Unit2写作专项：金钱主题故事书评2026-2027学年外研版英语九年级上册

该初中英语导学案聚焦外研版九上Unit2金钱主题故事书评写作，引导学生运用when/where状语从句描述场景与情节，掌握书评“介绍书籍-梳理情节-表达观点”框架。通过写作分析（时态、人称）、表格模板及核心素材搭建学习支架，衔接单元语法知识与写作实践，帮助学生系统完成80-120词书评。 资料亮点在于提供中英双语范文、填空练习及“好词-佳句-谚语”素材库，助力学生夯实语言基础，提升语言能力。通过故事中金钱与真情的探讨，引导学生辩证思考，培养思维品质。模板化写作框架和分层练习设计，有效降低写作难度，提升学习能力，适合课堂教学与自主练习。

外研版英语九上Unit2写作专项：金钱主题故事书评 一、写作题目 Write a review for another story about money（写一篇关于金钱主题故事的书评） 二、写作目标 一、能运用本单元 when/where 引导的状语从句描述故事场景与情节； 二、完整介绍故事基础信息、梳理故事完整情节，表达自己对金钱与情感的观点； 三、掌握故事书评写作框架，词数 80–120 词。 三、写作分析 1. 时态 一般现在时：介绍作者、书籍、表达个人观点； 一般过去时：叙述书中完整故事情节。 2. 人称 第三人称：介绍作者、故事人物、讲述情节； 第一人称：结尾抒发个人感悟、评价故事。 3. 思路点拨 （一）开头段：点明故事书名、作者、简单介绍作者写作特点； （二）正文段：交代故事背景、主要人物，完整梳理故事情节； （三）结尾段：点评故事，结合故事谈谈金钱与真情的看法。 四、写作模板（表格版） 段落板块 段落功能 英文句型模板 开头段（1 句） 介绍书籍与作者 I’d like to review the story XXX, written by XXX. He is famous for surprise endings in his works. 正文段（2–3 句） 梳理故事人物与情节 The story takes place on Christmas Eve. The main characters are a poor young couple. They each sell their most valuable treasure to buy expensive gifts for each other. When they meet at home, their gifts become useless. 结尾段（1–2 句） 评价故事 + 金钱感悟 This warm story teaches me a truth: love is much more important than money. I really recommend this story to all teenagers. 五、中英双语范文 英文范文 A love worth more than gold I’d like to review The Gift of the Magi, written by O. Henry. He is a great American writer famous for surprising endings. The story takes place on Christmas Eve. The main characters are Della and Jim, a poor young couple. Della has beautiful long hair and Jim owns a precious gold watch. They love each other deeply. Della sells her hair to buy a watch chain for Jim, while Jim sells his watch to buy expensive combs for Della. When they get home, they find their gifts can no longer be used. This warm story moves me a lot. It tells us that true love is far more valuable than money. I highly recommend this wonderful story. 中文翻译 一份胜过黄金的爱 我想点评欧・亨利写的《麦琪的礼物》。他是一位伟大的美国作家，以反转式结局闻名。 故事发生在平安夜，主角是贫穷的年轻夫妻德拉和吉姆。德拉拥有一头美丽长发，吉姆有一块珍贵金表，二人深爱彼此。德拉卖掉长发为吉姆买表链，吉姆卖掉金表给德拉买昂贵发梳。当二人回家相见时，才发现彼此的礼物都失去了用处。 这个温暖的故事深深打动了我。它告诉我们，真爱远比金钱珍贵。我十分推荐这个精彩的故事。 六、核心素材（好词 + 高分佳句 + 谚语） （一）好词 valuable treasure 珍贵宝物；surprise ending 反转结局；expensive 昂贵的；precious 珍贵的；recommend 推荐；deeply love 深爱；useless 无用的；valuable 有价值的 （二）高分佳句（含本单元 when/where 状语从句） 1. When Christmas Eve arrives, Della wants to buy a special gift for her husband.（when 时间状语从句） 2. You can keep your moneybox where you can see it easily.（where 地点状语从句） 3. They have something much more important than money — true love. （三）适用谚语 Money can buy gifts, but never true love. 金钱能买到礼物，却买不到真爱。 七、学生填空练习版（可直接抄写完成） A love worth more than gold I’d like to review__________, written by__________. He is a great American writer famous for__________. The story takes place on__________. The main characters are Della and Jim, a__________ young couple. Della has beautiful long hair and Jim owns a precious__________. They love each other deeply. Della sells her hair to buy a__________ for Jim, while Jim sells his watch to buy expensive__________ for Della. When they get home, they find their gifts can no longer be used. This warm story moves me a lot. It tells us that__________ is far more valuable than money. I highly recommend this wonderful story. 填空答案 1. The Gift of the Magi 2. O. Henry 3. surprise endings 4. Christmas Eve 5. poor 6. gold watch 7. watch chain 8. combs 9. true love ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $