Unit 2 Stay safe and healthy（写作突破专项训练）英语北京版六年级上册（新教材）

**基本信息** 以“安全健康”主题为载体，构建“方法指引-词汇句型-写作实践”三维训练体系，系统培养语言表达逻辑与实用写作能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作方法指引|7个例句解析|总起句明确主题+First/Second/Third分点论述+Never/If句式强化表达|从结构搭建到句式选择，形成“总-分”写作逻辑链| |核心词汇|3类30+词|按“安全防护-健康生活-行为动作”主题归类记忆|词汇与主题场景直接关联，服务写作内容表达| |参考句型|3类15+句|建议类(should/shouldn't)、问题描述类、自我保护类句型模板|句型与词汇匹配，实现“词汇-句型-语篇”的应用迁移| |写作任务|2篇范文(基础/提高版)|“慰问事由-核心规则-祝愿”书信结构；“主题-习惯-建议”短文框架|通过阶梯式范文展示方法应用，覆盖高频写作场景|

Unit 2 Stay safe and healthy 写作方法指引- 原文指路 We need to follow three rules when we ride a bike. 写作作用：总起引入，明确要阐述的规则数量，让文章结构清晰有序。 First, always wear a helmet. 写作作用：分点列举第一条规则，用"First"引导，使内容条理分明，便于读者理解。 Second, stay on the right side of the road. 写作作用：分点列举第二条规则，承接上文，保持内容的逻辑性和层次感。 Third, be slow and careful. 写作作用：分点列举第三条规则，完成规则体系的阐述，使内容完整全面。 First, you shouldn't eat too much. 写作作用：提出禁止性健康建议，用"First"分点，清晰指出不良饮食习惯。 Second, you shouldn't do sports right after eating. 写作作用：继续分点提出禁止性建议，说明饭后运动的危害，增强建议的实用性。 Never open the door for strangers when your parents are not at home. 写作作用：用"Never"强化安全禁令，明确告知危险行为，语气强烈，警示性强。 If a stranger tries to take you away, cry for help. 写作作用：用条件句给出应急应对方法，教会学生在特定危险场景下的正确做法，提升内容的指导性。 一、核心词汇 1. 安全防护类 helmet, fire, match, smoke, safe, danger, stranger, bad touch, protect, run away, cry for help, follow rules, stay on the right side 2. 健康生活类 stomachache, healthy food, sports, sleep, clean, wash hands, take a shower, medicine, advice, eat right, play smart 3. 行为动作类 ride a bike, fall off, eat too much, do sports, open the door, get into a car, talk to strangers, take gifts, share cups 二、参考句型 1. 建议与规则类 You should ride a bike carefully. You shouldn't eat too much. You shouldn't do sports right after eating. It's better to eat right and play smart. You need to follow three rules when you ride a bike. First, always wear a helmet. Second, stay on the right side of the road. Third, be slow and careful. Never open the door for strangers when your parents are not at home. Don't share cups with others. Don't talk to strangers on the Internet. Don't take candy or gifts from strangers. 2. 问题描述类 He broke his right leg last weekend. He rode a bike in the park but was too fast and fell off. Mike had a stomachache because he ate too much and played football right after lunch. If someone touches your body for no reason and it makes you feel uncomfortable, that's a bad touch. 3. 自我保护类 If a stranger tries to take you away, cry for help. If someone tries to use bad touch, run away quickly and tell your parents or teachers about it. Say "NO!" to bad touch, and never keep it a secret. 易错点提示 1. 情态动词should/shouldn't用法：should和shouldn't后必须接动词原形，比如正确表达是"You should wear a helmet."，不要写成"You should wears a helmet."；否定形式shouldn't不要误写为should not的其他错误缩写。 2. 词汇拼写易错：helmet（头盔）：容易漏写字母"e"或"t"，可结合发音/ˈhelmɪt/拆分记忆；stomachache（胃痛）：较长单词，拆分stom-ach-ache分段记忆；stranger（陌生人）：不要误写为"strenger"，注意字母"a"的正确位置。 3. 固定搭配混淆："fall off the bike"（从自行车摔下）不要写成"fall down the bike""right after eating"（吃完立刻）不要漏写介词"after"；"ride a bike"（骑自行车）不要省略不定冠词"a"，误写为"ride bike"。 4. 祈使句否定形式：表示禁止的祈使句用"Don't + 动词原形"，比如"Don't share cups with others."，不要写成"Not share cups with others."。 写作一 你的好朋友Tom上周骑自行车时因速度太快摔下受伤，目前在家休养。请你写一封信给他，告知他骑自行车需遵守的安全规则，以及遇到危险时的自我保护方法。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： helmet, stay on the right side, follow rules, fall off, cry for help, ride a bike, safe 写作二 健康的生活方式能让我们强壮又快乐。请你写一篇短文，介绍自己日常的健康生活习惯，同时给同学们一些保持健康的小建议。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。。 参考单词： healthy food, wash hands, sleep, do sports, stomachache, eat right, take a shower, medicine 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： Dear Tom, I'm sorry to hear you fell off your bike and got hurt. When you ride a bike again, you should follow some safety rules. （慰问事由）First, you must wear a helmet. Second, stay on the right side of the road. Third, ride slowly and carefully. Don't ride too fast. If you meet danger, you can cry for help. （骑行须知） I hope you get well soon. （暖心祝愿） Yours, Li Ming 范文（提高版）： Dear Tom, I feel sad that you fell off your bike last week and broke your leg. When you start riding again, please remember these important rules. （慰问事由）Always wear a helmet to protect your head. Stay on the right side of the road and never ride too fast, especially in the park. If a stranger tries to talk to you or take you away, cry for help right away. Follow these rules, and you can stay safe every time. （骑行须知） I hope you get well soon. （暖心祝愿） Yours, Li Ming 写作二 范文（基础版）： Stay Healthy To stay healthy, I have good habits. （点明主题）I eat healthy food every day, like vegetables and fruit. I wash my hands before meals. I sleep 9 hours every night. I do sports for 30 minutes after school. （日常习惯） You shouldn't eat too much junk food. You shouldn't do sports right after eating. If you have a stomachache, take some medicine. Let's stay healthy together! （建议倡导） 范文（提高版）： Stay Healthy Healthy life makes us strong and happy. I keep good habits every day. （点明主题） I eat right—lots of fresh vegetables and fruit, no too much candy or fried food. I wash my hands carefully before meals and take a shower every evening. I sleep 9 hours each night and play basketball with friends after school. （日常习惯） For my classmates, I have small advice: Don't eat too much junk food, and don't run right after lunch. If you feel sick, tell your parents and take medicine on time. Let's live a healthy life together! （建议倡导） 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $