第16卷 书面表达（观点表达与感想评论）-【2027年新考纲】重庆市（高职分类考试）《英语45分钟训练卷》（原卷版+解析版）

**基本信息** 聚焦观点表达与感想评论，通过3道典型题构建"观点论证-感想提炼-建议表达"的递进训练体系，强化语言组织与思维逻辑性。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|题型特征|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |观点表达|1题（职业学校学英语）|三理由支撑+结论的观点论证结构|从核心论点到多维度理由的逻辑组织，提升思维品质| |感想评论|1题（《钢铁是怎样炼成的》读后感）|人物-故事-双感想的情感表达框架|通过文学作品感悟传递文化意识，强化语言表达能力| |建议信写作|1题（给沉迷游戏同学提建议）|问题-建议-鼓励的实用文体结构|从问题分析到解决方案的应用拓展，培养学习能力|

编写说明：本卷依据最新版《中等职业学校英语课程标准》编写。本系列定位为45分钟训练卷，用于课堂限时训练、周测检测和阶段复习。本卷为书面表达专项训练第16卷，聚焦观点表达与感想评论，通过3道典型题目帮助考生强化论点组织、论证表达和理由支撑能力。 【2027年新考纲】重庆市（高职分类考试）《英语45分钟训练卷》 第16卷 书面表达（观点表达与感想评论） 考试时间：45分钟 满分：100分 班级_________姓名_________学号_________成绩_________ 书面表达（共3题，满分100分） 注意: 1. 请在答题卡上作答，字迹工整。 2. 不得出现考生学校、姓名等真实信息。 3. 每篇作文字数60~80词。 1. 第一节：观点表达，30分 假设你是新华职业中学学生李华，请你根据下面表格的内容，写一篇短文表达你对"职业学校学生是否应该学习英语"的看法。 Key Points Content Opinion Vocational school students should learn English Reason 1 English is an international language and helps with future jobs Reason 2 Learning English opens your mind to different cultures Reason 3 Many jobs today require at least basic English skills Conclusion Vocational schools should value English teaching 注意： （1）字数60～80词； （2）不得出现考生学校、姓名等真实信息。 【参考范文】 In my opinion, it is very necessary for vocational school students to learn English. There are several reasons for my view.First, English is the most widely used international language, and it can help us find better jobs. Second, learning English opens our minds and allows us to understand different cultures. Third, many jobs today require at least basic English ability. Therefore, I strongly believe that vocational schools should pay more attention to English teaching. Every student should take English learning seriously. 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达为观点表达类短文。范文采用总分总结构：表明观点、三条理由、总结强调。逻辑清晰，说理充分。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 necessary → essential (必要的) open our minds → broaden our horizons (开阔视野) basic → fundamental (基本的) therefore → hence (因此) 2. 句式积累 In my opinion, it is very necessary for... to... (在我看来...很有必要...) First... Second... Third... (首先...其次...第三...) 2. 第二节：感想评论，30分 假设你是新华职业中学学生李华，请你根据下面表格的内容，写一篇短文，谈谈你读完《钢铁是怎样炼成的》这本书后的感想。 Key Points Content Book title How the Steel Was Tempered Main character Pavel Korchagin Main story A young man who never gives up his dreams despite great difficulties Your feeling 1 Deeply moved by his strong will Your feeling 2 Learned to never give up when facing difficulties 注意： （1）字数60～80词； （2）不得出现考生学校、姓名等真实信息。 【参考范文】 Recently, I finished reading the book How the Steel Was Tempered. It tells the story of Pavel Korchagin, a young man who never gave up his dreams even when facing great difficulties. I was deeply moved by the strong will of the main character. Although he suffered from serious illness, he continued to fight for his beliefs and never complained about his life. This book taught me that we should never give up when facing difficulties. No matter how hard life becomes, we should stay strong and keep moving forward toward our goals. 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达为感想评论。短文分享阅读《钢铁是怎样炼成的》后的感悟。范文先介绍内容，再表达感受和学到的道理。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 moved → touched (感动的) strong will → determination (坚强意志) face difficulties → confront challenges (面对困难) keep moving forward → forge ahead (勇往直前) 2. 句式积累 I was deeply moved by... (我被...深深打动。) This book taught me that... (这本书教会我...) 3. 第三节：建议信写作，40分 假设你是新华职业中学学生李华，你的同学张明最近沉迷于手机游戏，成绩下降。请你根据下面表格的内容，给他写一封信，提出你的建议。 Key Points Content Problem Zhang Ming spends too much time on mobile games; grades falling Advice 1 Set a daily time limit for phone use, e.g., no more than 1 hour Advice 2 Develop new hobbies like reading and doing sports Advice 3 Make a study plan and put important tasks first Encouragement Believe he can change; hope to see his progress 注意： （1）字数60～80词； （2）不得出现考生学校、姓名等真实信息。 Dear Zhang Ming, Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Zhang Ming, I've noticed that you have been spending too much time on mobile games lately, and your grades have been going down. I'm writing to offer you some advice. First, set a daily time limit for phone use, such as no more than one hour. Second, try to develop new hobbies like reading or doing sports. Third, make a study plan and always put your important tasks first. I believe you have the ability to change. Don't be too hard on yourself but take small steps every day. I really look forward to seeing your progress. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达为应用文建议信。李华针对同学沉迷手机游戏的问题提出具体建议。范文语气友善，先指出问题，再给建议，最后鼓励。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 spending too much time → addicted to (沉迷) advice → suggestion (建议) develop hobbies → cultivate interests (培养兴趣) progress → improvement (进步) 2. 句式积累 I've noticed that you have been... (我注意到你最近一直...) Take small steps every day. (每天进步一点点。) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 编写说明：本卷依据最新版《中等职业学校英语课程标准》编写。本系列定位为45分钟训练卷，用于课堂限时训练、周测检测和阶段复习。本卷为书面表达专项训练第16卷，聚焦观点表达与感想评论，通过3道典型题目帮助考生强化论点组织、论证表达和理由支撑能力。 【2027年新考纲】重庆市（高职分类考试）《英语45分钟训练卷》 第16卷 书面表达（观点表达与感想评论） 考试时间：45分钟 满分：100分 班级_________姓名_________学号_________成绩_________ 书面表达（共3题，满分100分） 注意: 1. 请在答题卡上作答，字迹工整。 2. 不得出现考生学校、姓名等真实信息。 3. 每篇作文字数60~80词。 1. 第一节：观点表达，30分 假设你是新华职业中学学生李华，请你根据下面表格的内容，写一篇短文表达你对"职业学校学生是否应该学习英语"的看法。 Key Points Content Opinion Vocational school students should learn English Reason 1 English is an international language and helps with future jobs Reason 2 Learning English opens your mind to different cultures Reason 3 Many jobs today require at least basic English skills Conclusion Vocational schools should value English teaching 注意： （1）字数60～80词； （2）不得出现考生学校、姓名等真实信息。 2. 第二节：感想评论，30分 假设你是新华职业中学学生李华，请你根据下面表格的内容，写一篇短文，谈谈你读完《钢铁是怎样炼成的》这本书后的感想。 Key Points Content Book title How the Steel Was Tempered Main character Pavel Korchagin Main story A young man who never gives up his dreams despite great difficulties Your feeling 1 Deeply moved by his strong will Your feeling 2 Learned to never give up when facing difficulties 注意： （1）字数60～80词； （2）不得出现考生学校、姓名等真实信息。 3. 第三节：建议信写作，40分 假设你是新华职业中学学生李华，你的同学张明最近沉迷于手机游戏，成绩下降。请你根据下面表格的内容，给他写一封信，提出你的建议。 Key Points Content Problem Zhang Ming spends too much time on mobile games; grades falling Advice 1 Set a daily time limit for phone use, e.g., no more than 1 hour Advice 2 Develop new hobbies like reading and doing sports Advice 3 Make a study plan and put important tasks first Encouragement Believe he can change; hope to see his progress 注意： （1）字数60～80词； （2）不得出现考生学校、姓名等真实信息。 Dear Zhang Ming, Yours, Li Hua 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $