Unit 3 Healthy life（写作突破专项训练）英语人教PEP版六年级上册（新教材）

**基本信息** 以健康生活为主题，构建“方法指引-词汇句型-写作实践”三维训练体系，系统提炼描述症状、提出建议等写作方法，逻辑递进培养语言表达与问题解决能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作方法指引|6个方法点|提炼“症状列举-建议给出-情绪表达-计划制定-改变记录”五步法|从具体情境方法到通用写作逻辑，培养问题解决思维| |核心词汇|4类语义场|按“疾病-情绪-健康行为-社交心理”分类|构建主题词汇网络，夯实语言能力基础| |参考句型|4类功能句|功能化归类描述、建议、定义、改善句型|句型与情境匹配，提升语言表达准确性| |写作任务|2题（含基础/提高版范文）|分层示范“慰问-建议-祝愿”写作结构|从具体应用到抽象主题，实现能力迁移| |易错点提示|4项语法细节|聚焦动词形式、固定搭配等易错点|针对性突破语法薄弱点，提升思维严谨性|

Unit 3 Healthy life 写作方法指引- 原文指路 I feel ill. My head hurts and I have a runny nose. 描述身体不适：清晰列举具体症状，让读者明确健康问题 Maybe you should see a doctor. 提出健康建议：针对身体病症给出合理、具体的解决方案 I'm feeling down. My good friend Lucy moved to another city. 表达负面情绪：说明情绪低落的原因，真实传达内心感受 Think about happy things. Call your friend or send her some emails. 给出情绪调节建议：提供可操作的缓解负面情绪的实用方法 We need to eat healthy food. We should exercise too. 制定健康计划：从饮食、运动维度明确健康生活的行动方向 I often make video calls with my friends now. I also joined a ping-pong club and made some new friends. 记录积极改变：展示采取建议后生活的正向变化，体现方法有效性 一、核心词汇 1. 疾病与身体不适类 bad cold（重感冒）runny nose（流鼻涕）head hurts（头疼）feel ill（感觉不舒服） tired（疲惫的）feel cold（感觉冷） 2. 情绪类 feel sad（感到难过）feel down（情绪低落）feel unhappy（不开心）feel happy（感到开心） 3. 健康行为与生活方式类 do exercise（做运动）eat healthy food（吃健康食物）sleep well（睡好）send emails（发邮件） drink enough water（喝足够的水）take care of eyes and teeth（爱护眼睛和牙齿） have a rest（休息）see a doctor（看医生）wash hands（洗手）make new friends（交新朋友） join after-school clubs（参加课后俱乐部）make video calls（打视频电话） 4. 社交与心理健康类 talk to family and friends（和家人朋友聊天）have fun with friends and family（和家人朋友玩乐） be a volunteer（做志愿者）think about happy things（想开心的事） 二、参考句型 1. 描述身体不适 I feel ill. My head hurts and I have a runny nose. I'm not feeling well. I feel cold and I have a runny nose. I'm feeling down. 2. 给出健康/情绪调节建议 You should drink some water and have a rest. You should see a doctor. We need to eat healthy food and drink enough water. We should exercise too. Don't stay up late. You can do some exercise. It may cheer you up! You should join some after-school clubs and make new friends. You can call your friend or send her some emails. It's OK to feel sad. We can talk to our friends. 3. 描述健康生活与健康定义 Health is having a good body and feeling happy. A healthy lifestyle includes eating healthy food, sleeping well and doing exercise often. I can exercise often. Jump rope or play ball games every day. It's always good to talk to our family and friends for a healthy life. 4. 表达情绪改善后的状态 I often make video calls with my friends now. I feel much better. Thinking about happy things helps me feel happy again. 易错点提示 1. 动词形式易错：描述第三人称身体疼痛时，动词要用第三人称单数形式，比如"His head hurts"，不要写成"His head hurt"。 2. 固定搭配易错："have a bad cold"、"have a runny nose"是固定短语，不要遗漏冠词"a"；"take care of"是固定搭配，不要写成"take care"单独使用。 3. 情态动词用法区分："should"用于给出建议，语气委婉；"need to"强调必要性，比如"We need to eat healthy food."（我们需要吃健康食物）和"You should see a doctor."（你应该看医生），不要混淆使用场景。 4. 情绪表达区分："feel sad"侧重当下的难过情绪，"feel down"侧重长期的情绪低落，写作中要根据语境选择合适的表达。 写作一 你的好朋友Tom今天没来上学，他发消息告诉你他得了重感冒，头疼还流鼻涕，感觉浑身不舒服。请你给他写一封简短的回信，安慰他并给他一些有助于恢复健康的建议。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： bad cold, runny nose, head hurts, feel ill, see a doctor, have a rest, drink enough water, sleep well 写作二 健康包括身体健康和心理健康。请你写一篇短文，分享你对健康生活的理解，说说我们可以做哪些事来保持身体和心理的健康。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。。 参考单词： health, eat healthy food, do exercise, sleep well, talk to family and friends, feel happy, think about happy things, join after-school clubs 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： Dear Tom, I'm sorry to hear you have a bad cold. You said your head hurts and you have a runny nose, and you feel ill. （慰问病情） Don't worry too much. You should drink enough water and have a good rest. You need to sleep well too. If you still feel bad tomorrow, you should see a doctor. （给出建议）I hope you get well soon. （送上祝愿） Yours, Li Ming 范文（提高版）： Dear Tom, I was sad to know you have a bad cold and can't come to school. You told me your head hurts badly and you have a runny nose, and you feel cold and tired. （慰问病情） Here are some tips for you: first, drink warm water and have a good rest at home. Don't watch TV for too long. Second, sleep well every night. If you don't get better in two days, you must see a doctor. I will bring you our homework tomorrow. （给出建议）Get well soon! （送上祝愿） Yours, Li Ming 写作二 范文（基础版）： Health is having a good body and feeling happy. （定义健康）To keep healthy, we need to eat healthy food and drink enough water. We should do exercise every day, like jumping rope or playing ball games. We also need to sleep well and take care of our eyes and teeth. （强身举措） For our mind, we can talk to family and friends when we feel sad. Thinking about happy things can make us feel happy too. （舒心总结） 范文（提高版）： What is a healthy life? I think health means having a strong body and a happy mind. （定义健康） For our body, we should eat more vegetables and fruits instead of junk food. We can do exercise for 30 minutes every day, like running or playing basketball. We need to sleep well and wash our hands often to keep clean. （强身举措）For our mind, when we feel down, we can talk to our parents or friends. Joining after-school clubs and making new friends can also make us feel happy. A healthy life helps us live better! （舒心总结） 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $