Unit 4 Managing money well（写作突破专项训练）英语人教PEP版六年级上册（新教材）

**基本信息** 以“金钱管理”为主题，通过结构化写作方法指引、分层词汇句型体系及梯度化写作任务，系统培养学生英语语言表达能力与理性消费思维品质。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作方法指引|3篇原文解析|提炼“总述-分类-总结”写作框架，区分“需要/想要”、支付方式发展等专项结构|从篇章结构到段落逻辑，构建“主题引入-内容展开-升华总结”表达链| |核心词汇与句型|3类词汇/3组句型|按“金钱管理-物品-服务”分类词汇，聚焦计划描述、用途说明等功能句型|词汇分类记忆→句型功能应用→篇章综合表达，形成语言能力发展梯度| |写作任务|2个分层写作题|提供基础版/提高版范文，示范“数据支撑+需求分析+储蓄规划”写作逻辑|从个人计划到通用建议，实现从具体到抽象的思维品质提升|

Unit 4 Managing money well 写作方法指引- 原文指路 （《我的月度消费计划》） I have three hundred and fifty-seven yuan. 开篇铺垫：明确个人拥有的零花钱总额，为消费计划提供数据基础。 I'm going to buy a schoolbag. 刚需规划：列出学习必需的消费项目，体现消费优先级。 I also want to buy some books. 欲望规划：列出想要的消费项目，清晰区分“需要”与“想要”。 I put 52 yuan into my piggy bank. 储蓄安排：说明储蓄金额，展现金钱的合理分配与长远意识。 写作方法指引- 原文指路 （《明智用钱小贴士》） How can we use our money wisely? 引出主题：以设问句开启，聚焦明智用钱的核心话题。 We can write a spending plan. 策略提出：给出制定消费计划的实用建议，帮助合理支配金钱。 We can wait for a sale. 策略提出：提出等待促销的省钱技巧，减少不必要的开支。 写作方法指引- 原文指路 （《未来的支付方式》） A long time ago, people exchanged goods or services. 追溯起源：描述早期物物交换的支付方式，铺垫支付方式的发展历程。 But metal coins were heavy to carry. So people used paper money. 演变说明：解释支付方式从金属货币到纸币的转变原因，体现发展逻辑。 Now we can use our mobile phones to pay. It is so quick and easy! 现状描述：介绍当前便捷的手机支付方式，突出时代进步。 How will we buy things in the future? 畅想引导：以问句激发思考，开启对未来支付方式的想象。 一、核心词汇 1. 金钱与理财相关 pocket money, lucky money, piggy bank, sale, total, save, spend, price, spending plan, manage money, save up 2. 可购买物品（Goods） schoolbag, books, animal books, ice cream, sunglasses, microscope, dictionary, basketball, food and drink, clothes, school things 3. 付费服务（Services） haircut, home delivery, go swimming, go to a dance class, go to the cinema, see a doctor 二、参考句型 1. 描述个人收支与花钱计划 I have three hundred and fifty-seven yuan. I'm going to buy a schoolbag. I also want to buy some animal books. I put 52 yuan into my piggy bank. Now I still have 100 yuan. First I'm going to buy a pair of sunglasses for Grandpa. I still need to save more money for a microscope. 2. 描述金钱的用途 We use money to buy goods. We buy food and drink, clothes and school things. We use money to pay for services. We need different services like haircuts and home deliveries. 3. 明智理财的建议 We can write a spending plan to use money wisely. We can wait for a sale to buy expensive things. We should be careful with our money. We need to save some money every month. 易错点提示 1. need与want的区分：写作时要明确，need指“必需的物品/服务”（比如a new schoolbag）；want指“想要的非必需物品”（比如ice cream），不要混淆使用。 2. be going to的正确用法：be going to后接动词原形，表达计划做某事，例如正确表达是"I'm going to buy a dictionary."，不要写成"I'm going to buys a dictionary."。 3. 金钱数字的英文表达：百位和十位之间要加and，比如“357元”是three hundred and fifty-seven yuan，不要省略and；金额单位yuan不需要变复数。 4. 服务类短语的搭配：表达为服务付费时，注意搭配正确，例如"We use money to pay for a haircut."，不要错误写成"We use money to pay haircut."。 写作一 假设你这个月有300元零花钱，请写一篇短文介绍你的花钱计划，要区分清楚你“需要”和“想要”的物品，并说明你会存多少钱。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： pocket money, piggy bank, save, spend, schoolbag, animal books, ice cream 写作二 请写一篇短文，介绍金钱在日常生活中的用途，并给同学们提出2-3条明智理财的小建议。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： manage money, spending plan, save up, sale, goods, services, piggy bank 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： I have three hundred yuan pocket money this month. （总述零花钱）First, I need a new schoolbag, so I'm going to spend eighty yuan on it. Then I want to buy some animal books. They cost fifty yuan. I also want to buy an ice cream for ten yuan. Finally, I put one hundred and sixty yuan into my piggy bank. （罗列开支）I think I can manage my money well. （收获感悟） 范文（提高版）： I have three hundred yuan pocket money this month. （总述零花钱）My old schoolbag is broken, so I need to buy a new one. It costs eighty yuan. I love animals very much, so I want to buy some interesting animal books for fifty yuan. I also want to treat myself to a strawberry ice cream for ten yuan. The rest one hundred and sixty yuan goes into my piggy bank. （罗列开支）I'm saving up for a microscope, so I will keep saving money every month. （收获感悟） 写作二 范文（基础版）： Money is very useful in our life. We use money to buy goods like food and drink, clothes and school things. We also pay for services like haircuts and going to the cinema. （金钱作用）To manage money well, we can write a spending plan every month. We should save some money in our piggy bank. （理财方法）We can wait for a sale to buy expensive things too. （收获感悟） 范文（提高版）： Money plays an important role in our daily life. We use it to buy different goods, such as schoolbags, dictionaries and delicious food. We also pay for services like having a haircut, going to a dance class or seeing a doctor. （金钱作用）To manage money wisely, first we can make a clear spending plan every month. Second, we need to save some money in our piggy bank every time we get pocket money. Third, when we want to buy expensive things like a basketball, we can wait for a sale to save more money. （理财方法）I follow these rules and have saved a lot of money now! （收获感悟） 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $