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人教英语九下Unit3写作专项:写一篇艺术家人物介绍短文
一、写作题目
Write a short introduction to a famous artist.(写一篇短文介绍一位知名艺术家)
要求:80–120 词,包含生平时间、绘画风格、代表作品、个人评价,灵活使用动词不定式作宾语、目的状语、宾语补足语(本单元核心语法)。
二、写作目标
(一)能力目标
1. 掌握人物介绍类作文四段式结构:开篇点题、生平经历、艺术风格与代表作、结尾评价;
2. 熟练运用不定式 to do 三种句法功能(宾语、目的状语、宾补)丰富句式;
3. 学会使用时间线索串联人物生平,分清一般过去时(生平往事)、一般现在时(客观评价)。
(二)语法目标
能在作文中自然写出三类不定式:
1. 不定式作宾语:want/plan/hope/try to do
2. 不定式作目的状语:use sth to do;do sth to express…
3. 不定式作宾补:expect sb to do;tell sb not to do
三、写作分析
(一)人称
第一人称 I(表达个人喜好);第三人称 he/she(介绍艺术家)
(二)时态
1. 一般过去时:出生、求学、迁居、去世等人生过往;
2. 一般现在时:介绍画作风格、世人评价、个人感受;
3. 不定式不受主句时态影响,统一使用 to + 动词原形。
(三)思路点拨
1. 开头:点明自己最喜欢的艺术家,简单总起;
2. 第二段:按时间线写生平(出生、开始学画、人生重要经历);
3. 第三段:绘画风格 + 代表作品,用不定式说明创作目的;
4. 结尾:评价艺术家,说明他带给自己的启发。
四、写作模板(表格版)
板块
万能模板句子(内置不定式考点)
开头(引入人物)
My favorite artist is_________. I hope_________ (know) more about his art.
生平段落(时间线)
He was born in_________ in_________. At the age of 27, he decided_________ (become) a painter and began_________ (study) art. Later he moved to_________ to look for bright colors.
风格 & 代表作(不定式作目的状语核心段)
He used short brushstrokes_________ (show) strong feelings. His famous works are_________ and_________. He painted nature_________ (express) his love for the world.
结尾评价(宾补 / 宾语)
People expect his works_________ (bring) warmth to every viewer. I love him because he tried_________ (record) beauty around us all his life.
五、中英双语范文(以齐白石 Qi Baishi 为例 )
英文范文
My favorite artist is Qi Baishi. I hope to know more about his Chinese paintings.
He was born in Hunan in 1864. When he was young, he decided to become a painter and began to study traditional Chinese art. Later he went to Beijing to create better works.
He used simple brushstrokes to draw shrimps, flowers and birds. His famous work is Shrimps. He painted small living things to show the quiet beauty of nature.
People expect his paintings to bring peace to every viewer. I admire him because he tried to record the beauty of daily life all his life.
中文翻译
我最喜欢的艺术家是齐白石。我希望了解更多他的国画作品。
他 1864 年生于湖南。年轻时,他决定成为一名画家,并开始学习中国传统美术。后来他前往北京,创作更好的作品。
他用简练的笔触画虾、花鸟。他的代表作是《虾》。他描绘微小生灵,以此展现大自然静谧的美。
人们期待他的画作能给每一位观赏者带来安宁。我敬佩他,因为他一生都努力记录生活中的美好。
六、核心素材(好词、加分不定式句型、素材句)
(一)高频好词
1. brushstroke n. 笔触,笔画
2. traditional Chinese painting 国画
3. lively adj. 生动的
4. admire v. 敬佩,欣赏
5. creation n. 创作,作品
6. record v. 记录
7. express feelings 抒发情感
8. full of energy 充满生命力
(二)本单元三类不定式加分句型(作文必用)
1. 不定式作宾语
He decided to study painting at a young age.
2. 不定式作目的状语(高频)
Artists use ink to draw lively plants and animals.
3. 不定式作宾语补足语
We expect his works to warm our hearts.
(三)适配艺术人物作文谚语
Art is the window to the soul. 艺术是心灵的窗户。
七、填空仿写练习版(挖空考查不定式变形、词汇)
My favorite artist is_________. I hope_________ (know) more about his Chinese paintings.
He was born in_________ in 1864. When he was young, he decided_________ (become) a painter and began_________ (study) traditional Chinese art. Later he went to Beijing_________ (create) better works.
He used simple brushstrokes_________ (draw) shrimps, flowers and birds. His famous work is Shrimps. He painted small living things_________ (show) the quiet beauty of nature.
People expect his paintings_________ (bring) peace to every viewer. I admire him because he tried_________ (record) the beauty of daily life all his life.
填空参考答案
1. Qi Baishi
2. to know
3. Hunan
4. to become
5. to study
6. to create
7. to draw
8. to show
9. to bring
10. to record
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