Unit 4 The Wonders of Nature（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材鲁教版八年级上册

本讲义聚焦“自然奇观”书面描写核心知识点，构建“素材积累-范例借鉴-实战运用”学习支架。通过词汇积累（如自然景观名词、描述性形容词）、句式储备（开头句、中间句、结尾句）、佳句仿写（教材原句应用），结合思维导图梳理内容，再经范例审题、谋篇布局及赏析，最终通过多样化实战任务巩固，形成完整写作能力培养脉络。 该资料亮点在于融合语言能力与文化意识培养，提供结构化词汇句式支架（如“one of the +形容词最高级+可数名词复数”仿写）提升规范表达能力，通过黄山、青藏高原等中国自然奇观范例增强家国情怀，审题与谋篇布局训练发展思维品质。课中辅助教师系统教学，课后实战任务助力学生查漏补缺，有效提升自然主题写作水平。

Unit 4 The Wonders of Nature 单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于“人与自然”范畴，单元话题为“自然奇观”。 该单元写作板块旨在培养学生观察与敬畏自然的意识，探访、记录自然奇观是重要的实践活动，它可以帮助学生拓宽视野、建立尊重自然的认知视角。通过书面描写自然景观的外形、动态、形成原因，学生能够完整分享自然景象，形成交流自然见闻的表达习惯。自然奇观的文字介绍，是向他人传递自然风光、地理特色、生态价值的载体；这有助于构建人与自然和谐共处的认知基础，从而培养热爱自然、保护生态的人文素养，学会用规范书面语言描摹世间美景。 词汇积累 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共9页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 wonder奇观 natural自然的 amazing令人惊叹的 beautifu1 美丽的 fantastic极好的 in nature在自然界 protect nature 保护自然 green hills and clean water 青山绿水 mountain 山 river 河 lake 湖 waterfall 瀑布canyon 峡谷 desert 沙漠 forest 森林 island 岛屿 beach 海滩 glacier 冰川 volcano 火山 cave 洞穴 句式积累 开头句： 1. It is located in... 它位于... 2. It lies in... 它坐落于... 3. It is in the north/south/east/west of... 它在...的北部/南部/东部/西部 4. There is a... in... 在...有一个... 中间句： 1. It is one of the most... in the world. 它是世界上最...之一 2. It is... meters/kilometers long/wide/deep. 它有...米/公里长/宽/深 3. The... is more... than the... ...比...更... 4. It has the... of all... 它拥有所有...中最... 结尾句： 1. I was amazed by... 我对...感到惊叹 2. It is really a wonder of nature. 它确实是自然界的奇观 3. We should protect these natural wonders. 我们应该保护这些自然奇观 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：By the way, do you know why it’s called the Yellow River?(by the way). 仿写：顺便问一句，几点钟了? ____________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：Later, we sat in a special pool at the top of the falls. (at the top of) 仿写：太阳从积雪的山峰顶端升起。 _____________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：Climbers must also deal with thin air, high cliffs and changeable weather.(deal with) 仿写：科学家通过研究气候变化的影响来应对冰川融化。 ____________________________________________________________________________ 4. 教材原句：Located on the northeastern coast of Australia, the Great Barrier Reef is one of the most amazing places to visit.(one of +the +形容词最高级+可数名词复数) 仿写：它是全世界最美的小岛之一。 ____________________________________________________________________________ 典例 你的英国笔友Tom来信询问中国的自然奇观，他想知道你最喜欢的自然奇观是什么，以及你平时是否喜欢去户外感受自然。请你根据来信内容写一封回信。 要求：1.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并适当发挥；2.词数90左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.文中不能出现真实校名、人名等信息。 Dear Tom, Thanks for your letter. I’m very glad to tell you about my favorite natural wonder in China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 审题 ①明确文体：书信，一般现在时 ②明确要点：最喜欢的中国自然奇观；自己对于去户外感受自然的看法和经历 ③确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 谋篇布局 开头 引出主题：感谢来信，表明要告知最喜欢的中国自然奇观。 中间 介绍自己最喜欢的自然奇观。 结尾 介绍自己对于去户外感受自然的看法和经历。 佳作展示 Dear Tom, Thanks for your letter. I’m very glad to tell you about my favorite natural wonder in China. My favorite natural wonder is Huangshan, located in Anhui Province. It’s famous for its strange-shaped pines, unique rocks and magical sea of clouds. Last summer, I visited it with my parents. Early in the morning, we watched the sunrise above the clouds, which felt like a fairy world. I took hundreds of photos and felt totally relaxed. I love getting close to nature. On weekends, I usually go hiking in nearby mountains or have picnics in parks. It makes me forget my worries and feel peaceful. Huangshan is like a precious gem. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 佳作赏析 要点一：最喜欢的中国自然奇观：My favorite natural wonder is Huangshan/famous for its strange-shaped pines/My favorite natural wonder is Guilin’s landscape/It’s world-famous for its karst mountains and clear, winding Li River 要点二：自己对于去户外感受自然的看法和经历：I love getting close to nature/It makes me forget my worries and feel peaceful/I love being outdoors/Being in nature makes me feel calm and alive （一） 请以“My Favorite Natural Wonder”为题，写一篇80-100词的短文，介绍你最喜欢的一个自然奇观，内容包括： 1. 它是什么；2. 它在哪里；3. 它的特点；4. 你为什么喜欢它。 要求： 1. 语句通顺，语法正确； 2. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 3. 词数80-100。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） 大自然有无数壮丽的奇观，山川、河流、森林、湖泊都令人惊叹。假如你上周参观了一处自然景观，请你以My Favourite Natural Wonder 为题，写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍你最喜欢的自然奇观。 写作要点： 1. 简单介绍你最喜欢的自然奇观（名称、位置、基本概况）； 2. 描述它的特点（运用比较级、最高级句型）； 3. 分享你的参观感受和保护自然的想法。 写作要求： 1. 词数80-100词； 2. 语句通顺，语法正确，要点齐全； 3. 不得出现真实姓名、校名。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） 假如你是张华，介绍你的家乡——青藏高原的美，写一篇英语短文。 包含以下要点： 1.我的家乡在青藏高原。这里的地貌风光令人惊叹，以世界最高峰闻名于世……云朵洁净柔软，就像我们的白羊……天空那动人的蓝色总能让我感到宁静，它就像高原上方一片广阔的海洋……草原、森林和田野都是绿色的，那是我最喜欢的颜色。 2.对家乡的赞美与热爱之情。 提示词：the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau青藏高原 注意：1.词数：80-100；要点均要包括； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实的学校及学生名字。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） 假设你是李华，你的外教Peter想了解中学生的自然环保行动，请你给他写一封邮件。 内容要点： 1. 简单介绍自然的美丽与自然奇观的价值； 2. 谈谈目前自然环境存在的小问题； 3. 写出你和同学们的环保做法及保护自然的决心。 要求： 4. 词数80-100； 5. 语句通顺、语法正确，卷面整洁； 6. 可适当用到本单元重点短语。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） 学校英语报正在举办“Amazing Nature”主题征文活动。介绍一个你通过书本、网络或课堂了解到的自然奇观，或者你的家乡山东的一处自然奇观，写一篇短文投稿。 写作要点： 1．说明这个自然奇观的名称和大致位置。 2．用一两个具体数字（如高度、长度、面积等）来突出它的惊人之处。 3．把它与另一个地方的自然景观做简单比较（例如：比……更高/更深/更壮观）。 4．谈谈人们为什么喜欢去那里，以及你自己平时是如何亲近自然的（比如爬山、看海、公园散步等）。 要求： 1．语言通顺，逻辑清晰，语法正确； 2．词数：90～120词； 3．文中不要出现真实的校名和人名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） 运城盐池被誉为“中国死海”，湖水色彩随季节变化，冬季硝花如雪，夏季宛如彩色镜面，是山西独特的自然景观。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文介绍运城盐池，突出其自然魅力。 内容包括 ·What is the natural place and where is it? ·What are its special facts? ·What can people do there and how to protect it? 要求： 1. 需包含以上所有提示内容； 2. 词数不少于80； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 参考词： Yuncheng Salt Lake, “Dead Sea of China”, salt flowers, content, salt spa bath, scenic area _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter想了解你对自然奇观的认识和探索经历。请你根据提示，给他写一封80词左右的邮件，介绍你过去和现在对自然奇观的看法、探索经历及感悟。 提示词：natural wonder, explore, protect, mystery, beautiful, guidance, meaningful 要求：1. 书信格式正确；2. 条理清晰，语句通顺；3. 包含提示词，可适当发挥；4. 语法正确，无拼写错误。 Dear Peter, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua （八） My Project: Explore and Protect Natural Wonders 请根据 Unit 4 Section B 所学知识，完成一篇关于”探索并保护自然奇观”的短文，作为本单元 Project 成果。 要求： 词数 70-80 词； 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确； 覆盖Project过程（做了什么、如何做的）、了解到的自然奇观知识及保护建议； 不出现真实姓名和学校名称，开头已给出。 Our class recently finished a Project called “Explore and Protect Natural Wonders”. It was a great experience for all of us. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $Unit 4 The Wonders of Nature 单元同步写作讲义 本单元的主题属于“人与自然”范畴，单元话题为“自然奇观”。 该单元写作板块旨在培养学生观察与敬畏自然的意识，探访、记录自然奇观是重要的实践活动，它可以帮助学生拓宽视野、建立尊重自然的认知视角。通过书面描写自然景观的外形、动态、形成原因，学生能够完整分享自然景象，形成交流自然见闻的表达习惯。自然奇观的文字介绍，是向他人传递自然风光、地理特色、生态价值的载体；这有助于构建人与自然和谐共处的认知基础，从而培养热爱自然、保护生态的人文素养，学会用规范书面语言描摹世间美景。 词汇积累 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共17页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 wonder奇观 natural自然的 amazing令人惊叹的 beautifu1 美丽的 fantastic极好的 in nature在自然界 protect nature 保护自然 green hills and clean water 青山绿水 mountain 山 river 河 lake 湖 waterfall 瀑布canyon 峡谷 desert 沙漠 forest 森林 island 岛屿 beach 海滩 glacier 冰川 volcano 火山 cave 洞穴 句式积累 开头句： 1. It is located in... 它位于... 2. It lies in... 它坐落于... 3. It is in the north/south/east/west of... 它在...的北部/南部/东部/西部 4. There is a... in... 在...有一个... 中间句： 1. It is one of the most... in the world. 它是世界上最...之一 2. It is... meters/kilometers long/wide/deep. 它有...米/公里长/宽/深 3. The... is more... than the... ...比...更... 4. It has the... of all... 它拥有所有...中最... 结尾句： 1. I was amazed by... 我对...感到惊叹 2. It is really a wonder of nature. 它确实是自然界的奇观 3. We should protect these natural wonders. 我们应该保护这些自然奇观 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：By the way, do you know why it’s called the Yellow River?(by the way). 仿写：顺便问一句，几点钟了? ____________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：Later, we sat in a special pool at the top of the falls. (at the top of) 仿写：太阳从积雪的山峰顶端升起。 _____________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：Climbers must also deal with thin air, high cliffs and changeable weather.(deal with) 仿写：科学家通过研究气候变化的影响来应对冰川融化。 ____________________________________________________________________________ 4. 教材原句：Located on the northeastern coast of Australia, the Great Barrier Reef is one of the most amazing places to visit.(one of +the +形容词最高级+可数名词复数) 仿写：它是全世界最美的小岛之一。 ____________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. By the way, what time is it? 2. The sun rises at the top of the snow-covered mountain peaks. 3. Scientists deal with glacier melting by studying the impacts of climate change. 4. It is one of the most beautiful small islands in the world. 典例 你的英国笔友Tom来信询问中国的自然奇观，他想知道你最喜欢的自然奇观是什么，以及你平时是否喜欢去户外感受自然。请你根据来信内容写一封回信。 要求：1.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并适当发挥；2.词数90左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.文中不能出现真实校名、人名等信息。 Dear Tom, Thanks for your letter. I’m very glad to tell you about my favorite natural wonder in China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 审题 ①明确文体：书信，一般现在时 ②明确要点：最喜欢的中国自然奇观；自己对于去户外感受自然的看法和经历 ③确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 谋篇布局 开头 引出主题：感谢来信，表明要告知最喜欢的中国自然奇观。 中间 介绍自己最喜欢的自然奇观。 结尾 介绍自己对于去户外感受自然的看法和经历。 佳作展示 Dear Tom, Thanks for your letter. I’m very glad to tell you about my favorite natural wonder in China. My favorite natural wonder is Huangshan, located in Anhui Province. It’s famous for its strange-shaped pines, unique rocks and magical sea of clouds. Last summer, I visited it with my parents. Early in the morning, we watched the sunrise above the clouds, which felt like a fairy world. I took hundreds of photos and felt totally relaxed. I love getting close to nature. On weekends, I usually go hiking in nearby mountains or have picnics in parks. It makes me forget my worries and feel peaceful. Huangshan is like a precious gem. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 佳作赏析 要点一：最喜欢的中国自然奇观：My favorite natural wonder is Huangshan/famous for its strange-shaped pines/My favorite natural wonder is Guilin’s landscape/It’s world-famous for its karst mountains and clear, winding Li River 要点二：自己对于去户外感受自然的看法和经历：I love getting close to nature/It makes me forget my worries and feel peaceful/I love being outdoors/Being in nature makes me feel calm and alive （一） 请以“My Favorite Natural Wonder”为题，写一篇80-100词的短文，介绍你最喜欢的一个自然奇观，内容包括： 1. 它是什么；2. 它在哪里；3. 它的特点；4. 你为什么喜欢它。 要求： 1. 语句通顺，语法正确； 2. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 3. 词数80-100。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文     My Favorite Natural Wonder is the Great Barrier Reef.     It lies off the northeast coast of Australia. It is the largest coral reef system in the world, where many colorful fish live. The water is clear and blue. Many tourists go there every year.     I like it because it is amazing and full of life. It shows the beauty of nature perfectly. We should protect it carefully for the future. I hope to visit it someday.     It makes me feel relaxed and happy. Nature is truly wonderful. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：这是一篇介绍性短文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：最喜欢的自然奇观是什么、它在哪里、它的特点、为什么喜欢它 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：词数80-100词，语句通顺，语法正确 [第二步：构思布局] 四段式结构： 第一段：点明最喜欢的自然奇观 第二段：介绍地点和特点——位于澳大利亚东北海岸，是世界上最大的珊瑚礁系统，有许多色彩斑斓的鱼，海水清澈湛蓝，每年吸引众多游客 第三段：阐述喜欢的原因——神奇、充满生机、展现自然之美，希望将来能去参观 第四段：补充感受——让人放松快乐，表达对自然的赞美 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：它是什么 景观选择：the Great Barrier Reef/Niagara Falls/Jiuzhai Valley等 要点二：它在哪里 具体地点：lies off the northeast coast of/lies on the ‌border between/lies in ‌northern等 要点三：它的特点 具体说明：the largest coral reef system in the world/many colorful fish live/The water is clear and blue/Many tourists go there every year/is renowned for its multi-level waterfalls, colorful lakes, and snow-capped peaks等 要点四：你为什么喜欢它 喜欢原因：I like it because it is amazing and full of life/show the beauty of nature perfectly/hope to visit it someday/make me feel relaxed and happy/is truly wonderful等 （二） 大自然有无数壮丽的奇观，山川、河流、森林、湖泊都令人惊叹。假如你上周参观了一处自然景观，请你以My Favourite Natural Wonder 为题，写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍你最喜欢的自然奇观。 写作要点： 1. 简单介绍你最喜欢的自然奇观（名称、位置、基本概况）； 2. 描述它的特点（运用比较级、最高级句型）； 3. 分享你的参观感受和保护自然的想法。 写作要求： 1. 词数80-100词； 2. 语句通顺，语法正确，要点齐全； 3. 不得出现真实姓名、校名。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favourite Natural Wonder My favourite natural wonder is Huangshan Mountain. It lies in Anhui Province and is one of the most famous mountains in China. Huangshan is more beautiful than many other mountains.It has strange-shaped rocks, tall pine trees and thick clouds. The scenery here is the most amazing I have ever seen. Every year, thousands of tourists come to visit it. When I visited it last week, I was deeply shocked by its beauty. Nature is so great. We must protect all natural wonders and never damage them. In this way, we can enjoy their beauty forever. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以一般现在时为主，叙述参观经历用一般过去时 明确要点：介绍最喜欢的自然奇观（名称、位置、概况）；描述其特点（运用比较级、最高级）；分享参观感受与保护自然的想法 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：词数80-100；不得出现真实姓名、校名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：点明主题，介绍奇观的名称、位置与地位 主体段：描述奇观的特点，运用比较级、最高级句型体现其独特性 结尾段：分享参观感受，表达保护自然的想法，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：介绍自然奇观的基本信息 名称与地位：Huangshan Mountain/one of the most famous mountains in China/a world-famous natural wonder/a top tourist attraction in China 位置与概况：lies in Anhui Province/located in eastern China/known for its unique natural scenery 要点二：描述自然奇观的特点（运用比较级、最高级） 整体特点：more beautiful than many other mountains/the scenery here is the most amazing I have ever seen/more breathtaking than any other place I’ve visited/the most unforgettable view in my memory 具体景观：strange-shaped rocks/tall pine trees/thick clouds/crystal-clear streams/ever-changing seasonal views 要点三：分享参观感受与保护自然的想法 参观感受：was deeply shocked by its beauty/felt amazed by its magic/couldn’t believe my eyes at first sight 保护自然的想法：must protect all natural wonders/never damage them/keep the environment clean around the area/stop littering and polluting these places （三） 假如你是张华，介绍你的家乡——青藏高原的美，写一篇英语短文。 包含以下要点： 1.我的家乡在青藏高原。这里的地貌风光令人惊叹，以世界最高峰闻名于世……云朵洁净柔软，就像我们的白羊……天空那动人的蓝色总能让我感到宁静，它就像高原上方一片广阔的海洋……草原、森林和田野都是绿色的，那是我最喜欢的颜色。 2.对家乡的赞美与热爱之情。 提示词：the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau青藏高原 注意：1.词数：80-100；要点均要包括； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实的学校及学生名字。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】      Hello, everyone! I am Zhang Hua. My hometown lies on the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau.      The landscape here is truly amazing. It is famous for the highest peak in the world. The clouds are clean and soft, looking just like our white sheep. The moving blue sky always makes me feel quiet and peaceful. It is like a vast ocean above the plateau. The grasslands, forests and fields are all green. That is my favorite color.      I love my hometown deeply because it is so beautiful and unique. I hope you can come and visit it someday to enjoy the beauty. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍类说明文，全篇使用一般现在时 明确要点：青藏高原自然风光、世界最高峰、云朵样貌、高原蓝天景色、草原森林田野的绿色风光，表达对家乡的热爱 确定人称：第一人称（I / my） 注意事项：词数80‑100词，不得出现真实学校与学生姓名    [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段：开门见山，交代家乡地处青藏高原，总写高原风光震撼壮美 主体段：分层描绘高原各处美景，依次介绍雪山地标、白云、蓝天、草原林海 结尾段：抒发对家乡的喜爱与赞美，发出游览邀约    [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：地理位置与整体地貌 地点表达：the Qinghai‑Tibet Plateau，highland area等 风貌描写：the amazing landscape，wonderful natural views等 地标介绍：be famous for the highest peak，be well‑known for world‑famous mountains等    要点二：高原云与天空景致 云朵描写：clean and soft clouds，white and light clouds等 天空描写：the beautiful blue sky，the peaceful sky above the plateau等 心境刻画：make people relaxed，bring peace to visitors等    要点三：高原草原植被景色 原野描写：green grasslands，large forests，farmlands等 色彩表达：the green colour，the lively natural colour等    要点四：情感升华 情感表达：love my hometown deeply，show deep love for the land等 收尾句式：hope visitors come for a trip，welcome to the beautiful plateau等 （四） 假设你是李华，你的外教Peter想了解中学生的自然环保行动，请你给他写一封邮件。 内容要点： 1. 简单介绍自然的美丽与自然奇观的价值； 2. 谈谈目前自然环境存在的小问题； 3. 写出你和同学们的环保做法及保护自然的决心。 要求： 4. 词数80-100； 5. 语句通顺、语法正确，卷面整洁； 6. 可适当用到本单元重点短语。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Dear Peter, I’m writing to share our environmental actions with you. Nature is truly beautiful, and its wonders are valuable treasures for humans. However, there are some problems now, such as water pollution and too much waste. To protect it, my classmates and I pick up litter in the park every weekend. We also plant trees to make the air cleaner. We have made up our minds to protect the earth forever. We believe even small actions can make a big difference. Let’s work together to keep nature beautiful. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文（电子邮件），以一般现在时为主 明确要点：自然之美与价值、当前环境问题、环保行动及决心 确定人称：第一人称（I/we） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：表明写信目的，引出话题 主体段：分别阐述自然的价值、现存问题以及具体的环保行动与决心 结尾段：总结升华，呼吁共同保护自然 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：自然的美丽与自然奇观的价值 描述自然之美：Nature is truly beautiful/The natural scenery is amazing/Nature is full of wonders等 表达自然价值：valuable treasures for humans/play an important role in our lives/are essential to human beings/provide us with fresh air and water等 要点二：目前自然环境存在的小问题 列举污染问题：water pollution/air pollution/noise pollution等 描述其他问题：too much waste/rubbish everywhere/cutting down too many trees/losing green areas等 要点三：环保做法及保护自然的决心 具体环保做法：pick up litter in the park/plant trees to make the air cleaner/save water and electricity/take reusable bags when shopping/recycle old things等 表达决心：have made up our minds to protect the earth forever/are determined to do our part to save nature/will try our best to be eco-friendly等 （五） 学校英语报正在举办“Amazing Nature”主题征文活动。介绍一个你通过书本、网络或课堂了解到的自然奇观，或者你的家乡山东的一处自然奇观，写一篇短文投稿。 写作要点： 1．说明这个自然奇观的名称和大致位置。 2．用一两个具体数字（如高度、长度、面积等）来突出它的惊人之处。 3．把它与另一个地方的自然景观做简单比较（例如：比……更高/更深/更壮观）。 4．谈谈人们为什么喜欢去那里，以及你自己平时是如何亲近自然的（比如爬山、看海、公园散步等）。 要求： 1．语言通顺，逻辑清晰，语法正确； 2．词数：90～120词； 3．文中不要出现真实的校名和人名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文     Mount Tai, located in Shandong Province, is a famous natural wonder and one of China’s most sacred mountains.     It is about 1,545 meters high, which is much higher than many other mountains in eastern China. For example, it is nearly twice as high as the Great Wall’s Badaling section. People love to visit Mount Tai not only for its beautiful sunrise but also for its historical importance.     As for me, I often go hiking in nearby hills on weekends to get close to nature. This helps me feel relaxed and energetic. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确认文体：这是一篇“Amazing Nature”主题的写景征文，时态以一般现在时为主 明确要点：需包含泰山的地理位置、核心自然与文化特色、游览价值，还要结合个人亲近自然的体验 确定人称：第三人称（指代Mount Tai）和第一人称（I） 注意事项：词数控制在90-120；不能出现无关信息，内容要紧扣自然主题 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出泰山，点明它的自然与文化双重地位 主体段：用数据和细节说明泰山的高度、云海日出与文化遗迹两大核心看点 结尾段：联系个人周末徒步的习惯，抒发亲近自然的感受 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：介绍泰山基本信息 具体说明：located in Shandong Province/about 1,545 meters high/located in /situated in /lies in等 要点二：描写泰山核心吸引力 具体说明：beautiful sunrise/its historical importance/breathtaking sunrise/winding stone steps等 要点三：结合个人体验升华主题 具体说明：go hiking/get close to nature/helps me feel relaxed and energetic/broaden my horizons/a sense of achievement等 （六） 运城盐池被誉为“中国死海”，湖水色彩随季节变化，冬季硝花如雪，夏季宛如彩色镜面，是山西独特的自然景观。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文介绍运城盐池，突出其自然魅力。 内容包括 ·What is the natural place and where is it? ·What are its special facts? ·What can people do there and how to protect it? 要求： 1. 需包含以上所有提示内容； 2. 词数不少于80； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 参考词： Yuncheng Salt Lake, “Dead Sea of China”, salt flowers, content, salt spa bath, scenic area _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Yuncheng Salt Lake Yuncheng Salt Lake is a beautiful place in southern Shanxi. It is known as the “Dead Sea of China” because the water is very salty.   What makes it special? The water changes colors with seasons. In summer, it is like a colorful mirror. In winter, white salt flowers shine like snow. Because of the high salt, people float easily on the water. Visitors can enjoy salt baths, take photos, and learn salt history.   We should protect this scenic area. Do not litter or take too much salt. Follow the rules. If everyone helps, Yuncheng Salt Lake will stay beautiful for years. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，一般现在时为主 明确要点：介绍运城盐湖的地理位置、“中国死海”的别称及原因，描述其季节变色、易漂浮的特色，列举游客活动，呼吁保护措施 确定人称：第三人称（it/visitors）+第一人称复数（we） 注意事项：结构清晰，突出景点特色，语言生动，环保呼吁具体可行 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段（第一段）：介绍运城盐湖的地理位置及“中国死海”的别称与原因 主体段（第二段）：阐述景点特色，列举游客活动 结尾段（第三段）：呼吁保护，强调共同保护让盐湖长久美丽 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：基本信息 Yuncheng Salt Lake/southern Shanxi/known as “Dead Sea of China”/water is very salty/a famous scenic spot in south Shanxi/called the “Dead Sea of China” for its high salt content等 要点二：景点特色 湖水变色：water changes colors with seasons/summer: colorful mirror/winter: white salt flowers like snow/the lake’s color varies with seasons/in summer, it looks like a colorful mirror; in winter, white salt flowers glow like snow等 漂浮：high salt/people float easily on the water/due to the high salt concentration, people can float on the water without difficulty等 要点三：游客活动 enjoy salt baths/take photos/learn salt history/experience salt baths/take beautiful photos/know about the history of salt production等 要点四：保护呼吁 protect this scenic area/do not litter/take too much salt/follow the rules/stay beautiful/protect this precious scenic spot/never throw rubbish/do not take excessive salt/obey the rules/keep the lake beautiful forever等 （七） 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter想了解你对自然奇观的认识和探索经历。请你根据提示，给他写一封80词左右的邮件，介绍你过去和现在对自然奇观的看法、探索经历及感悟。 提示词：natural wonder, explore, protect, mystery, beautiful, guidance, meaningful 要求：1. 书信格式正确；2. 条理清晰，语句通顺；3. 包含提示词，可适当发挥；4. 语法正确，无拼写错误。 Dear Peter, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】范文： Dear Peter, I’m glad to tell you about my understanding of natural wonders and my exploration journey. I used to know nothing about them and thought they were ordinary. With the guidance of my teacher, I have changed a lot. I once visited a beautiful waterfall with my family. It was amazing and made me realize the beauty of nature. I also learned to explore the mystery of natural wonders and know it’s meaningful to protect them. Natural wonders are precious gifts. I will keep exploring and protecting them. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 「第一步：审题立意」 确定文体：电子邮件，以一般过去时、一般现在时为主，搭配一般将来时   明确要点：介绍过去和现在对自然奇观的看法，探索经历和感悟   注意事项：书信格式正确、语句通顺、包含提示词、语法正确，无拼写错误 「第二步：构思布局」   开头：回应笔友的提问，引出“自然奇观”话题   中间：1：对比过去与现在（核心变化） ：写过去对自然奇观的看法 + 老师的引导（用上guidance） 2：讲述探索经历+感悟（含提示词）：举一次具体经历，用上beautiful, explore, mystery, meaningful, protect（逻辑：经历→感受→学到的道理） 结尾总结（升华主题）：表达未来的态度，收束全文   「第三步：要点展开」 一、自然奇观类：waterfall瀑布/mountain range山脉/valley山谷/lake湖泊 二、过去与现在对比： I used to know nothing about them…With the guidance of my teacher, I have changed a lot./I didn’t care about natural wonders before, but now I fall in love with them./Great changes have taken place in my understanding of nature. 三、经历感悟：It was amazing and made me realize the beauty of nature. I also learned…know it’s meaningful to protect them./The beautiful sight made me shocked and I wanted to explore its mystery./It’s really meaningful for us to protect these natural treasures. 四、结尾句：Natural wonders are precious gifts. I will keep exploring and protecting them./I believe nature will bring us more surprises if we protect it well./I will keep exploring nature and try my best to protect it. （八） My Project: Explore and Protect Natural Wonders 请根据 Unit 4 Section B 所学知识，完成一篇关于”探索并保护自然奇观”的短文，作为本单元 Project 成果。 要求： 词数 70-80 词； 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确； 覆盖Project过程（做了什么、如何做的）、了解到的自然奇观知识及保护建议； 不出现真实姓名和学校名称，开头已给出。 Our class recently finished a Project called “Explore and Protect Natural Wonders”. It was a great experience for all of us. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Our class recently finished a Project called “Explore and Protect Natural Wonders”. It was a great experience for all of us. My group and I searched for information about natural wonders and made a beautiful poster. We learned that many natural wonders are in danger due to pollution. We put some protection tips on the poster, like not picking flowers or throwing rubbish. This Project taught me the importance of protecting natural wonders. I will try my best to protect them and ask my friends to join me. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，用一般过去时和一般现在时 明确要点：项目过程（做了什么、如何做的）、了解到的自然奇观知识、保护建议、个人收获与打算 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：使用learn/teach/protect/importance等表达，词数 70-80 词，覆盖所有要点 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，说明项目名称与整体感受 主体段：介绍项目过程（小组分工、具体做法）、学到的知识（自然奇观面临的问题）、提出的保护建议 结尾段：总结项目收获，说明个人未来打算 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：项目过程描述活动：search for information/make a poster/work in groups/collected materials about famous natural wonders/worked together in small groups 要点二：学到的知识了解到的现状：many natural wonders are in danger due to pollution/natural wonders face serious threats from human activities/some natural wonders are being damaged by pollution 要点三：保护建议提出的措施：not pick flowers/not throw rubbish/refuse to leave litter in scenic areas/keep natural places clean and tidy 要点四：个人收获与打算收获：learn the importance of protecting natural wonders/raise people’s awareness of environmental protection /take action to guard these amazing natural places/try one’s best to protect them/ask friends to join $