摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦七年级上册Unit 3“My School”书面表达,核心目标是引导学生用英语介绍学校建筑物、活动及喜爱地点,涵盖There be句式、方位介词(in front of等)、连词and及be动词的正确运用。通过明确写作目标、审题立意(主题、人称、时态)和巧列提纲(开篇-正文-结尾结构及示例句型)搭建学习支架,帮助学生从基础句式过渡到篇章写作。
其亮点在于采用“语料积累-佳作赏析-迁移应用”三阶教学法,通过常用短语句子(如“do exercises together”)、分点名师点评(如用方位介词准确描述建筑物位置、细化喜爱地点原因)及自评他评表,培养学生语言能力(规范表达)、思维品质(逻辑结构)和学习能力(自主反思)。实例包括佳作中用“across from the science building is the office building”等精准描述布局,迁移任务写邮件强化应用。对学生提升写作逻辑与表达准确性,对教师提供完整教学资源与评价工具,提升教学效果。
内容正文:
Unit 3 My School
第5课时 Section B(2a-2b)
七年级上册 RJ 浙江专版
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本单元的书面表达要求同学们能用英语简单介绍自己学校的基本情况,内容包括学校里的建筑物、自己最喜爱的地点、可以从事的活动等等。
1.能用There be句式来介绍自己的学校;
2.能正确运用连词and,方位介词in front of, between … and …, next to, across from等;
3.能正确使用be动词。
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假如你是何平,下图是你们学校的平面布局图。请你根据图片内容,用英语写一篇60词左右的短文,向大家介绍一下你的学校。
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【审题立意】
主题 人称 时态
_____________ ______________ ______________ ______________
My school
第一人称、
第三人称
一般现在时
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【巧列提纲】
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【语料积累】
常用短语
1.一起做操 _________________________________
2.在……左边/右边 _________________________________
3.花费大多数时间 _________________________________
4.在……对面 _________________________________
5.各种各样的食物 _________________________________
do exercises together
on the left/right of …
spend most of the time
across from
many/all/different kinds of food
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常用句子
1.There are many modern buildings in it.
里面有很多现代建筑物。
2.In the centre of the school is a sports field.
学校中央是一个运动场。
3.On the right of the classroom building is the dining hall.
教学楼的右边是餐厅。
4.What a great school!
多棒的校园啊!
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Hello! I am He Ping. ①Here is a map of my school. My school is very beautiful. There are many modern buildings.
①介绍学校, 用a map of …,并用beautiful作总体介绍。
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②The science building is on the left of the school gate. We often do experiments there. Across from it is the office building. When we need to ask our teachers for help, we can go there and find them. The sports field is in the middle of the school. All the students go there and do exercises together in the morning. How amazing! Behind it is the classroom building. We spend most of the time in our classroom. On the right of it is the dining hall. We can enjoy food from different countries there. In front of the dining hall is the school library.
②用on the left/right of, across from, in the middle of, behind, in front of介绍学校建筑物位置。
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③It’s my favourite place because it’s quiet and I enjoy reading there. When I read books there, time goes quickly.
My school is a place full of laughter and joy. ④What a great place! I love my school.
③介绍自己最喜爱的地点,并适当增加原因和细节:because it’s … and I enjoy … there. When I …
④用What a great place! I love my school.结束全文。
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假如你是李华,请你给Mike写一封
电子邮件,向他介绍你的学校。内
容包括:1.图中学校建筑物的位置;
2.对学校的感受。
注意:1.条理清楚,语句连贯,语法
正确;
2.词数:60左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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内容:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
结构:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
语言:☆ ☆ ☆ ☆ ☆
书写:
Advice:_______________________________________________ ______________________________________________________
Good writing makes your article better.
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________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________
Dear Mike,
I’m happy to tell you about my school.
beautiful. There is a big playground in the middle of my school. We raise the flag and do exercises there. On the left of the playground is the classroom building. Behind it is the office building. Our teachers work there. On the right of the playground is the library. It is big. It’s my favourite place, because I can read all kinds of books there. The gym is in front of the library. The
My school is big and
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________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________
dining hall is behind the library. We can enjoy different delicious food there. On the left of the dining hall is the science building. We learn a lot there!
My school is very big and nice. I love my school. What about yours? I am looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
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【写作指导与评价】
步骤 要点 自评 他评
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审 正确使用第三人称介绍自己的学校,用第一人称谈论自己的感受
篇章结构完整(开篇——正文——结尾)
体现信件的语言特征
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步骤 要点 自评 他评
是(√) 否(×)
润 用There be句式和方位介词来介绍学校建筑物
适当增加细节,描述各建筑物可以从事的活动等
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步骤 要点 自评 他评
是(√) 否(×)
查 介绍自己最喜爱的地点和原因等
正确使用be动词等
拼写、语法、标点无误
达到词数要求
书写美观、卷面整洁
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