内容正文:
第5课时 Section B(2a-2b)
本单元的书面表达要求同学们能用英语撰写自荐信,陈述想要加入俱乐部的理由,内容包括自己的兴趣爱好、在某一方面所具备的才能等。
1.能用I am interested in …/I’d love to …/I love …等句式来介绍自己的兴趣爱好;
2.能用I can …/I’m good at …等句式来介绍自己的能力;
3.能正确使用情态动词can。
假如你是李华,学校的读书社正在招纳新成员。你很喜欢阅读,有很多想法,希望能申请加入这个社团。请写一封60词左右的申请邮件给社团负责人Bill,申请加入社团。
【审题立意】
主题
人称
时态
Join the book club
第一人称
一般现在时
【巧列提纲】
【语料积累】
常用短语
1.对……感兴趣 be interested in
2.和……分享想法 share ideas with …
3.一种好方式 a good way
4.爱上阅读 fall in love with reading
常用句子
1.I am interested in reading all kinds of books.
我对阅读各类书籍感兴趣。
2.I can not only read fast, but I am also good at telling stories.
我不仅阅读速度快,而且擅长讲故事。
3.I love making new friends.
我喜欢交新朋友。
【高分点拨】
Dear Bill,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 2, Grade 7. I want to join the book club.
The reasons why I want to join the book club are as follows. ①First, I am interested in reading all kinds of books. When reading, I feel pretty relaxed, and the reading corner is a great place for me. ②Second, I can not only read fast, but I am also good at sharing my own ideas with others. ③Besides, I love making new friends. It’s a good way to develop my ability of communicating with others and make me not feel lonely any more. ④Moreover, if I join the club, I’d love to make more students fall in love with reading.
Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
①用I am interested in …介绍我的兴趣爱好。
②用I can not only … but I am also good at …介绍我在阅读方面的能力。
③用I love … It’s a good way to …进一步解释自己想加入读书社的理由。
④简要说明加入读书社后的愿望。
为了丰富学生的校园生活,阳光中学为七年级的学生开设了一系列多彩的社团课程。假如你是阳光中学七年级学生李华,请选择你最喜欢的社团,并写一封60词左右的申请信。
Clubs
Club 1
Club 2
Club 3
running
badminton
basketball
Reasons
1.What are you like?
2.What do you like doing?
3.What can you do?
4.What do you want to get from the club?
内容:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
结构:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
语言:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
书写:
Advice:___________________________________________________
Good writing makes your article better.
Dear Sir,
I would like to join the basketball club. I’m outgoing and I’m friendly to my classmates. I am 1.75 metres tall and I have a strong body. I’m interested in sport, especially basketball. It’s great fun to me. I can play basketball but I am not good at playing it. So I need to join the basketball club to practise. I want to be a basketball player someday. If I join the basketball club, I want to learn skills from other members. I hope to do better in the basketball games and make my dream come true day by day.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【写作指导与评价】
步骤
要点
自评
他评
是(√) 否(×)
审
正确使用第一人称介绍自己的性格、爱好和能力
篇章结构完整(开篇——正文——结尾)
体现信件的语言特征
润
用be interested in …/fall in love with …等表达来介绍兴趣爱好
正确运用连词but, so, if等引出想加入俱乐部的原因
查
介绍自己的性格、爱好和能力,并适当增加细节
正确使用情态动词can等
拼写、语法、标点无误
达到词数要求
书写美观、卷面整洁
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