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Unit 2 Travelling Around
单元写作精练
【主题】旅游出行;行程规划;景点推荐;旅行求助
一、写作定位
1、体裁定位:应用文(建议信、推荐邮件,本单元核心必考)
2、话题定位:出行规划建议、旅游目的地推荐、旅途问题求助、分享旅行经历
3、能力考点:掌握书信格式;熟练使用委婉建议句型;定语从句、非谓语高分句式;话题固定搭配
4、时态&人称:以一般现在时为主;第一人称(I/We)+第二人称(you)为主
[基本框架]
1. 开头:点明推荐地点与写信缘由
2. 主体:介绍行程安排、自然景观、人文特色
3. 结尾:表达期待,预祝旅途愉快
二、核心素材
(一)写作词汇短语
1. 形容词、名词升级
nice → breathtaking / picturesque 风景优美的
important → vital / essential / significant 至关重要的
Plan → schedule / itinerary 行程;出行规划
Suggestion → tip / proposal 出行建议、出行指南
famous → well-known / world-renowned 闻名遐迩的
Travel → trip / journey 短途出行;长途游历
helpful → beneficial / rewarding 有益的、有收获的
protect → preserve 保护
2. 逻辑连接词
(1)首先:To begin with / Initially / First and foremost
(2)此外:In addition / Moreover / Furthermore / Besides
(3)最后:Last but not least
3. 单元高频短语
go on a trip 去旅行 scenic spots / tourist attractions 景点
book tickets and accommodation 预订车票和住宿
broaden one’s horizons 开阔眼界 local customs 当地风俗
pay attention to safety 注意出行安全 a tight budget 有限的旅行预算
historical relics 历史古迹 group travel 结伴旅行
avoid troubles 规避麻烦 tourist attraction 旅游胜地
natural scenery 自然风光 local culture and customs 当地文化与风俗
explore the scenery 游览风光 unique features 独特风貌
(二)开头段高级句型
1、回应来信正式句式:
In response to your mail about travel planning, I’m writing to offer several practical travel proposals.
针对你来信咨询行程规划的问题,我写此信为你提供几条实用出行方案。
2、共情安抚句式:
Knowing that you meet troubles during your solo trip, I totally understand your feelings.
得知你独自旅行遇到困境,我非常理解你的心情。
3、极简高级版:
When it comes to travel planning, I’d like to share some useful tips with you.
谈及行程规划,我愿意和你分享一些实用技巧。
4、经典模板句:
It is common for travellers to meet small troubles on the way, so don’t be worried.
旅行者在旅途遇到小麻烦很正常,不必担心。
(三)中间主体段高分句式
类型 1:委婉含蓄建议
(1)If I were you, I would book accommodation in advance to save travel time.
如果我是你,我会提前预订住宿,节省出行时间。
(2)It would be far more beneficial if you learn some local customs before travelling.
出行前了解当地风俗,会对你的旅途大有裨益。
(3)You might as well choose group travel, which can keep you safe during the trip.
你不妨选择结伴出行,这能保障你的旅途安全。
(4)It is advisable to take some medicine during long-distance travel.
长途旅行随身携带药品是明智的选择。
类型 2:主语从句/形式主语
(1)What is strongly recommended is that you (should) make a clear travel schedule.
我强烈建议你制定清晰的出行行程表。
(2)It is vital that you pay attention to personal safety when travelling.
旅行途中注意人身安全至关重要。
(3)It proves rewarding to visit cultural scenic spots to enrich your experience.
游览人文景点丰富阅历,一定会收获满满。
(四)结尾段高级收尾句型
(1)I sincerely hope that the above proposals will be conducive to your trip.
衷心希望以上建议对你的旅途有所帮助。
(2)I would appreciate it if you could take my travel tips into full consideration.
若你能认真采纳我的出行建议,我将不胜荣幸。
(3)I firmly believe you will have an unforgettable travelling experience.
我坚信你将会拥有一场难忘的旅行。
(4)Should you meet any travel problem, never hesitate to contact me anytime.
如若旅途遇到问题,随时联系我
【写作模板】
(本单元必考书信模板,直接背诵默写)
Dear ________,
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble ________(规划你的出行行程). I'm writing to give you some advice.
To begin with, you should ________(提前制定行程). Then, it's helpful to ________(了解当地风俗). Besides, you can ________(结伴出行) to ________(保障旅途安全). Last but not least, remember to protect local historical relics.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【原题呈现】
假定你是李华,你的外国笔友 Mike 计划暑假来中国自由行,不清楚出行准备和注意事项,
写信向你求助。请你写一封建议信,
内容包括:
1、表示欢迎与理解;
2、给出出行建议(行程规划、人身安全、尊重当地风俗);
3、表达祝愿。
注意:词数 80 左右;行文连贯;格式规范
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【审题构思】
体裁:建议信(英文应用文书信)
人称:第二人称 you + 第一人称 I
时态:一般现在时为主,少量一般将来时
提纲:
第一段:欢迎对方来华+理解对方出行困惑+表明写信目的
第二段:分3点提建议(行程规划、出行安全、尊重民俗)
第三段:表达祝福,预祝旅途顺利
【分层范文】
基础标准版(保底得分,必背)
Dear Mike,
Welcome to China! I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble planning your summer trip here. I understand you very well. Here is my advice.
First, you should make a clear travel schedule before you set off. Second, pay attention to your personal safety during your trip. Third, learn and respect local customs when you visit different cities.
I hope my advice is helpful. Wish you a wonderful trip in China!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
高分进阶版(培优提分,冲刺满分)
Dear Mike,
Warmly welcome to China! I'm sorry to learn that you are having difficulty planning your summer free trip in China. Don’t worry, many foreign travellers have the same problem. I'm writing to offer you some practical proposals.
To begin with, making a detailed travel itinerary in advance is the key to a smooth trip. Besides, you’d better travel with companions, which can greatly guarantee your personal safety. What's more, it is essential for you to respect diverse local customs during travelling.
I firmly believe you will enjoy your unforgettable trip here.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
亮点解析:
词汇升级:have trouble → have difficulty;plan → make a detailed itinerary;advice → practical proposals;different → diverse
句式升级:简单句 → 非谓语动词 (making...)、定语从句 (which can greatly guarantee...)
衔接词:To begin with, Besides, What's more 层次清晰,提升作文逻辑分
【基础必做】
一、汉译英(单元写作核心短语)
1、规划旅行行程 ________________________
2、开阔眼界 ________________________
3、尊重当地风俗 ________________________
4、注意出行安全 ________________________
5、提前预订车票 ________________________
6、历史风景名胜 ________________________
二、句型仿写(参照例句完成句子)
句型 1:I'm sorry to hear that... (建议信万能开头)
例句:I'm sorry to hear that you are in trouble.
1、很遗憾听说你不会规划出行行程。_______________________________________________
2、很遗憾听说你独自旅行感到焦虑。 _______________________________________________
句型 2:You should... (基础建议句型)
例句:You should communicate with local people.
1、你应该提前制定出行计划。 _______________________________________________
2、你应该结伴旅行保障安全。_______________________________________________
【提升必做】
Writing 01
(2024·全国甲卷 改编)
假定你是李华,你的外教 Mr. Smith 打算周末短途出游,纠结出行目的地。请给他写一封邮件,
推荐一处本地景点,
内容包括:
(1) 你的推荐景点;
(2) 说明推荐理由(风景优美、交通便利、游客友好)。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)格式规范。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I learn that you are confused about choosing a destination for your weekend trip.
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 02
(26-27高一·期中检测)
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友 Tom 独自出国旅行,发邮件说自己遇到语言障碍、迷路,心情低落。请你给他写回信,
内容包括:1. 安慰对方;2. 给出旅途应急建议;3. 给予鼓励。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 行文连贯
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 03
(2025·湖北高一期末)
假定你是李华,学校英文报约稿,请你写一篇短文介绍一次难忘的旅行经历。
内容包括:
1.出行行程 2.旅途见闻
3.旅行收获。 4.词数100左右。
____________________________________________________________________________
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____________________________________________________________________________
【拓展选做】
你的外国笔友Peter计划暑假来中国旅行,请你给他推荐一处景点,并介绍你的出行安排、当地特色与游玩活动。词数100词左右。
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Unit 2 Travelling Around
单元写作精练
答案
【基础必做】
一、汉译英(单元写作核心短语)
参考答案:
1、plan a travel schedule
2、broaden one’s horizons
3、respect local customs
4、pay attention to travelling safety
5、book tickets in advance
6、historical tourist attractions
二、句型仿写(参照例句完成句子)
参考答案
1、I'm sorry to hear that you can’t plan your travel schedule.
2、I'm sorry to hear that you feel anxious about solo travelling.
参考答案
1、You should make a travel plan in advance.
2、You should travel with others to keep safe.
【提升必做】
Writing 01
【答案解析】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I learn that you are confused about choosing a destination for your weekend trip. I’m writing to recommend Lotus Mountain Scenic Spot to you.
To begin with, it boasts breathtaking and picturesque natural scenery, which is perfect for relaxing. In addition, it enjoys convenient public transportation and low travelling cost. Last but not least, lots of visitors gather there on weekends, and you can make new friends during the trip.
I hope you will have a great time there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇属于应用文推荐类邮件,本单元Traveling Around高频考题,核心考查景点描述、分点阐述理由。
【详解】
词汇积累:confused → puzzled;boast → be famous for;convenient → accessible
句式拓展:简单句变非限制性定语从句
原句:It boasts breathtaking natural scenery. 拓展句:It boasts breathtaking natural scenery, which can help you relax after work.
【点睛】
高分句型1:I’m writing to recommend Lotus Mountain Scenic Spot to you.(书信核心功能句型)
高分句型2:it boasts breathtaking and picturesque natural scenery, which is perfect for relaxing.(which引导非限制性定语从句,单元核心高分句式)
Writing 02
【答案解析】
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you feel upset after getting lost and meeting language barriers during your trip. It is common for foreign travellers to meet such problems, so don’t be discouraged.
Here are some emergency tips for you. First, you can turn to local police for help and show them your location. Besides, use translation software to solve language barriers. Last but not least, stop and have a rest to calm down.
I firmly believe you will get out of the trouble soon. Looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇属于求助回信,单元高频变式题型,结合本单元出行话题+建议信格式。
【详解】
词汇积累:upset → depressed;barrier → obstacle;calm down → compose oneself
句式拓展:简单句合并为状语从句 原句:Don’t be discouraged. You may meet small travelling problems. 拓展句:Don’t be discouraged, since small travelling problems are unavoidable.
【点睛】
高分句型1:It is common for foreign travellers to meet such problems(it作形式主语,单元必背句式)
高分句型2:I firmly believe you will get out of the trouble soon(宾语从句结尾升华)
Writing 03
【答案解析】
An Unforgettable Trip
Last summer vacation, I went on a trip to Chengdu with my classmates. We set off early in the morning and arrived there by high-speed train.
We visited many world-renowned scenic spots and tasted local delicious food. During the trip, we enjoyed breathtaking scenery and learned about local traditional culture. This trip broadens my horizons greatly and teaches me how to cooperate with others.
I will cherish this precious travelling memory forever.
【导语】单元记叙文必考题型,旅行游记,本单元次高频写作题材
【详解】
词汇积累:famous→world-renowned;see→enjoy;learn→gain insight into
句式拓展:简单句变非谓语句式 原句:We visited scenic spots. We enjoyed beautiful scenery. 拓展句:We visited scenic spots, enjoying breathtaking scenery all the way.
【点睛】
高分句型:We visited many world-renowned scenic spots and tasted local delicious food.(并列结构,记叙文万能句式)
话题考点:通篇使用一般过去时,游记时态核心考点
【拓展选做】
答案:
Dear Peter,
Hearing that you will come to China for a trip this summer, I strongly recommend Xi'an to you, a city famous for its long history and splendid culture.
We can spend three days visiting local tourist attractions. We will admire the Terracotta Army and walk around ancient city walls. We can also taste traditional local food and experience ancient culture. Every sight here has its unique charm.
I believe you will fall in love with this city. Wish you a wonderful journey!
Yours,
Li Hua
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Unit 2 Travelling Around
单元写作精练
【主题】旅游出行;行程规划;景点推荐;旅行求助
一、写作定位
1、体裁定位:应用文(建议信、推荐邮件,本单元核心必考)
2、话题定位:出行规划建议、旅游目的地推荐、旅途问题求助、分享旅行经历
3、能力考点:掌握书信格式;熟练使用委婉建议句型;定语从句、非谓语高分句式;话题固定搭配
4、时态&人称:以一般现在时为主;第一人称(I/We)+第二人称(you)为主
[基本框架]
1. 开头:点明推荐地点与写信缘由
2. 主体:介绍行程安排、自然景观、人文特色
3. 结尾:表达期待,预祝旅途愉快
二、核心素材
(一)写作词汇短语
1. 形容词、名词升级
nice → breathtaking / picturesque 风景优美的
important → vital / essential / significant 至关重要的
Plan → schedule / itinerary 行程;出行规划
Suggestion → tip / proposal 出行建议、出行指南
famous → well-known / world-renowned 闻名遐迩的
Travel → trip / journey 短途出行;长途游历
helpful → beneficial / rewarding 有益的、有收获的
protect → preserve 保护
2. 逻辑连接词
(1)首先:To begin with / Initially / First and foremost
(2)此外:In addition / Moreover / Furthermore / Besides
(3)最后:Last but not least
3. 单元高频短语
go on a trip 去旅行 scenic spots / tourist attractions 景点
book tickets and accommodation 预订车票和住宿
broaden one’s horizons 开阔眼界 local customs 当地风俗
pay attention to safety 注意出行安全 a tight budget 有限的旅行预算
historical relics 历史古迹 group travel 结伴旅行
avoid troubles 规避麻烦 tourist attraction 旅游胜地
natural scenery 自然风光 local culture and customs 当地文化与风俗
explore the scenery 游览风光 unique features 独特风貌
(二)开头段高级句型
1、回应来信正式句式:
In response to your mail about travel planning, I’m writing to offer several practical travel proposals.
针对你来信咨询行程规划的问题,我写此信为你提供几条实用出行方案。
2、共情安抚句式:
Knowing that you meet troubles during your solo trip, I totally understand your feelings.
得知你独自旅行遇到困境,我非常理解你的心情。
3、极简高级版:
When it comes to travel planning, I’d like to share some useful tips with you.
谈及行程规划,我愿意和你分享一些实用技巧。
4、经典模板句:
It is common for travellers to meet small troubles on the way, so don’t be worried.
旅行者在旅途遇到小麻烦很正常,不必担心。
(三)中间主体段高分句式
类型 1:委婉含蓄建议
(1)If I were you, I would book accommodation in advance to save travel time.
如果我是你,我会提前预订住宿,节省出行时间。
(2)It would be far more beneficial if you learn some local customs before travelling.
出行前了解当地风俗,会对你的旅途大有裨益。
(3)You might as well choose group travel, which can keep you safe during the trip.
你不妨选择结伴出行,这能保障你的旅途安全。
(4)It is advisable to take some medicine during long-distance travel.
长途旅行随身携带药品是明智的选择。
类型 2:主语从句/形式主语
(1)What is strongly recommended is that you (should) make a clear travel schedule.
我强烈建议你制定清晰的出行行程表。
(2)It is vital that you pay attention to personal safety when travelling.
旅行途中注意人身安全至关重要。
(3)It proves rewarding to visit cultural scenic spots to enrich your experience.
游览人文景点丰富阅历,一定会收获满满。
(四)结尾段高级收尾句型
(1)I sincerely hope that the above proposals will be conducive to your trip.
衷心希望以上建议对你的旅途有所帮助。
(2)I would appreciate it if you could take my travel tips into full consideration.
若你能认真采纳我的出行建议,我将不胜荣幸。
(3)I firmly believe you will have an unforgettable travelling experience.
我坚信你将会拥有一场难忘的旅行。
(4)Should you meet any travel problem, never hesitate to contact me anytime.
如若旅途遇到问题,随时联系我
【写作模板】
(本单元必考书信模板,直接背诵默写)
Dear ________,
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble ________(规划你的出行行程). I'm writing to give you some advice.
To begin with, you should ________(提前制定行程). Then, it's helpful to ________(了解当地风俗). Besides, you can ________(结伴出行) to ________(保障旅途安全). Last but not least, remember to protect local historical relics.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【原题呈现】
假定你是李华,你的外国笔友 Mike 计划暑假来中国自由行,不清楚出行准备和注意事项,
写信向你求助。请你写一封建议信,
内容包括:
1、表示欢迎与理解;
2、给出出行建议(行程规划、人身安全、尊重当地风俗);
3、表达祝愿。
注意:词数 80 左右;行文连贯;格式规范
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【审题构思】
体裁:建议信(英文应用文书信)
人称:第二人称 you + 第一人称 I
时态:一般现在时为主,少量一般将来时
提纲:
第一段:欢迎对方来华+理解对方出行困惑+表明写信目的
第二段:分3点提建议(行程规划、出行安全、尊重民俗)
第三段:表达祝福,预祝旅途顺利
【分层范文】
基础标准版(保底得分,必背)
Dear Mike,
Welcome to China! I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble planning your summer trip here. I understand you very well. Here is my advice.
First, you should make a clear travel schedule before you set off. Second, pay attention to your personal safety during your trip. Third, learn and respect local customs when you visit different cities.
I hope my advice is helpful. Wish you a wonderful trip in China!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
高分进阶版(培优提分,冲刺满分)
Dear Mike,
Warmly welcome to China! I'm sorry to learn that you are having difficulty planning your summer free trip in China. Don’t worry, many foreign travellers have the same problem. I'm writing to offer you some practical proposals.
To begin with, making a detailed travel itinerary in advance is the key to a smooth trip. Besides, you’d better travel with companions, which can greatly guarantee your personal safety. What's more, it is essential for you to respect diverse local customs during travelling.
I firmly believe you will enjoy your unforgettable trip here.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
亮点解析:
词汇升级:have trouble → have difficulty;plan → make a detailed itinerary;advice → practical proposals;different → diverse
句式升级:简单句 → 非谓语动词 (making...)、定语从句 (which can greatly guarantee...)
衔接词:To begin with, Besides, What's more 层次清晰,提升作文逻辑分
【基础必做】
一、汉译英(单元写作核心短语)
1、规划旅行行程 ________________________
2、开阔眼界 ________________________
3、尊重当地风俗 ________________________
4、注意出行安全 ________________________
5、提前预订车票 ________________________
6、历史风景名胜 ________________________
参考答案:
1、plan a travel schedule
2、broaden one’s horizons
3、respect local customs
4、pay attention to travelling safety
5、book tickets in advance
6、historical tourist attractions
二、句型仿写(参照例句完成句子)
句型 1:I'm sorry to hear that... (建议信万能开头)
例句:I'm sorry to hear that you are in trouble.
1、很遗憾听说你不会规划出行行程。_______________________________________________
2、很遗憾听说你独自旅行感到焦虑。 _______________________________________________
参考答案
1、I'm sorry to hear that you can’t plan your travel schedule.
2、I'm sorry to hear that you feel anxious about solo travelling.
句型 2:You should... (基础建议句型)
例句:You should communicate with local people.
1、你应该提前制定出行计划。 _______________________________________________
2、你应该结伴旅行保障安全。_______________________________________________
参考答案
1、You should make a travel plan in advance.
2、You should travel with others to keep safe.
【提升必做】
Writing 01
(2024·全国甲卷 改编)
假定你是李华,你的外教 Mr. Smith 打算周末短途出游,纠结出行目的地。请给他写一封邮件,
推荐一处本地景点,
内容包括:
(1) 你的推荐景点;
(2) 说明推荐理由(风景优美、交通便利、游客友好)。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)格式规范。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I learn that you are confused about choosing a destination for your weekend trip.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案解析】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I learn that you are confused about choosing a destination for your weekend trip. I’m writing to recommend Lotus Mountain Scenic Spot to you.
To begin with, it boasts breathtaking and picturesque natural scenery, which is perfect for relaxing. In addition, it enjoys convenient public transportation and low travelling cost. Last but not least, lots of visitors gather there on weekends, and you can make new friends during the trip.
I hope you will have a great time there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇属于应用文推荐类邮件,本单元Traveling Around高频考题,核心考查景点描述、分点阐述理由。
【详解】
词汇积累:confused → puzzled;boast → be famous for;convenient → accessible
句式拓展:简单句变非限制性定语从句
原句:It boasts breathtaking natural scenery. 拓展句:It boasts breathtaking natural scenery, which can help you relax after work.
【点睛】
高分句型1:I’m writing to recommend Lotus Mountain Scenic Spot to you.(书信核心功能句型)
高分句型2:it boasts breathtaking and picturesque natural scenery, which is perfect for relaxing.(which引导非限制性定语从句,单元核心高分句式)
Writing 02
(26-27高一·期中检测)
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友 Tom 独自出国旅行,发邮件说自己遇到语言障碍、迷路,心情低落。请你给他写回信,
内容包括:1. 安慰对方;2. 给出旅途应急建议;3. 给予鼓励。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 行文连贯
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案解析】
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you feel upset after getting lost and meeting language barriers during your trip. It is common for foreign travellers to meet such problems, so don’t be discouraged.
Here are some emergency tips for you. First, you can turn to local police for help and show them your location. Besides, use translation software to solve language barriers. Last but not least, stop and have a rest to calm down.
I firmly believe you will get out of the trouble soon. Looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇属于求助回信,单元高频变式题型,结合本单元出行话题+建议信格式。
【详解】
词汇积累:upset → depressed;barrier → obstacle;calm down → compose oneself
句式拓展:简单句合并为状语从句 原句:Don’t be discouraged. You may meet small travelling problems. 拓展句:Don’t be discouraged, since small travelling problems are unavoidable.
【点睛】
高分句型1:It is common for foreign travellers to meet such problems(it作形式主语,单元必背句式)
高分句型2:I firmly believe you will get out of the trouble soon(宾语从句结尾升华)
Writing 03
(2025·湖北高一期末)
假定你是李华,学校英文报约稿,请你写一篇短文介绍一次难忘的旅行经历。
内容包括:
1.出行行程 2.旅途见闻
3.旅行收获。 4.词数100左右。
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【答案解析】
An Unforgettable Trip
Last summer vacation, I went on a trip to Chengdu with my classmates. We set off early in the morning and arrived there by high-speed train.
We visited many world-renowned scenic spots and tasted local delicious food. During the trip, we enjoyed breathtaking scenery and learned about local traditional culture. This trip broadens my horizons greatly and teaches me how to cooperate with others.
I will cherish this precious travelling memory forever.
【导语】单元记叙文必考题型,旅行游记,本单元次高频写作题材
【详解】
词汇积累:famous→world-renowned;see→enjoy;learn→gain insight into
句式拓展:简单句变非谓语句式 原句:We visited scenic spots. We enjoyed beautiful scenery. 拓展句:We visited scenic spots, enjoying breathtaking scenery all the way.
【点睛】
高分句型:We visited many world-renowned scenic spots and tasted local delicious food.(并列结构,记叙文万能句式)
话题考点:通篇使用一般过去时,游记时态核心考点
【拓展选做】
你的外国笔友Peter计划暑假来中国旅行,请你给他推荐一处景点,并介绍你的出行安排、当地特色与游玩活动。词数100词左右。
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答案:
Dear Peter,
Hearing that you will come to China for a trip this summer, I strongly recommend Xi'an to you, a city famous for its long history and splendid culture.
We can spend three days visiting local tourist attractions. We will admire the Terracotta Army and walk around ancient city walls. We can also taste traditional local food and experience ancient culture. Every sight here has its unique charm.
I believe you will fall in love with this city. Wish you a wonderful journey!
Yours,
Li Hua
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