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读后续写 每日一练
Day 1
勾勒画面,传递情感
情绪+动作+说话内容
句式1:With + 情绪名词 + surging through + sb(如同情绪在体内翻涌),主语 + 动词(下意识动作) + 直接引语(展现当下情绪心理): 强调情绪冲击下的本能反应与脱口而出的心声。
例句:With excitement surging through him, he jumped up and shouted, "I can't believe I made it!" 兴奋感在他体内翻涌,他跳起来大喊:"真不敢相信我做到了!"
1.愤怒在她心中翻涌,她涨红了脸喊道:"你怎么能这样对我!"
2.喜悦在全家人心中涌动,妈妈眼含泪水笑道:"咱们终于团聚了!"
3.悲伤如潮水般在他体内肆虐,他哽咽着低语:"我永远失去她了。"
4.恐慌在他心中翻涌,他冲到病床前哭喊:"请不要离开我!"
5.感激之情在她心中翻涌,她紧紧抱住老师说道:"我所有的成功都归功于您。"
6.自豪感在父亲心中翻涌,他拍了拍儿子的肩膀说道:"孩子,我为你感到骄傲!"
勾勒画面,传递情感
情绪 + 动作 + 心理
句式2:With + 情绪,主语 + 动作,+主语的心理活动(ving)。
例句:With excitement, she rushed to the stage, thinking that all her hard work had finally paid off. 怀着激动的心情,她冲向舞台,想着自己所有的努力终于得到了回报。
1. 怀着愧疚之情,他低下头,反思自己之前犯下的错误。
2. 怀着失落的情绪,他离开教室,想着再也不会有人相信他了。
3. 带着喜悦的笑容,她拆开礼物,满心期待是自己心仪已久的东西。
4. 怀着恐惧,她向后退了一步,不知道接下来会发生什么可怕的事情。
5. 怀着如释重负的心情,他长长地呼出一口气,意识到一切最终都顺利解决了。
6. 怀着钦佩之情,她凝视着自己的榜样,梦想着有一天自己也能成为那样的人。
Day 2
勾勒画面,传递情感
情绪 + 动作 + 心理
句式1:主语 + 情绪动词 + as + 主语 + 动作 + 心理(ving)。
描绘出某人做某事时什么情绪,以及心理活动。
例句:She trembled as she opened the letter, fearing the worst. 她打开信时颤抖着,害怕是最坏的消息。
1.他在领奖时咧嘴笑了,感到一股自豪感涌上心头。
2.得知获奖消息时,她欣喜地蹦跳起来,简直不敢相信自己的好运。
3.他等待考试结果时焦虑地皱起眉,脑海里不断闪过各种糟糕的念头。
4.她屏住呼吸走上舞台,努力让自己狂跳的心平静下来。
5.他读着录取通知书时如释重负地叹了口气,知道自己所有的努力都有了回报。
6.她紧张地咬着嘴唇走进面试室,不知道自己是否准备充分。---
勾勒画面,传递情感
情绪+动作+心理
句式2:情绪副词作状语 + 主语 + 动作 + 心理动词(ving) + that 从句。
描绘某人做某事时是什么情绪,以及心理活动。
例句:Desperately, she grabbed his arm, hoping that he wouldn't leave. 绝望地,她抓住他的胳膊,希望他不要离开。
1.焦虑地,他在房间里踱步,害怕错过重要的电话。
2.难过地,他低着头,后悔自己刚刚说错了话。
3.欣慰地,她看着孩子的笑脸,觉得所有的付出都值得。
4.满怀希望地,她举起手,希望老师能注意到她并给她一次机会。
5.欣喜地,他打开梦想大学的来信,知道自己人生的新篇章即将开始。
6.感激地,她紧紧握住母亲的手,意识到母亲的爱一直都在---
参考答案
Day1
句式1
1. With anger surging through her, she flushed and cried out, "How could you treat me like this!"
2. With joy surging through the whole family, Mom smiled with tears in her eyes and said, "We're finally together!"
3. With sorrow surging through him like a tide, he choked and whispered, "I have lost her forever."
4. With panic surging through him, he rushed to the hospital bed and cried, "Please don't leave me!"
5. With gratitude surging through her, she hugged her teacher tightly and said, "I owe all my success to you."
6. With pride surging through his father's heart, he patted his son on the shoulder and said, "I'm so proud of you, son!"
Day 1
句式2
1. With guilt, he lowered his head, reflecting on the mistakes he had made before.
2. With disappointment, he left the classroom, thinking that no one would ever trust him again.
3. With a smile of joy, she unwrapped the gift, expecting it to be something she had longed for.
4. With fear, she stepped back, wondering what terrible thing was about to happen.
5. With relief, he let out a long breath, realizing that everything had turned out fine in the end.
6. With admiration, she gazed at her role model, dreaming that one day she could become someone like her.
Day2
句式1
1. He grinned as he received the award, feeling a surge of pride.
2. She jumped with joy as she learned the good news, hardly believing her luck.
3. He frowned anxiously as he waited for the exam results, various terrible thoughts flashing through his mind.
4. She held her breath as she stepped onto the stage, trying to calm her racing heart.
5. He sighed with relief as he read the acceptance letter, knowing that all his hard work had paid off.
6. She bit her lip nervously as she entered the interview room, wondering if she was well prepared enough.
Day2
句式2
1. Anxiously, he paced up and down the room, fearing that he might miss the important call.
2. Sadly, he hung his head, regretting that he had said the wrong words just now.
3. Relievedly, she looked at her child's smiling face, feeling that all her efforts had been worthwhile.
4. Hopefully, she raised her hand, wishing that the teacher would notice her and give her a chance.
5. Joyfully, he opened the letter from his dream university, knowing that a new chapter of his life was about to begin.
6. Gratefully, she held her mother's hand tightly, realizing that her mother's love had always been there for her.
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