Unit 1 Amazing places（写作突破专项训练）英语人教PEP版六年级上册（新教材）

**基本信息** 以“旅行评论写作五步法”为核心，系统整合词汇句型与分层实践，培养语言表达与跨文化认知能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作方法指引|1篇原文示例|开篇点题-细节描写-体验补充-抒发感受-结尾推荐五步法|从写作结构到内容层次，构建完整评论框架| |核心词汇|3类（地标/活动/感受）|分类记忆法，按功能模块整合词汇|从具体场景词汇到情感表达词汇，形成语义网络| |参考句型|4类功能句型|功能句型分类，匹配不同写作需求|从经历描述到评价推荐，实现语言功能进阶| |写作任务|2个任务（含基础/提高版范文）|分层示范法，基础版保规范提高版强表达|从模仿应用到个性创作，落实语言能力与思维品质|

Unit 1 Amazing places 写作方法指引- 原文指路 My trip to the Jinggangshan Revolution Museum was amazing! 开篇点题：直接点明旅行目的地与整体惊艳感受，快速抓住读者注意力。 I walked around the museum for hours and saw many old books and photos. 细节描写：具体叙述旅行中的活动与所见场景，让内容真实可感。 The volunteers told great stories about the Red Army. 体验补充：分享旅行中的互动经历，丰富评论内容层次。 The stories were really inspiring. 抒发感受：表达个人内心的触动，增强评论的情感感染力。 Do you want to learn more about the Red Army? You should go there! 结尾推荐：以反问引发兴趣，并用建议句式完成旅行推荐，呼应评论目的。 一、核心词汇 1. 著名地标类 国内地标：Great Wall（长城）、Palace Museum（故宫博物院）、Hong Kong-Zhuhai-Macao Bridge（港珠澳大桥）、Mount Taishan（泰山）、Terracotta Warriors（兵马俑）、West Lake（西湖）、 Jinggang Mountains（井冈山）、Sanxingdui Museum（三星堆博物馆）、former home of Lu Xun（鲁迅故居）Guangzhou Science Centre（广州科学中心） 国外地标：Eiffel Tower（埃菲尔铁塔）、Sydney Opera House（悉尼歌剧院）、 Easter Island（复活节岛）、Table Mountain（桌山） 2. 旅行活动类 climb（攀登）、visit（参观）、walk around（漫步、环游）、ride bikes（骑自行车）、 watch a show（看演出）、take photos（拍照）、eat local food（吃当地食物）、drink tea（喝茶）、see wall paintings（看壁画）、take a trip（去旅行） 3. 感受与评价类 amazing（令人惊叹的）、great（很棒的）、wonderful（精彩的）、inspiring（鼓舞人心的）、 delicious（美味的）、funny（有趣的）、special（特别的）、beautiful（美丽的）、nice（美好的）、interesting（有趣的） 二、参考句型 1. 描述旅行经历 I climbed the Great Wall last weekend. My family took a trip to Xi'an over the summer holidays. We ate famous Xi'an noodles and saw the Terracotta Warriors. I walked around the Palace Museum for hours. We walked around the old city and rode bikes on the old city wall. I saw many beautiful wall paintings in Dunhuang. We took many photos of the bamboo forest and beautiful waterfalls in Jinggang Mountains. 2. 介绍地标特点 The Great Wall is 21,000 kilometres in all. The Palace Museum has over 8,700 rooms. Mount Taishan has more than 1,600 steps. The Jinggang Mountains are a UNESCO World Cultural Heritage Site. Table Mountain in South Africa is flat like a table on the top. 3. 表达旅行感受 My trip to the Jinggangshan Revolution Museum was amazing! The stories about the Red Army were really inspiring. The view from the tower in Shanghai was great. The Goubuli baozi in Tianjin were delicious. The xiangsheng show was very funny. It was such a nice trip to the West Lake. 4. 旅行评论写作 This was a great place for a summer trip! You should visit the Jinggangshan Revolution Museum! I want to go to the Jinggang Mountains again! My trip to Mount Huangshan was wonderful. You should visit there! 易错点提示 1. 一般过去式动词变形：注意规则动词和不规则动词的过去式变化，比如go变为went，see变为saw，eat变为ate；规则动词直接加-ed（如climb-climbed、visit-visited），不要写错形式。 2. 专有名词大写：地标名称属于专有名词，每个实词的首字母需要大写，比如Great Wall不能写成great wall，Palace Museum不能写成palace museum。 3. 介词搭配：表示“在周末”用on the weekend，“在假期期间”用over the holidays，“环游某地”用walk around + 地点，注意不要混淆介词的使用。 4. 数量表达：表示“超过、多于”用over或者more than，比如over seven thousand clay warriors，不要用错误的表达来描述数量。 写作一 暑假你和家人去参观了一个国内著名地标，请写一篇短文分享这次旅行经历。内容需包含：你们去了哪里、做了哪些活动、这个地标的特点以及你的旅行感受。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： Great Wall, climb, take photos, eat local food, amazing, over, walk around 写作二 你曾经去过一个国外著名地标，现在写一封信给你的笔友，向他推荐这个地方。内容需包含：这个地标是什么、它的特点、你在那里做的事情以及推荐的理由。 要求： 1. 书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。。 参考单词： Eiffel Tower, visit, walk around, take photos, beautiful, wonderful, Paris, watch the sunset 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： My family took a trip to the Great Wall over the summer holidays. I climbed the Great Wall with my parents. （开启旅程） We walked around for hours and took many photos. The Great Wall is over 21,000 kilometres in all. We ate local food for lunch. （游玩经过） My trip was amazing! I want to go there again. （总结感受） 范文（提高版）： Over the summer holidays, my family and I took a trip to the Great Wall. （开启旅程） We climbed up the steep steps and walked around the old walls for three hours. We took lots of photos with the beautiful mountain views. The Great Wall is over 21,000 kilometres long, which is really amazing! We ate delicious local noodles for lunch. （游玩经过） I felt so happy and proud. This was a wonderful trip! （总结感受） 写作二 范文（基础版）： Dear Tom, （书信称呼） Last year I visited the Eiffel Tower in Paris. I walked around the tower and took many photos. （游览经过）The Eiffel Tower is tall and beautiful. I watched the sunset from the tower. My trip was wonderful. You should visit it too! （景色与推荐） Yours, Li Ming 范文（提高版）： Dear Tom, （书信称呼） Last summer, I went to Paris and visited the Eiffel Tower. I walked around the tower with my friend and took lots of nice photos. （游览经过） The Eiffel Tower looks really beautiful, especially when the lights turn on at night. We watched the sunset from the top, and the view was great. It was such a special trip. You should visit the Eiffel Tower if you go to Paris! （景物描写） Yours, Li Ming 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $