Unit 1 Amazing places（写作突破专项训练）英语人教PEP版六年级上册（新教材）

Unit 1 Amazing places

                       

写作方法指引- 原文指路

My trip to the Jinggangshan Revolution Museum was amazing!

开篇点题：直接点明旅行目的地与整体惊艳感受，快速抓住读者注意力。

I walked around the museum for hours and saw many old books and photos.

细节描写：具体叙述旅行中的活动与所见场景，让内容真实可感。

The volunteers told great stories about the Red Army.

体验补充：分享旅行中的互动经历，丰富评论内容层次。

The stories were really inspiring.

抒发感受：表达个人内心的触动，增强评论的情感感染力。

Do you want to learn more about the Red Army? You should go there!

结尾推荐：以反问引发兴趣，并用建议句式完成旅行推荐，呼应评论目的。

一、核心词汇

1. 著名地标类

国内地标：Great Wall（长城）、Palace Museum（故宫博物院）、Hong Kong-Zhuhai-Macao Bridge（港珠澳大桥）、Mount Taishan（泰山）、Terracotta Warriors（兵马俑）、West Lake（西湖）、

Jinggang Mountains（井冈山）、Sanxingdui Museum（三星堆博物馆）、former home of Lu Xun（鲁迅故居）Guangzhou Science Centre（广州科学中心）

国外地标：Eiffel Tower（埃菲尔铁塔）、Sydney Opera House（悉尼歌剧院）、

Easter Island（复活节岛）、Table Mountain（桌山）

2. 旅行活动类

climb（攀登）、visit（参观）、walk around（漫步、环游）、ride bikes（骑自行车）、

watch a show（看演出）、take photos（拍照）、eat local food（吃当地食物）、drink tea（喝茶）、see wall paintings（看壁画）、take a trip（去旅行）

3. 感受与评价类

amazing（令人惊叹的）、great（很棒的）、wonderful（精彩的）、inspiring（鼓舞人心的）、

delicious（美味的）、funny（有趣的）、special（特别的）、beautiful（美丽的）、nice（美好的）、interesting（有趣的）

二、参考句型

1. 描述旅行经历

I climbed the Great Wall last weekend.

My family took a trip to Xi'an over the summer holidays.

We ate famous Xi'an noodles and saw the Terracotta Warriors.

I walked around the Palace Museum for hours.

We walked around the old city and rode bikes on the old city wall.

I saw many beautiful wall paintings in Dunhuang.

We took many photos of the bamboo forest and beautiful waterfalls in Jinggang Mountains.

2. 介绍地标特点

The Great Wall is 21,000 kilometres in all.

The Palace Museum has over 8,700 rooms.

Mount Taishan has more than 1,600 steps.

The Jinggang Mountains are a UNESCO World Cultural Heritage Site.

Table Mountain in South Africa is flat like a table on the top.

3. 表达旅行感受

My trip to the Jinggangshan Revolution Museum was amazing!

The stories about the Red Army were really inspiring.

The view from the tower in Shanghai was great.

The Goubuli baozi in Tianjin were delicious.

The xiangsheng show was very funny.

It was such a nice trip to the West Lake.

4. 旅行评论写作

This was a great place for a summer trip!

You should visit the Jinggangshan Revolution Museum!

I want to go to the Jinggang Mountains again!

My trip to Mount Huangshan was wonderful. You should visit there!