Unit 6 Our clothes（写作突破专项训练）英语北京版六年级上册（新教材）

Unit 6 Our clothes 写作方法指引- 场合穿搭类（原文指路） Mum: Oh, tomorrow will be a big day. You should dress nicely for it. 开篇引入：点明重要场合，提出得体穿搭的核心要求。 Maomao: Should I wear my orange sportswear? It looks cool. 提出候选方案：列举心仪服装并说明个人喜好理由。 Mum: I'm afraid not. Sportswear is for doing sports. It's better to wear shirts and trousers for an important speech. 给出专业建议：否定不合适选项，结合场合说明原因并推荐适配搭配。 Mum: Hmm, the blue shirt is too dark. It doesn't go well with your trousers. 分析搭配合理性：指出服装色彩搭配的不协调之处。 Mum: They go well with each other. And a pair of black shoes is also good. 确定最终搭配：肯定合适组合并补充细节完善穿搭方案。 写作方法指引 - 旧衣环保利用类（原文指路） Sara: My younger sister often wears my old clothes. My mum says reusing old clothes is an easy way to cut down on waste. 开篇点题：说明旧衣再利用的方式及环保意义 Maomao: Sometimes my parents give the clothes to their friends' children. Sometimes we give the clothes to children in need. Sometimes we put them in the recycling bins. 列举常规途径：分点说明旧衣物的多种环保处理方式 Lingling: We cut old trousers into shorts, and turn useless clothes into toys. 创意改造举例：具体展示旧衣变废为宝的创意方法 写作方法指引 - 智能服装介绍类（原文指路） Smart clothes are different from our daily clothes. They can do amazing things to keep us healthy and safe. 开篇总述：点明智能服装与普通服装的区别及核心功能定位 Smart clothes are a big help in protecting our health. They can help us feel warm in winter and cool in summer. 分述健康功能：说明智能服装在调节体感舒适度方面的基础作用 For example, smart shirts can tell us if we have something wrong with our body. Smart sleepwear helps us have a better sleep. 举例增强说服力：用具体产品实例细化说明健康监测功能 Smart clothes can also keep us safe. Some smart clothes can change colours to show the danger of the environment. 分述安全功能：介绍智能服装在环境安全预警方面的特殊作用 写作方法指引 - 特殊职业防护装介绍类（原文指路） Some kinds of special clothing can keep people safe and healthy. 开篇总述：点明特殊职业服装的核心防护作用 When firefighters put out a fire, they wear special clothing to protect themselves from danger. 引入职业场景：说明消防员防护装的使用场景及防护目的 A firefighter's special jacket and trousers can keep the heat away. Such clothes also glow in the dark so that people can see firefighters easily. 具体说明功能：分点介绍消防员服装的隔热、标识防护功能 Doctors and nurses wear special clothing to protect themselves and others. Doctors usually wear white coats to keep themselves clean. 介绍医护服装：说明医护人员服装的双向防护属性及清洁功能 一、核心词汇 1. 日常衣物类 shirt, trousers, sportswear, shoes, scarf, sweater, shorts, coat, scrubs, gloves 2. 衣物相关动作类 choose, wear, go well with, try on, cut into, turn into, give to, put into 3. 特殊功能衣物类 smart clothes, smart sleepwear, smart shirts, firefighters' clothing, doctors' white coats, nurses' scrubs 4. 环保相关类 reuse, recycle, cut down on waste, recycling bins, children in need 二、参考句型 1. 穿搭建议类 It's better to wear shirts and trousers for an important speech. The blue shirt doesn't go well with the black trousers. The white shirt goes well with the black trousers and a pair of black shoes. 2. 旧衣利用类 Reusing old clothes is an easy way to cut down on waste. We can give old clothes to children in need. We can cut old trousers into shorts and turn useless clothes into toys. Sometimes we put old clothes in the recycling bins. 3. 智能衣物介绍类 Smart clothes are different from our daily clothes. They can do amazing things to keep us healthy and safe. Smart sleepwear helps us have a better sleep. Some smart clothes with lights can let other people see us more clearly in the dark. 4. 特殊职业服装介绍类 Firefighters wear special clothing to protect themselves from danger when they put out a fire. Doctors usually wear white coats to keep themselves clean in the hospital. Many nurses wear pink or green scrubs to look after patients. 易错点提示 1. 衣物名词单复数易错：trousers、shorts这类词本身是复数形式，表达“一条裤子/短裤”要搭配a pair of，不能直接用a trousers/a shorts。 2. 短语搭配易错：“与……搭配协调”的正确表达是go well with，注意主语单复数对应的动词形式，比如The shirt goes well with...，These trousers go well with...。 3. 动词短语介词易错：cut into（切成）、turn into（变成）中的介词into不能误写为in。 4. 固定表达易错：“需要帮助的孩子”正确表达是children in need，当指代多个孩子时要用复数children，不要误用为child in need。 写作一 学校下周要举办演讲比赛，请你给好朋友Tom写一段穿搭建议，告诉他适合穿什么衣服，哪些搭配不合适，帮他准备得体的着装。要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： shirt, trousers, shoes, go well with, wear, try on 写作二 现在大家都在倡导环保生活，请你写一篇短文，说说我们可以怎么处理旧衣物，做到减少浪费、循环利用。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。。 参考单词： reuse, recycle, cut down on waste, children in need, cut into, turn into, recycling bins 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： Dear Tom, （书信称呼） The school speech contest is coming. It's better to wear shirts and trousers for it. The white shirt goes well with a pair of black trousers and black shoes. The blue shirt doesn't go well with black trousers. You can try on the clothes first to make sure they fit you well. （穿搭建议）I hope you have a great performance! （祝福结尾） 范文（提高版）： Dear Tom, （书信称呼） I know you're busy preparing for the school speech contest next week. Let me give you some dressing tips. It's better to wear formal clothes for the contest. A white shirt goes well with a pair of black trousers and clean black shoes. Don't choose a blue shirt with black trousers—they don't go well together. You can try on the whole outfit before the day to make sure it's comfortable. If it's a little cold, you can put on a thin coat outside. （穿搭建议） Good luck with your speech! （祝福结尾） 写作二 范文（基础版）： Reusing old clothes is an easy way to cut down on waste. （引入主题）We can give clean old clothes to children in need. We can also cut old trousers into shorts for summer. Sometimes we put old clothes in the recycling bins too. （具体做法） Let's try our best to reuse and recycle old clothes to protect the environment. （结尾倡议） 范文（提高版）： Now more and more people care about environmental protection. Reusing old clothes is a great way to cut down on waste. （引入主题）We can collect clean old clothes and give them to children in need. For clothes that are not suitable to wear, we can cut old trousers into shorts, or turn old sweaters into small toys for our pets. We can also put some old clothes into recycling bins if we can't reuse them. （具体做法）Let's do our part to make the world better! （结尾倡议） 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $