Unit 3 Growing Up（成长建议）（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材北师大版九年级上册

本讲义聚焦初中英语“成长”主题写作，系统构建从话题解读到实战应用的学习支架。先明确个人成长经历、影响人物等写作维度及中考命题形式，再提供“open up one's mind”等鲜活词汇与开头、中间、结尾句式积累，通过典例审题、谋篇布局思维导图及佳作赏析深化理解，最后设计六类实战任务覆盖不同写作情境。 该资料以语言能力培养为核心，通过词汇句式精准输入提升表达规范，结合范例分析与思维导图训练思维品质，助力学生构建写作逻辑。多样化实战任务适配课中分层教学，也便于课后自主练习查漏补缺，有效衔接中考要求，促进学生在真实语境中提升写作能力与成长认知。

Unit 3 Growing Up单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题是“成长”,要求学生能用所学的词汇和句型介绍自己的成长经历或对自己有影响的人物。与此相关的主要写作维度有: ①个人成长经历; ②对自己有影响的人; ③自己心中的偶像。 中考书面表达与此相关的命题形式多样,如征文、给校报投稿、根据思维导图写作等。一般介绍的主要内容有:个人在成长过程中遇到的问题以及如何处理它们、某人对自己产生的影响等。 词汇积累 （1）open up one's mind开拓某人的思维 （2）achieve a balance取得平衡; （3）lose heart　失去信心 （4）make many great achievements　取得许多重大成就 （5）compare yourself to other people　将自己与他人比较 （6）express their own feelings and ideas表达自己的感受和想法 句式积累 开头句 （1）During the school year, not only did I have happy time, but I had many kinds of problems. 整个学年里，我不仅度过了许多愉快的时光，但也遇到了各种各样的问题。 （2）My biggest problem was that I used to be shy. 最大的困扰在于我原本就比较害羞； （3）Sometimes I really didn’t know whom I should ask for help when I was in trouble. 有时遇到困难时，我真的不知道该向谁求助。 中间句 （1）First, I learned how to communicate with others and make as many friends as possible. 首先，我学会了如何与他人沟通并尽可能多地交朋友。 （2）Then when I was in trouble, I asked my classmates or friends for help because we were at the same age and we could understand each other easily. 后来遇到困难时，我会向同学或朋友求助——因为我们年龄相仿，彼此很容易理解对方。 （3）Besides, I also told my teachers or parents about my trouble and asked for their help. 此外，我也会向老师或父母反映自己的困境，并寻求他们的帮助。 结尾句 （1）This experience made me understand that responsibility is not just about doing things right, but about taking initiative. 这段经历让我明白，责任不仅在于把事情做对，更在于主动作为。 （2）I think this change makes me better because it helps me prepare for the future. 我认为这种转变让我变得更好，因为它帮助我为未来做好准备。 （3）I believe that being responsible and independent will allow me to face more challenges in life. 我相信，具备责任感和独立性将使我能够更好地应对生活中的各种挑战。 典例 写作实例 　　每个人的成长都像是一场旅行,在成长的过程中既有烦恼,也有收获。请根据以下提示,以“Growing up”为题用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你在成长过程中的经历和感受。 提示:1.How you learn about the world (books, open up your mind, get more knowledge...at least one point). 2. How you solved the problems (at least 2 of your problems and how you solved them). 3.A person who has influenced you most and why (give two reasons). 注意:1.必须包含所有提示内容,并作适当发挥; 2.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范; 3.词数不少于100。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。 Growing up 　　Growing up is like a journey. I've learned a lot on the way. 审题 1.体裁:记叙文。　 2.时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。 3.人称:以第一人称为主。 谋篇布局 佳作展示 Growing up Growing up is like a journey. I've learned a lot on the way. 　　I learn about the world in different ways. I like reading books, which can help me open up my mind and learn more about people and things. I also had many problems. For example, I could not achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbies. Then my English teacher encouraged me to make a study plan. Besides, I was not good at English, and my English teacher also helped me with it. She taught me many learning methods and encouraged me to be a better self. Therefore, I think the person who influenced me most was her. 　　I think when we face difficulties, we should never give up easily because growing up means more than success. 佳作赏析 ①使用高级表达open up one's mind、achieve a balance和when引导的时间状语从句,提升了文章的层次。 ②结尾处使用动名词短语作主语,提升了文章的层次,表达了作者对个人成长的认识,使文章扣题。 （一） 人生哪来一帆风顺，有丰富经历的人生才活的精彩。在同学们的成长过程中，既有快乐，也有烦恼。请用英语写一篇短文。 要点： 1. 你在学校或家里曾经遇到的最大的问题或烦恼； 2. 你解决问题或烦恼的过程； 3. 你在这件事情中获得的感悟是什么。 要求： 1. 词数不得少于80词； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） 在我们的成长过程中，既有快乐，也有烦恼。假如你是Julie，最近你收到了你的好友Ben的一封倾诉信。 请你根据下列表格中的内容用英文给Ben写一封回信。 Ben’s problems Your advice 和同学相处不好，朋友很少； 1.多参加活动； 2.与同学交流，对同学友好； 学习遇到困难，害怕考不好； 1.别害怕考试； 2.向老师和同学寻求帮助； 父母要求严格，有时逼得太紧； 1.互相理解； 2.和父母谈心； 提示: communicate with; be friendly to; be strict with; push sb. so hard; have a heart-to-heart talk with; 要求： 1.所写内容须包含表格中的信息，可合理发挥1-2点建议； 2.语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整； 3.100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Ben, I feel sorry to hear about your problems. In your letter you said that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Good luck with everything! Yours, Julie （三） 成长像是一场旅行，成长的过程中有烦恼，也有收获。假如你是李华，你的同龄朋友Simon写了一封邮件向你询问相关信息，请你根据邮件内容和所给提示写封回信，谈谈你在成长过程中的经历和感受。 要求：（1）必须包含所有提示，并作适当发挥； （2）表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； （3）词数不少于90；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hi Simon, Growing up is like a journey. I’ve learned a lot on the way. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my experiences in growing up can be helpful to you. Li Hua （四） 成长像一次长途旅行，在成长的过程中有困惑，也有收获。请以“Growing up”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你在成长过程中的困惑及感受。 如何了解世界 1. 书本：获得各学科的知识，了解历史上的人和事； 2. 父母：教你做个善良、有爱心的人； 3. ……（自拟一点）。 如何解决烦恼 你的烦恼是什么及如何解决的（举例说明）。 你的感受 1. 成长比成功重要； 2. ……（自拟一点）。 要求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； 3）100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4）不得使用真实的姓名、校名和地名等。 Growing up Growing up is like a long-distance journey. I’ve learned a lot on the way. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter想了解你在成长过程中的烦恼与收获。请根据以下提示，给Peter写一封电子邮件，介绍你的相关经历，要求80-100词左右。 提示： 1. 烦恼：考试压力大，担心成绩不好；和同学偶尔有矛盾，不知道如何相处；2. 解决方式：向父母/老师求助，和同学沟通，学会合理安排时间；3. 收获：变得更勇敢、有耐心，学会了沟通和时间管理，收获了真挚的友谊；4. 感受：烦恼是成长的一部分，每一次解决烦恼都会带来收获，助力自己更好成长。 要求： 1. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确； 2. 包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 3. 格式正确（电子邮件格式）； 4. 不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） 学校英语社团公众号将开设“Growing Pains and Gains” (成长的烦恼与收获)专栏，现向全体同学征稿。专栏希望听到同学们真实动人的成长故事。请结合以下提示，以“The Change That Makes Me Better”为题，写一篇稿件。 内容包括： 1. 描述改变：简要介绍你过去和现在在某个方面 (如性格、习惯、技能等) 的具体不同； 2. 讲述故事：分享是哪个关键事件或原因促使你做出了改变？(请描述具体过程)； 3. 反思成长：这次改变让你对自己或成长有了什么新的认识？它如何让你成为了一个更好的自己？ 要求： 1. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 The Change That Makes Me Better There’s no doubt that everyone changes as they grow up. The biggest change for me is that I have become ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $Unit 3 Growing Up单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题是“成长”,要求学生能用所学的词汇和句型介绍自己的成长经历或对自己有影响的人物。与此相关的主要写作维度有: ①个人成长经历; ②对自己有影响的人; ③自己心中的偶像。 中考书面表达与此相关的命题形式多样,如征文、给校报投稿、根据思维导图写作等。一般介绍的主要内容有:个人在成长过程中遇到的问题以及如何处理它们、某人对自己产生的影响等。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 （1）open up one's mind开拓某人的思维 （2）achieve a balance取得平衡; （3）lose heart　失去信心 （4）make many great achievements　取得许多重大成就 （5）compare yourself to other people　将自己与他人比较 （6）express their own feelings and ideas表达自己的感受和想法 句式积累 开头句 （1）During the school year, not only did I have happy time, but I had many kinds of problems. 整个学年里，我不仅度过了许多愉快的时光，但也遇到了各种各样的问题。 （2）My biggest problem was that I used to be shy. 最大的困扰在于我原本就比较害羞； （3）Sometimes I really didn’t know whom I should ask for help when I was in trouble. 有时遇到困难时，我真的不知道该向谁求助。 中间句 （1）First, I learned how to communicate with others and make as many friends as possible. 首先，我学会了如何与他人沟通并尽可能多地交朋友。 （2）Then when I was in trouble, I asked my classmates or friends for help because we were at the same age and we could understand each other easily. 后来遇到困难时，我会向同学或朋友求助——因为我们年龄相仿，彼此很容易理解对方。 （3）Besides, I also told my teachers or parents about my trouble and asked for their help. 此外，我也会向老师或父母反映自己的困境，并寻求他们的帮助。 结尾句 （1）This experience made me understand that responsibility is not just about doing things right, but about taking initiative. 这段经历让我明白，责任不仅在于把事情做对，更在于主动作为。 （2）I think this change makes me better because it helps me prepare for the future. 我认为这种转变让我变得更好，因为它帮助我为未来做好准备。 （3）I believe that being responsible and independent will allow me to face more challenges in life. 我相信，具备责任感和独立性将使我能够更好地应对生活中的各种挑战。 典例 写作实例 　　每个人的成长都像是一场旅行,在成长的过程中既有烦恼,也有收获。请根据以下提示,以“Growing up”为题用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你在成长过程中的经历和感受。 提示:1.How you learn about the world (books, open up your mind, get more knowledge...at least one point). 2. How you solved the problems (at least 2 of your problems and how you solved them). 3.A person who has influenced you most and why (give two reasons). 注意:1.必须包含所有提示内容,并作适当发挥; 2.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范; 3.词数不少于100。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。 Growing up 　　Growing up is like a journey. I've learned a lot on the way. 审题 1.体裁:记叙文。　 2.时态:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。 3.人称:以第一人称为主。 谋篇布局 佳作展示 Growing up Growing up is like a journey. I've learned a lot on the way. 　　I learn about the world in different ways. I like reading books, which can help me open up my mind and learn more about people and things. I also had many problems. For example, I could not achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbies. Then my English teacher encouraged me to make a study plan. Besides, I was not good at English, and my English teacher also helped me with it. She taught me many learning methods and encouraged me to be a better self. Therefore, I think the person who influenced me most was her. 　　I think when we face difficulties, we should never give up easily because growing up means more than success. 佳作赏析 ①使用高级表达open up one's mind、achieve a balance和when引导的时间状语从句,提升了文章的层次。 ②结尾处使用动名词短语作主语,提升了文章的层次,表达了作者对个人成长的认识,使文章扣题。 （一） 人生哪来一帆风顺，有丰富经历的人生才活的精彩。在同学们的成长过程中，既有快乐，也有烦恼。请用英语写一篇短文。 要点： 1. 你在学校或家里曾经遇到的最大的问题或烦恼； 2. 你解决问题或烦恼的过程； 3. 你在这件事情中获得的感悟是什么。 要求： 1. 词数不得少于80词； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文： My teenage life is colorful. During the school year, not only did I have happy time, but I had many kinds of problems. My biggest problem was that I used to be shy. Sometimes I really didn’t know whom I should ask for help when I was in trouble. To solve the problem, my good friend offered me some advice. First, I learned how to communicate with others and make as many friends as possible. Then when I was in trouble, I asked my classmates or friends for help because we were at the same age and we could understand each other easily. Besides, I also told my teachers or parents about my trouble and asked for their help. They were full of love and had rich experience. Now, I am more outgoing than before. I can get along well with people around me. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态综合使用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示内容逐一阐述，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己成长过程中遇到的最大问题是什么； 第二步，详细介绍解决问题的方法； 第三步，表达感想。 [亮点词汇] ①ask for help寻求帮助 ②be in trouble陷入困境 ③communicate with与……沟通 [高分句型] ①My biggest problem was that I used to be shy.（that引导的表语从句） ②Sometimes I really didn’t know whom I should ask for help when I was in trouble.（whom引导的宾语从句，when引导的时间状语从句） （二） 在我们的成长过程中，既有快乐，也有烦恼。假如你是Julie，最近你收到了你的好友Ben的一封倾诉信。 请你根据下列表格中的内容用英文给Ben写一封回信。 Ben’s problems Your advice 和同学相处不好，朋友很少； 1.多参加活动； 2.与同学交流，对同学友好； 学习遇到困难，害怕考不好； 1.别害怕考试； 2.向老师和同学寻求帮助； 父母要求严格，有时逼得太紧； 1.互相理解； 2.和父母谈心； 提示: communicate with; be friendly to; be strict with; push sb. so hard; have a heart-to-heart talk with; 要求： 1.所写内容须包含表格中的信息，可合理发挥1-2点建议； 2.语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整； 3.100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Ben, I feel sorry to hear about your problems. In your letter you said that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Good luck with everything! Yours, Julie 【答案】例文 Dear Ben, I feel sorry to hear about your problems. In your letter you said that you didn’t get along well with your classmates and have few friends. I think you should take part in more activities. Besides, you’d better be friendly to your classmates and you also can communicate with them. What’s more, you found that you had difficulty in your studies. You should ask your teachers and classmates for help after class if you can’t understand in class. You were afraid of not doing well in the exams. Remember not to be afraid of the exams. Also, you mentioned that your parents were strict with you, even sometimes they pushed you so hard. I suggest that you should understand each other. You can have a heart-to-heart talk with them. It will make your relationship better. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. Good luck with everything! Yours, Julie 【详解】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：考生需注意根据表格中所提出的三个问题分别给出对应建议，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，针对和同学相处不好，朋友很少的问题提出建议； 第二步，针对学习遇到困难，害怕考不好的问题提出建议； 第三步，针对父母要求严格，有时逼得太紧的问题提出建议。 [亮点词汇] ①get along well with sb.与某人相处融洽 ②You’d better do sth.你最好做某事 ③what’s more除此之外还 ④ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助 ⑤be afraid of害怕 [高分句型] ①You should ask your teachers and classmates for help after class if you can’t understand in class. 如果你在课堂上听不懂，你应该课下向老师和同学寻求帮助。(if引导条件状语从句。) ②I hope you will find these suggestions useful. 我希望这些建议对你有用。(省略that的宾语从句。) （三） 成长像是一场旅行，成长的过程中有烦恼，也有收获。假如你是李华，你的同龄朋友Simon写了一封邮件向你询问相关信息，请你根据邮件内容和所给提示写封回信，谈谈你在成长过程中的经历和感受。 要求：（1）必须包含所有提示，并作适当发挥； （2）表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； （3）词数不少于90；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hi Simon, Growing up is like a journey. I’ve learned a lot on the way. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope my experiences in growing up can be helpful to you. Li Hua 【答案】范文： Hi Simon, Growing up is like a journey. I’ve learned a lot on the way. I’ve learned about the world in different ways. I like reading all types of books which can help me learn more about the world. Also, I’ve learned a lot from my parents and teachers. My parents taught me how to be a kind person. My teachers have helped me improved my knowledge. Besides, I have learned a lot through the Internet. On the way of growing up, I have my problems. For example, I couldn’t achieve a balance between my hobbies and my schoolwork. Then my friends told me to make a study plan and choose hobbies according to my spare time. I solved the problem in this way. I think when we face difficulties, we should never give up easily. I hope to become an engineer when I grow up. And I will try my best to achieve my dream. I hope my experiences in growing up can be helpful to you. Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文为一篇应用文，为书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“现在完成时”、“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：要点内容已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己了解这个世界的方法； 第二步，介绍自己在成长过程中遇到的问题及解决方式； 第三步，介绍自己对于成长的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ① make a study plan制定学习计划 ② give up放弃 ③ try one’s best to do尽力做某事 [高分句型] ① I like reading all types of books which can help me learn more about the world.（which引导的定语从句） ② I hope to become an engineer when I grow up.（when引导的时间状语从句） （四） 成长像一次长途旅行，在成长的过程中有困惑，也有收获。请以“Growing up”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你在成长过程中的困惑及感受。 如何了解世界 1. 书本：获得各学科的知识，了解历史上的人和事； 2. 父母：教你做个善良、有爱心的人； 3. ……（自拟一点）。 如何解决烦恼 你的烦恼是什么及如何解决的（举例说明）。 你的感受 1. 成长比成功重要； 2. ……（自拟一点）。 要求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； 3）100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4）不得使用真实的姓名、校名和地名等。 Growing up Growing up is like a long-distance journey. I’ve learned a lot on the way. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 例文： Growing up Growing up is like a long-distance journey. I’ve learned a lot on the way. To understand the world, I read books for knowledge of different subjects and learn about people and events in history. My parents teach me to be a kind, loving person. Besides, traveling helps me broaden my horizons. However, there are worries. I worried about my spoken English because I was too shy to speak in public. I asked my English teacher for help. She encouraged me to practice more and join the English club. With her help, I became confident and made great progress. From my experience, I realize that growing up is more important than success. I will cherish every moment of my life and keep moving forward. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，讲述具体经历时使用一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不得遗漏，可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：承接开头，阐述了解世界的途径； 第二步：转折引出成长中的烦恼。具体描述一个烦恼以及是如何解决的。 第三步：总结全文，表达感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①broaden one’s horizons开阔某人的眼界 ②in public在公共场合 ③ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助 ④make progress取得进步 ⑤cherish 珍惜 [高分句型] ①To understand the world, I read books for knowledge of different subjects and learn about people and events in history. (动词不定式作目的状语) ②From my experience, I realize that growing up is more important than success. (that引导宾语从句) （五） 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter想了解你在成长过程中的烦恼与收获。请根据以下提示，给Peter写一封电子邮件，介绍你的相关经历，要求80-100词左右。 提示： 1. 烦恼：考试压力大，担心成绩不好；和同学偶尔有矛盾，不知道如何相处；2. 解决方式：向父母/老师求助，和同学沟通，学会合理安排时间；3. 收获：变得更勇敢、有耐心，学会了沟通和时间管理，收获了真挚的友谊；4. 感受：烦恼是成长的一部分，每一次解决烦恼都会带来收获，助力自己更好成长。 要求： 1. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确； 2. 包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 3. 格式正确（电子邮件格式）； 4. 不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Dear Peter, I’m glad to hear from you and will tell you about my growing pains and gains. I feel stressed about exams and worry about my grades. Sometimes I argue with classmates and don’t know how to get on with them. When I feel upset, I ask my parents and teachers for help. I also communicate with them and learn to arrange my time. From these, I gain a lot. I become brave and patient. I learn to communicate and manage time well, and I get true friendship. I think pains bring growth and gains. Please write to me soon. Yours, Li Hua 【总体分析】①题材：电子邮件； ②时态：一般过去时、一般现在时； ③提示：需包含烦恼、解决方法、收获与感受，词数80-100词，格式正确。 【写作步骤】第一步，问候并点明主题，简述成长中的烦恼（考试压力、同学矛盾）； 第二步，说明解决方法（求助、沟通、时间管理）； 第三步，总结收获（勇敢、耐心、友谊）和感悟（烦恼促进成长）。 【亮点词汇】①arrange 安排 ②communicate 沟通 ③friendship 友谊 【高分句型】①Sometimes I argue with classmates and don’t know how to get on with them. (运用了疑问词+to do结构) ②When I feel upset, I ask my parents and teachers for help. (when引导时间状语从句) ③I think pains bring growth and gains. (宾语从句) （六） 学校英语社团公众号将开设“Growing Pains and Gains” (成长的烦恼与收获)专栏，现向全体同学征稿。专栏希望听到同学们真实动人的成长故事。请结合以下提示，以“The Change That Makes Me Better”为题，写一篇稿件。 内容包括： 1. 描述改变：简要介绍你过去和现在在某个方面 (如性格、习惯、技能等) 的具体不同； 2. 讲述故事：分享是哪个关键事件或原因促使你做出了改变？(请描述具体过程)； 3. 反思成长：这次改变让你对自己或成长有了什么新的认识？它如何让你成为了一个更好的自己？ 要求： 1. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 The Change That Makes Me Better There’s no doubt that everyone changes as they grow up. The biggest change for me is that I have become ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: The Change That Makes Me Better There’s no doubt that everyone changes as they grow up. The biggest change for me is that I have become more responsible and independent. In the past, I always relied on my parents to remind me to finish my homework or pack my schoolbag. However, things changed after I entered middle school. One day, my mother was sick and couldn’t help me as usual. I had to manage my time and tasks by myself. At first, I felt a little worried, but I made a plan and tried to follow it. To my surprise, I not only completed all my homework but also had time to help my mother. This experience made me understand that responsibility is not just about doing things right, but about taking initiative. Now, I no longer wait for others to tell me what to do. I think this change makes me better because it helps me prepare for the future. I believe that being responsible and independent will allow me to face more challenges in life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。引出作者成长变化的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体讲述令作者变得更有责任感和独立的经历； 第三步，书写结语。总结使作者从这次经历中所获得的认识及感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①rely on 依赖 ②remind sb. to do sth. 提醒某人做某事 ③to one’s surprise 令某人吃惊的是 ④not only…but also… 不但……而且…… ⑤have time to do sth. 有时间做某事 ⑥make sb. do sth. 使某人做某事 ⑦help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事 ⑧prepare for 准备 ⑨allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事 [高分句型] ①However, things changed after I entered middle school. (after引导时间状语从句) ②This experience made me understand that responsibility is not just about doing things right, but about taking initiative. (含有that的宾语从句) ③I think this change makes me better because it helps me prepare for the future. (省略that的宾语从句；because引导的原因状语从句) $