Unit1 My growing-up moment 写作专项学案 2026-2027学年沪教版（五四学制）九年级英语上册

该初中英语导学案聚焦沪教英语（五四学制）九上Unit1“growing-up moment”写作专项，核心围绕系动词（linking verbs）运用，通过审题梳理（文体、时态、逻辑架构）、范文精讲与分段拆解、写作模板及高分素材（句型、好词、过渡短语等）搭建学习支架，引导学生用时间状语串联事件脉络，刻画内心情绪与状态变化。 资料特色在于融合语言能力（系动词后接形容词准确表达人物状态）、思维品质（今昔对比的事件逻辑架构）和学习能力（模板与素材辅助自主写作），提供可直接套用的时序词组、高分句型及英文谚语，帮助学生掌握叙事结构，提升写作效率与表达准确性，助力教学实施。

沪教英语（五四学制）九上Unit1写作专项学案： My growing-up moment 一、写作原题 写作场景：参与青少年心理互助交流会，撰写一篇记叙文，分享属于你的growing-up moment（成长瞬间），讲述一段促成自身蜕变的亲身经历。 写作要求： 1. 完整梳理整件事情的发展脉络，合理运用时间状语串联行文； 2. 依托本单元核心语法系动词（linking verbs），刻画全程内心情绪、个人状态的前后变化； 3. 写明事件发生时的内心感受； 4. 在文末总结本次经历带给自己的感悟与人生收获。 本单元写作核心考点：各类系动词（become、get、feel、grow、stay、seem、turn、keep 等），系动词后必须接续形容词，用来体现人物状态转变，是阅卷主要得分点。 二、审题梳理 1. 文体：叙事记叙文，考场通用三段式行文结构 2. 时态划分 · 事件叙事部分：一般过去时，记叙过往经历 · 描写当下自身状态、文末哲理感悟：一般现在时 3. 行文逻辑三层架构 ① 过往的自我：点明自身短板，胆怯、自卑、畏惧挑战等问题 ② 事件经过：遭遇难题，主动尝试克服困难，穿插心态转变过程，落实系动词考点 ③ 如今的自我：对比从前，写出性格、心态层面的改变，升华成长主旨 3、 范文精讲 In the 8th grade, our English teacher required everyone to practise public speaking in front of the class. Each time, I would practise on the way to school the day before, and rehearse before my turn came. The first few times, my voice was shaking, my hands were sweating, and I even forgot parts of my speech. As time went on, I became less nervous and gained more confidence as a speaker, especially when I saw my classmates become interested in my talk. Now, I feel confident about speaking to a crowd, even in English. I always prepare my speeches well, and I don’t get as nervous as I used to. 分段思路拆解 第一段（铺垫）：交代八年级进行课堂公开演讲这件事，细致刻画自己最初紧张局促的状态，铺垫自身胆小的短板，为后文成长变化做好对比。 第二段（文章主体）：借助时间过渡短语推进情节，使用核心系动词become，写出自己逐步放下紧张、收获自信的心理转变，紧扣本单元语法考点。 第三段（收尾升华）：切换一般现在时，运用 feel、get 两处系动词对比过去的自己，直观体现成长，回扣作文主题 growing-up moment。 范文亮点短语 原文出现时间短语：in the 8th grade, the day before, the first few times, As time went on, Now 拓展可直接套用时序词组：yesterday, later, meanwhile, last week, as soon as, until one day, by the end of… 4、 写作模板 第一段（开篇，介绍从前的缺点 + 事件起因） I used to be________. When I was in Grade ________, I met a big challenge.________. At first, I felt very ________________\_. 第二段（文章主体，事件过程 + 心态转变，使用系动词） At the beginning, I was so nervous that I wanted to give up. However, I told myself not to quit. I kept practicing and trying my best. As time went on, I became________ little by little. 第三段（结尾，今昔对比 + 感悟升华） Now I am totally different. I no longer fear________. I feel proud of myself. This experience teaches me that growing-up means changing and becoming a better self. 五、写作高分素材（高分句型 + 好词 + 过渡短语 + 英文谚语） （一）核心系动词高分句型 1. I used to be very shy and lacked confidence. 我从前十分内向，缺乏自信心。 2. I felt nervous and afraid at first. 起初我的内心惶恐不安。 3. As I kept trying, I became much braver. 不断尝试过后，我变得愈发勇敢。 4. Little by little, I grew more confident. 我渐渐变得自信起来。 5. I finally stayed calm and finished it well. 最终我稳住心态，顺利完成这件事。 6. Growing up is a process of changing and improving ourselves. 成长就是不断蜕变、完善自我的过程。 （二）优质形容词 / 好词（描写性格、心情） · 自卑胆怯类：shy, nervous, afraid, worried, weak, uneasy · 蜕变成长类：confident, brave, calm, strong, positive, independent · 心理感受类：stressed, upset, proud, warm, moved, relaxed （三）叙事过渡好词好句 1. Day after day, I stuck to practising without giving up. 日复一日，我坚持练习，从未放弃。 2. Step by step, I walked out of my fear. 一步一步，我走出了内心的恐惧。 3. With the encouragement of my teacher, I plucked up my courage. 在老师的鼓励下，我鼓起了勇气。 4. Every difficulty is a chance to grow. 每一次困难都是一次成长的契机。 （4） 英文谚语 1. Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 2. No pains, no gains. 一分耕耘，一分收获。 3. Every coin has two sides. 事物皆有两面（挫折也能带来成长）。 4. The best way out is always through. 直面困境，方能突破自我。 5. Growth comes from challenges. 成长源于挑战。 5、 范文 My growing-up moment I used to be a very shy girl and was afraid of speaking in public. I always felt nervous whenever I needed to show myself in front of others. Last term, my teacher asked me to give an English speech in class. I was so worried that I wanted to refuse at first. However, I decided to have a try. I kept practicing my speech every night. At first, my voice was shaking and I felt stressed out. But I did not give up. As time went on, I became calmer and more confident. Finally, I finished my speech successfully. Now I am no longer afraid of public speaking. I feel proud of my change. This special growing-up moment tells me that we can always improve ourselves as long as we keep trying. Growth means challenging our weaknesses bravely. 范文中文译文 我的成长瞬间 我以前是一个十分内向的女孩，害怕在众人面前发言。每当需要在别人面前展示自己，我都会感到紧张。 上学期，老师安排我在班上进行英语演讲。一开始我十分焦虑，甚至想要拒绝。但我还是决定试一试。我每晚都反复练习演讲稿。刚开始，我的声音不停发抖，内心压力巨大。但我没有放弃。随着一次次练习，我慢慢变得镇定、自信。 最后，我顺利完成了演讲。如今我再也不害怕当众发言了，我为自己的改变感到自豪。这个特别的成长瞬间让我明白：只要坚持努力，我们总能变得更好。成长，就是勇敢直面自己的弱点。 ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $