Unit 4 Getting together（写作突破专项训练）英语译林版三起六年级上册（新教材）

Unit4 Getting together 写作方法指引 - 原文指路（描述长辈生日庆祝经历） Yesterday was 21st October. It was Grandma’s 66th birthday. 开篇引入：交代生日事件的具体时间与核心对象。 We went to my grandparents’ house in the morning. My parents gave Grandma a nice smartphone. I drew a picture for her. 细节描述：按时间顺序清晰记录为长辈庆祝的具体行动。 We ate noodles and wished Grandma a long life. 情感表达：通过传统习俗传递对长辈的美好祝愿。 When I was a little kid, Grandpa and Grandma took care of me. Now I am a big boy. I can take care of them. 情感升华：通过今昔对比，体现成长与对长辈的感恩回报。 写作方法指引 - 原文指路（制作感恩卡片） Dear Grandpa and Grandma, 格式规范：感恩卡标准开头，明确收件对象。 Thank you for looking after me. 核心表达：直接点明感恩的具体事由，清晰传递谢意。 You're the best grandparents in the world. I love you! 情感强化：用赞美与直白的爱意深化感恩的情感。 From Taotao 格式规范：感恩卡标准结尾，明确发件人身份。 写作方法指引 - 原文指路（规划为长辈做事的计划） We can cook dinner for him. 意愿表达：简洁清晰地说明为长辈做事的具体计划，传递关爱之心。 一、核心词汇 1. 节日与日期类 节日：Double Ninth Festival（重阳节） 日期相关：lunar month（农历月份）, birthday（生日） 序数词：first, second, third, fourth, fifth, sixth, seventh, eighth, ninth, tenth, eleventh, twelfth, thirteenth, twentieth, twenty-first, twenty-second, twenty-third, thirtieth, fortieth, fiftieth 2. 家庭成员类 grandparents, grandpa, grandma, parents, father, mother 3. 动作活动类 climb mountains, cook dinner, go to see, eat noodles, blow out the candles, eat the cake, chat with, take a family photo, look after, take care of, spend time with, give a present, draw a picture, bring a cake, wish a long life 4. 物品类 smartphone, cake, noodles, candles, picture 二、参考句型 1. 节日描述类 It is the Double Ninth Festival today. The Double Ninth Festival is a day for old people. It is on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month. On this day, people show their love for their grandparents. 2. 为长辈做事类 We can cook dinner for him. I drew a picture for her. We also brought a cake for Grandma. We ate noodles and wished Grandma a long life. I chatted with Grandma happily in the afternoon. We took a family photo together on Grandma’s birthday. I can take care of my grandparents now. I want to spend more time with my grandparents. 3. 生日活动类 Yesterday was 21st October. It was Grandma’s 66th birthday. We went to my grandparents’ house in the morning. My parents gave Grandma a nice smartphone as a birthday present. We had a big lunch with my grandparents. Then Grandma blew out the candles, and we ate the delicious cake. 4. 感谢卡写作类 Thank you for looking after me. You're the best grandparents in the world. I love you so much! 易错点提示 1.序数词的正确使用：注意序数词的拼写和缩写，比如"ninth"不要误写为"nineth"，"twelfth"不要误写为"twelveth"；缩写形式要对应正确后缀，如21st（twenty-first）、22nd（twenty-second）、23rd（twenty-third），其余大多加"-th"。 2.介词搭配：具体日期前用介词"on"，如"on 21st October"；表示“为某人做某事”用介词"for"，如"cook dinner for Grandpa"。 3.动词时态区分：描述过去发生的生日、节日活动要用一般过去时，如"drew, went, gave, brought"；表达现在的能力或意愿用一般现在时，如"can take care of, want to spend"。 4.名词所有格：复数名词的所有格直接在词尾加"’"，如"grandparents’ house"，不要误写为"grandparent’s house"。 写作一 写作主题要求：请写一篇短文，介绍你在重阳节当天和家人一起为爷爷奶奶做的事情，表达你对爷爷奶奶的敬爱之情。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： Double Ninth Festival, grandparents, climb mountains, cook dinner, chat with, take a family photo, wish a long life 写作二 请回忆奶奶的生日，写一篇短文介绍当天你和家人的活动，分享你当时的心情。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： birthday, 60th, grandparents’ house, smartphone, cake, candles, blow out, eat noodles, take a family photo, wish a long life 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： It was the Double Ninth Festival last Sunday. My parents and I went to see my grandparents.（交代时间与出行目的） We climbed mountains with them in the morning. Then we cooked a nice dinner for them. In the afternoon, I chatted with Grandma happily. We took a family photo before we left. We wished my grandparents a long life.（按时间顺序记叙当天活动） I love them very much.（抒发内心情感） 范文（提高版）： Last Sunday was the Double Ninth Festival, a special day for old people. My family and I visited my grandparents early in the morning.（点明节日含义和开篇事件） We climbed the small hill near their house together, and Grandpa told me some funny stories on the way. At noon, my mother and I cooked their favorite dishes for dinner. I also drew a picture of sunflowers for Grandma. We chatted for a long time and took a warm family photo.（描写一整天的各项活动与细节） We all wished my grandparents healthy and happy lives forever.（结尾送出祝福） 写作二 范文（基础版）： Yesterday was 15th September. It was Grandma’s 60th birthday. My parents and I went to my grandparents’ house in the morning.（交代时间与事件起因） My parents gave Grandma a nice smartphone as a present. We brought a big cake with candles. Grandma blew out the candles, and we ate the cake. We also ate noodles and wished Grandma a long life. We took a family photo.（依次记叙生日当天的各项活动） I was very happy that day.（抒发当日的心情） 范文（提高版）： 15th September was Grandma’s 60th birthday, and we had a warm day at my grandparents’ house.（总起，概括整件事情） My parents and I arrived early with a big fruit cake and a new smartphone as presents. I helped Grandma set the table and put 60 yellow candles on the cake. After we sang the birthday song, Grandma blew out the candles and made a quiet wish. We ate delicious noodles and the sweet cake together. I told Grandma about my interesting school stories, and we took a lovely family photo before sunset.（细化每一个活动细节，丰富过程描写） I felt so happy, and I hope Grandma stays healthy every day.（写出内心感受与美好期盼） 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $