Unit 5 写作专项 My preferred places to live in 学案 2026-2027学年沪教版（五四学制）九年级英语上册

该初中英语导学案聚焦沪教英语（五四学制）九上Unit5写作专项，核心围绕一般过去时被动语态，通过网络论坛发帖场景导入，引导学生对比过往与现居经历，结合范文精讲和写作模板搭建学习支架，衔接一般过去时旧知与被动语态新语法，区分主动被动语态的场景运用。 以真实语境驱动写作实践，范文拆解与模板提供具体语言运用范例，助力提升语言能力。引导学生从居住体验思考建筑意义，回扣单元核心问题，培养思维品质。高分素材与分层指导帮助掌握写作策略，发展学习能力，有效提升写作逻辑与表达准确性。

沪教英语（五四学制）九上Unit5写作专项学案： My preferred place to live in 一、写作原题 写作场景：网络论坛发帖交流，分享自己偏好的居住场所，撰写一篇英文网络帖子 My preferred place to live in。 写作要求： 1. 完整介绍心仪的居住地点，从地理位置、建筑特点、配套设施、居住体验多角度行文，逻辑通顺，层次分明； 2. 依托本单元核心语法一般过去时被动语态（Past simple passive），介绍老式建筑的建造材料、修建历史，区分主动语态、被动语态的场景用法，为本篇作文核心阅卷考点； 3. 运用本单元写作技巧区分主动语态与被动语态（Using active and passive voices），根据主语是否重要灵活切换语态，保证语段句式协调统一，规避语态杂乱的问题； 4. 文末抒发个人居住感受，回扣单元核心大问题 Why do we construct buildings?，升华文章主旨。 本单元写作核心考点：一般过去时被动语态（was/were + 过去分词），多用于描述过去修建的建筑；同时考查主动、被动语态的合理选用，实现句式多样化，是作文主要得分点。 二、审题梳理 1. 文体：论坛帖子，考场通用三段式记叙文结构 2. 时态划分 · 讲述过往居住经历、老式建筑的修建历史：一般过去时（重点使用被动语态） · 描述当下偏好的住所、周边环境与日常便利之处：一般现在时，主动语态居多 · 抒发内心感受、未来居住期许：一般现在时、一般将来时 3. 行文逻辑三层架构 4. 开篇引入：开门见山，点明自己更喜欢在哪种建筑内居住，直接亮出个人选择； 5. 主体叙事：从外形构造、建筑材质、地理位置、周边配套展开细节描写，穿插一般过去时被动语态介绍建筑由来，统一语段语态优化行文；对比过往住所，凸显此处居住优势； 6. 结尾升华：总结居住带来的美好体验，结合单元核心问题，阐述人类修建建筑的本质意义，升华主旨。 三、范文精讲 I used to live with my parents and grandparents in a big house in the suburb of Sunny City. It was built of natural materials such as wood. It was close to nature and was often visited by small animals. It’s such a lovely place! Now I live in a building in the city centre with my parents. It isn’t tall or very large, but it is comfortable. There are gyms and supermarkets nearby. It is also an environmentally friendly building. Waste and rubbish are quickly cleared. We have separate units but we can meet our neighbours in the common area. I like where I live now. 分段思路拆解 第一段（过往居所铺垫）：回忆从前住在城郊木屋的经历，使用was built一般过去时被动语态，交代建筑建造原料；后半段选用被动句式 was often visited，保持语态统一，体现写作技巧，描绘贴近自然的居住环境。 第二段（现居房屋主体）：转入如今市中心公寓，多用主动语态介绍周边生活配套，再切换一般现在时被动语态 are quickly cleared，说明小区环保设计，主动被动各司其职，条理清晰。 第三段（收尾点题）：直白表达个人喜好，暗含建筑建造的初衷：为人们打造舒适宜居的生活空间，回扣本单元 BQ。 范文亮点短语 & 核心考点运用 语态对照（单元写作技巧） · 被动：It was built of natural materials. / Waste and rubbish are quickly cleared. · 主动：There are gyms and supermarkets nearby. 可直接套用过渡词组：used to live in, in the suburb of, natural materials, city centre, environmentally friendly building, common area 四、写作模板 第一段（开篇，点明个人偏好，引出居住地点） Among different kinds of buildings, my favourite place to live in is \\\\\\\\. I once lived in another place before, and the comparison helps me figure out what kind of building suits me best. 第二段（文章主体，介绍建筑细节 + 嵌入过去时被动语态 + 规范选用主动、被动语态） If I have a chance to choose, I will pick a wooden house lying in quiet suburbs. This kind of house was built with logs and stone many years ago by local craftsmen. It stands far away from noisy downtown, and green plants surround the whole yard. Wild birds and little rabbits are often seen around my house. I can walk freely in the open air every day. Modern flats were designed for busy urban citizens, yet I prefer the peace brought by traditional countryside buildings. 第三段（结尾，感悟升华 + 回扣单元主旨） I am always relaxed staying in such a wonderful building. From my choice, I understand why people construct buildings. Buildings are not only rooms for people to shelter themselves, but also spaces that match people’s different lifestyles. We build various buildings to satisfy different people’s needs for life. 五、写作高分素材（高分句型 + 好词 + 过渡短语） （一）核心语法高分句型（一般过去时被动语态） 1. Many ancient local houses were made of wood and mud hundreds of years ago. 数百年前，许多老式民居由木料与泥土修筑而成。 2. The grand palace was constructed during the Ming Dynasty. 这座宏伟的宫殿修建于明代。 3. Plenty of old buildings were protected by local government to preserve local culture. 大量老式建筑被当地政府保护起来，以此留存本土文化。 4. These apartment buildings were planned to bring convenient life for ordinary people. 这些公寓楼当初被规划建造，用来为普通人提供便利的生活。 （二）语态转换专用例句（区分主动 / 被动，单元核心写作技能） 主动：Workers built this villa in 1998. 被动：This villa was built in 1998. 主动：People keep the public areas clean every day. 被动：Public areas are kept clean every day. （三）优质形容词 / 好词（描写建筑、居住体验） · 建筑特质类：ancient, eco-friendly, solid, delicate, modern, spacious, traditional · 区位环境类：suburban, downtown, quiet, crowded, convenient, remote · 内心感受类：comfortable, peaceful, delighted, relaxed, satisfied （四）叙事过渡好词好句 1. Different buildings were created to serve diverse daily demands of human beings. 各式各样的建筑被修建出来，满足人类多元的日常生活需求。 2. Living inside well-designed buildings shapes our daily mood in subtle ways. 住在设计精良的建筑之中，会潜移默化影响我们的生活心境。 3. We construct buildings not merely for shelter, but for a better lifestyle. 我们修建建筑不只是为了遮风挡雨，更是为了更美好的生活方式。 六、完整版考场范文 My preferred place to live in Among different kinds of buildings, my favourite place to live in is a traditional wooden house located in quiet suburbs. I used to live in crowded downtown apartments, and the comparison helps me figure out what kind of building suits me best. If I have a chance to choose, I will definitely pick a classic suburban wooden house. Most similar houses were built with natural timber and stone decades ago by local villagers. It stands far away from noisy streets, and thick trees surround the whole courtyard. Little squirrels and sparrows are often spotted wandering around the yard. I can take walks amid fresh nature whenever I want. Tall city apartments were designed to solve housing problems for urban residents, yet I long for the peace hidden in countryside buildings. I do not need numerous shopping malls nearby; simple natural scenery can bring me greater joy. I feel totally relaxed staying in such a wonderful building. From my personal preference, I finally get the answer to our big question: why do we construct buildings? Buildings offer shelter for human beings, and different styles of buildings are created to fit people’s varied tastes and lifestyles. We keep constructing new buildings to pursue more satisfying lives. 范文中文译文 我偏爱的居所 在各式各样的建筑之中，我最喜爱的居住地点是城郊的传统木屋。从前我住在拥挤的市中心公寓，对比过后，我清楚了什么样的建筑最适合自己。 如果可以自主选择住所，我一定会选一座经典的城郊木屋。几十年前，当地村民使用天然木料与石材修建起一大批同类房屋。它远离喧嚣街道，浓密的树木环绕整座院落，松鼠、麻雀时常在院落周边出没。我随时可以走进自然散步。高层城市公寓当初被建造出来，用来解决城市居民的住房问题，但我更向往乡村建筑独有的静谧。我并不需要周边遍布商场，原生态的景致便能带给我十足的快乐。 住在这样的房屋里，我的内心总能彻底放松。结合自己的居住偏好，我找到了本单元核心问题的答案：人类为何修筑建筑？建筑为人们提供庇护，不同风格的建筑被打造出来，适配人们各不相同的生活喜好。我们不断修建新式建筑，本质是为了追寻更加美好的生活。 ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $