内容正文:
沪教五四九上Unit2作文
Unit 2: People and their jobs
作文题目1:申请信(Application Letter)
题目:
你看到学校公告栏上贴了一则招募"社区志愿者"的通知。请你写一封申请信,表达你想成为一名社区志愿者的意愿,并说明你的优势和相关经历。
写作要点分析:
本题有三个写作要点。第一,清晰表明写信目的,即申请成为志愿者,并简要介绍自己的身份。第二,重点说明自己具备的优势条件,包括个人品质、相关经验和技能,这是打动对方的核心部分。第三,表达认真做好这份工作的决心,并礼貌地期待对方的回复。
必备句型和词组:
申请意愿:
· I am writing to apply for...
· I am a student from...
· I am very interested in...
说明优势:
· I believe I am qualified for this position because...
· I have experience in...
· I am good at...
· I am patient/responsible/hard-working.
· I can work well in a team.
表达决心与期待:
· I promise I will do my best to...
· I would be grateful if...
· I am looking forward to your reply.
高分范文(115词):
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for the position of community volunteer. I am a Grade 9 student from New Star Middle School, and I am very interested in serving our neighbourhood and helping people in need.
I believe I am qualified for this position because I have several strengths. First, I am patient and responsible, which are important qualities for a volunteer. I have already had some experience in helping the elderly in my community by reading newspapers to them and doing simple housework. Besides, I am good at communicating with others and I can work well in a team. I also have basic first-aid knowledge that might be useful in emergencies.
I promise I will do my best to serve the community. I would be grateful if you could give me this opportunity. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
作文题目2:倡议书(Proposal)
题目:
下周是学校的"职业探索周"(Career Exploration Week),请你以学生会主席的身份写一份倡议书,鼓励同学们积极参与各项活动,认真思考自己的职业理想。
写作要点分析:
本题有三个写作要点。第一,说明活动的背景、时间、地点和目的,让同学们了解活动的基本信息。第二,详细介绍活动的具体安排和主要内容,告诉同学们可以做什么、收获什么。第三,以号召性语言鼓励大家积极参与,表达对活动成功的期待。
必备句型和词组:
发出倡议:
· I am writing to call on all students to...
说明活动:
· The activity will be held from... to...
· The purpose of this activity is to...
· During the week, we will...
鼓励参与:
· Everyone is welcome to...
· This is a great chance for you to...
· Your active participation will...
结尾号召:
· Let's work together to...
· I hope everyone can...
高分范文(110词):
Dear fellow students,
I am writing to call on all of you to take an active part in our school's Career Exploration Week, which will be held from next Monday to Friday in the school hall.
The purpose of this activity is to help us learn more about different jobs and think about our future careers. During the week, we will invite professionals from different fields, such as doctors, engineers and artists, to share their work experiences. There will also be a sharing session every afternoon where you can talk about your dream jobs and ask questions. This is a great chance for you to explore various career paths and get valuable advice.
Let's work together to make this week meaningful. I hope everyone can join and discover your true interest!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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