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仁爱英语九年级上册 Unit1 写作专项:休闲方式的变迁
一、写作原题
写作题目
Changes in Leisure Activities(休闲方式的变迁)
假定你要向校刊投稿,介绍家乡人们休闲娱乐方式发生的变化,词数 80—120 词。
写作目标
1. 能够运用一般过去时描述过去的休闲生活,现在完成时体现生活发生的改变,一般现在时介绍当下现状;
2. 学会区分客观事实(facts)与主观观点(opinions),采用今昔对比的行文结构;
3. 熟练使用本单元后缀-ment构成的名词、单元重点短语完成写作。
写作深度分析
1. 人称:主要使用第三人称(people, families, citizens),结尾可以切换第一人称抒发个人感悟;
2. 时态规划
· 过去生活:一般过去时(标志性短语:in the past)
· 体现长久以来发生的变化:现在完成时(本单元核心语法)
· 现如今的日常休闲:一般现在时(now, nowadays)
3. 行文思路点拨
· 开头:总起句,点明社会发展,人们的休闲方式已经产生巨大变化;
· 正文分为两层:第一层写过去娱乐选择少,活动形式单一;第二层对比如今休闲活动丰富多样;
· 结尾:简短抒发感悟,憧憬更加美好的生活。
二、写作模板(表格版)
段落板块
英文万能模板
写作思路
开头(总起,1 句话)
With the _________(develop) of society, people’s leisure activities __________________(change) greatly during these years.
借助后缀 - ment 词汇开篇,使用现在完成时,开门见山引出话题
正文第一段(过去)
In the past, __________________ was a popular way to relax. Most people couldn’t afford far travel, so they usually _________\\ near their homes.
使用一般过去时,列举旧时休闲方式,点明经济条件带来的局限
正文第二段(现在)
Now people have more choices. Lots of families can afford __________________. They also take part in different kinds of indoor activities in their free time.
对比当下生活,用上教材短语 have more choices、afford to do sth.
结尾(感悟升华)
I believe our spare-time life will become much better in the future.
第一人称收尾,升华主题,契合单元主旨 a changing world
3、 范文
英文范文
Changes in Leisure Activities
With the development of society, people’s leisure activities have changed greatly.
In the past, watching outdoor movies was people’s main leisure activity. Few families could afford long-distance travel, so they often hung out in nearby parks to have picnics or row boats. Most people thought these simple activities brought unforgettable pleasure.
Now people have more choices. Many families can go on road trips by private cars on weekends. Some people choose sports or reading to relax themselves. I hope our life will keep getting better.
中文译文
休闲方式的变迁
随着社会的发展,人们的休闲活动已经发生了巨大的改变。
在过去,露天观影是人们主要的休闲方式。很少有家庭能够负担长途旅行,所以人们常会去附近的公园闲逛、野餐或是划船。大多数人认为这些简单的活动带来了难以忘怀的快乐。
如今人们拥有了更多选择。很多家庭会在周末自驾出游,还有一部分人选择运动、阅读来放松自我。我期盼我们的生活会变得愈发美好。
四、核心写作素材
1. 高分好词
development n. 发展;improvement n. 改善;achievement n. 成就;leisure activities 休闲活动;afford to do 负担得起;hang out 闲逛;go on road trips 自驾出游
2. 万能佳句
As society develops, great changes have taken place in people’s daily life.
随着社会发展,人们的日常生活发生了翻天覆地的变化。
We have had more chances to enjoy colorful spare time.
我们拥有更多机会享受丰富多彩的业余生活。
3. 适配谚语
Every day brings a new change. 日日皆有新风貌。
五、填空版练习
Changes in Leisure Activities
With the __________________(develop) of society, people’s leisure activities __________________(change) greatly.
In the past, __________________ outdoor movies was people’s main leisure activity. Few families could afford __________________(travel) far away, so they often __________________(hang) out in nearby parks. Most people thought these activities brought __________________(forget) pleasure.
Now people have more __________________(choose). Many families can go on road trips by cars on weekends. I hope our life __________________(become) much better in the future.
参考答案
1. development 2. have changed 3. watching 4. to travel 5. hung 6. unforgettable 7. choices 8. will become
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