Unit 2 Getting together(写作突破专项训练)英语人教PEP版六年级上册(新教材)
写作方法指引- 原文指路
I was excited because my father was on a race team!
开篇点题:表达对龙舟节活动的期待与兴奋心情
In the morning, my dad woke up early. We went to the river later and waited for the race.
按序叙事:用时间词串联,清晰描述节日活动的前期准备
Then the judge counted down and the race began. I ran and cheered for my dad.
细节刻画:具体呈现比赛过程中的关键场景与个人动作
Finally, his team won the race! They all sang their team song together.
结果呈现:交代比赛结局,展现团队庆祝的热闹氛围
In the evening, our family made zongzi and had a big dinner.
后续活动:描述节日后续的传统习俗,丰富内容层次
It was the best Dragon Boat Festival ever!
结尾抒情:总结个人对此次节日的评价与深刻感受
一、核心词汇
1. 节日类
Mid-Autumn Festival(中秋节)
Spring Festival(春节)
Dragon Boat Festival(端午节)
Teachers' Day(教师节)
Double Ninth Festival(重阳节)
Earth Day(地球日)
2. 活动类
家庭节日活动:clean the house(打扫房子)、paste Fu(贴福字)、dress in red(穿红衣)、
wait for the Spring Festival Gala(等待春节联欢晚会)、count down to the new year(新年倒计
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时)、enjoy mooncakes and fruit(享用月饼和水果)、tell stories(讲故事)、eat jiaozi(吃饺子)、
make zongzi(包粽子)
大型活动/校园活动:run a marathon(参加马拉松)、watch the race(观看比赛)、
cheer for runners(为选手欢呼)、attend an online book fair(参加线上书展)、
share ideas(分享想法)、play the pipa(弹琵琶)、do kung fu(表演功夫)、go camping(去露营)、put up a camp(搭建帐篷)
其他活动:sing team song(唱队歌)、set off fireworks(放烟花)、light candles(点蜡烛)
3. 相关名词类
race team(赛队)、judge(裁判)、volunteer(志愿者)、writer(作家)、robot(机器人)、
fireworks(烟花)、candles(蜡烛)、Spring Festival couplets(春联)
二、参考句型
1. 描述节日/活动中的行为
My dad and I cleaned the house.
My sister and I pasted Fu on the door.
We enjoyed some mooncakes and fruit.
Grandpa told us some stories about the festival.
We waited for the Spring Festival Gala and counted down to the new year.
People from different places ran a marathon.
Children sang and danced at an art festival.
We made zongzi and had a big dinner for the festival.
2. 表达对活动的感受与喜好
It was great! My family and I had a really nice day.
I liked watching the runners. They ran very fast.
I liked it very much because we shared ideas and talked about different books online.
It was the best Dragon Boat Festival ever!
3. 讲述过去的活动经历
My mother and I went to a marathon on Sunday. She worked as a volunteer. I watched the race.
I attended an online book fair last weekend.
Chen Jie and Liu Xin played the pipa to greet the old people.
Mike and John did wonderful kung fu. What a great show!
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