摘要:
**基本信息**
以“情绪表达—原因分析—问题解决”为逻辑主线,系统整合句式总结与主题写作训练,强化语言表达能力与逻辑思维品质。
**专项设计**
|模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑|
|----|-----------|----------|----------|
|常用句式总结|5类20句|分类归纳情绪描述、原因阐释、自我调节、他人状态描写及结尾总结核心句式|从基础情绪表达(I am...)到深层原因分析(because...),再到问题解决(I can...),形成完整写作逻辑链|
|主题写作练习|8题8范文|通过“个人情绪—他人状态—情绪调节”三维度命题,强化句式迁移应用|覆盖“介绍-解释-解决-总结”写作全流程,范文示范句式精准运用,提升语言表达规范性|
内容正文:
【译林版(三起)五年级上册】
Unit 2 I feel good 单元主题写作专项训练
一、单元写作常用句式总结
(一)介绍情绪/状态
1. I am very happy/sad/angry/tired today. 我今天很开心/难过/生气/疲惫。
2. I feel good/bad now. 我现在感觉很好/不舒服。
3. Look at me! I am not fine. 看看我!我状态不好。
4. My mood is not good today. 我今天心情不太好。
(二)解释情绪由来
1. I am happy because I have a new gift. 我很开心,因为我有一个新礼物。
2. I am tired because I study hard. 我很累,因为我努力学习。
3. I am sad because I can’t play outside. 我很难过,因为我不能出去玩。
4. I am afraid of dogs, so I am scared. 我害怕小狗,所以我很胆怯。
(三)解决办法/自我调节句式
1. I can have a rest. It makes me feel good. 我可以休息一下,这让我感觉很好。
2. Don’t be sad. I will be happy soon. 不要难过,我很快就会开心起来。
3. I can relax and keep happy. 我可以放松自己,保持开心。
4. My friends help me, so I feel better. 朋友帮助我,我感觉好多了。
(四)描写他人状态句式
1. He/She feels tired/sad. 他/她感觉疲惫/难过。
2. What’s wrong with him/her? He/She is ill. 他/她怎么了?他/她生病了。
3. My friend is angry, so I comfort him. 我的朋友生气了,所以我安慰他。
(五)结尾总结句式
1. I want to be happy every day. 我想要每天都开开心心。
2. Keeping in a good mood is important. 保持好心情很重要。
3. I feel much better now. 我现在感觉好多了。
二、单元主题写作专项练习题
要求:书写工整,语句通顺,无语法错误,贴合主题,字数30词左右
1. My Mood Today
请你简单介绍自己今天的心情,说明为什么会有这种心情,简单写一写自己的做法。
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2. I Feel Tired
写写你什么时候会感觉疲惫,疲惫的时候你会做什么,简单描述自己的状态。
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3. Don’t Be Sad
假设你的朋友今天很难过,请你写几句话安慰他,告诉他如何变得开心。
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4. My Good Mood
写写让你开心的事情,开心时的状态,以及你想一直保持好心情的想法。
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5. I’m Afraid of...
请补全题目,写写你害怕什么,为什么害怕,以及自己的心态。
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6. My Friend’s Mood
观察你的朋友,写写他当下的情绪或身体状态,以及你会如何帮助他。
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7. Keep Happy Every Day
写写如何调节自己的情绪,怎样让自己每天都保持好心情。
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8. What’s Wrong?
创设情景,写写自己身体不舒服或者心情不好的状态,以及解决办法。
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【参考范文】
1.
My Mood Today
Today I feel very happy. Because I play with my good friends. We have a good time. I want to keep happy every day. I love this feeling.
2.
I Feel Tired
I often feel tired after studying and playing. When I am tired, I can have a rest. Rest makes me feel good. I will be energetic soon.
3.
Don’t Be Sad
My friend is sad today. I want to comfort him. Don’t be sad. We can play games together. We will be happy soon. Everything will be fine.
4.
My Good Mood
I have a good mood today. I feel great. Because my mother gives me a nice gift. I smile a lot. I hope I can be happy every day.
5.
I’m Afraid of Dogs
I’m afraid of dogs. They look strong and scary. But I know most dogs are friendly. I will not be afraid. I want to be brave.
6.
My Friend’s Mood
My friend Tom feels tired today. He studies hard all day. I tell him to have a rest. I hope he can feel better and keep happy.
7.
Keep Happy Every Day
It is good for us to keep happy every day. When I feel bad, I will have a rest or play with friends. I never be angry for long. I love happy life.
8.
What’s Wrong?
What’s wrong with me? I feel bad and tired. I am a little ill. But I have a rest at home. Now I feel much better. I am happy again.
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