Unit 1 A Changing World（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材仁爱科普版九年级上册

本讲义围绕初中英语“人与社会”范畴下“社会变迁与时代发展”主题，以核心问句How do you understand changes?引导学生从住房、交通、通讯等多维度对比社会过去与现在，通过事实与观点区分、总结归纳等思维工具完成逻辑清晰的书面表达。学习支架涵盖变化主题核心词汇、分领域词汇表、后缀-ment构词法，以及开头、对比、结尾句式，辅以思维导图、佳句仿写和典例分析。 资料特色在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养，通过分领域词汇对比表和“过去-现在”句式模板提升语言表达准确性，借助跨单元主题迁移（如与“环境保护”“科技发展”联动）和事实观点区分任务发展逻辑思维。文化意识方面以北京变化为主线展现中国发展，增强家国情怀。课中互动活动（同桌闯关、句型抢答）提升课堂参与，课后实战演练（10类写作任务）和评价量规助力学生自主查漏补缺，巩固写作技能。

Unit 1 A Changing World单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于 “人与社会” 范畴，核心主题为 “社会变迁与时代发展” ，单元核心问句：How do you understand changes? 该单元旨在引导学生观察和思考身边世界的变化，使学生能够从生活条件、交通出行、通讯方式、休闲活动、教育医疗等多个维度描述社会的过去与现在，运用事实与观点的区分以及总结归纳的思维工具，完成关于“变化”主题的逻辑清晰的书面表达。 教材以北京过去与现在的对比为主线（P8），从住房、交通、街道、休闲活动等方面展现了改革开放以来中国的巨大变化。同时单元输入素材覆盖通讯方式演变（P2）、休闲活动变化（P5、P12-P13）、医疗教育进步（P2）、科技发展成就（P7、P17）等多元话题，帮助学生建立对“变化”的多维度理解，完成从现象观察到观点表达的完整写作过程。 【跨单元融合提示】本单元主题与后续学习内容存在自然关联：如“家乡变化”可与九年级其他单元“环境保护”“科技发展”等主题联动；“过去与现在的对比”可与八年级上册Unit 4“成长变化”中个人变化的写作手法联动。教师在教学中可适当引导学生建立跨单元的话题迁移意识。 【单元写作思维导图】 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 【基础必会·变化主题核心词汇】 1.change 变化；改变 2.development 发展 3.improvement 改善；提高 4.progress 进步 5.modern 现代的 6.traditional 传统的 7.past 过去 8.present 现在 9.recent 最近的 10.crowded 拥挤的 11.narrow 狭窄的 12.comfortable 舒适的 13.convenient 方便的 【基础必会·各领域变化词汇】 领域 过去相关词 现在相关词 住房条件 small house, crowded apartment, comfortable, large block 交通出行 bicycle, bus, slow car, underground, high-speed train, fast 通讯方式 letter, phone call smartphone, social media, app 休闲活动 open-air movie, chess, radio travel, surf the Internet, cinema 教育 few chances, no free education free education, online courses 医疗 few hospitals modern hospitals, advanced 【后缀 -ment 构词法总结】 后缀 含义 例词 构词规则 -ment ……的行为/状态/结果 improvement, development, movement, agreement, argument, payment, enjoyment, encouragement, excitement 动词 + -ment 📌 记忆小贴士：在动词后加后缀 -ment 构成名词，表示该动作的行为、状态或结果。如：improve + -ment = improvement（改善）；develop + -ment = development（发展）；move + -ment = movement（运动）。注意：以不发音的 e 结尾的动词，一般去 e 加 -ment，如：improve → improvement；agree → agreement。 【微练习·后缀 -ment 填空】 任务：用所给词的适当形式填空（加 -ment）。 1.The __________ (improve) of living conditions makes people happier. 2.China has made great __________ (develop) in science and technology. 3.The community reached an __________ (agree) to build a new park. 4.Her words gave me great __________ (encourage). 5.There is no __________ (argue) about the importance of education. 参考答案： improvement；developments；agreement；encouragement；argument 短语积累 【基础必会短语】 1.take place 发生 2.in the past 在过去 3.used to do ... 过去常常做…… 4.get used to ... 习惯于…… 5.have a chance to do ... 有机会做…… 6.keep up with ... 跟上…… 7.find out 查明；了解 8.in recent years 在最近几年 9.go to school for free 免费上学 10.in one's childhood 在某人的童年时期 【进阶加分·中考高分短语】 1.have taken place in ... 在……发生了 2.be crowded into ... 被挤进…… 3.have more choices 有更多选择 4.make great achievements 取得巨大成就 5.play a more and more important role 扮演越来越重要的角色 6.be proud of ... 为……感到骄傲 7.keep in touch with ... 与……保持联系 8.share ... with ... 与……分享 9.from ... to ... 从……到…… 10.compared with ... 与……相比 句式积累 开头句（引出变化话题）： 1.Great changes have taken place in ... in recent years. 近年来，……发生了巨大的变化。 2.As society develops, ... have changed greatly. 随着社会的发展，……发生了巨大的变化。 3.I'd like to talk about some changes in ... over the years. 我想谈谈……这些年来的变化。 中间句（对比过去与现在——过去）： 1.In the past, people used to ... 在过去，人们过去常常…… 2.... were crowded into ... ……被挤进…… 3.There were not many ... 没有很多…… 4.People had few choices of ... 人们在……方面选择很少。 中间句（对比过去与现在——现在）： 1.Now, ... have greatly changed. 现在，……发生了巨大的变化。 2.There are large blocks of modern ... 有大片现代的…… 3.People can afford to ... 人们能够负担得起…… 4.With the development of ..., ... have become more and more popular. 随着……的发展，……变得越来越受欢迎。 结尾句（表达感受与展望）： 1.In any case, we should keep up with the changing world. 无论如何，我们应该跟上这个变化的世界。 2.I am proud of these great changes and I believe our life will be even better in the future. 我为这些巨大的变化感到骄傲，我相信我们的生活将来会更好。 3.Though many things have changed, some memories always remain the same. 虽然很多事情都变了，但有些记忆始终不变。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句（P8课文）： Great changes have taken place in China since the 1980s. （自20世纪80年代以来，中国发生了巨大的变化。） 仿写任务： 自改革开放以来，我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： Great changes have taken place in my hometown since its opening-up. 2. 教材原句（P8课文）： In the past, big families were crowded into small houses. （在过去，大家庭挤在狭小的房子里。） 仿写任务： 在过去，人们骑自行车或乘公交车上下班。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： In the past, people rode bicycles or took buses to and from work. 3. 教材原句（P13课文）： In the past, watching movies outdoors was a popular and exciting leisure activity for people of all ages. （在过去，在户外看电影对各年龄段的人来说都是一种流行且令人兴奋的休闲活动。） 仿写任务： 在过去，去公园野餐或划船是人们最喜欢的休闲活动。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： In the past, having picnics or rowing boats in the park was people's favorite leisure activity. 典例 假设你是李华，你校英语报正在举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请你根据以下表格中的信息，写一篇英文短文，介绍你家乡发生的巨大变化。 方面 过去 现在 住房 小房子，拥挤 大公寓，舒适 交通 自行车、公交车，慢 地铁、私家车，快 通讯 信件、电话 智能手机、社交媒体 休闲 露天电影、下棋 旅游、上网 注意： （1）短文必须包含表格中所列的信息，可作适当发挥； （2）书写规范，词数80—100左右； （3）开头已给出，仅供参考，不计入总词数。 Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 题材： 本文是一篇对比说明文/征文稿。 ② 人称、时态： 人称以第一人称和第三人称为主；描述过去的情况用一般过去时或used to；描述现在的变化用一般现在时和现在完成时。 ③ 硬性写作要点： 必须涵盖住房、交通、通讯、休闲四个方面的过去与现在对比。 ④ 文体提示： 对比说明文需要运用过去与现在的时间对比结构，注意逻辑清晰、层次分明。 课堂互动小栏目【3分钟同桌闯关·全班抢答】 活动形式： 同桌合作完成任务，随机点名核对答案，全员口头抢答句型任务。 任务1：写出本篇作文必须包含的4个对比方面 1._______________ 2. _______________3._______________ 4. _______________ 任务2：时态小判断（正确打√，错误打×） （ ） 描述现在已经发生的变化应用现在完成时（have/has + done）。 （ ） 描述过去常常做的事情应用一般现在时。 任务3：口头句型仿写（使用“In the past, people used to ...”造一个完整句子） 【参考答案】 任务1： ①住房；②交通；③通讯；④休闲 任务2： √；× 任务3： 示例：In the past, people used to write letters to keep in touch with each other. 谋篇布局 段落 写作要点 开头（Opening） 总起全文，点明家乡发生了巨大变化。 中间（Body） 从住房、交通、通讯、休闲四个方面对比过去与现在。 结尾（Ending） 表达对这些变化的感受，展望未来。 佳作展示 Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. In the past, people lived in small and crowded houses. They rode bicycles or took buses to work. The streets were narrow and there weren't many cars. People used to write letters or make phone calls to keep in touch with each other. After work, they watched open-air movies or played Chinese chess for fun. Now, everything has changed. People have moved into large and comfortable apartments. There are many cars and the streets are much wider. People can also take the underground to go anywhere. Smartphones have become very popular. People can chat with each other anytime on social media. They have more choices for leisure, such as traveling and surfing the Internet. I am proud of these great changes and I believe my hometown will become even better in the future. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 ① take place 发生 ② in the past 在过去 ③ keep in touch with ... 与……保持联系 ④ have more choices 有更多选择 ⑤ such as 例如 ⑥ be proud of 为……感到骄傲 高分句型： ① Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years.（现在完成时，引出变化主题） ② People used to write letters or make phone calls to keep in touch with each other.（used to do ... 过去常常做…… + 不定式作目的状语） ③ I am proud of these great changes and I believe my hometown will become even better in the future.（and连接的并列句 + 宾语从句） 写作易错警示（单元高频扣分点） 序号 易错点 正确用法 1 现在完成时结构错误： have took place / has changed have/has + 过去分词（taken place / changed） 2 used to 与 get used to 混淆： used to do（过去常常做）vs. get used to doing（习惯于做） I used to live in the countryside.（过去住在农村）/ I have got used to living in the city.（已经习惯住在城市） 3 时态混用： 描述过去用现在时 过去的情况用一般过去时或used to；现在的情况用一般现在时或现在完成时 4 后缀 -ment 拼写错误： developement / improvment development；improvement（注意拼写） 5 事实与观点混淆： 将主观感受当作事实陈述 事实（Fact）：可验证的客观信息；观点（Opinion）：主观感受与评价 （一） ★（24-25九上·北京四中·期中） 假设你是王伟，你所在的城市发生了巨大的变化。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英文短文，介绍你所在城市的变化。 提示要点： 1.过去城市是什么样的？（住房、交通、环境等） 2.现在城市变成了什么样？ 3.你对这些变化有什么感受？ 要求： （1）词数80左右，可适当发挥； （2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Great changes have taken place in my city in recent years. In the past, the streets were narrow and there were not many cars. People lived in small houses. The environment was not very good because there were few parks. Now, everything is different. The streets are wide and clean. There are many modern buildings and large apartments. People can take the underground or drive their own cars to go anywhere. The government has built many parks and the air is much fresher. I feel happy about these changes. My city has become more beautiful and convenient. I believe it will be even better in the future. 【总体分析】 ① 题材： 本文是一篇话题作文。 ② 时态： 描述过去用“一般过去时”，描述现在用“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”。 ③ 提示： 需涵盖过去情况、现在变化及感受三个要点。 【写作步骤】 第一步，总起全文，点明城市发生了巨大变化； 第二步，对比过去和现在的城市面貌； 第三步，表达感受和展望。 【亮点词汇】 ① take place 发生 ② in the past 在过去 ③ narrow 狭窄的 ④ underground 地铁 ⑤ convenient 方便的 ⑥ in the future 在未来 【高分句型】 ① Great changes have taken place in my city in recent years.（现在完成时） ② I believe it will be even better in the future.（宾语从句） （二） ★★（23-24九上·南京外国语学校·期末） 通信方式在过去几十年里发生了巨大的变化。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文，介绍通信方式的变化。 提示要点： 1.过去人们如何通信？ 2.现在人们如何通信？ 3.这些变化给生活带来了什么影响？ 要求： （1）词数80左右； （2）内容完整，条理清晰，可适当发挥。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Communication has changed greatly over the past few decades. In the past, people used to write letters or make phone calls to keep in touch with each other. It took a long time to send a letter, and phone calls were not very convenient. People had few choices to communicate with others who were far away. Now, with the development of technology, communication has become much easier. Smartphones are very popular. We can send messages, make video calls, and share our lives on social media anytime and anywhere. We can connect with each other in so many different ways. These changes have made our lives more convenient. However, sometimes we may hide behind the screens instead of really talking to someone. We should use technology wisely. 【总体分析】 ① 题材： 本文是一篇说明文。 ② 时态： 描述过去用“一般过去时”和“used to”，描述现在用“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”。 ③ 提示： 需涵盖过去通信方式、现在通信方式及影响三个要点。 【写作步骤】 第一步，引出通信方式的变化； 第二步，对比过去和现在的通信方式； 第三步，说明这些变化带来的影响。 【亮点词汇】 ① over the past few decades 在过去的几十年里 ② keep in touch with 与……保持联系 ③ convenient 方便的 ④ with the development of 随着……的发展 ⑤ social media 社交媒体 ⑥ wisely 明智地 【高分句型】 ① Communication has changed greatly over the past few decades.（现在完成时） ② We can connect with each other in so many different ways.（情态动词can表能力） （三） ★★（休闲活动变化主题写作） 随着社会的发展，人们的休闲活动发生了巨大的变化。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文，谈谈休闲活动的变化。 提示要点： 1.过去人们有哪些休闲活动？ 2.现在人们有哪些休闲活动？ 3.你觉得这些变化是好是坏？为什么？ 要求： （1）词数80左右； （2）条理清晰，语句通顺。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】 As society develops, people's leisure activities have changed greatly. In the past, people had few choices for leisure. They often watched open-air movies, listened to the radio, or played chess with friends. Traveling was not common because most people did not have enough money. They usually hung out near their homes. Now, people have many more choices. They can travel to different places, surf the Internet, watch movies in the cinema, or do sports in the gym. Families can go on road trips in their own cars on weekends. I think these changes are mostly good. People can enjoy their free time in more colorful ways. However, we should not spend too much time on screens. It is important to have a balance. 【总体分析】 ① 题材： 本文是一篇议论文。 ② 时态： 以“一般现在时”为主，描述过去用“一般过去时”。 ③ 提示： 需涵盖过去休闲活动、现在休闲活动及个人评价三个要点。 【写作步骤】 第一步，引出休闲活动的变化； 第二步，对比过去和现在的休闲活动； 第三步，表达个人观点并说明理由。 【亮点词汇】 ① as society develops 随着社会的发展 ② have few choices 选择很少 ③ hang out 闲逛 ④ surf the Internet 上网 ⑤ road trips 公路旅行 ⑥ have a balance 保持平衡 【高分句型】 ① As society develops, people's leisure activities have changed greatly.（as引导的时间状语从句 + 现在完成时） ② I think these changes are mostly good.（宾语从句） （四） ★★（24-25九上·天津一中·期中） 假设你是李想，你的家乡过去是一个小村庄，现在变成了一个现代化的城市。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文，介绍你家乡的变化。 提示要点： 1.过去家乡的样子； 2.现在家乡的样子； 3.你最喜欢的变化是什么？为什么？ 要求： （1）词数80左右； （2）内容完整，条理清晰。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】 My hometown has changed a lot over the years. It used to be a small village, but now it has become a modern city. In the past, there were only small houses and narrow streets. People worked on farms and lived a simple life. There were no supermarkets or hospitals nearby. Children had to walk a long way to school. Now, tall buildings and wide streets have taken the place of the old houses. There are big supermarkets, modern hospitals and good schools. People can enjoy a more comfortable life. The transportation is also very convenient. My favorite change is the improvement of education. Children can now go to good schools and have more chances to learn. I am proud of my hometown and I love it deeply. 【总体分析】 ① 题材： 本文是一篇记叙文/说明文。 ② 时态： 描述过去用“一般过去时”和“used to”，描述现在用“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”。 ③ 提示： 需涵盖过去样子、现在样子及最喜欢的变化三个要点。 【写作步骤】 第一步，总起全文，点明家乡从村庄变为城市； 第二步，对比过去和现在的家乡面貌； 第三步，说明最喜欢的变化及原因。 【亮点词汇】 ① used to be 过去曾是 ② take the place of 取代 ③ transportation 交通 ④ improvement 改善 ⑤ have more chances 有更多机会 ⑥ be proud of 为……感到骄傲 【高分句型】 ① My hometown has changed a lot over the years.（现在完成时） ② My favorite change is the improvement of education.（名词作表语，简洁有力） （五） ★★（书信题型·给笔友介绍变化） 假设你是王芳，你的英国笔友Tom来信询问你家乡的变化。请你根据以下提示，给他回一封邮件。 提示要点： 1.家乡过去的样子； 2.家乡现在的样子； 3.你对这些变化的感受。 要求： （1）词数80左右，邮件的格式已给出，不计入总词数； （2）内容完整，条理清晰。 Dear Tom, I'm glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked about the changes in my hometown. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Wang Fang 【参考范文】 Dear Tom, I'm glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked about the changes in my hometown. Now let me tell you something about them. In the past, my hometown was a small and quiet town. People lived in old houses and the streets were narrow. There were not many cars. People usually walked or rode bicycles to go to work. Now, great changes have taken place. The streets are wide and clean. There are many modern buildings and large shopping malls. People can take the bus or drive their own cars. Life has become much more convenient. I feel proud of these changes. My hometown has become more beautiful and lively. I hope you can visit my hometown one day! Yours, Wang Fang 【总体分析】 ① 题材： 本文是一封书信。 ② 时态： 以“一般现在时”、“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”为主。 ③ 提示： 需按照邮件格式书写，内容涵盖过去样子、现在样子及感受三个要点。 【写作步骤】 第一步，表达收到来信的喜悦，引出家乡变化话题； 第二步，对比过去和现在的家乡； 第三步，表达感受并发出邀请。 【亮点词汇】 ① hear from 收到……的来信 ② in the past 在过去 ③ take place 发生 ④ convenient 方便的 ⑤ be proud of 为……感到骄傲 ⑥ lively 充满活力的 【高分句型】 ① Great changes have taken place.（现在完成时） ② I hope you can visit my hometown one day!（宾语从句） （六） ★（命题作文 Changes Around Me） 请你以“Changes Around Me”为题，根据以下提示，写一篇英文短文。 内容包括： 1.你身边发生了哪些变化？（至少三个方面） 2.这些变化对你有什么影响？ 3.你对这些变化的态度是什么？ 要求： （1）词数80—90； （2）条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】 Changes Around Me Great changes have taken place around me in recent years. First, transportation has improved a lot. In the past, my family used to take a long time to visit my grandparents. Now, we can take the high-speed train and get there in just two hours. Second, communication has become much easier. My parents used to write letters to their friends, but now they use smartphones to chat with them every day. Third, our living conditions have become better. We have moved from a small house to a large apartment. These changes have made my life more convenient and colorful. I am grateful for these changes and I believe our life will continue to get better. 【总体分析】 ① 题材： 本文是一篇命题作文。 ② 时态： 以“一般现在时”、“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”为主。 ③ 提示： 需涵盖变化方面、影响及态度三个部分。 【写作步骤】 第一步，总起全文，点明身边发生了许多变化； 第二步，分条列举具体的变化（至少三个方面）； 第三步，说明这些变化的影响并表达态度。 【亮点词汇】 ① take place 发生 ② high-speed train 高铁 ③ communication 通讯 ④ living conditions 生活条件 ⑤ convenient 方便的 ⑥ grateful 感激的 【高分句型】 ① Great changes have taken place around me in recent years.（现在完成时） ② I am grateful for these changes and I believe our life will continue to get better.（and连接的并列句 + 宾语从句） （七） ★★★（24-25九上·杭州外国语学校·期中） 假设你是李明，你的学校正在举办“见证变化”主题英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示，写一篇演讲稿。 提示要点： 1.你身边最显著的变化是什么？ 2.这些变化是如何发生的？ 3.你对未来有什么期望？ 要求： （1）词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）语言流畅，有感染力。 Dear fellow students, Good morning! Today I'd like to talk about the changes around me. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】 Dear fellow students, Good morning! Today I'd like to talk about the changes around me. The most significant change in my life is the way we communicate. In the past, my parents used to write letters to their friends and family. It took days or even weeks to receive a reply. Now, with smartphones and the Internet, we can send messages and make video calls anytime, anywhere. We can share our daily lives with our loved ones instantly. These changes happened because of the rapid development of technology. China has made great achievements in science and technology in recent years. Smartphones and high-speed Internet have become part of our daily lives. As for the future, I hope technology will continue to bring us closer together. However, we should also remember the importance of face-to-face communication. Let's embrace the changes and make the best use of them! That's all. Thank you for listening! 【总体分析】 ① 题材： 本文是一篇演讲稿。 ② 时态： 以“一般现在时”、“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”为主。 ③ 提示： 需涵盖最显著的变化、变化的原因及未来期望三个要点，注意演讲稿的感染力和修辞手法。 【写作步骤】 第一步，以问候和引言开场，引出变化话题； 第二步，描述最显著的变化及其原因； 第三步，表达对未来的期望并发出号召。 【亮点词汇】 ① significant 显著的 ② instantly 立即地 ③ rapid development 快速发展 ④ make great achievements 取得巨大成就 ⑤ face-to-face communication 面对面交流 ⑥ embrace 拥抱；接受 ⑦ make the best use of 充分利用 【高分句型】 ① The most significant change in my life is the way we communicate.（定语从句省略关系代词） ② China has made great achievements in science and technology in recent years.（现在完成时） ③ Let's embrace the changes and make the best use of them!（祈使句 + 号召） （八） ★★（教育变化主题写作） 教育在过去几十年里发生了巨大的变化。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文，介绍教育领域的变化。 提示要点： 1.过去的教育状况； 2.现在的教育状况； 3.这些变化的意义。 要求： （1）词数80左右； （2）内容完整，条理清晰。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】 Education has changed greatly over the past few decades. In the past, few children had the chance to go to school, especially in rural areas. Schools were not well-equipped and there were not enough teachers. Many children had to work to help support their families. Now, the situation is completely different. All children can go to school for free. Schools have modern facilities, such as computer rooms and libraries. Students can also take online courses to learn more. The government has paid more attention to education and has improved the quality of teaching. These changes are very meaningful. Education gives children more opportunities to achieve their dreams. I believe a better education system will create a brighter future for our country. 【总体分析】 ① 题材： 本文是一篇说明文。 ② 时态： 描述过去用“一般过去时”，描述现在用“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”。 ③ 提示： 需涵盖过去状况、现在状况及变化意义三个要点。 【写作步骤】 第一步，引出教育的变化； 第二步，对比过去和现在的教育状况； 第三步，说明这些变化的意义。 【亮点词汇】 ① over the past few decades 在过去的几十年里 ② rural areas 农村地区 ③ well-equipped 设备齐全的 ④ for free 免费地 ⑤ online courses 在线课程 ⑥ pay attention to 关注 ⑦ opportunities 机会 【高分句型】 ① Education has changed greatly over the past few decades.（现在完成时） ② I believe a better education system will create a brighter future for our country.（宾语从句） （九） ★★★（2024·北京·中考真题改编） 社会的发展给人们的生活带来了巨大的变化。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英文短文，谈谈你对这些变化的看法。 提示要点： 1.列举生活中两个显著的变化； 2.这些变化给人们带来了什么好处； 3.这些变化可能带来什么问题； 4.你的建议是什么。 要求： （1）词数90—100； （2）内容完整，条理清晰，语句通顺。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】 Changes in Our Lives Great changes have taken place in our lives in recent years. Let me talk about two significant changes. First, transportation has become much faster and more convenient. High-speed trains and underground lines have made travel easier. People can now visit their families and friends more often. Second, communication has changed completely. Smartphones and social media allow us to connect with anyone, anywhere, at any time. These changes have brought many benefits. They save time and make our lives more comfortable. However, they also bring some problems. For example, people spend too much time on their phones and less time with their families. Sometimes, we may hide behind screens instead of having real conversations. In my opinion, we should enjoy the convenience of modern technology but also remember the importance of face-to-face communication. Let's use technology wisely and keep our relationships strong. 【总体分析】 ① 题材： 本文是一篇议论文。 ② 时态： 以“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”为主。 ③ 提示： 需涵盖两个显著变化、好处、问题及建议四个要点。 【写作步骤】 第一步，引出生活中发生了巨大变化； 第二步，列举两个显著的变化及其好处； 第三步，指出这些变化可能带来的问题； 第四步，提出建议并总结。 【亮点词汇】 ① significant 显著的 ② high-speed trains 高铁 ③ social media 社交媒体 ④ benefits 好处 ⑤ hide behind screens 躲在屏幕后面 ⑥ face-to-face communication 面对面交流 ⑦ wisely 明智地 【高分句型】 ① Great changes have taken place in our lives in recent years.（现在完成时） ② In my opinion, we should enjoy the convenience of modern technology but also remember the importance of face-to-face communication.（in my opinion引出观点 + but连接的并列结构） （十） ★★★（对比家乡的过去与现在） 请你以“My Hometown—Past and Present”为题，根据以下提示，写一篇英文短文。 提示要点： 1.你家乡过去的样子（环境、生活条件、交通等）； 2.你家乡现在的样子； 3.你对家乡变化的感受。 要求： （1）词数80—90； （2）内容具体，情感真挚。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】 My Hometown—Past and Present My hometown is a beautiful city. It has changed a lot over the years. In the past, the streets were narrow and the houses were small. People used to ride bicycles or take buses to work. There were not many places for leisure. People often stayed at home after work because they didn't have many choices for fun. Now, my hometown has become a modern city. The streets are wide and clean. There are many tall buildings and large shopping malls. People can take the underground or drive their own cars. The city has also built many parks and sports centers. People can enjoy their free time in more colorful ways. I feel proud of my hometown. The changes have made life more convenient and comfortable. However, I still miss the simple and peaceful life of the old days. I believe my hometown will become even better in the future. 【总体分析】 ① 题材： 本文是一篇记叙文/说明文。 ② 时态： 描述过去用“一般过去时”和“used to”，描述现在用“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”。 ③ 提示： 需涵盖过去样子、现在样子及感受三个要点。 【写作步骤】 第一步，引出家乡及其变化； 第二步，对比过去和现在的家乡面貌； 第三步，表达感受并展望未来。 【亮点词汇】 ① over the years 这些年来 ② narrow 狭窄的 ③ used to do 过去常常做 ④ leisure 休闲 ⑤ underground 地铁 ⑥ convenient 方便的 ⑦ peaceful 宁静的 【高分句型】 ① It has changed a lot over the years.（现在完成时） ② The changes have made life more convenient and comfortable.（现在完成时 + make + 宾语 + 宾补） ③ I believe my hometown will become even better in the future.（宾语从句） 综合拓展写作任务（选做·单元拔高大题） 假设你是李华，学校正在举办“见证时代的变迁”英文征文比赛。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文参赛。 提示要点： 1.选择一个方面（如交通、通讯、教育、休闲等），介绍其过去与现在的变化； 2.分析这些变化的原因； 3.谈谈你对未来的展望。 要求： （1）词数100左右； （2）内容完整，条理清晰，有真情实感； （3）尽可能使用本单元所学的词汇、短语和句型。 写作框架提示： 第一段：引出所选话题，点明发生了巨大变化； 第二段：从过去和现在两个时间维度进行对比描述； 第三段：分析变化的原因（如科技发展、政策支持等）； 第四段：表达对未来的展望。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Communication has changed greatly over the past few decades. Let me share my views on this change. In the past, people used to write letters or make phone calls to keep in touch. It took days to receive a reply, and phone calls were expensive. Now, with smartphones and the Internet, we can send messages, make video calls and share our lives on social media instantly. We can connect with anyone, anywhere, at any time. These changes have happened mainly because of the rapid development of technology. China has made great achievements in the field of communication. 5G networks and affordable smartphones have made it possible for almost everyone to enjoy these services. Looking ahead, I believe communication will become even faster and more convenient. However, we should not forget the value of face-to-face communication. Let’s use technology to bring us closer, not to keep us apart. 【总体分析】 ① 题材： 本文是一篇征文（议论文），围绕某一领域的变化展开论述。 ② 时态： 以一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时为主。 ③ 提示： 必须完整覆盖三个要点：选择的变化、变化的原因、对未来的展望。 【写作步骤】 第一步： 引出所选方面（通讯）及其总体变化； 第二步： 对比过去与现在的具体表现； 第三步： 分析变化的主要原因； 第四步： 展望未来并表达自己的看法。 【亮点词汇】 ① over the past few decades 在过去的几十年里 ② keep in touch 保持联系 ③ instantly 即时地 ④ rapid development 快速发展 ⑤ make great achievements 取得巨大成就 ⑥ affordable 负担得起的 ⑦ look ahead 展望未来 ⑧ face-to-face communication 面对面交流 【高分句型】 ① Communication has changed greatly over the past few decades.（现在完成时） ② These changes have happened mainly because of the rapid development of technology.（because of 短语表原因） ③ Let’s use technology to bring us closer, not to keep us apart.（祈使句 + 不定式作目的状语 + 对比结构） 单元写作评价量规（融合教材Self-assessment + 中考评分标准） 本量规参照中考英语书面表达评分标准设计，从内容完整性、语言准确性、篇章结构三个维度进行评价，每项满分5分，总计15分。可用于学生自评、同伴互评及教师批改。 评价维度 5分（优秀） 4分（良好） 3分（合格） 1-2分（需改进） 内容完整性（5分） 完整覆盖全部对比维度，主动加入教材中北京变化、休闲活动变化等拓展细节，内容饱满丰富 所有基础对比要点齐全，少量简单拓展细节 遗漏1个核心对比维度，内容单薄无拓展 遗漏2个及以上核心对比要点，内容残缺 语言准确性（5分） 现在完成时、used to、后缀-ment全部正确，无拼写语法错误 仅1-2处微小拼写/语法错误，不影响阅读理解 时态混用或used to使用错误，3-4处语法错误 大量时态、拼写、固定搭配错误，阅读困难 篇章结构（5分） 标准三段式清晰，in the past/now/however等逻辑连接词丰富，结尾引用课本金句升华主题 分段完整，使用少量基础连接词 分段清晰，但缺少分层逻辑词 段落混乱，无分层，语句杂乱堆砌 总分：____ / 15 评语与建议： 配套学生自评栏（对标教材P18 Self-assessment） 1.我能正确使用本单元现在完成时（have/has + done）。 □是 □否 2.我能正确区分used to do与get used to doing。 □是 □否 3.我能正确使用后缀 -ment 构成名词。 □是 □否 课本Project拓展写作专项（P15 变化海报衍生写作） 写作任务 参照课本“制作身边变化海报”活动，写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍你身边某个事物（如村庄商店、学校、社区等）的过去与现在。 课本模板转化写作框架： Subject: ____________________ Past: • ________ • ________ • ________ Present: • ________ • ________ • ________ Feeling: ____________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________标准范文 Our school has changed a lot in the past ten years. In the past, the school was small and old. There was only a three-story building and a small playground. Students had few books and no computers. The classrooms were crowded and not very bright. Now, our school is large and modern. There are two tall buildings, a big library and a new gym. Each classroom has a computer and a smart board. Students can also use the new playground to do sports. The school has become a wonderful place for learning. I feel lucky to study in such a beautiful school. I hope our school will become even better in the future. 替换练习方向： 可替换主题包括our community, our village shop, our city library, the local hospital等，按照相同结构完成短文。 替换主题一：Our Community（我们的社区） 标准范文 Our community has changed a lot over the past ten years. In the past, the community was old and quiet. There were only a few small buildings and the roads were narrow. There was no park or supermarket nearby. People usually stayed at home after work because there were few places to go. Now, our community has become modern and lively. The old buildings have been replaced by tall apartment blocks. The roads are wide and clean. There is a beautiful park with a lake in the center of the community. A big supermarket has opened near the gate. People can also do exercise in the new sports center. I feel happy to live in such a wonderful community. It has brought more convenience and joy to our daily lives. I believe it will become even better in the future. 替换主题二：Our Village Shop（我们的乡村商店） 标准范文 The village shop near my home has changed greatly over the years. In the past, it was a small shop with only a few shelves. It sold basic daily goods like salt, sugar and oil. There were no fresh vegetables or meat. The shop owner used a blackboard to write down prices. People paid with cash. Now, it has become a modern supermarket. The shelves are full of all kinds of goods, from fresh fruit and vegetables to snacks and drinks. There is even a small refrigerator for ice cream and cold drinks. People can pay by scanning QR codes with their phones. These changes have made shopping much easier for villagers. I am glad to see the improvement in our daily life. 替换主题三：Our City Library（我们的城市图书馆） 标准范文 Our city library has changed a lot in recent years. In the past, the library was old and small. There were only a few reading rooms and the books were not well organized. People had to look through paper cards to find the books they wanted. The library closed early in the evening. Now, the library has become a modern and spacious building. It has many reading areas, a digital reading room and a children's section. People can search for books on computers and borrow them with a simple card. The library is open until 9:00 p.m. and also offers online services. I love spending time in the new library. It has made reading more enjoyable and convenient for everyone. 替换主题四：The Local Hospital（当地医院） 标准范文 The local hospital in my town has experienced great changes over the past twenty years. In the past, the hospital was small and poorly equipped. There were only a few doctors and nurses. Patients had to wait a long time for treatment because there were not enough medical facilities. Some serious illnesses could not be treated there. Now, the hospital has been rebuilt into a modern medical center. It has advanced equipment and many experienced doctors. The environment is clean and comfortable. Patients can make appointments online and receive treatment more quickly. The hospital also offers free health checkups for the elderly. I am thankful for these improvements. Better medical treatment has made our town a healthier and happier place to live. 替换主题五：My School Library（我的学校图书馆） 标准范文 Our school library has changed a lot since I entered this school. In the past, the library was a small room with only a few old books. There were no computers. Students had to read books in the library because they could not borrow them. The library was only open during lunch time. Now, it has become a large and bright library. There are thousands of books on different subjects. Students can borrow up to five books at a time. There is also a computer room where we can search for information online. The library opens from 8:00 a.m. to 6:00 p.m. every day. The new library has encouraged me to read more. I think it is one of the best changes in our school. 替换主题六：My Grandparents' Village（我爷爷奶奶的村庄） 标准范文 My grandparents' village has changed a lot since I was a child. In the past, the village was very quiet. The roads were made of mud and became difficult to walk on after rain. People lived in old houses and used firewood for cooking. There was no running water or gas. Children had to walk a long way to school. Now, the village has become a beautiful and modern place. The roads are all paved with concrete. People live in new houses with gas and running water. A new school has been built nearby. The villagers also grow organic vegetables and sell them online. I am happy to see the great changes in my grandparents' village. Life there has become much easier and more comfortable. However, the fresh air and beautiful scenery remain the same. 替换主题七：Public Transport in My City（我所在城市的公共交通） 标准范文 Public transport in my city has changed greatly over the years. In the past, there were only a few bus lines. The buses were old and crowded. People had to wait for a long time at bus stops. There was no underground system. Many people chose to ride bicycles because it was faster than taking the bus. Now, the city has developed a modern public transport system. There are many bus lines and the buses are new and comfortable. The underground has three lines and can take people to almost every corner of the city. People can also use mobile apps to check bus and train times. These changes have made traveling around the city much more convenient. I am proud of my city's progress and believe public transport will continue to improve. 替换主题八：People's Diet（人们的饮食） 标准范文 People's diet has changed a lot in the past few decades. In the past, people ate simple food. They mainly had rice, vegetables and a little meat. Fresh fruit was not common in winter. People cooked meals at home and rarely ate out. There were not many choices for food. Now, people have a much wider variety of food. They can buy fresh fruit and vegetables all year round. There are many restaurants offering different cuisines, such as Sichuan food, Cantonese food and even Western food. People also pay more attention to healthy eating and choose balanced diets. I think these changes are good in general. However, we should be careful not to eat too much junk food. A healthy diet is the key to a healthy life. 替换主题九：My Family's Leisure Activities（我家人的休闲活动） 标准范文 My family's leisure activities have changed a lot since my parents were young. In the past, my parents used to have very simple leisure activities. They watched open-air movies, listened to the radio, or played chess with friends. They rarely traveled because they didn't have much money. They usually spent their weekends at home or visited neighbors. Now, our family has many more choices for leisure. On weekends, we often go to the cinema, visit museums, or take trips to nearby cities. My father likes fishing and my mother enjoys gardening. I love playing basketball with my friends. Sometimes, we also surf the Internet to learn new things. These changes have made our family life more colorful. I am grateful that we can enjoy so many different activities together. 替换主题十：My Neighborhood（我的社区） 标准范文 My neighborhood has seen great changes over the past five years. In the past, there were no sidewalks and the streets were always dirty. There was no playground for children. People threw rubbish everywhere. The neighborhood looked messy and unpleasant. Now, everything has changed for the better. The streets are clean and wide, with beautiful trees and flowers on both sides. There is a new playground where children can play safely. The community has placed many rubbish bins and people have learned to sort their waste. A small garden has been built for the elderly to exercise and chat. I love my neighborhood now. It has become a clean, green and friendly place to live. I hope we can all work together to keep it this way. 单元写作语法巩固 题型1：短文改错（划出错误并改正） 1. Great changes have took place in my hometown. 2. People used to living in small houses. 3. I have get used to the life in the city. 4. The improvement of education have made children happier. 5. In the past, people have few choices for leisure. 改错答案： 1.have took → have taken（现在完成时：have + 过去分词） 2.used to living → used to live（used to do 过去常常做某事） 3.have get → have got（现在完成时：have + 过去分词） 4.have → has（主语improvement为单数） 5.have → had（描述过去的情况用一般过去时） 题型2：后缀 -ment 填空 1.The __________ (improve) of living conditions is important. 2.China has made great __________ (develop) in recent years. 3.They reached an __________ (agree) to build a new park. 4.Her words gave me great __________ (encourage). 5.There is no __________ (argue) about the importance of education. 答案： improvement；developments；agreement；encouragement；argument 题型3：现在完成时填空 1.Great changes __________ (take place) in my hometown. 2.I __________ (live) in Beijing for ten years. 3.She __________ (not finish) her homework yet. 4.__________ you __________ (see) the new museum? 5.They __________ (already move) into their new house. 答案： have taken place；have lived；hasn't finished；Have, seen；have already moved 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 1 A Changing World单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于 “人与社会” 范畴，核心主题为 “社会变迁与时代发展” ，单元核心问句：How do you understand changes? 该单元旨在引导学生观察和思考身边世界的变化，使学生能够从生活条件、交通出行、通讯方式、休闲活动、教育医疗等多个维度描述社会的过去与现在，运用事实与观点的区分以及总结归纳的思维工具，完成关于“变化”主题的逻辑清晰的书面表达。 教材以北京过去与现在的对比为主线（P8），从住房、交通、街道、休闲活动等方面展现了改革开放以来中国的巨大变化。同时单元输入素材覆盖通讯方式演变（P2）、休闲活动变化（P5、P12-P13）、医疗教育进步（P2）、科技发展成就（P7、P17）等多元话题，帮助学生建立对“变化”的多维度理解，完成从现象观察到观点表达的完整写作过程。 【跨单元融合提示】本单元主题与后续学习内容存在自然关联：如“家乡变化”可与九年级其他单元“环境保护”“科技发展”等主题联动；“过去与现在的对比”可与八年级上册Unit 4“成长变化”中个人变化的写作手法联动。教师在教学中可适当引导学生建立跨单元的话题迁移意识。 【单元写作思维导图】 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 【基础必会·变化主题核心词汇】 1.change 变化；改变 2.development 发展 3.improvement 改善；提高 4.progress 进步 5.modern 现代的 6.traditional 传统的 7.past 过去 8.present 现在 9.recent 最近的 10.crowded 拥挤的 11.narrow 狭窄的 12.comfortable 舒适的 13.convenient 方便的 【基础必会·各领域变化词汇】 领域 过去相关词 现在相关词 住房条件 small house, crowded apartment, comfortable, large block 交通出行 bicycle, bus, slow car, underground, high-speed train, fast 通讯方式 letter, phone call smartphone, social media, app 休闲活动 open-air movie, chess, radio travel, surf the Internet, cinema 教育 few chances, no free education free education, online courses 医疗 few hospitals modern hospitals, advanced 【后缀 -ment 构词法总结】 后缀 含义 例词 构词规则 -ment ……的行为/状态/结果 improvement, development, movement, agreement, argument, payment, enjoyment, encouragement, excitement 动词 + -ment 📌 记忆小贴士：在动词后加后缀 -ment 构成名词，表示该动作的行为、状态或结果。如：improve + -ment = improvement（改善）；develop + -ment = development（发展）；move + -ment = movement（运动）。注意：以不发音的 e 结尾的动词，一般去 e 加 -ment，如：improve → improvement；agree → agreement。 【微练习·后缀 -ment 填空】 任务：用所给词的适当形式填空（加 -ment）。 1.The __________ (improve) of living conditions makes people happier. 2.China has made great __________ (develop) in science and technology. 3.The community reached an __________ (agree) to build a new park. 4.Her words gave me great __________ (encourage). 5.There is no __________ (argue) about the importance of education. 短语积累 【基础必会短语】 1.take place 发生 2.in the past 在过去 3.used to do ... 过去常常做…… 4.get used to ... 习惯于…… 5.have a chance to do ... 有机会做…… 6.keep up with ... 跟上…… 7.find out 查明；了解 8.in recent years 在最近几年 9.go to school for free 免费上学 10.in one's childhood 在某人的童年时期 【进阶加分·中考高分短语】 1.have taken place in ... 在……发生了 2.be crowded into ... 被挤进…… 3.have more choices 有更多选择 4.make great achievements 取得巨大成就 5.play a more and more important role 扮演越来越重要的角色 6.be proud of ... 为……感到骄傲 7.keep in touch with ... 与……保持联系 8.share ... with ... 与……分享 9.from ... to ... 从……到…… 10.compared with ... 与……相比 句式积累 开头句（引出变化话题）： 1.Great changes have taken place in ... in recent years. 近年来，……发生了巨大的变化。 2.As society develops, ... have changed greatly. 随着社会的发展，……发生了巨大的变化。 3.I'd like to talk about some changes in ... over the years. 我想谈谈……这些年来的变化。 中间句（对比过去与现在——过去）： 1.In the past, people used to ... 在过去，人们过去常常…… 2.... were crowded into ... ……被挤进…… 3.There were not many ... 没有很多…… 4.People had few choices of ... 人们在……方面选择很少。 中间句（对比过去与现在——现在）： 1.Now, ... have greatly changed. 现在，……发生了巨大的变化。 2.There are large blocks of modern ... 有大片现代的…… 3.People can afford to ... 人们能够负担得起…… 4.With the development of ..., ... have become more and more popular. 随着……的发展，……变得越来越受欢迎。 结尾句（表达感受与展望）： 1.In any case, we should keep up with the changing world. 无论如何，我们应该跟上这个变化的世界。 2.I am proud of these great changes and I believe our life will be even better in the future. 我为这些巨大的变化感到骄傲，我相信我们的生活将来会更好。 3.Though many things have changed, some memories always remain the same. 虽然很多事情都变了，但有些记忆始终不变。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句（P8课文）： Great changes have taken place in China since the 1980s. （自20世纪80年代以来，中国发生了巨大的变化。） 仿写任务： 自改革开放以来，我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句（P8课文）： In the past, big families were crowded into small houses. （在过去，大家庭挤在狭小的房子里。） 仿写任务： 在过去，人们骑自行车或乘公交车上下班。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句（P13课文）： In the past, watching movies outdoors was a popular and exciting leisure activity for people of all ages. （在过去，在户外看电影对各年龄段的人来说都是一种流行且令人兴奋的休闲活动。） 仿写任务： 在过去，去公园野餐或划船是人们最喜欢的休闲活动。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 典例 假设你是李华，你校英语报正在举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请你根据以下表格中的信息，写一篇英文短文，介绍你家乡发生的巨大变化。 方面 过去 现在 住房 小房子，拥挤 大公寓，舒适 交通 自行车、公交车，慢 地铁、私家车，快 通讯 信件、电话 智能手机、社交媒体 休闲 露天电影、下棋 旅游、上网 注意： （1）短文必须包含表格中所列的信息，可作适当发挥； （2）书写规范，词数80—100左右； （3）开头已给出，仅供参考，不计入总词数。 Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 题材： 本文是一篇对比说明文/征文稿。 ② 人称、时态： 人称以第一人称和第三人称为主；描述过去的情况用一般过去时或used to；描述现在的变化用一般现在时和现在完成时。 ③ 硬性写作要点： 必须涵盖住房、交通、通讯、休闲四个方面的过去与现在对比。 ④ 文体提示： 对比说明文需要运用过去与现在的时间对比结构，注意逻辑清晰、层次分明。 课堂互动小栏目【3分钟同桌闯关·全班抢答】 活动形式： 同桌合作完成任务，随机点名核对答案，全员口头抢答句型任务。 任务1：写出本篇作文必须包含的4个对比方面 1._______________ 2. _______________3._______________ 4. _______________ 任务2：时态小判断（正确打√，错误打×） （ ） 描述现在已经发生的变化应用现在完成时（have/has + done）。 （ ） 描述过去常常做的事情应用一般现在时。 任务3：口头句型仿写（使用“In the past, people used to ...”造一个完整句子） 谋篇布局 段落 写作要点 开头（Opening） 总起全文，点明家乡发生了巨大变化。 中间（Body） 从住房、交通、通讯、休闲四个方面对比过去与现在。 结尾（Ending） 表达对这些变化的感受，展望未来。 佳作展示 Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. In the past, people lived in small and crowded houses. They rode bicycles or took buses to work. The streets were narrow and there weren't many cars. People used to write letters or make phone calls to keep in touch with each other. After work, they watched open-air movies or played Chinese chess for fun. Now, everything has changed. People have moved into large and comfortable apartments. There are many cars and the streets are much wider. People can also take the underground to go anywhere. Smartphones have become very popular. People can chat with each other anytime on social media. They have more choices for leisure, such as traveling and surfing the Internet. I am proud of these great changes and I believe my hometown will become even better in the future. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇： 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 ① take place 发生 ② in the past 在过去 ③ keep in touch with ... 与……保持联系 ④ have more choices 有更多选择 ⑤ such as 例如 ⑥ be proud of 为……感到骄傲 高分句型： ① Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years.（现在完成时，引出变化主题） ② People used to write letters or make phone calls to keep in touch with each other.（used to do ... 过去常常做…… + 不定式作目的状语） ③ I am proud of these great changes and I believe my hometown will become even better in the future.（and连接的并列句 + 宾语从句） 写作易错警示（单元高频扣分点） 序号 易错点 正确用法 1 现在完成时结构错误： have took place / has changed have/has + 过去分词（taken place / changed） 2 used to 与 get used to 混淆： used to do（过去常常做）vs. get used to doing（习惯于做） I used to live in the countryside.（过去住在农村）/ I have got used to living in the city.（已经习惯住在城市） 3 时态混用： 描述过去用现在时 过去的情况用一般过去时或used to；现在的情况用一般现在时或现在完成时 4 后缀 -ment 拼写错误： developement / improvment development；improvement（注意拼写） 5 事实与观点混淆： 将主观感受当作事实陈述 事实（Fact）：可验证的客观信息；观点（Opinion）：主观感受与评价 （一） ★（24-25九上·北京四中·期中） 假设你是王伟，你所在的城市发生了巨大的变化。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英文短文，介绍你所在城市的变化。 提示要点： 1.过去城市是什么样的？（住房、交通、环境等） 2.现在城市变成了什么样？ 3.你对这些变化有什么感受？ 要求： （1）词数80左右，可适当发挥； （2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） ★★（23-24九上·南京外国语学校·期末） 通信方式在过去几十年里发生了巨大的变化。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文，介绍通信方式的变化。 提示要点： 1.过去人们如何通信？ 2.现在人们如何通信？ 3.这些变化给生活带来了什么影响？ 要求： （1）词数80左右； （2）内容完整，条理清晰，可适当发挥。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） ★★（休闲活动变化主题写作） 随着社会的发展，人们的休闲活动发生了巨大的变化。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文，谈谈休闲活动的变化。 提示要点： 1.过去人们有哪些休闲活动？ 2.现在人们有哪些休闲活动？ 3.你觉得这些变化是好是坏？为什么？ 要求： （1）词数80左右； （2）条理清晰，语句通顺。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） ★★（24-25九上·天津一中·期中） 假设你是李想，你的家乡过去是一个小村庄，现在变成了一个现代化的城市。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文，介绍你家乡的变化。 提示要点： 1.过去家乡的样子； 2.现在家乡的样子； 3.你最喜欢的变化是什么？为什么？ 要求： （1）词数80左右； （2）内容完整，条理清晰。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） ★★（书信题型·给笔友介绍变化） 假设你是王芳，你的英国笔友Tom来信询问你家乡的变化。请你根据以下提示，给他回一封邮件。 提示要点： 1.家乡过去的样子； 2.家乡现在的样子； 3.你对这些变化的感受。 要求： （1）词数80左右，邮件的格式已给出，不计入总词数； （2）内容完整，条理清晰。 Dear Tom, I'm glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked about the changes in my hometown. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Wang Fang （六） ★（命题作文 Changes Around Me） 请你以“Changes Around Me”为题，根据以下提示，写一篇英文短文。 内容包括： 1.你身边发生了哪些变化？（至少三个方面） 2.这些变化对你有什么影响？ 3.你对这些变化的态度是什么？ 要求： （1）词数80—90； （2）条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） ★★★（24-25九上·杭州外国语学校·期中） 假设你是李明，你的学校正在举办“见证变化”主题英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示，写一篇演讲稿。 提示要点： 1.你身边最显著的变化是什么？ 2.这些变化是如何发生的？ 3.你对未来有什么期望？ 要求： （1）词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； （2）语言流畅，有感染力。 Dear fellow students, Good morning! Today I'd like to talk about the changes around me. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） ★★（教育变化主题写作） 教育在过去几十年里发生了巨大的变化。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文，介绍教育领域的变化。 提示要点： 1.过去的教育状况； 2.现在的教育状况； 3.这些变化的意义。 要求： （1）词数80左右； （2）内容完整，条理清晰。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （九） ★★★（2024·北京·中考真题改编） 社会的发展给人们的生活带来了巨大的变化。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英文短文，谈谈你对这些变化的看法。 提示要点： 1.列举生活中两个显著的变化； 2.这些变化给人们带来了什么好处； 3.这些变化可能带来什么问题； 4.你的建议是什么。 要求： （1）词数90—100； （2）内容完整，条理清晰，语句通顺。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （十） ★★★（对比家乡的过去与现在） 请你以“My Hometown—Past and Present”为题，根据以下提示，写一篇英文短文。 提示要点： 1.你家乡过去的样子（环境、生活条件、交通等）； 2.你家乡现在的样子； 3.你对家乡变化的感受。 要求： （1）词数80—90； （2）内容具体，情感真挚。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 综合拓展写作任务（选做·单元拔高大题） 假设你是李华，学校正在举办“见证时代的变迁”英文征文比赛。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文参赛。 提示要点： 1.选择一个方面（如交通、通讯、教育、休闲等），介绍其过去与现在的变化； 2.分析这些变化的原因； 3.谈谈你对未来的展望。 要求： （1）词数100左右； （2）内容完整，条理清晰，有真情实感； （3）尽可能使用本单元所学的词汇、短语和句型。 写作框架提示： 第一段：引出所选话题，点明发生了巨大变化； 第二段：从过去和现在两个时间维度进行对比描述； 第三段：分析变化的原因（如科技发展、政策支持等）； 第四段：表达对未来的展望。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 单元写作评价量规（融合教材Self-assessment + 中考评分标准） 本量规参照中考英语书面表达评分标准设计，从内容完整性、语言准确性、篇章结构三个维度进行评价，每项满分5分，总计15分。可用于学生自评、同伴互评及教师批改。 评价维度 5分（优秀） 4分（良好） 3分（合格） 1-2分（需改进） 内容完整性（5分） 完整覆盖全部对比维度，主动加入教材中北京变化、休闲活动变化等拓展细节，内容饱满丰富 所有基础对比要点齐全，少量简单拓展细节 遗漏1个核心对比维度，内容单薄无拓展 遗漏2个及以上核心对比要点，内容残缺 语言准确性（5分） 现在完成时、used to、后缀-ment全部正确，无拼写语法错误 仅1-2处微小拼写/语法错误，不影响阅读理解 时态混用或used to使用错误，3-4处语法错误 大量时态、拼写、固定搭配错误，阅读困难 篇章结构（5分） 标准三段式清晰，in the past/now/however等逻辑连接词丰富，结尾引用课本金句升华主题 分段完整，使用少量基础连接词 分段清晰，但缺少分层逻辑词 段落混乱，无分层，语句杂乱堆砌 总分：____ / 15 评语与建议： 配套学生自评栏（对标教材P18 Self-assessment） 1.我能正确使用本单元现在完成时（have/has + done）。 □是 □否 2.我能正确区分used to do与get used to doing。 □是 □否 3.我能正确使用后缀 -ment 构成名词。 □是 □否 课本Project拓展写作专项（P15 变化海报衍生写作） 写作任务 参照课本“制作身边变化海报”活动，写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍你身边某个事物（如村庄商店、学校、社区等）的过去与现在。 课本模板转化写作框架： Subject: ____________________ Past: • ________ • ________ • ________ Present: • ________ • ________ • ________ Feeling: ____________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________单元写作语法巩固 题型1：短文改错（划出错误并改正） 1. Great changes have took place in my hometown. 2. People used to living in small houses. 3. I have get used to the life in the city. 4. The improvement of education have made children happier. 5. In the past, people have few choices for leisure. 题型2：后缀 -ment 填空 1.The __________ (improve) of living conditions is important. 2.China has made great __________ (develop) in recent years. 3.They reached an __________ (agree) to build a new park. 4.Her words gave me great __________ (encourage). 5.There is no __________ (argue) about the importance of education. 题型3：现在完成时填空 1.Great changes __________ (take place) in my hometown. 2.I __________ (live) in Beijing for ten years. 3.She __________ (not finish) her homework yet. 4.__________ you __________ (see) the new museum? 5.They __________ (already move) into their new house. 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $