第02讲 Unit 1语法（后缀-ment和现在完成时Ⅰ）及单元写作（暑假预习讲义）新九年级英语新教材仁爱科普版

第02讲 后缀-ment和现在完成时（1）及单元写作 （知识全梳理&考点精准练） 内容导航 01 预习航标→ 析目标·明方向：预习导航精准定向 02 教材全解 → 析教材·学新知：情境概念深度构 考点精讲：聚焦常考要点，讲清逻辑 例题精析：典型题目带路，学会解题思路 即练固基：趁热打铁练一练，巩固刚学内容 03过关检测 → 练考点·强落实：过关检测分层提 关键词 学习目标导航 学习目标 1.后缀-ment：掌握动词变名词的构词法（如develop→development），并能运用常见后缀词。 2.现在完成时（1）：理解“过去动作对现在造成影响/结果”的核心概念；掌握have/has + 过去分词的肯定、否定及疑问句式。 3.单元写作：能运用现在完成时描述家乡、城市或个人的变化，并发表简短感想。 学习重点 后缀-ment：规则变化（直接加，如agree→agreement；去e加，如argue→argument）。 现在完成时： ①过去分词的规则变化（-ed）与不规则动词表（如be→been, go→gone）。 ②核心句式及标志词（already, yet, ever, never）。 ③区分have/has been to（去过已回）与have/has gone to（去了未回）。 单元写作：搭建“过去（used to）→ 现在（现在完成时）→ 感受”的对比框架。 学习难点 1.后缀-ment：特殊拼写变化（如argue→argument去e，move→movement保留e）。 2.现在完成时与一般过去时的本质区别（强调现在结果 vs. 仅陈述过去事实）。 后缀-ment 动词 + -ment → 名词 -ment 属于名词性后缀。它附着在动词词根后面，将动作转化为名词，通常表示以下三种含义： 动作本身或过程（如：development 发展这个过程） 动作产生的结果（如：achievement 取得的成果） 动作使用的工具或手段（如：equipment 使用的设备） 一、变化规则 规则 示例 大多数动词直接加 -ment develop → development, move → movement 以不发音的 e 结尾的动词，去 e 加 -ment argue → argument 以 y 结尾的动词，直接加 -ment enjoy → enjoyment 易错警示：argue → argument 常被误写成 arguement，务必注意去 e。 二、中考常考词汇汇总 动词 名词 词义 achieve achievement 成就 advertise advertisement 广告 agree agreement 同意/协议 amuse amusement 娱乐 argue argument 争论/论点 commit commitment 奉献/承诺 develop development 发展 disagree disagreement 不赞同/分歧 equip equipment 装备/器材 govern government 政府 improve improvement 改善/提高 manage management 管理/经营 move movement 运动/移动 punish punishment 惩罚 require requirement 要求/必要条件 treat treatment 治疗/对待 employ employment 雇用/工作 enjoy enjoyment 享受/乐趣 现在完成时（1） 一、现在完成时的含义 1.过去对现在：表示过去某一时间发生的动作或存在的状态对现在仍有影响（动作发生在过去，结果影响到现在）。 2.过去到现在：从过去某一时间开始一直持续到现在并有可能还会持续的动作或状态（一直延续到现在，for与since把时间带）。 二、现在完成时的句式结构 现在完成时是由“助动词have/has +过去分词（done）”构成的，其中助动词have/has无实义，帮助构成时态结构，不可省略。规则动词的过去分词与其过去式相同，不规则动词的过去分词须加强记忆。 句式 结构 示例 肯定句 主语+ _have/has__ + _过去分词_ +其他. He has read this book before.他以前读过这本书。 否定句 主语+ haven’t/hasn’t +过去分词 +其他. He hasn’t read this book before.他以前没读过这本书。 一般疑问句及其答语 _Have/has_ +主语+ 过去分词_ +其他? 肯定回答：_Yes__, 主语+ _have/has__. 否定回答：_No__, 主语+ haven’t/hasn’t. —Has he read this book before?他以前读过这本书吗？ —Yes, he has./No, he hasn’t. 是的，他读过。/不，他没读过。 3、 现在完成时与一般过去时的区别 现在完成时 一般过去时 用法 表示过去发生的动作对现在造成的影响，侧重于现在的情况 表示过去某个时候发生的动作或存在的状态，与现在无关 时间状语 常和already（已经）、yet（已经；还）、just（刚刚）、ever（曾经）、never（从不）、before（以前）、since（自从）+时间点/从句（一般过去时）、for+时间段、so far（到目前为止）等连用 常和yesterday、last week、just now、in2012、two days ago等具体的表示过去的时间状语连用 谓语动词 与一段时间连用时，谓语动词要用延续性动词而不用非延续性动词 谓语动词没有延续性或非延续性动词的限制 动词变过去分词规则 情况 规则 例词 一般情况 加-ed play→ played→played ; discuss→discussed→discussed 以不发音的-e结尾的动词 加-d like→ liked→ liked; live →lived→ lived 以辅音字母加y结尾的动词 变y为-ied carry→carried; try→tried 以重读闭音节结尾，且词尾只有一个辅音字母 双写词尾辅音字母，再加-ed stop→ stopped →stopped; plan →planned →planned; skip →skipped→ skipped; occur→ occurred →occurred; 【拓展延伸】 already“已经”，用在现在完成时的肯定句中（have/has和done之间） yet“已经”，用在现在完成时的疑问句末；“还”，用在现在完成时的否定句末。 ever“曾经”，never“从来没有”，just“刚刚”，用在现在完成时句中（have/has和done之间） recently “最近；近来”，用于现在完成时的句首或句末。 单元写作 1. 单元核心主题 The Changing World 时代变迁，三大必考写作方向： ① Great Changes in My Hometown 家乡巨变 ② Changes in Our Life / Leisure Activities 生活、休闲方式变化 ③ Changes in My Study / Myself 个人成长变化 2. 核心语法（写作得分关键） 一般过去时 /used to do：描述过去老旧、落后的状态 现在完成时（have/has + 过去分词）：描述多年来发生、持续到现在的变化（单元重中之重） 一般现在时：描写当下现状 3. 写作评分标准（中考适配） 时态区分清晰，不混用 used to、现在完成时、一般过去时 今昔对比结构完整，有细节（交通、住房、环境、通讯、教育） 词汇贴合课本，使用单元核心短语，句式有简单句 + 复合句 结尾升华情感：自豪、感恩、展望未来 二、单元必背写作词汇 & 短语（教材原文提取） （一）变化类核心词组 great changes have taken place in… …… 发生巨大变化 develop rapidly 飞速发展 living conditions 生活条件 communication 通讯；communicate with 与…… 交流 leisure activities 休闲活动 medical care 医疗条件 in the past 在过去；over the years 这些年来 take high-speed trains 乘坐高铁 e-payment 电子支付 share learning resources 共享学习资源 narrow roads 狭窄道路；wide and smooth roads 宽阔平坦的马路 be proud of 为…… 自豪 make progress 取得进步 （二）易混高频句型（写作易错点） used to do sth. 过去常常做（现在不做） I used to walk to school. 我过去走路上学。 be used to doing sth. 习惯于做某事 I am used to taking the subway. 我习惯坐地铁。 have/has been to 去过（已返回）；have/has gone to 去了（未回） 三、万能写作句式（直接套用，适配所有作文） 1. 开头总起句（3 选 1） Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the past few years. 过去几年，我的家乡发生了翻天覆地的变化。（最推荐，贴合单元语法） As society develops, people’s daily life has changed a lot. 随着社会发展，人们的日常生活改变巨大。 How time flies! I find my life is quite different from it was before. 时光飞逝，我发现我的生活和从前大不一样。 2. 中间对比句（今昔对比核心模板） In the past, …used to…, but now… 过去，人们常常……，但现在…… Years ago, there was/were…, while now there are… 多年前这里有……，然而如今到处都是…… People’s …was poor in the past. However, it has improved greatly now. 过去人们的…… 很差，如今已经大幅改善。 3. 结尾升华句（加分万能结尾） All in all, these changes show our country is becoming stronger and better. I’m so proud of it. 总而言之，这些变化证明我们国家越来越好，我为之自豪。 Thanks to the development of our society, we live a much happier life. I hope it will become better in the future. 多亏社会发展，我们生活更幸福，期待未来越来越好。 Although everything changes fast, the warm love between people never changes. 纵使万物飞速变迁，人与人之间温暖的爱意从未改变。（高分升华句） 四、标准四段式写作框架（考场通用，80–110 词） Paragraph 1 开头（1–2 句）：总起，点明某地 / 生活发生巨大变化 Paragraph 2 过去（3–4 句）：用 in the past /used to，写落后的旧面貌（交通、住房、娱乐、学习） Paragraph 3 现在（3–4 句）：现在完成时 + 一般现在时，写如今的改善，搭配具体例子（高铁、手机、网课、公园） Paragraph 4 结尾（1–2 句）：抒发感受、赞美发展、展望未来 五、三大高频话题满分范文（贴合新教材原文） 范文 1：Great Changes in My Hometown Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the years. I’m really proud of these amazing changes. In the past, roads were narrow and dirty. Most people lived in small old houses. We mainly went out by bike or on foot. There were few parks and the river was dirty. But now everything is different. Wide smooth roads run through the town. Many tall buildings and beautiful parks appear everywhere. People drive cars or take high-speed trains to travel. The river has become clean and clear. We can shop online and pay by mobile phones easily. All in all, our hometown is getting better and better. I hope it will develop more beautifully in the future. 范文 2：Changes in Our Leisure Activities As society develops, people’s leisure activities have changed greatly. In the past, people’s free time was simple. They used to watch outdoor movies or chat with neighbors after work. Few people could travel far away. Now we have colorful choices. Lots of people love traveling around the country by high-speed trains. Some enjoy reading online, doing sports or watching short videos. We can also take all kinds of training classes to relax ourselves. These warm changes show our life is richer than before. I love the convenient and wonderful life now. 范文 3：Changes in My Ways of Studying（单元拓展写作） Great changes have taken place in our study ways these years. In the past, we only learned knowledge from textbooks and teachers at school. We had no other learning materials. Now online learning helps us a lot. We can watch teaching videos, take live classes and share learning resources with students in poor areas. However, we should control screen time to protect our eyes. In short, online study brings us convenience. If we make good use of it, we will make greater progress. （词数：82） 六、写作避坑易错提醒（单元高频丢分点） 时态混用：写过去统一用 used to / 一般过去时；写多年变化用现在完成时；描述当下用一般现在时 ❌ In the past, people take bikes. ✅ In the past, people took bikes /used to ride bikes. used to 搭配错误：只能加动词原形，不能 doing ❌ I used to walking to school. ✅ I used to walk to school. 现在完成时标志词：over the years, already, yet, since… 必须搭配 have/has done 细节空洞：不要只写 “change a lot”，补充交通、住房、环境、通讯具体实例，文章更饱满 1．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友George来信说他即将来访，想了解你家乡近十年的变化。请你结合以下提示，用英语给他写一封回信。 提示内容： 1.交通：过去道路狭窄，现在新建了高速公路和铁路； 2.环境：过去常有沙尘暴，现在植树造林，环境改善； 3.生活：过去医疗条件差，现在新建了医院；过去购物不便，现在有了超市和电子支付； 4.感受：为家乡的变化感到自豪。 要求： 1.包含以上所有信息，可适当增加细节； 2.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 Dear George, I’m glad to hear that you will visit my hometown. Great changes have taken place here over the last ten years. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your visit. I’m sure you’ll love my hometown! Yours, Li Hua 2．    假如你是李华，你校英语角正在开展主题为 “Changes Around Us” 的征文活动，请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文介绍你家乡的变化。 提示： 过去： 1. 房屋矮小；2. 道路狭窄；3. 生活不方便。 现在： 1. 建造了许多高楼；2. 交通更加便利；3. 环境更加美丽。 感受： 1. 为家乡的发展感到自豪； 2. 希望家乡未来越来越好。 要求： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 Changes Around Us ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你是李华，请写一篇短文，介绍你家乡这些年的变化。 内容要点： 1. 过去：房屋老旧、道路狭窄、生活艰苦、环境干净 2. 现在：高楼林立、道路宽阔、生活舒适、生活便利 3. 你的感受：感恩变化，愿意为家乡美好未来贡献力量 要求：词数80-100词，语句通顺，条理完整，贴合单元话题 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假如你校英语角 (English Corner) 近期将举办一场以“Changes Around Us”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下图示，写一篇演讲稿。 Past Now Learning ways Traveling ways Shopping ways Your opinion ... 要求： 1. 内容须包含图表所有信息； 2. 须有适当的开头和结尾； 3. 词数100左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假如你是 Tony，最近收到来自外地表妹Amy的电子邮件，她想了解一下你家乡近些年的变化及你的课余生活，请根据表格的内容进行回复。 家乡变化 1.房子小而旧；道路脏而窄；环境污染严重；交通工具是……；通信方式主要是书信…… 2.人们搬进了新公寓；环境得到了改善；公园、地铁、因特网的使用等使生活更加…… 课余生活 1.喜欢读书，每周花 6 个小时左右阅读，主要从图书馆借阅，个人认为读书能增加人的知识，开阔人的眼界…… 2.空余时间里喜欢旅游，享受当地的美食，感受不同的文化；今年五一打算去上海迪士尼游玩。 个人感受 ……(自由发挥) 要求： 1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包含所有信息，并作适当发挥； 3.词数在 90 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考作文 Dear Amy, I’m glad to tell you about the changes in my hometown and my free time. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Tony 6．儿童是国家的未来，少年强则国强。随着中国的发展和社会的进步，中国儿童的生活发生了很大的变化。请根据下面表格内容和要求，写一篇英语短文，来介绍中国儿童生活发生的变化。 In the past Now 1. had no good food 2. couldn’t dress warmly 3. had no chance to go to school 4. … 1. have a balanced diet 2. wear different kinds of clothes 3. receive a good education 4. … 要求： 1. 短文须包含上表中的所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺，条理清晰、意思连贯； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 With the development of China, children’s lives have changed a lot. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．家乡是我们成长的地方，承载着美好的回忆，也见证着时代的变迁。近年来，随着社会的不断发展，你的家乡在生活环境、交通设施以及人们的生活方式等方面发生了哪些变化呢？目前，某英文杂志社正在举办题为“Great Changes in My Hometown”的征文活动，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你家乡的变化，并谈谈你自己的感受。 注意： 1.短文须包含题干中的要点，可恰当发挥； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80-100。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假设你是李倩，今年春节期间你回老家过年，发现你的家乡发生了巨大的变化。请你用英语给你的英国朋友John写一封电子邮件，描述你家乡的变化，并邀请John来你的家乡做客。 注意： 词数80～100。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 18 / 18 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 第02讲 后缀-ment和现在完成时（1）及单元写作 （知识全梳理&考点精准练） 内容导航 01 预习航标→ 析目标·明方向：预习导航精准定向 02 教材全解 → 析教材·学新知：情境概念深度构 考点精讲：聚焦常考要点，讲清逻辑 例题精析：典型题目带路，学会解题思路 即练固基：趁热打铁练一练，巩固刚学内容 03过关检测 → 练考点·强落实：过关检测分层提 关键词 学习目标导航 学习目标 1.后缀-ment：掌握动词变名词的构词法（如develop→development），并能运用常见后缀词。 2.现在完成时（1）：理解“过去动作对现在造成影响/结果”的核心概念；掌握have/has + 过去分词的肯定、否定及疑问句式。 3.单元写作：能运用现在完成时描述家乡、城市或个人的变化，并发表简短感想。 学习重点 后缀-ment：规则变化（直接加，如agree→agreement；去e加，如argue→argument）。 现在完成时： ①过去分词的规则变化（-ed）与不规则动词表（如be→been, go→gone）。 ②核心句式及标志词（already, yet, ever, never）。 ③区分have/has been to（去过已回）与have/has gone to（去了未回）。 单元写作：搭建“过去（used to）→ 现在（现在完成时）→ 感受”的对比框架。 学习难点 1.后缀-ment：特殊拼写变化（如argue→argument去e，move→movement保留e）。 2.现在完成时与一般过去时的本质区别（强调现在结果 vs. 仅陈述过去事实）。 后缀-ment 动词 + -ment → 名词 -ment 属于名词性后缀。它附着在动词词根后面，将动作转化为名词，通常表示以下三种含义： 动作本身或过程（如：development 发展这个过程） 动作产生的结果（如：achievement 取得的成果） 动作使用的工具或手段（如：equipment 使用的设备） 一、变化规则 规则 示例 大多数动词直接加 -ment develop → development, move → movement 以不发音的 e 结尾的动词，去 e 加 -ment argue → argument 以 y 结尾的动词，直接加 -ment enjoy → enjoyment 易错警示：argue → argument 常被误写成 arguement，务必注意去 e。 二、中考常考词汇汇总 动词 名词 词义 achieve achievement 成就 advertise advertisement 广告 agree agreement 同意/协议 amuse amusement 娱乐 argue argument 争论/论点 commit commitment 奉献/承诺 develop development 发展 disagree disagreement 不赞同/分歧 equip equipment 装备/器材 govern government 政府 improve improvement 改善/提高 manage management 管理/经营 move movement 运动/移动 punish punishment 惩罚 require requirement 要求/必要条件 treat treatment 治疗/对待 employ employment 雇用/工作 enjoy enjoyment 享受/乐趣 现在完成时（1） 一、现在完成时的含义 1.过去对现在：表示过去某一时间发生的动作或存在的状态对现在仍有影响（动作发生在过去，结果影响到现在）。 2.过去到现在：从过去某一时间开始一直持续到现在并有可能还会持续的动作或状态（一直延续到现在，for与since把时间带）。 二、现在完成时的句式结构 现在完成时是由“助动词have/has +过去分词（done）”构成的，其中助动词have/has无实义，帮助构成时态结构，不可省略。规则动词的过去分词与其过去式相同，不规则动词的过去分词须加强记忆。 句式 结构 示例 肯定句 主语+ _have/has__ + _过去分词_ +其他. He has read this book before.他以前读过这本书。 否定句 主语+ haven’t/hasn’t +过去分词 +其他. He hasn’t read this book before.他以前没读过这本书。 一般疑问句及其答语 _Have/has_ +主语+ 过去分词_ +其他? 肯定回答：_Yes__, 主语+ _have/has__. 否定回答：_No__, 主语+ haven’t/hasn’t. —Has he read this book before?他以前读过这本书吗？ —Yes, he has./No, he hasn’t. 是的，他读过。/不，他没读过。 3、 现在完成时与一般过去时的区别 现在完成时 一般过去时 用法 表示过去发生的动作对现在造成的影响，侧重于现在的情况 表示过去某个时候发生的动作或存在的状态，与现在无关 时间状语 常和already（已经）、yet（已经；还）、just（刚刚）、ever（曾经）、never（从不）、before（以前）、since（自从）+时间点/从句（一般过去时）、for+时间段、so far（到目前为止）等连用 常和yesterday、last week、just now、in2012、two days ago等具体的表示过去的时间状语连用 谓语动词 与一段时间连用时，谓语动词要用延续性动词而不用非延续性动词 谓语动词没有延续性或非延续性动词的限制 动词变过去分词规则 情况 规则 例词 一般情况 加-ed play→ played→played ; discuss→discussed→discussed 以不发音的-e结尾的动词 加-d like→ liked→ liked; live →lived→ lived 以辅音字母加y结尾的动词 变y为-ied carry→carried; try→tried 以重读闭音节结尾，且词尾只有一个辅音字母 双写词尾辅音字母，再加-ed stop→ stopped →stopped; plan →planned →planned; skip →skipped→ skipped; occur→ occurred →occurred; 【拓展延伸】 already“已经”，用在现在完成时的肯定句中（have/has和done之间） yet“已经”，用在现在完成时的疑问句末；“还”，用在现在完成时的否定句末。 ever“曾经”，never“从来没有”，just“刚刚”，用在现在完成时句中（have/has和done之间） recently “最近；近来”，用于现在完成时的句首或句末。 单元写作 1. 单元核心主题 The Changing World 时代变迁，三大必考写作方向： ① Great Changes in My Hometown 家乡巨变 ② Changes in Our Life / Leisure Activities 生活、休闲方式变化 ③ Changes in My Study / Myself 个人成长变化 2. 核心语法（写作得分关键） 一般过去时 /used to do：描述过去老旧、落后的状态 现在完成时（have/has + 过去分词）：描述多年来发生、持续到现在的变化（单元重中之重） 一般现在时：描写当下现状 3. 写作评分标准（中考适配） 时态区分清晰，不混用 used to、现在完成时、一般过去时 今昔对比结构完整，有细节（交通、住房、环境、通讯、教育） 词汇贴合课本，使用单元核心短语，句式有简单句 + 复合句 结尾升华情感：自豪、感恩、展望未来 二、单元必背写作词汇 & 短语（教材原文提取） （一）变化类核心词组 great changes have taken place in… …… 发生巨大变化 develop rapidly 飞速发展 living conditions 生活条件 communication 通讯；communicate with 与…… 交流 leisure activities 休闲活动 medical care 医疗条件 in the past 在过去；over the years 这些年来 take high-speed trains 乘坐高铁 e-payment 电子支付 share learning resources 共享学习资源 narrow roads 狭窄道路；wide and smooth roads 宽阔平坦的马路 be proud of 为…… 自豪 make progress 取得进步 （二）易混高频句型（写作易错点） used to do sth. 过去常常做（现在不做） I used to walk to school. 我过去走路上学。 be used to doing sth. 习惯于做某事 I am used to taking the subway. 我习惯坐地铁。 have/has been to 去过（已返回）；have/has gone to 去了（未回） 三、万能写作句式（直接套用，适配所有作文） 1. 开头总起句（3 选 1） Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the past few years. 过去几年，我的家乡发生了翻天覆地的变化。（最推荐，贴合单元语法） As society develops, people’s daily life has changed a lot. 随着社会发展，人们的日常生活改变巨大。 How time flies! I find my life is quite different from it was before. 时光飞逝，我发现我的生活和从前大不一样。 2. 中间对比句（今昔对比核心模板） In the past, …used to…, but now… 过去，人们常常……，但现在…… Years ago, there was/were…, while now there are… 多年前这里有……，然而如今到处都是…… People’s …was poor in the past. However, it has improved greatly now. 过去人们的…… 很差，如今已经大幅改善。 3. 结尾升华句（加分万能结尾） All in all, these changes show our country is becoming stronger and better. I’m so proud of it. 总而言之，这些变化证明我们国家越来越好，我为之自豪。 Thanks to the development of our society, we live a much happier life. I hope it will become better in the future. 多亏社会发展，我们生活更幸福，期待未来越来越好。 Although everything changes fast, the warm love between people never changes. 纵使万物飞速变迁，人与人之间温暖的爱意从未改变。（高分升华句） 四、标准四段式写作框架（考场通用，80–110 词） Paragraph 1 开头（1–2 句）：总起，点明某地 / 生活发生巨大变化 Paragraph 2 过去（3–4 句）：用 in the past /used to，写落后的旧面貌（交通、住房、娱乐、学习） Paragraph 3 现在（3–4 句）：现在完成时 + 一般现在时，写如今的改善，搭配具体例子（高铁、手机、网课、公园） Paragraph 4 结尾（1–2 句）：抒发感受、赞美发展、展望未来 五、三大高频话题满分范文（贴合新教材原文） 范文 1：Great Changes in My Hometown Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the years. I’m really proud of these amazing changes. In the past, roads were narrow and dirty. Most people lived in small old houses. We mainly went out by bike or on foot. There were few parks and the river was dirty. But now everything is different. Wide smooth roads run through the town. Many tall buildings and beautiful parks appear everywhere. People drive cars or take high-speed trains to travel. The river has become clean and clear. We can shop online and pay by mobile phones easily. All in all, our hometown is getting better and better. I hope it will develop more beautifully in the future. 范文 2：Changes in Our Leisure Activities As society develops, people’s leisure activities have changed greatly. In the past, people’s free time was simple. They used to watch outdoor movies or chat with neighbors after work. Few people could travel far away. Now we have colorful choices. Lots of people love traveling around the country by high-speed trains. Some enjoy reading online, doing sports or watching short videos. We can also take all kinds of training classes to relax ourselves. These warm changes show our life is richer than before. I love the convenient and wonderful life now. 范文 3：Changes in My Ways of Studying（单元拓展写作） Great changes have taken place in our study ways these years. In the past, we only learned knowledge from textbooks and teachers at school. We had no other learning materials. Now online learning helps us a lot. We can watch teaching videos, take live classes and share learning resources with students in poor areas. However, we should control screen time to protect our eyes. In short, online study brings us convenience. If we make good use of it, we will make greater progress. （词数：82） 六、写作避坑易错提醒（单元高频丢分点） 时态混用：写过去统一用 used to / 一般过去时；写多年变化用现在完成时；描述当下用一般现在时 ❌ In the past, people take bikes. ✅ In the past, people took bikes /used to ride bikes. used to 搭配错误：只能加动词原形，不能 doing ❌ I used to walking to school. ✅ I used to walk to school. 现在完成时标志词：over the years, already, yet, since… 必须搭配 have/has done 细节空洞：不要只写 “change a lot”，补充交通、住房、环境、通讯具体实例，文章更饱满 1．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友George来信说他即将来访，想了解你家乡近十年的变化。请你结合以下提示，用英语给他写一封回信。 提示内容： 1.交通：过去道路狭窄，现在新建了高速公路和铁路； 2.环境：过去常有沙尘暴，现在植树造林，环境改善； 3.生活：过去医疗条件差，现在新建了医院；过去购物不便，现在有了超市和电子支付； 4.感受：为家乡的变化感到自豪。 要求： 1.包含以上所有信息，可适当增加细节； 2.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 Dear George, I’m glad to hear that you will visit my hometown. Great changes have taken place here over the last ten years. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your visit. I’m sure you’ll love my hometown! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear George, I’m glad to hear that you will visit my hometown. Great changes have taken place here over the last ten years. In the past, the roads were narrow and rough. Now new highways and railways have been built, making travelling much faster and easier. There used to be frequent sandstorms, but people have planted lots of trees and the environment is getting better. The medical condition used to be poor, but now we have new hospitals. Shopping is also more convenient: we have big supermarkets and can pay with mobile phones. I’m proud of the changes in my hometown. I’m looking forward to your visit. I’m sure you’ll love my hometown! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文（回信/书信），以一般过去时（描述过去的状况）和现在完成时（描述近十年的变化）为主 明确要点：交通变化、环境变化、生活变化（医疗、购物）、个人感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/my）和第二人称（you/your） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，注意书信格式 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：已给出，直接切入家乡近十年发生巨大变化的主题。 主体段：按照提示顺序，依次对比描述交通、环境、医疗和购物方面的今昔变化。 结尾段：表达自己对家乡变化的自豪感，并期待对方的到来。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：交通变化 过去状况：In the past, the roads were narrow and rough./The streets used to be narrow. 现在状况：Now new highways and railways have been built./We have built new highways and railways. 变化效果：making travelling much faster and easier/making it convenient for us to travel 要点二：环境变化 过去状况：There used to be frequent sandstorms./We often had sandstorms in the past. 现在状况：People have planted lots of trees./We have planted many trees. 变化效果：the environment is getting better/the air is much fresher now 要点三：生活变化 医疗条件：The medical condition used to be poor, but now we have new hospitals./In the past, it was hard to see a doctor, but now new hospitals have been built. 购物条件：Shopping is also more convenient./It is much easier to go shopping now. 支付方式：we have big supermarkets and can pay with mobile phones/we have large supermarkets and can use electronic payment 要点四：个人感受 表达自豪：I’m proud of the changes in my hometown./I take great pride in the great changes in my hometown./I am deeply proud of my hometown. 2．    假如你是李华，你校英语角正在开展主题为 “Changes Around Us” 的征文活动，请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文介绍你家乡的变化。 提示： 过去： 1. 房屋矮小；2. 道路狭窄；3. 生活不方便。 现在： 1. 建造了许多高楼；2. 交通更加便利；3. 环境更加美丽。 感受： 1. 为家乡的发展感到自豪； 2. 希望家乡未来越来越好。 要求： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 Changes Around Us ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 Changes Around Us My hometown has changed a lot in recent years. In the past, people lived in small houses and the roads were narrow. Life was not very convenient. People had fewer chances to enjoy a comfortable life. However, great changes have taken place now. Many tall buildings have been built, and the roads are much wider than before. Transportation has become more convenient. Besides, the environment is beautiful. I am proud of the great changes in my hometown. I believe it will become better and better in the future. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体： 说明文，主要运用一般过去时（描述过去的状况）和现在完成时/一般现在时（描述现在的变化及感受）。 明确要点： 围绕“我们身边的变化”这一主题，需涵盖四个核心要素：①引出话题，点明家乡发生了巨大变化；②描述过去的状况（住房、道路、生活便利度）；③描述现在的变化（建筑、道路、交通、环境）；④表达个人感受与对未来的展望。 确定人称： 第一人称（I），以个人视角见证并分享家乡的变化。 注意事项： 必须注意时态的准确切换（过去与现在的对比），合理使用对比连接词，语言需充满自豪感。 [第二步：构思布局] 采用“总—分—总”结构： 开头段： 开门见山，点明主旨（家乡近年来发生了很大变化）。 主体段： 采用“过去—现在”的对比结构。第一段描写过去的落后与不便；第二段描写现在的繁荣与便利。 结尾段： 总结全文，表达对家乡变化的自豪感，并对未来寄予美好期望。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：引出话题 核心表达： My hometown has changed a lot in recent years./Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. 句型支撑： 使用现在完成时（has changed），强调变化对现在产生的影响。 要点二：描述过去的状况 核心表达： lived in small houses/roads were narrow/Life was not very convenient./lived in cramped homes/roads were not wide 句型支撑： 使用一般过去时（lived, were），配合并列句，生动勾勒出过去落后的生活面貌。 要点三：描述现在的变化 核心表达： great changes have taken place/tall buildings have been built/roads are much wider/transportation has become more convenient/environment is beautiful./Great changes have occurred/high-rise buildings have been constructed 句型支撑： 使用现在完成时的被动语态（have been built）突出客观变化；使用比较级（much wider than before）强化今昔对比；使用 Besides 作为过渡词，使层次更丰富。 要点四：抒发感受与展望 核心表达： proud of the great changes/will become better and better in the future./Significant changes have happened/skyscrapers have been put up/roads are far wider/transport has become more accessible/surroundings are gorgeous/take pride in these transformations/will continue to improve in the coming years. 句型支撑： 使用 be proud of 表达积极情感；使用一般将来时（will become）和“比较级 + and + 比较级”结构（better and better），表达对未来的美好祝愿。 3．假如你是李华，请写一篇短文，介绍你家乡这些年的变化。 内容要点： 1. 过去：房屋老旧、道路狭窄、生活艰苦、环境干净 2. 现在：高楼林立、道路宽阔、生活舒适、生活便利 3. 你的感受：感恩变化，愿意为家乡美好未来贡献力量 要求：词数80-100词，语句通顺，条理完整，贴合单元话题 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Changes in My Hometown My hometown has changed a lot these years. In the past, there were only old small houses and narrow roads. People lived a hard life. But the air was fresh and the river was clean. Now great changes have taken place. There are many tall buildings and wide roads. People live a comfortable and convenient life. We have beautiful parks and convenient traffic. I love my changing hometown. I will study hard and do something for it in the future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，对比家乡今昔变化，以一般过去时、一般现在时为主 明确要点：过去：房屋老旧、道路狭窄、生活艰苦、环境干净。现在：高楼林立、道路宽阔、生活舒适、生活便利。你的感受：感恩变化，愿意为家乡美好未来贡献力量 确定人称：第一人称(I/My) 注意事项：词数80-100词，语句通顺，条理完整，贴合单元话题 [第二步：构思布局] 开头段：总起，总领全文 主体段：对比介绍家乡过去现在的变化 结尾段：总结感受 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡的过去 房屋道路：old small houses and narrow roads, The house is low 生活条件：People lived a hard life, hardly afford delicious food or new clothes 环境优势：the air was fresh and the river was clean, the environment was quiet and clean 要点二：家乡的现在 房屋道路：tall buildings and wide roads, smooth roads 生活状态：People live a comfortable and convenient life, our daily life becomes much easier than before 补充说明：beautiful parks and convenient traffic, many supermarkets 要点三：个人感受与行动打算 情感：love my changing hometown, thankful for all these amazing changes in my hometown 行动：study hard and do something for it in the future, study hard to gain more knowledge and make contributions to my hometown 4．假如你校英语角 (English Corner) 近期将举办一场以“Changes Around Us”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请根据以下图示，写一篇演讲稿。 Past Now Learning ways Traveling ways Shopping ways Your opinion ... 要求： 1. 内容须包含图表所有信息； 2. 须有适当的开头和结尾； 3. 词数100左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Changes Around Us Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to talk about some changes around us. First, let’s talk about ways of learning. In the past, we used to go to libraries and look up information in books. But now, we can easily search for anything on the Internet. Next, traveling ways have also improved greatly. People used to travel by green train or coach. Now, we have high-speed trains and planes. When it comes to shopping, there’s a big difference too. In the past, we had to go to shops to buy things. But now, online shopping is very popular. These changes make our lives more convenient and efficient. Thank you for listening! 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：英语演讲稿，时态混合使用（一般过去时描述过去、一般现在时描述当下） 明确要点：学习方式、出行方式、购物方式今昔对比，以及个人观点，覆盖表格全部图文信息 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：词数控制在100词左右，包含标准演讲开头问候与结尾致谢，不出现真实个人信息 [第二步：构思布局] 开头部分：问候听众，点明演讲主题——身边的诸多变化 中间部分：分三小点对比学习、出行、购物的过去与现在 结尾部分：抒发个人观点，总结变化带来的好处，礼貌收尾 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：Learning ways Past: go to libraries, look up information in books, learn in the fixed classrooms, borrow paper books, take handwritten notes等 Now: search for all information easily on the Internet, watch online courses, download learning materials, communicate with teachers online等 要点二：Traveling ways Past: travel by green trains or coaches, wait for tickets in queues, carry heavy luggage, spend days on the road等 Now: take high-speed trains and planes, book tickets with mobile phones, enjoy fast journeys, travel across cities in hours等 要点三：Shopping ways Past: go to physical shops to buy goods, compare products in person, carry shopping bags, bargain with shop owners等 Now: do online shopping at home, receive home deliveries, pay with mobile wallets, check customer reviews等 要点四：Your opinion make our daily lives more convenient and efficient, save plenty of time, make our life much easier, cut down lots of trouble, let us live a better life等 5．假如你是 Tony，最近收到来自外地表妹Amy的电子邮件，她想了解一下你家乡近些年的变化及你的课余生活，请根据表格的内容进行回复。 家乡变化 1.房子小而旧；道路脏而窄；环境污染严重；交通工具是……；通信方式主要是书信…… 2.人们搬进了新公寓；环境得到了改善；公园、地铁、因特网的使用等使生活更加…… 课余生活 1.喜欢读书，每周花 6 个小时左右阅读，主要从图书馆借阅，个人认为读书能增加人的知识，开阔人的眼界…… 2.空余时间里喜欢旅游，享受当地的美食，感受不同的文化；今年五一打算去上海迪士尼游玩。 个人感受 ……(自由发挥) 要求： 1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包含所有信息，并作适当发挥； 3.词数在 90 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考作文 Dear Amy, I’m glad to tell you about the changes in my hometown and my free time. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Tony 【答案】例文 Dear Amy,       I’m glad to tell you about the changes in my hometown and my free time.           In the past, our houses were small and old. The roads were dirty and narrow, and pollution was serious. We traveled by bike or bus and kept in touch mainly by letters. Now we’ve moved into new apartments. The environment is much better with more parks. The subway and Internet make our life more convenient.            In my free time, I spend about 6 hours a week reading books from the library. Reading helps me gain knowledge and open my eyes. I also love traveling to taste delicious food and experience different cultures. I plan to visit Shanghai Disneyland this May Day.            I’m proud of our new life and look forward to your visit. Yours Tony 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：电子邮件，全文以一般过去时、现在完成时、一般现在时、一般将来时为主 明确要点：①介绍家乡过去的样貌；②介绍家乡如今的变化；③介绍课余读书爱好及读书的好处；④介绍课余旅游爱好与五一出行计划；⑤自由抒发个人感受 确定人称：第一人称I (Tony) 注意事项：语法通顺、行文连贯；必须包含表格全部信息并适当拓展；词数90词左右，给定开头不计入总词数；文中不得出现真实校名、人名、地名 [第二步：构思布局] 四段式结构： 开头段：固定开篇句，自我介绍写信目的，告知将介绍家乡变化与课余生活 主体段第一层：分层对比家乡过去、现在的生活环境、交通、通信情况 主体段第二层：依次介绍两项课余生活，读书习惯与旅行爱好，补充细节与计划 结尾段：抒发个人内心感受，发出来访邀请，配套书信规范署名 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡变化 过去场景素材：small and old/dirty and narrow/in a terrible state等 过去状况描述：pollution were serious/travel by bike or bus/ride a bicycle等 过去通信方式：keep in touch by letters/send paper mails等 如今变化素材：new apartments/more parks/tall buildings等 便利设施说明：subway/Internet/airplane/chat online等 生活改善效果：make life more convenient/improve living environment等 要点二：课余读书生活 阅读时长素材：spend 6 hours a week/read every weekend等 借阅渠道选择：borrow books from library/borrow story books等 读书好处说明：gain knowledge/open my eyes/relax myself/broaden my mind等 要点三：课余旅游生活 旅行爱好素材：love traveling/travel around cities/visit scenic spots等 旅行体验：taste local delicious food/experience different cultures/get away from daily routines等 出行计划说明：visit Shanghai Disneyland/take a trip during holidays等 要点四：个人感受 内心评价素材：proud of new changes/happy with present life等 结尾表达内容：look forward to your visit/wait for your coming等 6．儿童是国家的未来，少年强则国强。随着中国的发展和社会的进步，中国儿童的生活发生了很大的变化。请根据下面表格内容和要求，写一篇英语短文，来介绍中国儿童生活发生的变化。 In the past Now 1. had no good food 2. couldn’t dress warmly 3. had no chance to go to school 4. … 1. have a balanced diet 2. wear different kinds of clothes 3. receive a good education 4. … 要求： 1. 短文须包含上表中的所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺，条理清晰、意思连贯； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 With the development of China, children’s lives have changed a lot. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 With the development of China, children’s lives have changed a lot. In the past, the lives of children were very difficult. They had almost no food to eat and couldn’t dress warmly. Most of them had no chance to go to school because their parents had no money to pay for their education. But now everything has changed. Children can have a balanced diet. They can wear different kinds of clothes and receive a good education. What’s more, they have more chances to develop their hobbies. Thanks to these changes, they can now have a better life, which helps them create a better future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，一般现在时和一般过去时 明确要点：围绕过去和现在的食物、衣服和学习机会这三个要点展开。 确定人称：第三人称 注意事项：词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数，不得出现真实校名、人名。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：开头开门见山，说明孩子们的生活发生了很多变化，为下文详细解释作出铺垫； 主体段：围绕过去和现在的食物、衣服和学习机会来对比过去和现在的变化； 结尾段：总结全文，感谢这些变化。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：食物 过去：They had almost no food to eat and couldn’t dress warmly./They suffered from hunger and cold because they had almost no food or warm clothes./With almost no food to eat and no warm clothes, they lived a hard life.等 现在：Children can have a balanced diet./It’s possible for children to have a balanced diet./Children can maintain a well-balanced diet.等 要点二：衣服 过去：They had almost no food to eat and couldn’t dress warmly./They hardly had any food to eat and had no warm clothes to wear./They had little food and lacked warm clothing.等 现在：They can wear different kinds of clothes./They are able to wear various kinds of clothes./Different kinds of clothes can be worn by them.等 要点三：学习机会 过去：Most of them had no chance to go to school because their parents had no money to pay for their education./The majority of them were unable to go to school, for their parents couldn’t afford their education fees./Most of them were denied the opportunity of schooling because their families couldn’t cover educational costs.等 现在：They can receive a good education. What’s more, they have more chances to develop their hobbies./Not only can they receive a sound education, but they also get more chances to cultivate their hobbies./It is possible for them to receive excellent education, and furthermore, they are provided with more chances to develop personal interests.等 7．家乡是我们成长的地方，承载着美好的回忆，也见证着时代的变迁。近年来，随着社会的不断发展，你的家乡在生活环境、交通设施以及人们的生活方式等方面发生了哪些变化呢？目前，某英文杂志社正在举办题为“Great Changes in My Hometown”的征文活动，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你家乡的变化，并谈谈你自己的感受。 注意： 1.短文须包含题干中的要点，可恰当发挥； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80-100。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Great Changes in My Hometown My hometown has changed greatly over the years. In the past, the roads were narrow and the houses were old. People usually rode bikes or walked. Now, wide streets and tall buildings have appeared. The subway makes travel fast and easy. People’s lives are also more convenient. They shop online and pay with mobile phones. These changes make me proud. However, I still miss the quiet and simple life of the past. But I am happy to see my hometown becoming more modern. I believe its future will be even better. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，用一般过去时和一般现在时对比为主 明确要点：家乡在生活环境、交通设施、生活方式方面的变化，以及个人感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，点明家乡多年来发生了巨大变化 主体段：分别从过去的旧面貌和现在的新面貌，对比介绍环境、交通、生活方式的具体改变 结尾段：表达个人感受，展望家乡的美好未来 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：过去的家乡面貌 环境描述：the roads were narrow and the houses were old/the streets were dirty/the houses were small and dark/the air was not as fresh as now等 交通方式：usually rode bikes or walked/took slow buses/had no public transport/had to travel a long way to the city等 生活状态：lived a simple life/had few entertainment choices/shopped only in small local shops等 要点二：现在的家乡新变化 环境变化：wide streets and tall buildings have appeared/green parks are everywhere/the public squares are beautiful/the rivers are cleaner than before等 交通设施：The subway makes travel fast and easy/more highways have been built/shared bikes are popular/there are more direct buses to nearby cities等 生活方式：shop online and pay with mobile phones/people order food on apps/they take online classes/they share daily life on social media等 要点三：个人感受与展望 当下感受：These changes make me proud/the new life brings me much convenience/I feel so lucky to witness these changes等 怀旧情绪：I still miss the quiet and simple life of the past/I sometimes miss the old days with neighbors sitting together chatting等 未来展望：I believe its future will be even better/my hometown will become a more comfortable place to live/I hope it will keep developing in a green way等 8．假设你是李倩，今年春节期间你回老家过年，发现你的家乡发生了巨大的变化。请你用英语给你的英国朋友John写一封电子邮件，描述你家乡的变化，并邀请John来你的家乡做客。 注意： 词数80～100。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Dear John, My hometown has changed a lot this Spring Festival. Thanks to the government, our village has developed a lot. There are two beautiful parks now. When people are free, they can relax in the parks. My favorite place is a modern library, because I like spending my free time reading there. There is even a gym for people to exercise. People can buy almost every daily thing in the shops, so life has become much more convenient. Also, the streets are wider and cleaner than before, and travelling has become much easier. Everyone feels happy to live here. Hope you’ll visit someday. Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes. Yours, Li Qian 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文（电子邮件），以一般现在时为主，描述春节返乡经历搭配使用一般过去时 明确要点：描述家乡的三处变化（街道、图书馆、公园）、当地人们的生活感受、向对方发出做客邀请 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：严格遵循英文邮件格式，词数控制在80~100词，需完整覆盖思维导图全部要点 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：以总起句点明家乡的巨大变化 主体段：分别介绍街道、图书馆、公园三处具体变化，补充说明居民的生活感受 结尾段：正式发出来访邀请，表达期待对方回信 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡变化 场景选择：street /library/park 变化描述： street: the streets are wider and cleaner than before, travelling has become much easier等 library: a modern library, people can spend free time reading there等 park: two beautiful parks, people can relax in the parks in their free time等 作用效果：daily life becomes much more convenient/enriches people's leisure life等 要点二：人们的感受 感受核心：happy 补充说明：everyone feels happy to live here/life is more comfortable and convenient等 要点三：邀请做客 邀请句式：Hope you’ll visit someday等 收尾表达：Looking forward to your reply等 18 / 18 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $