Unit 2 Traditional festivals and culture（写作突破专项训练）英语北京版五年级上册（新教材)

**基本信息** 以传统节日为主题，构建“方法指引-词汇句型-易错提示-分层写作”的系统性训练体系，强化语言表达与文化意识融合。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作方法指引|1个示例|分步骤写作框架（开篇点题-说明时间-点明内涵-描述习俗-丰富故事）|节日介绍要素（时间-意义-活动-文化）结构化整合| |核心词汇|5类（节日/节气/食物/活动/背景）|主题词汇分类记忆法|按“节日属性-特色要素”逻辑关联，形成词汇网络| |参考句型|3类（节日介绍/活动描述/节气说明）|固定句型套用+场景变式|句型功能与节日信息点对应，实现从基础到拓展表达| |易错点提示|3点（日期表达/专有名词/固定搭配）|错误类型归纳+正反向对比|针对语言准确性痛点，构建“规则-错误-纠正”逻辑链| |写作任务|2个主题（中秋/重阳），各2篇范文（基础版/提高版）|分层写作示范（基础版：要素完整；提高版：情感与细节拓展）|从“模仿应用”到“个性表达”，体现语言能力进阶逻辑|

Unit 2 Traditional festivals and culture 写作方法指引- 原文指路 It's about the Mid-Autumn Festival. 开篇点题：引出要介绍的中国传统节日主题。 It's on the fifteenth day of the eighth month in the lunar calendar. 说明时间：准确表述节日的农历具体日期。 It's a festival for families to get together. 点明内涵：介绍节日所承载的家庭团圆核心意义。 We eat moon cakes and fruit, and we enjoy the full moon at night. 描述习俗：具体说明节日里的传统饮食与活动。 Yes, the story of Chang'e Flying to the Moon is interesting. 丰富内容：补充节日相关的经典故事，让介绍更具趣味性。 一、核心词汇 1. 传统节日类 Mid-Autumn Festival（中秋节）Double Ninth Festival/Chongyang Festival（重阳节） Tomb-sweeping Day（清明节） 2. 节气类 24 solar terms（二十四节气）Beginning of Summer （立夏） 3. 节日特色食物类 moon cakes（月饼）Chongyang cakes（重阳糕）qingtuan（青团）fruit（水果） 4. 节日/节气活动类 enjoy the full moon（赏月）get together（团聚）visit grandparents（看望祖父母） sweep tombs（扫墓）go outing（出游）show love and care（表达关爱） 5. 相关背景词汇 lunar calendar（农历）public holiday（公共假日）national heroes（民族英雄） Chang'e Flying to the Moon（嫦娥奔月） 二、参考句型 1. 节日基础介绍句型 It's the Mid-Autumn Festival. It's on the fifteenth day of the eighth month in the lunar calendar. The Double Ninth Festival is a festival for elders. It's on the ninth day of the ninth month in the lunar calendar. Tomb-sweeping Day mostly falls on the 4th or 5th in April. It's a festival to remember the dead. 2. 节日活动描述句型 On the Mid-Autumn Festival, we eat moon cakes and fruit, and enjoy the full moon at night. On the Double Ninth Festival, young people always do something for elders to show love and care. On Tomb-sweeping Day, people usually sweep tombs of their family members and national heroes. People also like to go outing on this day. I always visit my grandparents and give them Chongyang cakes on the Double Ninth Festival. 3. 节气介绍句型 There are 24 solar terms in the traditional Chinese calendar. Beginning of Summer is one of the solar terms. After that day, it gets hot quickly. It's time for crops to grow when Beginning of Summer comes. People in different parts of China eat different food for good luck on Beginning of Summer. 易错点提示 1. 日期表达易错：农历日期要用固定结构“on the + 序数词 + day of the + 序数词 + month in the lunar calendar”，注意序数词的正确拼写，比如fifteenth（第十五）、ninth（第九），不要写成基数词。公历日期结构为“on the + 序数词 + in + 月份”，比如on the 4th in April，不要混淆农历和公历的表达结构。 2. 专有名词拼写易错：节日名称属于专有名词，首字母需大写，复合节日名注意连字符，比如Mid-Autumn Festival、Double Ninth Festival；拼音转写的节日名Chongyang Festival首字母也要大写。节气名称Beginning of Summer和对应的拼音Lixia首字母均需大写。 3. 固定搭配易错：牢记节日相关固定短语，比如enjoy the full moon（赏月）、sweep tombs（扫墓）、show love and care（表达关爱），不要随意替换词汇。 写作一 请你介绍中国的中秋节，包括它的时间、传统活动和特色食物，不少于50词。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： Mid-Autumn Festival, lunar calendar, moon cakes, fruit, enjoy the full moon, get together, Chang'e Flying to the Moon 写作二 请你介绍中国的重阳节，说明它的节日意义、时间以及你在这一天的活动，不少于50词。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： Double Ninth Festival/Chongyang Festival, lunar calendar, Chongyang cakes, visit grandparents, show love and care, elders, go outing 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： It's the Mid-Autumn Festival. It's on the fifteenth day of the eighth month in the lunar calendar. It's a public holiday in China. （节日简介） On this day, families get together happily. We eat tasty moon cakes and fresh fruit. At night, we enjoy the full moon in the yard. We also talk about the interesting story Chang'e Flying to the Moon. （节日活动） 范文（提高版）： The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of my favorite traditional Chinese festivals. It falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth month in the lunar calendar. （节日简介） Every year, my whole family gathers at my grandparents' house. We share moon cakes with different fillings like lotus seed and red bean, and eat sweet fruit. When the bright full moon comes up, we sit outside, enjoy it and listen to grandma tell the story of Chang'e Flying to the Moon. （节日活动） I love the warm feeling of this festival. （内心感受） 写作二 范文（基础版）： The Double Ninth Festival is a festival for elders. It's on the ninth day of the ninth month in the lunar calendar. It's a great day to show love and care to old people. （节日简介）On this day, I always visit my grandparents. I give them sweet Chongyang cakes. （节日活动）We also go outing in the nearby park and have a nice time. （内心感受） 范文（提高版）： The Double Ninth Festival, also called Chongyang Festival, is a special festival for elders in China. It's on the ninth day of the ninth month in the lunar calendar. （节日简介）Every year, I prepare a box of soft Chongyang cakes and visit my grandparents early. We climb the small hill near their home, enjoy the fresh autumn air and take lots of photos. （节日活动）I hope my grandparents can stay healthy and happy every day. （内心感受） 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $