiting museums and temples to trying delicious local food. 篇章训练（参考范文） 1．例文 Dear Jerry, Let me tell you something about my hometown. It’s a small town near the Yangtze River, not far from the city. The climate here is nice—warm in spring, cool in autumn, neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter. There are many green trees and beautiful flowers in the park. We also have lovely birds. On weekends, people often walk by the river and fly kites in the square. I really hope you can come to visit my hometown. I’m sure you’ll like it! Yours, Li Ming 2．例文 Dear Tim, I’m very glad to hear that you’re coming to my hometown Fuzhou during the Spring Festival. Let me tell you something about it. Fuzhou is in the southeast of China. It’s cold here in winter and sometimes it rains. So bring some warm clothes with you. In the Spring Festival, you can taste some delicious food, such as fishball and Fotiaoqiang. Fuzhou is a beautiful city and we can take a walk around it. Also, we can watch some shows and celebrate the Chinese New Year together. Welcome to my hometown and I hope we’ll have a good time! Yours, Li Hua 3．例文 A Travel Guide to My Hometown—Hangzhou Welcome to Hangzhou, my beautiful hometown! It is a historic city with wonderful natural scenery.    First, you must visit the West Lake, a UNESCO World Heritage Site. You can go boating to enjoy its amazing views and visit nearby historic places such as Yuewang Temple. Besides, taste local food like Longjing tea and classic Zhejiang dishes. You can also pick some local gifts as souvenirs. Hangzhou is a perfect travel choice. I believe you will have an unforgettable time here! 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $