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Unit 2 Literature(单元同步写作讲义)
本单元的主题是“文学”,要求学生能用所学的词汇和句型写一篇与书籍或阅读有关的书面表达。与此相关的写作维度有:
①介绍一本喜欢的书;
②谈论自己对某一本的看法。
中考书面表达与此相关的命题形式有很多,如给报社投稿、发表演讲和经验分享等。一般要介绍的主要内容有:对某本书或某个故事的看法、对读书的见解等。
词汇积累
(1)one of the... ……之一
(2)get over克服
(3)give up放弃
(4)as long as只要
(5)be popular among... 在……中受欢迎
(6)be aware of 意识到
(7)be crazy about热爱
(8)from that day on从那天起
(9)an extract from... ……的一段摘录
(10)fall asleep入睡
句式积累
开头句:
1.The story, written by..., is about...这篇由 ... ,撰写的故事讲述了……
2.It tells the story about...它讲述了关于……的故事。
中间句:
3.It's important for everyone to be brave to...对每个人来说,勇敢面对都是至关重要的……
4.You can learn a lot from the book, such as...你可以从这本书中学到很多东西,例如……
5.On the one hand, he knows if he never has a try, he will...一方面,他清楚地知道:如果自己从未尝试过,就会……
6.On the other hand, he worries that he might fail or....另一方面,他担心自己可能会失败或……
7.We can learn that everyone should not...我们可以认识到,每个人都不应……
8.The bird is not sure if he should try to fly.这只鸟不确定自己是否应该尝试飞行。
结尾句:
9.The book reminds us that we should be brave to take risks.这本书提醒我们,应当勇敢地承担风险。
10.Besides this, from the story I've also learned not to be afraid of making mistakes.此外,通过这个故事,我还学会了不要害怕犯错。
典例
书香溢校园,阅读促成长。为助力打造“书香校园”,你校英文报开设栏目Reading Zone,为同学们推送各类图书,请你根据以下要点提示,写一篇英文短文推荐书籍《假如我从不努力》(If I Never Forever Endeavor)。
写作要求:
1.包含所有提示内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词语:recommend推荐;endeavor努力;overcome战胜
审题
时态:一般现在时
人称:第三人称
小贴士:苏联著名作家高尔基说,“书籍是人类进步的阶梯(Books are the ladder of human progress)”;英国哲学家培根说,“阅读使人充实(Reading makes a full man)”。阅读,使我们获得新知;阅读,使我们变得睿智。让我们一起畅游在书海,在阅读中快乐成长吧!
点 拨
本次写作任务要求同学们推荐一本书。根据所给提示,可以分三部分进行写作。
第一部分:开场——介绍书名以及作者。
第二部分:主体——介绍该书的故事背景、主要人物、故事情节等;
第三部分:结尾——评论该书,即阐述推荐理由。
谋篇布局
佳作展示
I'd like to recommend a wonderful book to all of you. It's called If I Never Forever Endeavor written by American writer Holly Meade. It tells a story about a small yellow bird who doesn't know how to fly. The bird is not sure if he should try to fly. One the one hand, he thinks, “If I never forever endeavor, then I won't ever fly.” On the other hand, he worries that he might fail or get lost in the forest.
The book tells us mistakes are parts of learning and that it's important to learn about courage. It also teaches us that it is important to overcome fears so that we can learn new things. If you are afraid to take risks but want to learn something new, this is a right book for you.
(一)
根据要求完成短文写作,并将内容写在下面的答题位置上。
在世界历史文化长河中流传着许多家喻户晓的故事,有奇妙的中国传说,有美好的西方童话,从《愚公移山》到《白雪公主》,从《西游记》到《灰姑娘》,从《后羿射日》到《皇帝的新装》……人们每每诵读、讲述都会倍感鼓舞,深受启迪。作为本届英语故事大赛选手,请你写一篇演讲稿向大家介绍自己喜欢的故事。
My favorite story
自己最喜欢的故事
阐述故事的内容
从故事中学习到的道理
作文要求:1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
2. 不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
3. 语句连贯,词数70个左右,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I feel honored to share the story of_______________________________
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(二)
阅读名著,如同走进千百年前的世界,那些历经时光淘洗的文字,藏着人类最珍贵的智慧与情感。《三国演义》(Romance of the Three Kingdoms)里权谋与忠义,教会我们辨识善恶,坚守初心;《水浒传》(Water Margin)中的侠肝义胆,让我们读懂团结与正义;《西游记》(Journey to the West)的取经之路,藏着“唯有坚持,方能抵达”的生命密码;《红楼梦》(A Dream of Red Mansions)里的悲欢离合,照见人性的复杂与生活的真谛。请你根据提示信息,以“My Favorite Book”为题,用英语写一篇短文,推荐中国四大名著中的一本,并在口语课上与同学们分享。
提示信息:
1. What’s the book about?
2. Who is your favorite character?
3. What do you learn from the book?
写作要求:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名;
3. 词数:80~100词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favorite Book
I’d like to recommend
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(三)
书籍是人类进步的阶梯。假如你是李华,你校英文网站正在开展以“My Favourite Book”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示内容,用英语写一篇短文进行投稿,介绍你最喜欢的一本文学名著——《老人与海》。
Name
The Old Man and the Sea
Writer
American writer-Ernest Hemingway
Main characters
an old fisherman, a huge fish
Main stories
the fisherman fought against fish and nature
The reason why you like the book
meaningful, never give up, …
要求:
1.短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,可适当发挥;
2.语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3.短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于60词。(标题和开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
My Favourite Book
As the saying goes, “Books are the ladder of human progress.”
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(四)
假如你校正在举办读书月活动,请你根据下面的表格内容和写作要点,写一篇英语短文,介绍一下你最喜欢的一本书。
书名
《鲁滨逊漂流记》(Robinson Crusoe)
作者
丹尼尔·笛福(Daniel Defoe)
出版时间
1719年
大致内容
鲁滨逊出生在一个富裕家庭,他喜欢航海。在一次航行途中,他遇到了暴风雨,独自一人到了一个荒岛上并且不得不在荒岛上生活。他经历了各种各样的困难,最终生存了下来。他努力想回到他的祖国,大约28年后,他终于回到了英国。
启示
……
写作要求:1)短文须包含以上表格中的全部要点,可适当发挥;
2)短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称等信息;
3)词数80左右。
My Favorite Book—Robinson Crusoe
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(五)
假如你是李华,你的英国好友 Cathy想了解你的读书情况,请你根据以下内容提示及要求,用英语给她写封邮件。要点如下:
1. 你的时长和频率;
2. 你喜爱的书籍类型;
3. 你参与过的有关读书活动。
注意:1. 邮件须包含上面所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数80~100 (邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
Dear Cathy,
I’m very glad to tell you something about my reading.
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That’s all. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
(六)
世界读书日(4月23日)即将到来,你校英语社团将举行“Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”为主题的征文活动。请你根据提示写一篇100词左右的英语短文,介绍你对阅读的看法及个人的阅读情况。
提示信息:
•The importance of reading (get more knowledge...)
•My reading habit (when, where)
•My favourite book (name, type, summary, opinion)
注:开头已给出,不计入词数;文章不得出现真实人名校名等信息。
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
Reading makes a full man. It’s necessary and important for everyone to read.
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(七)
假如你校英语校刊正在开展“畅享阅读”征文活动。请你根据以下思维导图提示,用英文写一篇短文投稿。
注意:(1)内容须包含以上所有要点,并作适当发挥;
(2)词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等。
I often read books in my free time.
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$Unit 2 Literature(单元同步写作讲义)
本单元的主题是“文学”,要求学生能用所学的词汇和句型写一篇与书籍或阅读有关的书面表达。与此相关的写作维度有:
①介绍一本喜欢的书;
②谈论自己对某一本的看法。
中考书面表达与此相关的命题形式有很多,如给报社投稿、发表演讲和经验分享等。一般要介绍的主要内容有:对某本书或某个故事的看法、对读书的见解等。
词汇积累
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(1)one of the... ……之一
(2)get over克服
(3)give up放弃
(4)as long as只要
(5)be popular among... 在……中受欢迎
(6)be aware of 意识到
(7)be crazy about热爱
(8)from that day on从那天起
(9)an extract from... ……的一段摘录
(10)fall asleep入睡
句式积累
开头句:
1.The story, written by..., is about...这篇由 ... ,撰写的故事讲述了……
2.It tells the story about...它讲述了关于……的故事。
中间句:
3.It's important for everyone to be brave to...对每个人来说,勇敢面对都是至关重要的……
4.You can learn a lot from the book, such as...你可以从这本书中学到很多东西,例如……
5.On the one hand, he knows if he never has a try, he will...一方面,他清楚地知道:如果自己从未尝试过,就会……
6.On the other hand, he worries that he might fail or....另一方面,他担心自己可能会失败或……
7.We can learn that everyone should not...我们可以认识到,每个人都不应……
8.The bird is not sure if he should try to fly.这只鸟不确定自己是否应该尝试飞行。
结尾句:
9.The book reminds us that we should be brave to take risks.这本书提醒我们,应当勇敢地承担风险。
10.Besides this, from the story I've also learned not to be afraid of making mistakes.此外,通过这个故事,我还学会了不要害怕犯错。
典例
书香溢校园,阅读促成长。为助力打造“书香校园”,你校英文报开设栏目Reading Zone,为同学们推送各类图书,请你根据以下要点提示,写一篇英文短文推荐书籍《假如我从不努力》(If I Never Forever Endeavor)。
写作要求:
1.包含所有提示内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词语:recommend推荐;endeavor努力;overcome战胜
审题
时态:一般现在时
人称:第三人称
小贴士:苏联著名作家高尔基说,“书籍是人类进步的阶梯(Books are the ladder of human progress)”;英国哲学家培根说,“阅读使人充实(Reading makes a full man)”。阅读,使我们获得新知;阅读,使我们变得睿智。让我们一起畅游在书海,在阅读中快乐成长吧!
点 拨
本次写作任务要求同学们推荐一本书。根据所给提示,可以分三部分进行写作。
第一部分:开场——介绍书名以及作者。
第二部分:主体——介绍该书的故事背景、主要人物、故事情节等;
第三部分:结尾——评论该书,即阐述推荐理由。
谋篇布局
佳作展示
I'd like to recommend a wonderful book to all of you. It's called If I Never Forever Endeavor written by American writer Holly Meade. It tells a story about a small yellow bird who doesn't know how to fly. The bird is not sure if he should try to fly. One the one hand, he thinks, “If I never forever endeavor, then I won't ever fly.” On the other hand, he worries that he might fail or get lost in the forest.
The book tells us mistakes are parts of learning and that it's important to learn about courage. It also teaches us that it is important to overcome fears so that we can learn new things. If you are afraid to take risks but want to learn something new, this is a right book for you.
(一)
根据要求完成短文写作,并将内容写在下面的答题位置上。
在世界历史文化长河中流传着许多家喻户晓的故事,有奇妙的中国传说,有美好的西方童话,从《愚公移山》到《白雪公主》,从《西游记》到《灰姑娘》,从《后羿射日》到《皇帝的新装》……人们每每诵读、讲述都会倍感鼓舞,深受启迪。作为本届英语故事大赛选手,请你写一篇演讲稿向大家介绍自己喜欢的故事。
My favorite story
自己最喜欢的故事
阐述故事的内容
从故事中学习到的道理
作文要求:1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
2. 不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
3. 语句连贯,词数70个左右,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I feel honored to share the story of_______________________________
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【答案】范文:
Hello, everyone! I feel honored to share the story of Yu Gong with you.
Once upon a time, there was an old man called Yu Gong. Although he was almost 90, he decided to move the mountains. A “clever” man said, “You are too old to move the mountains.” Yu Gong said, “If I die, my sons will still do this.” Then a god was moved by Yu Gong. So he sent two gods to help him move the mountains.
From the story, I learned that anything is possible if we work hard! We shouldn’t give up. Hope you enjoy it!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:本文是一篇演讲稿(我最喜欢的故事),一般过去时
明确要点:自己最喜欢的故事;阐述故事的内容;从故事中学习到的道理
确定人称:第一人称(I)和第三人称单数(he)
注意事项:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容,可适当发挥
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:自己最喜欢的故事
主体段:阐述故事的内容
结尾段:从故事中学习到的道理
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:《愚公移山》是自己最喜欢的故事
介绍:I feel honored to share the story of Yu Gong with you.
要点二:阐述故事的内容
内容一:there was an old man called Yu Gong.
内容二:Although he was almost 90, he decided to move the mountains.
内容三:he sent two gods to help him move the mountains.
启发一:From the story, I learned that anything is possible if we work hard!
启发二:We shouldn’t give up.
(二)
阅读名著,如同走进千百年前的世界,那些历经时光淘洗的文字,藏着人类最珍贵的智慧与情感。《三国演义》(Romance of the Three Kingdoms)里权谋与忠义,教会我们辨识善恶,坚守初心;《水浒传》(Water Margin)中的侠肝义胆,让我们读懂团结与正义;《西游记》(Journey to the West)的取经之路,藏着“唯有坚持,方能抵达”的生命密码;《红楼梦》(A Dream of Red Mansions)里的悲欢离合,照见人性的复杂与生活的真谛。请你根据提示信息,以“My Favorite Book”为题,用英语写一篇短文,推荐中国四大名著中的一本,并在口语课上与同学们分享。
提示信息:
1. What’s the book about?
2. Who is your favorite character?
3. What do you learn from the book?
写作要求:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名;
3. 词数:80~100词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favorite Book
I’d like to recommend
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【答案】
例文
My Favorite Book
I’d like to recommend Journey to the West.
It is a famous Chinese novel. It is about Monkey King and his friends protecting their teacher to get scriptures. They meet many dangers on the way. My favorite character is Sun Wukong because he is brave and clever. He can fight bad people well.
From the book, I learn that we should never give up when facing difficulties. Only by persistence can we succeed. I hope you will love this amazing book. It is worth reading.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:介绍性记叙文,时态主要为一般现在时
明确要点:最喜欢的名著书名及内容、最喜欢的人物及原因、从书本中得到的收获与启发
确定人称:第一人称及第三人称
注意事项:不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等相关信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:开门见山,直接点明推荐的书名
主体段:简述故事情节并说明最喜欢的人物及原因
结尾段:阐述从书中获得的道理,表达推荐意愿
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:书名及内容
书名:Journey to the West/Romance of the Three Kingdoms/Water Margin/A Dream of Red Mansions
内容:a famous Chinese book/about Monkey King and his friends protecting their teacher to get scriptures/about Chinese history/about many brave heroes/about a big family等
要点二:最喜欢的人物及原因
人物:Sun Wukong, the Monkey King/Zhuge Liang/Lin Daiyu/Wu Song等
原因:brave, clever and helpful/friendly, kind and smart/do many wonderful things/always help others when in trouble/never lose hope等
要点三:从书中获得的道理
道理:learn that we should never give up/learn a lot about Chinese history/learn to help each other等
(三)
书籍是人类进步的阶梯。假如你是李华,你校英文网站正在开展以“My Favourite Book”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示内容,用英语写一篇短文进行投稿,介绍你最喜欢的一本文学名著——《老人与海》。
Name
The Old Man and the Sea
Writer
American writer-Ernest Hemingway
Main characters
an old fisherman, a huge fish
Main stories
the fisherman fought against fish and nature
The reason why you like the book
meaningful, never give up, …
要求:
1.短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,可适当发挥;
2.语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3.短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于60词。(标题和开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
My Favourite Book
As the saying goes, “Books are the ladder of human progress.”
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My Favourite Book
As the saying goes, “Books are the ladder of human progress.”
My favourite book is The Old Man and the Sea. It was written by American writer Ernest Hemingway. The main characters are an old fisherman and a huge fish. The story tells us how the fisherman fought against the fish and nature bravely. I like this book because it is very meaningful. It teaches me never to give up when facing difficulties.
I think everyone should read it.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:介绍性记叙文,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:书籍基础信息、书籍主要故事、喜爱本书的原因
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名、校名和地名
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构
开头段:引用题干名言总起,引出最喜欢的书籍
主体段:分层介绍书籍基础信息、书本故事、喜欢本书的缘由
结尾段:总结感悟,推荐这本书
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:书籍基础信息
书籍选择: The Old Man and the Sea
作者描述: American writer Ernest Hemingway
主要人物:an old fisherman, a huge fish
要点二:书籍主要故事
故事内容:the fisherman fought against the fish and nature bravely//experience lots of adventures/meet different kinds of people等
故事作用:tells us how the fisherman fought against the fish and nature bravely/shows us the beauty of courage/teaches us about friendship/lets me know more about life等
要点三:喜爱本书的原因
书本评价:meaningful/educational/interesting/touching/full of wisdom等
核心品质:never give up/be brave to face trouble/keep trying/believe in ourselves/value friendship等
具体收获:It teaches me never to give up when facing difficulties/I learn to stay strong in hard times/It encourages me to keep moving forward/It helps me become more confident等
(四)
假如你校正在举办读书月活动,请你根据下面的表格内容和写作要点,写一篇英语短文,介绍一下你最喜欢的一本书。
书名
《鲁滨逊漂流记》(Robinson Crusoe)
作者
丹尼尔·笛福(Daniel Defoe)
出版时间
1719年
大致内容
鲁滨逊出生在一个富裕家庭,他喜欢航海。在一次航行途中,他遇到了暴风雨,独自一人到了一个荒岛上并且不得不在荒岛上生活。他经历了各种各样的困难,最终生存了下来。他努力想回到他的祖国,大约28年后,他终于回到了英国。
启示
……
写作要求:1)短文须包含以上表格中的全部要点,可适当发挥;
2)短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称等信息;
3)词数80左右。
My Favorite Book—Robinson Crusoe
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My Favorite Book—Robinson Crusoe
My favorite book is Robinson Crusoe. It was written by Daniel Defoe and it was published in 1719.
Robinson was born in a rich family and he loved sailing. A heavy storm made him land on a lonely island alone. He went through many difficulties and survived there. He tried hard to return to his motherland. After about 28 years, he finally returned to England.
This book teaches me a lot. We should be brave and never give up hope when we face all kinds of difficulties in daily life.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文(读书推荐类短文),一般现在时和一般过去时
明确要点:介绍最喜欢的书;说明书名、作者和出版时间;概括故事内容;表达阅读收获和启示
确定人称:第一人称与第三人称
注意事项:词数80左右;覆盖表格全部内容;适当补充细节;表达阅读感悟;不得出现真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:介绍最喜欢的书,包括书名、作者及出版时间
主体段:概括书籍主要内容,介绍主人公经历
结尾段:表达阅读感受和获得的启示
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:介绍书籍基本信息
书籍信息:my favorite book/book title/Robinson Crusoe/be written by/be published in/be one of the most famous books等
作者介绍:Daniel Defoe/famous writer/English writer/well-known author等
表达喜爱:like... best/be interested in/enjoy reading/be fond of/recommend this book等
要点二:概括故事内容
人物背景:be born in a rich family/live a comfortable life/love sailing/dream of travelling等
经历过程:meet a heavy storm/land on an island/live alone/go through difficulties/survive/fight against nature/face challenges等
结果结局:return to his motherland/go back to England/finally succeed/realize his dream等
要点三:表达阅读感悟与启示
品质精神:be brave/never give up/be strong/be independent/be patient等
成长收获:learn a lot/get confidence/face difficulties positively/keep hope in life等
感悟表达:This book teaches me.../I think.../It tells us that.../Nothing is impossible if.../We should never lose hope等
(五)
假如你是李华,你的英国好友 Cathy想了解你的读书情况,请你根据以下内容提示及要求,用英语给她写封邮件。要点如下:
1. 你的时长和频率;
2. 你喜爱的书籍类型;
3. 你参与过的有关读书活动。
注意:1. 邮件须包含上面所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数80~100 (邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
Dear Cathy,
I’m very glad to tell you something about my reading.
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That’s all. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Cathy,
I’m very glad to tell you something about my reading.
I usually read for an hour every evening, and I rarely miss a day. This daily routine helps me relax after a busy day and continuously learn new knowledge.
My favorite books are adventure and science fiction. They transport me to thrilling worlds, making me feel as if I'm part of the story, and spark my imagination like nothing else can.
I’ve also joined a local book club where we discuss and share our favorite reads. It’s a fantastic way to connect with others who love reading just as much as I do.
That’s all. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:邮件,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:读书时长和频率、喜爱的书籍类型、参与过的有关读书活动
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:表明写邮件目的,引出下文
主体段:分别介绍读书时长和频率、喜爱的书籍类型、参与过的有关读书活动
结尾段:结束邮件,表达祝愿
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:读书时长和频率
时长频率:for an hour every evening/for half an hour every morning/for two hours on weekends等
日常情况:rarely miss a day/always read/often read等
作用效果:This daily routine helps me relax after a busy day and continuously learn new knowledge/This habit makes me feel relaxed and gain more knowledge等
要点二:喜爱的书籍类型
书籍类型:adventure and science fiction/history books/fairy tales/comic books等
喜欢原因:They transport me to thrilling worlds, making me feel as if I'm part of the story, and spark my imagination like nothing else can/They make me feel excited and broaden my horizons等
要点三:参与过的有关读书活动
活动内容:joined a local book club where we discuss and share our favorite reads/took part in a reading competition where we read books and answer questions等
作用效果:It’s a fantastic way to connect with others who love reading just as much as I do/It helps me make more friends and improve my reading ability等
(六)
世界读书日(4月23日)即将到来,你校英语社团将举行“Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”为主题的征文活动。请你根据提示写一篇100词左右的英语短文,介绍你对阅读的看法及个人的阅读情况。
提示信息:
•The importance of reading (get more knowledge...)
•My reading habit (when, where)
•My favourite book (name, type, summary, opinion)
注:开头已给出,不计入词数;文章不得出现真实人名校名等信息。
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
Reading makes a full man. It’s necessary and important for everyone to read.
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例文
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
Reading makes a full man. It’s necessary and important for everyone to read. Reading is a key to unlocking the world, allowing us to gain more knowledge and spark our imagination.
I have developed a habit of reading before going to bed. Immersed in the quiet atmosphere, I often spend about half an hour lost in the pages of a good book.
My favorite book is The Old Man and the Sea by Ernest Hemingway. It is a classic novel about an old fisherman’s relentless struggle against a giant marlin and sharks. What impresses me most is the hero’s indomitable spirit. This book has taught me that perseverance is the essence of a fulfilling life.
【详解】写作步骤
【第一步:审题立意】
确定文体:说明文(材料作文),以一般现在时为主
明确要点:说明阅读的重要性,介绍自己的阅读习惯,分享最喜欢的书及感悟
确定人称:第一人称 (I)
注意事项:要点完整不遗漏;语法拼写正确,句式通顺。
【第二步:构思布局】
三段式结构:
开头段:点明阅读的重要性与作用;
中间段:介绍自己的阅读习惯;
结尾段:介绍最喜欢的书并说明从中得到的启示。
【第三步:要点展开】
要点一:阅读意义
重要性:gain more knowledge/spark our imagination
要点二:阅读习惯
习惯:before going to bed/half an hour
要点三:喜爱书籍
书籍:The Old Man and the Sea/old fisherman/giant marlin/sharks
要点四:书中感悟
总结:indomitable spirit/perseverance
(七)
假如你校英语校刊正在开展“畅享阅读”征文活动。请你根据以下思维导图提示,用英文写一篇短文投稿。
注意:(1)内容须包含以上所有要点,并作适当发挥;
(2)词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等。
I often read books in my free time.
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I often read books in my free time.
I read for pleasure and knowledge: it helps me relax after school and opens up my mind. I love reading storybooks for fun and science books to learn new facts. I have good reading habits: I take notes while reading, draw mind maps to remember key points, and read for 30 minutes every day.
Reading makes me wiser and enriches my life. In the future, I will keep reading and share good books with my friends.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:本文是一篇应用文,全文以一般现在时为主
明确要点:为什么喜欢阅读、介绍阅读的书籍类型、说明个人阅读习惯
确定人称:第一人称(I)
注意事项:词数80左右,覆盖所有思维导图要点,逻辑连贯,不出现真实信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构: 点明主题,引出对阅读的分享
开头段:
主体段:按“阅读原因→书籍类型→阅读习惯”的逻辑,依次覆盖所有要点,层次清晰
结尾段:总结阅读的意义,升华主题,呼应“畅享阅读”的征文主题
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:阐述阅读的原因
原因:for pleasure/for knowledge/for relaxing/to improve my studies等
要点一:阅读的书籍类型
类型:storybooks/science books/history books/nature books等
要点三:个人阅读习惯:
习惯:take notes while reading/draw mind maps to remember key points/read for 30 minutes every day/discuss with friends等
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