Unit 1 What's on your plate （写作突破专项训练）英语外研版五年级上册（新教材）

**基本信息** 聚焦健康饮食主题，构建“方法指引-词汇句型-易错提示-分层写作”的系统性训练体系，强化语言表达与问题解决能力，培养思维品质与学习能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作方法指引|5个方法点|提炼“开篇点情绪-提具体建议-说明后果-用核心句型-升华意义”五步法|从写作结构到内容表达，形成完整逻辑链条| |核心词汇|4类（健康/不健康食物等）|按功能分类记忆，强化主题词汇积累|围绕“饮食”主题，构建食物、餐食、身体相关词汇网络| |参考句型|4类（描述问题/提建议等）|句型功能分类，提供可迁移表达模板|从问题描述到建议给出，再到益处说明，形成表达递进逻辑| |易错点提示|4点（should用法等）|归纳语法易错点，明确正确用法|针对写作高频错误，建立语法规范意识| |写作任务|2个任务（含基础/提高版范文）|分层示范，从罗列问题到细化方案|任务从个人反思到他人建议，体现应用场景迁移|

Unit 1 What's on your plate 写作方法指引- 原文指路 That’s enough! This is a bad day for me again! 开篇点明情绪：直接引出饮食问题带来的不适，快速吸引读者关注。 Every morning, you need a good breakfast. Let’s have bread, milk, eggs, fruit and vegetables. 提出具体建议：明确列举健康早餐的种类，为写作提供具体内容参考。 Just a few biscuits are not enough! I often feel hungry all morning. 说明问题后果：指出不良饮食习惯的负面影响，增强建议的说服力。 You should eat slowly. 运用核心句型：用"should"给出直接建议，是表达健康饮食建议的常用句式。 Help me stay healthy. Then you will be healthy, too. 点明饮食意义：强调健康饮食对自身的益处，升华写作主题。 一、核心词汇 1. 健康食物类 bread, milk, eggs, fruit, vegetables, tomatoes, grapes, oats, nuts 2. 不健康食物类 biscuits, chips, candies, cakes, chocolate 3. 餐食相关类 breakfast, lunch, dinner, snack 4. 身体相关类 stomach, bones, body 二、参考句型 1. 描述饮食问题 I often feel hungry all morning because I only eat a few biscuits for breakfast. I often eat too much meat but no vegetables and no fruit for lunch. I always eat dinner too fast so I can go and play. 2. 提出饮食建议 You should have bread, milk, eggs, fruit and vegetables for breakfast. You should eat slowly for dinner. Don't take too much biscuits, juice, and nuts. We should drink milk. It’s good for our bones. 3. 说明食物的益处/危害 Tomatoes, grapes, and oats help us to grow. Chips, candies, and cakes make our bodies slow. A bar of chocolate contains a lot of sugar. 4. 表达饮食计划与希望 I should have a balanced meal with meat, vegetables and fruit for lunch. I hope I can keep healthy by eating right food. I hope my stomach will feel happy and healthy soon. 易错点提示 1. should的用法：should是情态动词，后面必须接动词原形，正确表达为"You should eat slowly."，不可写成"You should eats slowly."。 2. too much与too fast的区分：too much用来修饰不可数名词，表示“太多”，比如"eat too much meat"；too fast是副词短语，用来修饰动词，表示“太快”，比如"eat dinner too fast"。 3. 食物名词的单复数：vegetables常用复数形式；fruit表示泛指时可用单数，指多种水果时可用复数fruits；biscuits, chips这类食物常用复数形式。 4. 介词搭配：表达“某餐吃什么”需用"for + 餐食名称"，比如"for breakfast"，不可写成"in breakfast"。 写作一 请你写一写自己日常饮食中存在的小问题，再说说你的健康饮食改进计划，表达你对保持健康的期望。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： bread, milk, eggs, fruit, vegetables, biscuits, chips, breakfast, lunch, dinner, stomach, body 写作二 你的好朋友Tom最近经常吃薯片、糖果等不健康食物，还时常胃痛。请你给他写一封信，给他一些健康饮食的建议，帮助他恢复健康。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。。 参考单词： milk, vegetables, tomatoes, grapes, biscuits, chips, candies, breakfast, lunch, snack, stomach, bones, body 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： I have some diet problems. I often feel hungry all morning because I only eat a few biscuits for breakfast. I also eat too much meat but no vegetables for lunch. And I always eat dinner too fast to play outside. （罗列不良饮食习惯）Now I want to change. I should have bread, milk, eggs and fruit for breakfast. For lunch, I need to add vegetables. I should eat slowly for dinner. （制定改正方案） I hope I can keep healthy by eating right food. （表达心愿） 范文（提高版）： I used to have bad eating habits. Every morning, I only eat a few biscuits for breakfast, so I feel hungry all the time. For lunch, I love meat too much and never eat vegetables. I also eat dinner too fast because I can’t wait to play with my friends. （罗列不良饮食习惯及原因）I know I need to change. From now on, I will have bread, warm milk, eggs and grapes for breakfast—milk is good for my bones. For lunch, I’ll eat tomatoes and other vegetables with meat. I should eat slowly for dinner. （制定改正方案）I hope my body grows strong and my stomach stays healthy. （表达心愿） 写作二 范文（基础版）： Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear that you often have a stomachache. I know you eat too many chips and candies every day. That’s bad for your body. （点明病情与坏习惯）You should have bread, milk, eggs and vegetables for breakfast. For lunch, don’t eat too much meat. You need to eat fruit too. And you should eat slowly for dinner. Don’t eat too many biscuits or candies. （给出饮食建议） I hope you feel better soon. Yours, Lily 范文（提高版）： Dear Tom, I was sad to know you often have a stomachache these days. It’s because you eat too many chips and candies, and you never eat enough vegetables or fruit. Let me give you some advice. （说明缘由）You should have milk, bread and eggs for breakfast—milk is good for your bones. For lunch, you need to eat tomatoes and grapes with meat. If you feel hungry, eat nuts instead of biscuits. And remember to eat slowly for dinner. （细化建议） I hope you can follow these tips and get healthy soon. Yours, Lily 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $